Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
IN TRANSCENDENCE
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
A beautiful write.
I love the picture accompanying your poem the colours are a stunning combination.
Keep writing FineB.
May 11th, 2019 12:03
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
A beautiful write.
I love the picture accompanying your poem the colours are a stunning combination.
Keep writing FineB.
May 11th, 2019 12:03
DAY MONTH YEAR
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
A wonderful poem. Every moment in our lives has its order.
Keep writing FineB
May 11th, 2019 11:59
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
A wonderful poem. Every moment in our lives has its order.
Keep writing FineB
May 11th, 2019 11:59
OBSCURE SENRYUS (2)
MendedFences27 said:
Abstract it is. You\'ve given us. \"wallpaper fading\" (an old home), \"Sun rays\" (daytime) , \'Chicken in oven\' (lunch or supper). \"open windows\" (they burnt the chicken).
An elderly couple in their old home, either fell asleep or forgot about the chicken they were cooking - .
Abstract by Phil A.
May 10th, 2019 21:39
MendedFences27 said:
Abstract it is. You\'ve given us. \"wallpaper fading\" (an old home), \"Sun rays\" (daytime) , \'Chicken in oven\' (lunch or supper). \"open windows\" (they burnt the chicken).
An elderly couple in their old home, either fell asleep or forgot about the chicken they were cooking - .
Abstract by Phil A.
May 10th, 2019 21:39
Dreamers
Suresh said:
I can see myself walking down that familiar avenue - dreaming of days past.
A serene image
May 10th, 2019 13:31
Suresh said:
I can see myself walking down that familiar avenue - dreaming of days past.
A serene image
May 10th, 2019 13:31
OBSCURE SENRYUS (2)
Suresh said:
It taunts the reader to think, but being a simpleton I deduced and then read your response to \'dusk\'. So I wasn\'t a total fool.
Loved the colors in your works today.
May 10th, 2019 11:01
Suresh said:
It taunts the reader to think, but being a simpleton I deduced and then read your response to \'dusk\'. So I wasn\'t a total fool.
Loved the colors in your works today.
May 10th, 2019 11:01
OBSCURE SENRYUS (2)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
The SCARECROW ~ waved arms
smiled at all the Passers by
wishing it was JUNE !
TOUCHE ~ Angela & Brian 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 10th, 2019 10:40
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
The SCARECROW ~ waved arms
smiled at all the Passers by
wishing it was JUNE !
TOUCHE ~ Angela & Brian 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 10th, 2019 10:40
OBSCURE SENRYUS (2)
Fay Slimm. said:
Nonsense was never better expressed for I see in these lines a lifestyle and aging gracefully.
May 10th, 2019 04:29
Fay Slimm. said:
Nonsense was never better expressed for I see in these lines a lifestyle and aging gracefully.
May 10th, 2019 04:29
OBSCURE SENRYUS (2)
Goldfinch60 said:
I warn you, you have started something now!
May 10th, 2019 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
I warn you, you have started something now!
May 10th, 2019 01:10
OBSCURE SENRYUS (2)
Goldfinch60 said:
My first smile of the day Michael, thank you.
May 10th, 2019 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
My first smile of the day Michael, thank you.
May 10th, 2019 01:09
OBSCURE SENRYUS (1)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thank you UNCLE ANDY ! Thursday (Wursday) good day for OBSCURITY. Always commendable to get a FIVE SYLLABLE word into the last line of a SENRYU ! Love the Picture ! We had a talk last night (at College) about the TITANIC by a Lady whose relation had *Gone down with the SHIP !\" In you obstract I saw the TITANIC in the mist & the lifeboats leaving !
Blessings & Joy & Peace
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 9th, 2019 06:50
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thank you UNCLE ANDY ! Thursday (Wursday) good day for OBSCURITY. Always commendable to get a FIVE SYLLABLE word into the last line of a SENRYU ! Love the Picture ! We had a talk last night (at College) about the TITANIC by a Lady whose relation had *Gone down with the SHIP !\" In you obstract I saw the TITANIC in the mist & the lifeboats leaving !
Blessings & Joy & Peace
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 9th, 2019 06:50
OBSCURE SENRYUS (1)
Goldfinch60 said:
Obscure Senryus,
Emotionally untrue,
Abominable.
May 9th, 2019 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Obscure Senryus,
Emotionally untrue,
Abominable.
May 9th, 2019 00:57
INCOMING TIDE
Suresh said:
You paint a beautiful picture here - in both art forms.
Do we not like to pick up treasures brought in by them those waves
May 7th, 2019 10:29
Suresh said:
You paint a beautiful picture here - in both art forms.
Do we not like to pick up treasures brought in by them those waves
May 7th, 2019 10:29
IN TRANSCENDENCE
MendedFences27 said:
Art - So, that\'s what it looks like beyond the weir?
Poetry - I followed you \"Beyond the Weir\" into the \"mist\" and \"vapors\' (translation). I climbed \"high\" above the \"waves\" and made a decision. I\'m putting this one into my favorites. No more despair for me. - Phil A.
May 6th, 2019 14:54
MendedFences27 said:
Art - So, that\'s what it looks like beyond the weir?
Poetry - I followed you \"Beyond the Weir\" into the \"mist\" and \"vapors\' (translation). I climbed \"high\" above the \"waves\" and made a decision. I\'m putting this one into my favorites. No more despair for me. - Phil A.
May 6th, 2019 14:54
IN TRANSCENDENCE
Fay Slimm. said:
Full of amazing imagery these lines betoken the changes when indecision is rendered extinct. Great read Mike.
May 6th, 2019 11:11
Fay Slimm. said:
Full of amazing imagery these lines betoken the changes when indecision is rendered extinct. Great read Mike.
May 6th, 2019 11:11
IN TRANSCENDENCE
Neville said:
what a lovely set of words you have left a trail of wonder with today Michael.... Neville
May 6th, 2019 11:08
Neville said:
what a lovely set of words you have left a trail of wonder with today Michael.... Neville
May 6th, 2019 11:08
IN TRANSCENDENCE
Suresh said:
Time is ripe to ride the shadows and finally extinct those thoughts.
Read it a few times to extract all it had to offer.
May 6th, 2019 11:05
Suresh said:
Time is ripe to ride the shadows and finally extinct those thoughts.
Read it a few times to extract all it had to offer.
May 6th, 2019 11:05
IN TRANSCENDENCE
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing Uncle Mike ~ You sure have waxed lyrical today ! Your elegant ODE and bleak landscape reflects how I feel inside separate from My Angel after being so so close. The AGONY is amplified by the ECSTASY ! Thanks for sharing !
Blessings & Peace
Love through ART & POETRY ~
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 6th, 2019 07:58
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing Uncle Mike ~ You sure have waxed lyrical today ! Your elegant ODE and bleak landscape reflects how I feel inside separate from My Angel after being so so close. The AGONY is amplified by the ECSTASY ! Thanks for sharing !
Blessings & Peace
Love through ART & POETRY ~
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 6th, 2019 07:58
IN TRANSCENDENCE
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna ramble beyond the weirs then. I never knew there was so much beyond them. Well, I know now, from this fine poem!
May 6th, 2019 02:11
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna ramble beyond the weirs then. I never knew there was so much beyond them. Well, I know now, from this fine poem!
May 6th, 2019 02:11
IN TRANSCENDENCE
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words create a visual image in my mind Michael, that image is mine as others will have their own image in theirs.
Love the artwork.
A great start to the day in both words and art - thank you.
May 6th, 2019 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words create a visual image in my mind Michael, that image is mine as others will have their own image in theirs.
Love the artwork.
A great start to the day in both words and art - thank you.
May 6th, 2019 00:53
SMUTTY YES BUT VULGAR NO
Neville said:
I could not agree more sir.. and although accept there is a critical point.. there is likely to be some blurring of this from one individual, or culture , to another... well said, say\'s I.... Neville
May 5th, 2019 11:27
Neville said:
I could not agree more sir.. and although accept there is a critical point.. there is likely to be some blurring of this from one individual, or culture , to another... well said, say\'s I.... Neville
May 5th, 2019 11:27
SUMMER BEDDING IS NOT AN OPTION
Suresh said:
I\'m glad I read the comment first.
You really served this one well
You meant without meaning to
I smiled without knowing why
One day I\'ll catch up, maybe!
May 5th, 2019 11:08
Suresh said:
I\'m glad I read the comment first.
You really served this one well
You meant without meaning to
I smiled without knowing why
One day I\'ll catch up, maybe!
May 5th, 2019 11:08
SMUTTY YES BUT VULGAR NO
Suresh said:
I swear, this will make even the Queen smile.
I immediately thought of the event when in my high school, in the mid sixties, an English school in New Delhi, run by Brothers, when I used the word \"bloody\" for the first and only time there, how I was sternly admonished physically and verbally.
WOW! how times have changed.
May 5th, 2019 10:45
Suresh said:
I swear, this will make even the Queen smile.
I immediately thought of the event when in my high school, in the mid sixties, an English school in New Delhi, run by Brothers, when I used the word \"bloody\" for the first and only time there, how I was sternly admonished physically and verbally.
WOW! how times have changed.
May 5th, 2019 10:45
SMUTTY YES BUT VULGAR NO
Poetic Dan said:
What A awesome read on a Sunday
Inspirational words from a one of a kind!
Much appreciated
With peace and respect
May 5th, 2019 05:50
Poetic Dan said:
What A awesome read on a Sunday
Inspirational words from a one of a kind!
Much appreciated
With peace and respect
May 5th, 2019 05:50
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