Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



SHORE LINE
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~ The line between the SEA & SKY is very poignant today on 6 JUNE 2019 ~ The very moving 75th Anniversary of DDAY (Please check my Poetic Tribute ~ Thanks) ! I have visited the Shores of Normandy several times (I have Friends in CAEN) and when I close my eyes I can hear the Noise of war and the Cries of the Dead & Dying ! Much has been said but there is still much to say. Please check my VIDEO which (to some extent justifies the loss of 22,000 lives) in the ESSENTIAL INVASION of FRANCE in 1944. This has been the THEME of the Celebrations of the 75th Anniversary. the Third Reich was a Devilish & Bloodthirsty & Sadistic Regime which had to be Totally Destroyed ~ AMEN !

Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡

June 6th, 2019 04:27

SHORE LINE
Lorna said:

The painting is so deep I could stare into it all day. The litter message breaks my heart.

June 6th, 2019 04:26

SHORE LINE
dusk arising said:

Fine words. My mind today is taken to beaches of Normandy some 75 years ago where the detritus was man and of man.
Your words of the scenes natural beauty in stark contrast to my mental vision of that time.

June 6th, 2019 03:35

SHORE LINE
Fay Slimm. said:

Michael I second the message underlying this clever rhyme of outcry against human detritus. No wonder the sea gets frustrated eh ? - - love the artwork too.

June 6th, 2019 03:06

SHORE LINE
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. You shore Miss Berles has read this?
Terrible use of spelling innit? I saw huge sign outside a shop: \'Stationary sold here\'.Heehee.

June 6th, 2019 01:53

SHORE LINE
Goldfinch60 said:

The power of the ocean can bring so many sights and emotions to us, as does your poem Michael.

Another cracking artwork. I really like this type of art that you are doing, for me there is so much depth within it.

June 6th, 2019 00:21

THE MISSING \'E\'
Suresh said:

I found a B, maybe you can use it. Just cut the curves off and you\'ll have a crude E, Mr Dwards, or change your name for that will do too, unless it ff cts your cr ativ xpr ssion.
Thnx for the l ivity.

June 5th, 2019 11:42

THE MISSING \'E\'
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks for sharing UNCLE MIKE ~ Nice bunch of roses in POINTILLISM ~ much quicker with Coarse Wire Wool than a Brush ! I do a CODEWORD each morning in the *I* They give us three letters ~ usually not the *E* ! However the *E* is easy to find if one checks the GRID ~ each letter is replaced by a NUMBER ! E is the most common letter and often ends a WORD or is the penultimate letter in a word ! If one checks the GRID the *E* often ~ jumps out ! Today (5.6.19) 13 in all ~ 4 Ultimate ~ 4 penultimate and 5 in the Body of the Words ~ EASY ~ Hope you find your *E* as quick !

Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡


June 5th, 2019 10:21

THE MISSING \'E\'
dusk arising said:

Great fun from your inventive, creative mind today.

And the P is silent, as in swimming.

June 5th, 2019 07:53

THE MISSING \'E\'
Neville said:

xc ll nt Micha l sir, and that painting aint half bad ith r

N vill

June 5th, 2019 04:49

THE MISSING \'E\'
Fay Slimm. said:

Ha ha - this raised a big smile my friend - I love the unexpected twists of wit which bend words etc - - your mind is amazingly versatile in art of all kinds.

June 5th, 2019 02:57

THE MISSING \'E\'
orchidee said:

Good write and pic M. You know the Dwards family? Fido may have the E.

June 5th, 2019 02:03

THE MISSING \'E\'
Goldfinch60 said:

Intriguing artwork Michael, how big is it?

June 5th, 2019 01:06

THE MISSING \'E\'
Goldfinch60 said:

I would think that Fido, Orchi\'s dog may have ran off with it, he may have thought that you needed it for rotic loquence

June 5th, 2019 01:05

WORDS WRITTEN
Suresh said:

Like thoughts lost in a fleeting moment -

Happens to me quite often

June 4th, 2019 15:48

IN TRANSCENDENCE
Neville said:

it was a real treat to meander slow through your beautiful words this eve... and your image resembles in my minds eye a magnificent murmeration of starlings..... Neville

June 4th, 2019 13:33

IN TRANSCENDENCE
Suresh said:

Yes, as we cross that mystic threshold, all worries dissipates - transcendence

June 4th, 2019 13:14

IN TRANSCENDENCE
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

THANKS FOR SHARING UNCLE MIKE ~ A very apt Painting *The Confluence of Turbulance & Calm* We like the POEM which again assures that all Turbulances will eventually subside and Peace & Calm will reign ~ and TRUMP will go back where He belongs AGAIN ~ GOF forbid a Second Term !

Blessings & Calm to YOU & YOURS
Yours as always ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡

June 4th, 2019 09:06

IN TRANSCENDENCE
Lorna said:

Does your last stanza mean a happy ending? In other words, all doubts are gone, burned up?

June 4th, 2019 06:34

IN TRANSCENDENCE
dusk arising said:

Four verses of considering... how am i gonna fix my motorbike - memories of halcyon days with pillion lovers - and the finale - a solution - scrap it!

June 4th, 2019 04:15

IN TRANSCENDENCE
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M, away from the Hurley Berley of life. You met him/her - that Berley person?!

June 4th, 2019 02:24

IN TRANSCENDENCE
Goldfinch60 said:

Our sights can certainly transcend each other into the mystery of life.

Wonderful artwork Michael.

June 4th, 2019 00:44

LIMPET LUCY
Suresh said:

I\'d have no problem if Limpet Lucy with ya permission cuddled up to me.

Lighthearted all the way around

June 3rd, 2019 16:18

LIMPET LUCY
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

“Limpet Lucy” is quite a gal!
I enjoyed the read!

Love the painting! The colors are matching today’s sky...in my part of town! Very beautiful and soothing!

~Laura~

June 3rd, 2019 14:59

LIMPET LUCY
Fay Slimm. said:

This smile your verse left behind get bigger the more I think of Lucy the Limpet......... ha - good-on-ya Mike and thanks for the grin.

June 3rd, 2019 04:47

LIMPET LUCY
Neville said:

sounds like my kinda woman.....another chuckle here Michael... thank you...

Neville

June 3rd, 2019 04:18

LIMPET LUCY
dusk arising said:

Reminds me of Orchi\'s dog Fido
He lost his left ear to a Flymo
His pee ruined the lawn
But now that he\'s gawn
Orchi\'s dug a 6ft deep Lido

And i\'ve read that since that wee skirmish at Hastings
Time has gone simply a-wasting
But time spent with Berles
And some other girls
He\'s still ready to give Harold a pasting

I loved your limpet piece today.

June 3rd, 2019 02:10

LIMPET LUCY
orchidee said:

Good write and pic M. Would this be Lucy Limpet-Berles?!

June 3rd, 2019 01:27

LIMPET LUCY
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Limpet Lucy ~ sounds quite JUICY
Holds on tight ~ ALL NIGHT !

Thanks for sharing UNCLE MIKE ~ Love the BLUES on BLUES ~ very cool & soothing ~ ideal for a Dentists or a GPs Surgery ! Preferable to the *SCREAM* or *GUERNICA* !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡

June 3rd, 2019 00:52

LIMPET LUCY
Goldfinch60 said:

Great artwork, the colours are increasing.

June 3rd, 2019 00:50



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