Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
SATURDAY
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Very well constructed Michael
What a week you\'ve had?
July 20th, 2019 02:49
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Very well constructed Michael
What a week you\'ve had?
July 20th, 2019 02:49
SATURDAY
dusk arising said:
All through our working lives we looked forward to providing our minds and bodies with a weak-end after five days of pure joyous toil.
And now what do we have? Weak-ends for the rest of our days?
No way! i hear you say. These Saturdays are the days of harvest. Gathering in the richness of all life has reigned upon us.
What of Sundays I ask?
July 20th, 2019 02:14
dusk arising said:
All through our working lives we looked forward to providing our minds and bodies with a weak-end after five days of pure joyous toil.
And now what do we have? Weak-ends for the rest of our days?
No way! i hear you say. These Saturdays are the days of harvest. Gathering in the richness of all life has reigned upon us.
What of Sundays I ask?
July 20th, 2019 02:14
SATURDAY
orchidee said:
Yes, you\'ve earned them. What, you\'re not doing any lawyer-ing on Saturdays?!
July 20th, 2019 01:39
orchidee said:
Yes, you\'ve earned them. What, you\'re not doing any lawyer-ing on Saturdays?!
July 20th, 2019 01:39
SATURDAY
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Michael, every day is Saturday for some of us, we have earned them.
July 20th, 2019 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Michael, every day is Saturday for some of us, we have earned them.
July 20th, 2019 00:52
A SHEDFUL OF 575s (6)
Suresh said:
Still unable to comprehend, having visited the sites. Explain it to me, the connection between the first two lines and the third.
Is it that someone left, screeching tires, thus being left alone?
July 19th, 2019 17:37
Suresh said:
Still unable to comprehend, having visited the sites. Explain it to me, the connection between the first two lines and the third.
Is it that someone left, screeching tires, thus being left alone?
July 19th, 2019 17:37
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Andrew Charles Forrest said:
OH!
Oh Dear!
OH DEAR MICHAEL!
Neighbours???
July 19th, 2019 12:19
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
OH!
Oh Dear!
OH DEAR MICHAEL!
Neighbours???
July 19th, 2019 12:19
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ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS UNCLE MIKE ~ You have highlighted one of the 100 disadvantages of the AUTOMOBILE ! My (BRIAN) Sisters Husband did just that ! One night @ about 9pm he just ~ got up ~ got in his car ~ slammed the door ~ drove off and she never saw him again ! C*est la Vie ! Love the FLOWERS
Blessings to YOU & YOURS
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
July 19th, 2019 03:37
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS UNCLE MIKE ~ You have highlighted one of the 100 disadvantages of the AUTOMOBILE ! My (BRIAN) Sisters Husband did just that ! One night @ about 9pm he just ~ got up ~ got in his car ~ slammed the door ~ drove off and she never saw him again ! C*est la Vie ! Love the FLOWERS
Blessings to YOU & YOURS
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
July 19th, 2019 03:37
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orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Is that Slammy (Sammy) Berles? Them Berles get in everywhere!
July 19th, 2019 01:27
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Is that Slammy (Sammy) Berles? Them Berles get in everywhere!
July 19th, 2019 01:27
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ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Remember Remember
The 11th of November
We WILL Remember THEM
Thanks UNCLE for the flowers and the Senryu - AMEN
Blessings to YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
July 18th, 2019 11:17
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Remember Remember
The 11th of November
We WILL Remember THEM
Thanks UNCLE for the flowers and the Senryu - AMEN
Blessings to YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
July 18th, 2019 11:17
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FineB said:
Hello Michael,
A lovely poem.
When I read this poem it reminded me of the joy and beauty of life in a rustic environment. Carefree, warm, good food, nice people and uncomplicated.
Keep writing
FineB
July 18th, 2019 04:23
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
A lovely poem.
When I read this poem it reminded me of the joy and beauty of life in a rustic environment. Carefree, warm, good food, nice people and uncomplicated.
Keep writing
FineB
July 18th, 2019 04:23
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FineB said:
Hi Michael,
So true! So true!
We should embrace the joys of childhood and youth without responsibilities.
The trouble is young children want to grow up too quickly.
Good write!
Keep writing FineB
July 18th, 2019 04:19
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
So true! So true!
We should embrace the joys of childhood and youth without responsibilities.
The trouble is young children want to grow up too quickly.
Good write!
Keep writing FineB
July 18th, 2019 04:19
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FineB said:
Hi Michael,
Good write.
Sometimes life itself with its challenges can be a bit futile.
Keep writing FineB
July 18th, 2019 04:16
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
Good write.
Sometimes life itself with its challenges can be a bit futile.
Keep writing FineB
July 18th, 2019 04:16
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FineB said:
Hello Michael,
Great write. Poignant.
Keep writing
FineB
July 18th, 2019 04:15
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
Great write. Poignant.
Keep writing
FineB
July 18th, 2019 04:15
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orchidee said:
A good write and pic M. Is there a Poppy Berles?
July 18th, 2019 01:51
orchidee said:
A good write and pic M. Is there a Poppy Berles?
July 18th, 2019 01:51
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🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Maybe if I read all parts I would comprehend this better? Anyway this is an awesome poem in brevity, great word choice. Kudos.
It\'s always nice to delve in to your muse on my reading tours.
Would you pls pleez give your thoughts/ comments on my newest poem too?
July 17th, 2019 15:21
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Maybe if I read all parts I would comprehend this better? Anyway this is an awesome poem in brevity, great word choice. Kudos.
It\'s always nice to delve in to your muse on my reading tours.
Would you pls pleez give your thoughts/ comments on my newest poem too?
July 17th, 2019 15:21
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ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE for pic \'n poem. My study of PHYSICS informs me that what goes UP must (eventually) come down ! The DEPRAVITY of GRAVITY !
Blessings & Love to YOU & YOURS
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
July 17th, 2019 14:45
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE for pic \'n poem. My study of PHYSICS informs me that what goes UP must (eventually) come down ! The DEPRAVITY of GRAVITY !
Blessings & Love to YOU & YOURS
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
July 17th, 2019 14:45
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dusk arising said:
Reads like me staring at my screen when my muse has done a runner.
July 17th, 2019 12:59
dusk arising said:
Reads like me staring at my screen when my muse has done a runner.
July 17th, 2019 12:59
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Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
An interesting write...
I sincerely hope your new commission is not the ‘Sisyphean task’ referred to in today’s 575! 😉
I love the painting!
~Laura~
July 17th, 2019 09:41
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
An interesting write...
I sincerely hope your new commission is not the ‘Sisyphean task’ referred to in today’s 575! 😉
I love the painting!
~Laura~
July 17th, 2019 09:41
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orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Is this Sisyphus Berles?!
July 17th, 2019 01:48
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Is this Sisyphus Berles?!
July 17th, 2019 01:48
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Goldfinch60 said:
Proverbial pain,
As the rock goes up,
Only to roll down.
July 17th, 2019 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Proverbial pain,
As the rock goes up,
Only to roll down.
July 17th, 2019 01:28
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ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS UNCLE MICHAEL ~ love the PINKS Natures pallette is awesome shade-wise ! Thank GOD Children are not colour blind and are politically neutral. Being fresh out from God they have a non~fanatical view of things Spiritual 1 JESUS said except you become as LITTLE CHILDREN you cannot see (perceive) Gods Kingdom ~ AMEN
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
July 15th, 2019 09:11
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS UNCLE MICHAEL ~ love the PINKS Natures pallette is awesome shade-wise ! Thank GOD Children are not colour blind and are politically neutral. Being fresh out from God they have a non~fanatical view of things Spiritual 1 JESUS said except you become as LITTLE CHILDREN you cannot see (perceive) Gods Kingdom ~ AMEN
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
July 15th, 2019 09:11
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Neville said:
Truth hurts people, even poets so I\'m told.... wise words indeed.. yours sir, not mine........
July 15th, 2019 02:23
Neville said:
Truth hurts people, even poets so I\'m told.... wise words indeed.. yours sir, not mine........
July 15th, 2019 02:23
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orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. One rather upper-class church found a new Vicar rather futile and tiresome. They\'re getting better now, but the Vicar still has his pony-tail hair. Some previous vicars there were grouches, so take your pick!
July 15th, 2019 01:51
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. One rather upper-class church found a new Vicar rather futile and tiresome. They\'re getting better now, but the Vicar still has his pony-tail hair. Some previous vicars there were grouches, so take your pick!
July 15th, 2019 01:51
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Goldfinch60 said:
Wise words Michael. Children are so innocent.
July 15th, 2019 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Wise words Michael. Children are so innocent.
July 15th, 2019 01:49
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Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
UN BEL DIPINTO!
A beautiful watercolour!
I know exactly where that is! It’s not too far from where I lived for a few years!
We can sit at one of those tables and enjoy il VINO, le OLIVE, and il FORMAGGIO! If my dad were with us, he would also like some PANE RUSTICO!
The poem is delightful!
The simplicity of yesteryear!
~Laura~
July 14th, 2019 15:46
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
UN BEL DIPINTO!
A beautiful watercolour!
I know exactly where that is! It’s not too far from where I lived for a few years!
We can sit at one of those tables and enjoy il VINO, le OLIVE, and il FORMAGGIO! If my dad were with us, he would also like some PANE RUSTICO!
The poem is delightful!
The simplicity of yesteryear!
~Laura~
July 14th, 2019 15:46
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Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I will leave an aired bottle of Barolo on the table on the right
Beauty of an image there Michael
BRAVO
July 14th, 2019 13:53
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I will leave an aired bottle of Barolo on the table on the right
Beauty of an image there Michael
BRAVO
July 14th, 2019 13:53
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Suresh said:
Open doors = open invitation
Straw mattress = simplicity
Room with open door, keep nothing out, and thus your world is wherever you are.
I have not really understood Haiku, and maybe you can enlighten me.
July 14th, 2019 09:52
Suresh said:
Open doors = open invitation
Straw mattress = simplicity
Room with open door, keep nothing out, and thus your world is wherever you are.
I have not really understood Haiku, and maybe you can enlighten me.
July 14th, 2019 09:52
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