Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
OBSCURE SENRYUS (6)
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. You podded and shouldered there now?!
May 16th, 2019 02:11
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. You podded and shouldered there now?!
May 16th, 2019 02:11
OBSCURE SENRYUS (6)
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope those peas will be split to go with the faggots.
May 16th, 2019 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope those peas will be split to go with the faggots.
May 16th, 2019 01:51
OBSCURE SENRYUS (5)
MendedFences27 said:
Had to stop once I saw your artwork. Wow. Great coloration. Asense of beauty and peace leaps out at you. Terrific.
Senryu - It would have been much worse if it had been the apple tree that was bare. - Phil A
May 15th, 2019 13:38
MendedFences27 said:
Had to stop once I saw your artwork. Wow. Great coloration. Asense of beauty and peace leaps out at you. Terrific.
Senryu - It would have been much worse if it had been the apple tree that was bare. - Phil A
May 15th, 2019 13:38
OBSCURE SENRYUS (5)
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow this one tells me a story - not so obscure to my eye Michael - - and that artwork must be one of your best - Ooooh what a hue of a sky.
May 15th, 2019 06:29
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow this one tells me a story - not so obscure to my eye Michael - - and that artwork must be one of your best - Ooooh what a hue of a sky.
May 15th, 2019 06:29
OBSCURE SENRYUS (5)
Lorna said:
At least they left the be oooooooooo ti ful picture behind when they stole the clothes.
May 15th, 2019 05:24
Lorna said:
At least they left the be oooooooooo ti ful picture behind when they stole the clothes.
May 15th, 2019 05:24
OBSCURE SENRYUS (5)
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. It\'s Miss Berles fault. You hired her as a house-keeper and she put everything in the wash at once?!
May 15th, 2019 01:57
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. It\'s Miss Berles fault. You hired her as a house-keeper and she put everything in the wash at once?!
May 15th, 2019 01:57
OBSCURE SENRYUS (5)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING Uncle Mike (7pm here !) Love the Seascape : complements our DESERT ISLAND (please visit & bring some paints - paper - and easel !) Love the LYM (a Ladies nightmare) thank Heaven Ive got long Hair & a Horse ! Lady Godiva rides again : but dont tell BRIAN !
Blessings abundant & Joy & Peace & Love
Yours (shivering !) ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 15th, 2019 01:03
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING Uncle Mike (7pm here !) Love the Seascape : complements our DESERT ISLAND (please visit & bring some paints - paper - and easel !) Love the LYM (a Ladies nightmare) thank Heaven Ive got long Hair & a Horse ! Lady Godiva rides again : but dont tell BRIAN !
Blessings abundant & Joy & Peace & Love
Yours (shivering !) ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 15th, 2019 01:03
OBSCURE SENRYUS (5)
dusk arising said:
Oh my what a clanger
The missing coat hanger
and the dressing gown
over a chair
so deft was the gal with that scraper
she\'s ebay-ing her previous wallpaper
a skill not-to-be sniffed at
it comes with a gift pack
a weekend atop a skyscraper
whats going on?
May 15th, 2019 00:24
dusk arising said:
Oh my what a clanger
The missing coat hanger
and the dressing gown
over a chair
so deft was the gal with that scraper
she\'s ebay-ing her previous wallpaper
a skill not-to-be sniffed at
it comes with a gift pack
a weekend atop a skyscraper
whats going on?
May 15th, 2019 00:24
OBSCURE SENRYUS (5)
Suresh said:
I don\'t know what the H*** everybody is talking about ...... OH! I get it - jibber jabber.
May 14th, 2019 09:27
Suresh said:
I don\'t know what the H*** everybody is talking about ...... OH! I get it - jibber jabber.
May 14th, 2019 09:27
OBSCURE SENRYUS (5)
Poetic Dan said:
Hahaha, love it! Feels like my nose, recovering from surgery. No sun for me
May 14th, 2019 09:02
Poetic Dan said:
Hahaha, love it! Feels like my nose, recovering from surgery. No sun for me
May 14th, 2019 09:02
OBSCURE SENRYUS (5)
Lorna said:
I love the daft little poem. But - and this is heresy because your paintings are amazing always - but I detest squishy brown bananas and that\'s what this painting is of (yes I know bad sentence ending) - up with which I shall not put. Perhaps there are more of us out here than you know and that\'s why it isn\'t selling.......... overripe banana phobia.
May 14th, 2019 05:11
Lorna said:
I love the daft little poem. But - and this is heresy because your paintings are amazing always - but I detest squishy brown bananas and that\'s what this painting is of (yes I know bad sentence ending) - up with which I shall not put. Perhaps there are more of us out here than you know and that\'s why it isn\'t selling.......... overripe banana phobia.
May 14th, 2019 05:11
OBSCURE SENRYUS (5)
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Would that be Oogie Berles, as A& B say? You met him/her?
May 14th, 2019 01:56
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Would that be Oogie Berles, as A& B say? You met him/her?
May 14th, 2019 01:56
OBSCURE SENRYUS (5)
dusk arising said:
raspberry sauce
in banana ice cream
sundae bloody sundae
May 14th, 2019 01:10
dusk arising said:
raspberry sauce
in banana ice cream
sundae bloody sundae
May 14th, 2019 01:10
OBSCURE SENRYUS (5)
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Now you don\'t see those greens evey day Michael
I imagine this is a piece the camera does not do justice to it looks very imposing and imressive
Great work again in both respects
May 14th, 2019 01:03
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Now you don\'t see those greens evey day Michael
I imagine this is a piece the camera does not do justice to it looks very imposing and imressive
Great work again in both respects
May 14th, 2019 01:03
OBSCURE SENRYUS (5)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BANANAS IN PYJAMAS
IT 7PM HERE IN THE BAHAMAS
SORRY I MEANT AUCKLAND NZ !
Thanks for reprising UNCLE MIKE ~ great Abstraction ~ great Senryu. CONFUSIUS He say *A Banana a Day keep OOGIE OOGIE MAN away*
Keep them coming they brighten our Days & Nights
Tribute to the Late Great DORIS DAY today please visit !
LOVE & HARMONY : ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 14th, 2019 01:02
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BANANAS IN PYJAMAS
IT 7PM HERE IN THE BAHAMAS
SORRY I MEANT AUCKLAND NZ !
Thanks for reprising UNCLE MIKE ~ great Abstraction ~ great Senryu. CONFUSIUS He say *A Banana a Day keep OOGIE OOGIE MAN away*
Keep them coming they brighten our Days & Nights
Tribute to the Late Great DORIS DAY today please visit !
LOVE & HARMONY : ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 14th, 2019 01:02
OBSCURE SENRYUS (4)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE : Almost midnight here so just trawling MPSS before I retire to bed ! In the abstract i see :
YELLOW BIRDS HIGH IN BANANA TREE
I love all these SENRYUS so so ABSTRACT
Blessings & Love & Joy
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 13th, 2019 05:30
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE : Almost midnight here so just trawling MPSS before I retire to bed ! In the abstract i see :
YELLOW BIRDS HIGH IN BANANA TREE
I love all these SENRYUS so so ABSTRACT
Blessings & Love & Joy
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 13th, 2019 05:30
OBSCURE SENRYUS (3)
Lorna said:
Extract from udders! Oh ugh.......... and I drink that stuff!
May 13th, 2019 04:24
Lorna said:
Extract from udders! Oh ugh.......... and I drink that stuff!
May 13th, 2019 04:24
OBSCURE SENRYUS (4)
Fay Slimm. said:
Turned white and dry they droppings make good Five Jacks didya know Mike ? Love the painting.
May 13th, 2019 04:09
Fay Slimm. said:
Turned white and dry they droppings make good Five Jacks didya know Mike ? Love the painting.
May 13th, 2019 04:09
OBSCURE SENRYUS (4)
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. You seen Miss Esk - Berle Esqe?
May 13th, 2019 01:58
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. You seen Miss Esk - Berle Esqe?
May 13th, 2019 01:58
OBSCURE SENRYUS (4)
Goldfinch60 said:
The sheep we had for lunch yesterday only had droppings of mint sauce with it.
Another super abstract Michael.
May 13th, 2019 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
The sheep we had for lunch yesterday only had droppings of mint sauce with it.
Another super abstract Michael.
May 13th, 2019 01:33
OBSCURE SENRYUS (4)
dusk arising said:
No worries, given enough sunshine those dropping will bleach white.
What then shall dance upon them?
May 13th, 2019 01:17
dusk arising said:
No worries, given enough sunshine those dropping will bleach white.
What then shall dance upon them?
May 13th, 2019 01:17
OBSCURE SENRYUS (4)
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
At least they fo hard
Great write and pic Micahel
Too big for a stamp this time
May 13th, 2019 01:08
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
At least they fo hard
Great write and pic Micahel
Too big for a stamp this time
May 13th, 2019 01:08
OBSCURE SENRYUS (3)
dusk arising said:
A song composed to the tune of \'A few of my favourite things\'
Crumpets in toasters
and fresh milk from udders
poems in my head
and onscreen from others
music from Goldie
pictures from M.E.
these are a few of my favourite things
worra larff!
May 12th, 2019 13:31
dusk arising said:
A song composed to the tune of \'A few of my favourite things\'
Crumpets in toasters
and fresh milk from udders
poems in my head
and onscreen from others
music from Goldie
pictures from M.E.
these are a few of my favourite things
worra larff!
May 12th, 2019 13:31
OBSCURE SENRYUS (3)
Suresh said:
Lactose intolerant, but what the hell, I\'ll have it with mini wheats today.
Always a treat
May 12th, 2019 11:34
Suresh said:
Lactose intolerant, but what the hell, I\'ll have it with mini wheats today.
Always a treat
May 12th, 2019 11:34
OBSCURE SENRYUS (3)
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
Super write.
Crumpets in toasters mmmm....
I like a good croissant in the morning for breakfast heated or unheated.
Keep writing FineB.
May 12th, 2019 04:23
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
Super write.
Crumpets in toasters mmmm....
I like a good croissant in the morning for breakfast heated or unheated.
Keep writing FineB.
May 12th, 2019 04:23
OBSCURE SENRYUS (2)
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
Cute poem. Ah life in all its simplicity.
Lovely picture too.
Keep writing FineB
May 12th, 2019 04:20
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
Cute poem. Ah life in all its simplicity.
Lovely picture too.
Keep writing FineB
May 12th, 2019 04:20
OBSCURE SENRYUS (1)
FineB said:
Hello Michael.
Thank you for this superb write.
Always keep the creative process going.
Keep writing FineB.
May 12th, 2019 03:36
FineB said:
Hello Michael.
Thank you for this superb write.
Always keep the creative process going.
Keep writing FineB.
May 12th, 2019 03:36
OBSCURE SENRYUS (3)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE : Hot milk with honey and hot crumpets with butter. Old English bedtime treat ! Its 10pm here and one can buy CRUMPETS in Auckland !
Blessings in all you do
Love through Poetry ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check SUNRISE - SUNSET : Thanks A
May 12th, 2019 03:05
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE : Hot milk with honey and hot crumpets with butter. Old English bedtime treat ! Its 10pm here and one can buy CRUMPETS in Auckland !
Blessings in all you do
Love through Poetry ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check SUNRISE - SUNSET : Thanks A
May 12th, 2019 03:05
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