Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



A GLASS HALF EMPTY OR A GLASS HALF FULL.
FineB said:

Hi Michael,

A lovely poem and a pretty picture too.

I\'ll take my glass half full with a nice glass of German white wine or the finest Prosecco.

Keep writing Fine B

May 23rd, 2019 04:54

A GLASS HALF EMPTY OR A GLASS HALF FULL.
dusk arising said:

Sod the glass, pass me the bottle.

And I agree with Goldfinch.

May 23rd, 2019 03:49

A GLASS HALF EMPTY OR A GLASS HALF FULL.
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. I wondered why I\'m always thirsty. I keep drinking the empty half of the glass. Doh!

May 23rd, 2019 01:49

A GLASS HALF EMPTY OR A GLASS HALF FULL.
Goldfinch60 said:

If the glass is half full
You have been cheated,
If the glass is half empty
You have drunk some.

Mine\'s a Rioja please Michael - a full glass please.

May 23rd, 2019 01:14

WORDS
FineB said:

Hello Michael,

Super poem,

Keep the words flowing.

Keep writing FineB

May 22nd, 2019 16:46

WORDS
Neville said:

absolutely spot on... it\'s a waiting game alright... very nicely writ Michael... N

May 22nd, 2019 13:34

WORDS
Poetic Dan said:

Just like the bus...

May 22nd, 2019 08:09

WORDS
Fay Slimm. said:

Words and pictures show each of your gifts to the public and thank you for sharing them both with us here Mike - a lovely first read ( and view ) of my morning.

May 22nd, 2019 04:46

WORDS
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Words, between the lines of age (Neil Young)
Great daunting start to any poem Michael well captured

May 22nd, 2019 04:41

WORDS
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks again UNCLE MIKE for a perfect POEM & PIC ! (Modern) Poetry is defined as ANY WORDS in ANY ORDER without Form or Function !
When PAUL McCartney write the tune to YESTERDAY he walked into Abbey Road Studio and said *Ive gorra tune* Ringo asked *Ave yer got any WERDS ?* When Paul said *NO* Ringo sang *Scrambled Eggs ~ My Girlfreinds got such lovely Legs* and the greatest POP SONG ever died for lack of appropriate WERDS ~ RIP ! UNTIL Paul was driving in ALBAFUERA (like you do !) and into His Head comes *Yesterday all my troubles seemed so far away ................. !* The symbiosis of a TUNE & WORDS (from out of the BLUE) was fashioned the most memorable POP SONG ever. JUST NOTES & WORDS ~ BUT THE RIGHT ORDER !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours as always ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡

May 22nd, 2019 03:53

WORDS
dusk arising said:

Thought provoking words today. Also your paints are waiting for your inspired commitment and perhaps more rewarding are your passing public. For they may become inspired by your creative nature to show appreciation and part with cash.
It must be very rewarding to know an artisic creative output is appreciated and cash provides a living.

May 22nd, 2019 01:42

WORDS
orchidee said:

Good write and pic M. Plenty of (Sylla) Berles waiting in the wings too. No one else might know what we\'re on about. No change there then?!

May 22nd, 2019 01:36

WORDS
Suresh said:

P.S. Along with amazing art

May 22nd, 2019 01:12

WORDS
Suresh said:

Even with little time, your words find their way to the page, to enrich us

May 22nd, 2019 01:11

WORDS
Goldfinch60 said:

Those words are there within us just waiting to be assembled on the page.

May 22nd, 2019 00:50

IN LIFE SPARE US
Neville said:

I have a very firm, but not delusional belief you have captured truth here Michael..
the image you provide has awesome colours and a delightful subject too sir....

Neville

May 21st, 2019 01:37

SHE WAITS
MendedFences27 said:

Love the language of your poem. It flows smoothly. A dark scenario of either entrapment and fortuitous fortune, though, rather Poe-like, causes one to wonder who is she? Why is she there? Enjoyed the thought. - Phil A.


May 20th, 2019 18:22

SHE WAITS
Suresh said:

What an entertaining poem and a pic of a village that time forgot

May 20th, 2019 10:20

SHE WAITS
Neville said:

A delightful poem and a smashing watercolour too.... they go together well.... Neville

May 20th, 2019 06:59

SHE WAITS
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~ Very ethnic picture ~ it evokes all the senses ! Great spooky poem ! In my experience the OUTSIDE of a Sepulchare is the best SIDE to be ! We*ve watched too many MUMMY Films !

Blessings & Love in all your POETRY & ART
YOURS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡

May 20th, 2019 05:45

SHE WAITS
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Reminds me of Martha\'s vineyard... let her wait
Excellent Michael goosebumps

May 20th, 2019 05:15

SHE WAITS
dusk arising said:

I had in mind Goldilocks until i realised she had only three bears unlike this lucky girly who had forebears.

Pray there are no tremors for that vaulted door may fall ajar and her whispy form escape.
Who first will fall prey?

Great mystical verse from you today.

May 20th, 2019 02:48

SHE WAITS
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. I keep asking \'Should I meet these gals (any ages) in the poems on this site?!\' Well, I could meet Miss Berles.

May 20th, 2019 02:25

SHE WAITS
Goldfinch60 said:

May she be waiting for a long time. Good write Michael and fabulous artwork.

May 20th, 2019 01:18

IN LIFE SPARE US
MendedFences27 said:

How does the old joke go? \"Once we had a full-length mirror, but now we have to hang it sideways.\" Enough.
Your little poem says a lot about people. Mirrors simply reflect. It\'s the interpretation that is troubling.
Your artwork is amazing. _ Phil A.

May 19th, 2019 16:27

EVOLUTION
Suresh said:

WHAT!!!! You insult the ape, by calling man evolved....

Loved it

May 19th, 2019 14:11

IN LIFE SPARE US
Suresh said:

There is so much I could say
But that will only steer me away

So, it is as you said.

May 19th, 2019 11:29

IN LIFE SPARE US
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

THANKS UNCLE MIKE ~ BRIAN HERE ~ Great Pic ~ love to ascend those steps & see for myself ! A MIRROR IMAGE is reversed (L to R & R to L) which is why some people whose faces are very assymetrical (like QUASIMODO !) never recognise themselves in a photo. Angela likes to use TWO MIRRORS @ 90 degrees (before she ventures out) so she sees what others will see ~ OK For those who failed GCE Physics (do you know anybody who got a C ?) the second mirror reverses the first back to normality ! An interesting thing we do in PHOTOGRAPHY GCSE is to take two identical PORTRAITS and then join the two RHS & the two LHS. The result is interesting ! In my case the two RHS look exactly like my DAD (Slim & Angular) and the two LHS (more Plump & Rounded) ~ GENETICS RULE ~ OK. Thanks for stimulating !

Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Yours as always ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡

May 19th, 2019 10:33

IN LIFE SPARE US
Fay Slimm. said:

I second this view of mirrors - good point made Mike.......... a first rate painting that must be one of your best.

May 19th, 2019 02:50

IN LIFE SPARE US
dusk arising said:

i stopped reading the Mirror. There are so many trashier alternatives.

A mirror only serves to offer the chance to see ourselves as others see us but the other way around... Worthwhile? doubtful. Anyway after a mirror gets to know you it begins to tell lies. Mine has started flashing images og my father back at me.
Begetter of errors indeed.

May 19th, 2019 02:39



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