Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
ONCE I HAD A LOVER
dusk arising said:
I laughed out loud at \'her lips were never long enough\'. Thank you for this hilarious start to my week.
Yes one foot, two feet etc. But language is a plastic thing continually changing.... those youngsters use it in way it will continue to be used long after we are dead..... verily i say unto thee.
My punctuation, poor grammar, typos and lack of capitals are a symptom of my accepting and adopting sloppy practice... but most accept it nowadays. After all said and done, writing is just a way of putting the spoken communication onto a screen or papyrus innit?
April 29th, 2019 00:46
dusk arising said:
I laughed out loud at \'her lips were never long enough\'. Thank you for this hilarious start to my week.
Yes one foot, two feet etc. But language is a plastic thing continually changing.... those youngsters use it in way it will continue to be used long after we are dead..... verily i say unto thee.
My punctuation, poor grammar, typos and lack of capitals are a symptom of my accepting and adopting sloppy practice... but most accept it nowadays. After all said and done, writing is just a way of putting the spoken communication onto a screen or papyrus innit?
April 29th, 2019 00:46
ONCE I HAD A LOVER
Michael Edwards said:
Did you see that I wrote 4 feet nine and not 4 foot nine - why do so many get it wrong? One of life\'s irritants.
April 29th, 2019 00:21
Michael Edwards said:
Did you see that I wrote 4 feet nine and not 4 foot nine - why do so many get it wrong? One of life\'s irritants.
April 29th, 2019 00:21
THE DARK OF MIDNIGHT HOUR
Suresh said:
The solemn sadness of her being is so well equated to the midnight hour
P.S. I travel back, to capture moments missed, the moments so beautifully displayed in your arts.
I hope you don\'t mind.
April 28th, 2019 19:19
Suresh said:
The solemn sadness of her being is so well equated to the midnight hour
P.S. I travel back, to capture moments missed, the moments so beautifully displayed in your arts.
I hope you don\'t mind.
April 28th, 2019 19:19
THE UNKNOWN MAN
Suresh said:
Rejection without understanding
Leaves them tangled on barbed wire fences
Truly
April 27th, 2019 21:35
Suresh said:
Rejection without understanding
Leaves them tangled on barbed wire fences
Truly
April 27th, 2019 21:35
FARMYARD DARTS
Suresh said:
Should have knocked, before I entered
WTF!!!!!!
Jolly good
April 27th, 2019 21:30
Suresh said:
Should have knocked, before I entered
WTF!!!!!!
Jolly good
April 27th, 2019 21:30
A FULL HEAD OF HAIR
Suresh said:
Lock them up in a room
Till they learn how to groom
Or send them to a jail
If all else fail
Punishment for insulting our sight
A sight, a sight, of such fright
Thnx for the factual comedy
April 27th, 2019 21:26
Suresh said:
Lock them up in a room
Till they learn how to groom
Or send them to a jail
If all else fail
Punishment for insulting our sight
A sight, a sight, of such fright
Thnx for the factual comedy
April 27th, 2019 21:26
PARDON ?
dusk arising said:
reply \"well how the Dickens do you expect me to know.... I wasnt even there!\"
April 24th, 2019 08:03
dusk arising said:
reply \"well how the Dickens do you expect me to know.... I wasnt even there!\"
April 24th, 2019 08:03
PARDON ?
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
As I’m silently reading your written words, in my mind they’re beginning to sound like “Valley Girl Talk” from San Francisco, CA!
I enjoyed it!
Love the painting!
~Laura~
April 23rd, 2019 16:07
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
As I’m silently reading your written words, in my mind they’re beginning to sound like “Valley Girl Talk” from San Francisco, CA!
I enjoyed it!
Love the painting!
~Laura~
April 23rd, 2019 16:07
PARDON ?
Suresh said:
YOU ARE ......
Seems like I am there more and more now.
As always nicely done
April 23rd, 2019 11:23
Suresh said:
YOU ARE ......
Seems like I am there more and more now.
As always nicely done
April 23rd, 2019 11:23
PARDON ?
Goldfinch60 said:
That reminds of that message that he (or she) gave us, you know the one, the one about whats \'is name.
Great art once more Michael.
( I am off to the Ashmolean in Oxford today to see some more great artwork.)
April 23rd, 2019 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
That reminds of that message that he (or she) gave us, you know the one, the one about whats \'is name.
Great art once more Michael.
( I am off to the Ashmolean in Oxford today to see some more great artwork.)
April 23rd, 2019 02:50
PARDON ?
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing UNCLE MIKE ~ Even in our Thirties we can be forgetful ! love the PIC lots of Sea & Lake shores on this trip ! Its nearly 9pm just having supper (Soup and a Sani) before bedding down for the night tired after a long day ! Just room for two in the van ~ please check our POEM !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love ANGELA & BRIAN ~ Together Again ! 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 23rd, 2019 02:49
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing UNCLE MIKE ~ Even in our Thirties we can be forgetful ! love the PIC lots of Sea & Lake shores on this trip ! Its nearly 9pm just having supper (Soup and a Sani) before bedding down for the night tired after a long day ! Just room for two in the van ~ please check our POEM !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love ANGELA & BRIAN ~ Together Again ! 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 23rd, 2019 02:49
PARDON ?
Fay Slimm. said:
A very - - ummm - oh I forgot what the subject was in your whatsit.... hhmmmm..........
April 23rd, 2019 01:38
Fay Slimm. said:
A very - - ummm - oh I forgot what the subject was in your whatsit.... hhmmmm..........
April 23rd, 2019 01:38
PARDON ?
orchidee said:
Did you get the message in the end? Was it from Ram Berles? He does go on and on.
April 23rd, 2019 01:32
orchidee said:
Did you get the message in the end? Was it from Ram Berles? He does go on and on.
April 23rd, 2019 01:32
BELLS
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE : Love the Picture & Medieval Ladder & Achronistic Drill. You are deliberatly making us Home Sick for Essex Villages again ! Love the POEM miss local Essex Church Bells in NZ ! Epic ODE !
Bessings & Peace
Poetic Love A & B (both in NZ ) 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 22nd, 2019 04:37
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE : Love the Picture & Medieval Ladder & Achronistic Drill. You are deliberatly making us Home Sick for Essex Villages again ! Love the POEM miss local Essex Church Bells in NZ ! Epic ODE !
Bessings & Peace
Poetic Love A & B (both in NZ ) 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 22nd, 2019 04:37
BELLS
Fay Slimm. said:
The bell sounds go so well with the times depicted in your picture today - - - - I could spend an age just looking at the expertise you use in watercolour Michael - - love that bent ladder.
April 22nd, 2019 01:06
Fay Slimm. said:
The bell sounds go so well with the times depicted in your picture today - - - - I could spend an age just looking at the expertise you use in watercolour Michael - - love that bent ladder.
April 22nd, 2019 01:06
BELLS
dusk arising said:
Quasimodo bought his wife Esmerelda a wok, so she could iron his shirts.
Ah ringing the changes comes to mind.
April 22nd, 2019 00:25
dusk arising said:
Quasimodo bought his wife Esmerelda a wok, so she could iron his shirts.
Ah ringing the changes comes to mind.
April 22nd, 2019 00:25
BELLS
Goldfinch60 said:
The Bells! The Bells! Good one MIchael.
Yet another good artwork - thank you.
April 22nd, 2019 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
The Bells! The Bells! Good one MIchael.
Yet another good artwork - thank you.
April 22nd, 2019 00:18
STILL LAMENTING
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun read Michael.
That artwork is outstanding!
April 22nd, 2019 00:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun read Michael.
That artwork is outstanding!
April 22nd, 2019 00:10
STILL LAMENTING
Suresh said:
If only he was still around
Maybe he could have found
Rang the bells alarming sound
Saving roof from burning down
April 21st, 2019 13:00
Suresh said:
If only he was still around
Maybe he could have found
Rang the bells alarming sound
Saving roof from burning down
April 21st, 2019 13:00
STILL LAMENTING
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
MERCI UNCLE MIKE ~ Peutetre il est QUASIMODO ? Et son CHANDELLE n\'est pas morte ! We are just pleased none of the brave POMPIERRES were killed or badly injured and the BEAUTIFUL Notre Dame de PARIS was saved. We always visit and light a candle when we are in Paris. Perhaps in future they will be electric ones like in some Churches. Fire is a BAD SERVANT but a GOOD MASTER !
Love the painting ~ weve entuitled it GLOBAL WARMING !
Blessings & Love to You & Yours
Yours as always ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Its MONDAY already here but were too excited to SLEEP !
April 21st, 2019 07:20
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
MERCI UNCLE MIKE ~ Peutetre il est QUASIMODO ? Et son CHANDELLE n\'est pas morte ! We are just pleased none of the brave POMPIERRES were killed or badly injured and the BEAUTIFUL Notre Dame de PARIS was saved. We always visit and light a candle when we are in Paris. Perhaps in future they will be electric ones like in some Churches. Fire is a BAD SERVANT but a GOOD MASTER !
Love the painting ~ weve entuitled it GLOBAL WARMING !
Blessings & Love to You & Yours
Yours as always ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Its MONDAY already here but were too excited to SLEEP !
April 21st, 2019 07:20
STILL LAMENTING
dusk arising said:
Ha Ha Ha laughed out loud at this masterpiece of wit today.
No doubt qusimodo\'s ghost was hoping Esmerelda would hear his plea \"Esmerelda, you gave me water\" and repeat her act of kindness but this time with a fire hose.
Maybe he had a hunch something like this was going to happen.
April 21st, 2019 04:03
dusk arising said:
Ha Ha Ha laughed out loud at this masterpiece of wit today.
No doubt qusimodo\'s ghost was hoping Esmerelda would hear his plea \"Esmerelda, you gave me water\" and repeat her act of kindness but this time with a fire hose.
Maybe he had a hunch something like this was going to happen.
April 21st, 2019 04:03
STILL LAMENTING
Fay Slimm. said:
Poor Quasi. his mode is ever loaded with smiles at such plight....... a good fun-read and wonderful artwork again Mike.
April 21st, 2019 01:56
Fay Slimm. said:
Poor Quasi. his mode is ever loaded with smiles at such plight....... a good fun-read and wonderful artwork again Mike.
April 21st, 2019 01:56
STILL LAMENTING
orchidee said:
Sometimes I\'m not surprised if some places catch fire - candles with wooden pews - bit dodgy health and safety wise!
Miss Berles may have his candle.
April 21st, 2019 01:55
orchidee said:
Sometimes I\'m not surprised if some places catch fire - candles with wooden pews - bit dodgy health and safety wise!
Miss Berles may have his candle.
April 21st, 2019 01:55
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