Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



THE LANGUAGE OF POETRY
orchidee said:

A fine write Michael. Poetry might be about B& B (Bed & Breakfast); but not F&B (****** and ******). Too much of it is just laziness in poetry sometimes, I think.

June 20th, 2019 01:53

THE LANGUAGE OF POETRY
Goldfinch60 said:

We may be guardians but our words we hope will shine for others as yours do Michael.

June 20th, 2019 00:34

EARTH
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

THNAKS UNCLE MIKE : ANGELA HERE ! 8:30 pm and another day done & dusted ! Love the CHURCH & the PACK HORSE BRIDGE makes me homesick ! Love soil an incredible substance : It really is the *PROVIDER OF LIFE !* It would cost the EARTH if we had to manufacture it : but like the SUN & MOON its just there for our use (or misuse !) Please check BRIANS POEM *This Old House* thanks.

Blessings to You & Yours
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

June 19th, 2019 02:36

EARTH
Neville said:

nicely stacked words, and of course true...

June 19th, 2019 02:30

EARTH
orchidee said:

A good write and pic M. You crumbling? Another Berles - Crum Berles!

June 19th, 2019 01:38

EARTH
dusk arising said:

I grabbed a clod and shook the sod off.
Provider of big holes for the dead to give life.
Once again your short pieces inspire.

June 19th, 2019 01:34

EARTH
Goldfinch60 said:

Such truth,
so few words,
for us to know.

June 19th, 2019 01:26

MY STAFF
dusk arising said:

The essential staff for life yes. Great thought expressed, great composition.
Put it upon a plaque and sell it by the thousand.

June 18th, 2019 12:35

MY STAFF
Suresh said:

\"Lean on me\", says the staff, and if you can hear that then you are truly listening to your inner voice.

June 18th, 2019 10:58

MY STAFF
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GOOD AFTERNOON UNCLE MIKE ~ Love the Village Scene makes me Hungry to get on the Housing Ladder with Angela ! Its OK for Folk like you to talk about Staff. In my post as Head of Applied Science I have four Academic Staff and Two Technicians working under me ! So like MOSES Im leaning on MY STAFF ! I inherited TWO Academics and a Technician and the others I appointed ! We all work well together and they are satisfied with their Grades (SO FAR !) Together with me thats a perfect number SEVEN STAFF ! Thanks for sharing ~ Please check BALANCED DIET !

Blessings & Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡

June 18th, 2019 10:42

MY STAFF
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

I love this poem and painting!
‘The strength of self-belief’
has pulled me out of many perilous situations!

~Laura~

P.S.- If this painting is not available, I’d like to commission you to paint one just like it for me! Thank you!

June 18th, 2019 02:20

MY STAFF
orchidee said:

A nice write and pic Michael. I dunno - I thought of the song \'My faith it is an oaken staff\' first sung at Primary School - millions of years ago then! I understand the need for self-belief, but I wouldn\'t want to rely entirely on me.
Meanwhile - Is Miss Berles on your staff work-team?

June 18th, 2019 01:48

MY STAFF
Neville said:

I am a great believer in relying only on oneself......

nice words and a great painting Michael..

June 18th, 2019 01:17

MY STAFF
Goldfinch60 said:

May that self belief always be with you Michael. I am sure that it will.

June 18th, 2019 00:31

From \'A COLLECTION\' (13)
dusk arising said:

And when his python head arrives we shall all chant \" Nice to see you - to see you nice\".

June 17th, 2019 05:39

From \'A COLLECTION\' (13)
Neville said:

I rarely look at what my reviewing peers post.. but on this occasion, I have come to rest firmly on Goldfinch60\'s perch... and I aint talkin fish.. I reckon if we aint careful we could be up the creek without a decent paddle.....

June 17th, 2019 04:43

From \'A COLLECTION\' (13)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks UNCLE MIKE : Love the RURAL SCENE ! Back @ work again today : its 10pm and Im shattered after 2 clinics and AQUAROBICS ! Your Poem sounds PAINFUL ~ They would need a bit of Chiropracty and Spinal manipulation after that anal manouvre !

BLESSINGS & Love to you and Yours
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check POSITIVITY !

June 17th, 2019 03:56

From \'A COLLECTION\' (13)
orchidee said:

Oh lol, a fun write, and good pic M.

June 17th, 2019 01:59

From \'A COLLECTION\' (13)
Goldfinch60 said:

Now I wonder who you are talking about, I have two people in mind and it could be either of them.

June 17th, 2019 01:01

From \'A COLLECTION\' (12)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

HI UNCLE MIKEY : ANGELA here nearly 10pm here NOW THE DAY IS OVER in Auckland ! FELIZ DIA DEL PADRE ! I hope to make BRIAN a Daddy very soon ! Love the Cottage there are lots like that in Essex : We may BUY one like that ! When we settle on a HOUSE (good to get on the Ladder) Our two DADS have promised to give us the Deposit as a WEDDING PRESENT ! My PAPA is still in Los Angeles promoting RIOJA (much better than Californian Reds) and the Hispaniscs love it ! BRIAN is taking His Parents out to lunch today to the Steak House. We are fortunate because my Parents LOVE BRIAN & BRIANS PARENTS adore ME ~ AMEN
Love the DOUBLET : very true ! BRIAN & I have both studied NUTRITION so we both EAT & DRINK sensibly. My JOB keeps me thin : Did you ever see an Obese Physiotherapist and Brians Job keeps him focussed and Aqua-Therapy keeps him TONED !

Blessings & Joy To YOU & YOURS
Have fun with your FAMILY today
Yours as always ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡

June 16th, 2019 04:04

From \'A COLLECTION\' (12)
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

Nice shortie!
I love the painting!
Is it for sale?

HAPPY FATHER’S DAY!☺️

~Laura~


June 16th, 2019 02:26

From \'A COLLECTION\' (12)
dusk arising said:

Charts don\'t do anything. Farts can do lots.

Take that as definite from this old fart.

June 16th, 2019 01:39

From \'A COLLECTION\' (12)
Goldfinch60 said:

I am on two diets, one doesn\'t give me enough to eat.

Love the view of the artwork. were you hiding in the grass Michael?

June 16th, 2019 01:33

From \'A COLLECTION\' (12)
orchidee said:

Oh lol good write and pic M. Why are farts always old?!

June 16th, 2019 01:25

From \'A COLLECTION\' (12)
dusk arising said:

Charts don\'t do anything. Farts can do lots.

Take that as definite from this old fart.

June 16th, 2019 01:19

SUMMER IDYL
Suresh said:

In my hunt for piece left to time, I landed on this today - it reminds me of one I have been formulating for a week, and thus - your poem resonates.
A fine description of a day to daydream and I shall love to lie down with your pic, under a shady three on field of green grass.

June 15th, 2019 12:19

From \'A COLLECTION\' (11)
FineB said:

Hello Michael,

A good write and a bit naughty too.

Ha! Ha!:Good stuff!

Arabella, the name conjures up for me a woman who\'d appear in a Thomas Hardy novel.

Keep writing FineB

June 15th, 2019 08:42

MILE OVEN DYE
Neville said:

splendid.. I like everything about this little pearl of a poem.... nowt lost in translation neither.... Neville

June 15th, 2019 08:39

From \'A COLLECTION\' (10)
FineB said:

Hello Michael,

A super write with a superb picture too.

Lovely.

Keep writing FineB

June 15th, 2019 08:38

FIVE THIRTY PM
Suresh said:

A simple moment in time, yet so poetically expressed

June 12th, 2019 11:08



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