Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



From \'A COLLECTION\' (9)
dusk arising said:

KInnell you made i larff. Bringing to mind a sight i have not yet seen. How long have you had this ability to pick up on those subtle little signals our gentler sex offer as bait?

Today your pic is of the well known yellow nosed green slime monster and i see you clearly have him poised over a charred turd today.

June 8th, 2019 10:16

From \'A COLLECTION\' (9)
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

NO! NO? NO!
What a tease...
Love the pic
very martionesc


June 8th, 2019 08:58

From \'A COLLECTION\' (9)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GOOD MORNING UNCLE MIKE : Nearly 10pm here : Just relaxing with MAMA & PAPA with a glass of Rioja after a days *WINTER CRUISING* in the BAY (16C = 61F !). They lve it here ! Love the Painting and the Poem. There are Animals (Camels - Meercats - Frogs - Owls etc) which always give me a smile ! Mother Nature & DNA has a lot to Answer for ! If one orients the ABSTRACT through 180 it resembles the Coasts of the UK & France and the establishment of a Bridgehead on D-DAY !

Blessings & Love to YOU & YOURS
Yours as always : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

June 8th, 2019 03:51

From \'A COLLECTION\' (9)
Fay Slimm. said:

Ha - a definite NO - and so she oughta after that most unromantic proposal. Am smiling again at your sense of humour my friend.

June 8th, 2019 01:49

From \'A COLLECTION\' (9)
orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write and pic Michael. I\'ve never seen a pregnant camel with...….. ooh!

June 8th, 2019 01:37

From \'A COLLECTION\' (9)
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write Michael.

Wonderful artwork, is this a new one or one from when you did several of these types of abstracts?

June 8th, 2019 00:56

From \'A COLLECTION\' (9)
Neville said:

I wonder what gave her the hump.....

my first chuckle of the day... thanks Michael

June 8th, 2019 00:52

From \'A COLLECTION\' (9)
Poetic Dan said:

That sounds like a definite no!

June 8th, 2019 00:51

MAN\'S CONSTRUCT
Suresh said:

Your poem will outlast what man constructs

June 7th, 2019 12:33

A COLLECTION (8)
Neville said:

an intriguing little poem that had me thinking .... and only when I resorted to Google which is a relatively new but increasingly common shibboleth did it suddenly dawn on me... we learn something new every day.. thank you Michael.... Neville

June 7th, 2019 11:44

A COLLECTION (8)
FineB said:

Hello Michael.

A superb write and brilliant addition to the collection.

Keep writing FineB

June 7th, 2019 03:05

IN TRANSCENDENCE
FineB said:

Hello Michael,

A magical poem and in essence a beautiful write.

Keep writing FineB

June 7th, 2019 03:00

A COLLECTION (8)
dusk arising said:

Brought to mind the trivial sounds being made by a certain robed anglican with a somewhat superior/arrogant personna at the ceremony in Normandy yesterday. Trivially going thru the oral tradition of a defunct religious power base to men who fought, lost and survived to be treated to words of little consequence.
What is the meaning of it all ? No meaningful answers are heard, red herrings offered in the guise of \"moving in mysterious ways\".


June 7th, 2019 03:00

A COLLECTION (8)
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Michael. The pic looks like a heart to me. Is it Herr Ring, or Herr Berles?

June 7th, 2019 01:46

A COLLECTION (8)
Goldfinch60 said:

Those red herrings are so misleading and so hard to find with truth.

OK what strange implementation did you use for the intriguing artwork, I doubt a brush was in sight.

June 7th, 2019 01:46

SHORE LINE
Neville said:

extremely well crafted Michael this could be x5 individual haiku type posts or x1 stand alone poem in its own write... whichever way one sees it, it contains and conveys an important ecological message... bravo sir... N

June 6th, 2019 16:00

THE CHINESE BRUSH (1)
Suresh said:

If I understood it correctly, you are equating the art of painting to the formation of poem.

Both requiring an image before the brush touches the paper, or pen the pages.

Once again, pardon my shuffling,

June 6th, 2019 13:15

SHORE LINE
Suresh said:

As the day surrenders to the night, the line between the ocean and the sky is eroded, as so well displayed in your artwork.
The detritus of man creation, is seeping into every aspect of natures creation, slowly suffocating all, and soon man as well.

June 6th, 2019 13:07

SHORE LINE
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~ The line between the SEA & SKY is very poignant today on 6 JUNE 2019 ~ The very moving 75th Anniversary of DDAY (Please check my Poetic Tribute ~ Thanks) ! I have visited the Shores of Normandy several times (I have Friends in CAEN) and when I close my eyes I can hear the Noise of war and the Cries of the Dead & Dying ! Much has been said but there is still much to say. Please check my VIDEO which (to some extent justifies the loss of 22,000 lives) in the ESSENTIAL INVASION of FRANCE in 1944. This has been the THEME of the Celebrations of the 75th Anniversary. the Third Reich was a Devilish & Bloodthirsty & Sadistic Regime which had to be Totally Destroyed ~ AMEN !

Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡

June 6th, 2019 04:27

SHORE LINE
Lorna said:

The painting is so deep I could stare into it all day. The litter message breaks my heart.

June 6th, 2019 04:26

SHORE LINE
dusk arising said:

Fine words. My mind today is taken to beaches of Normandy some 75 years ago where the detritus was man and of man.
Your words of the scenes natural beauty in stark contrast to my mental vision of that time.

June 6th, 2019 03:35

SHORE LINE
Fay Slimm. said:

Michael I second the message underlying this clever rhyme of outcry against human detritus. No wonder the sea gets frustrated eh ? - - love the artwork too.

June 6th, 2019 03:06

SHORE LINE
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. You shore Miss Berles has read this?
Terrible use of spelling innit? I saw huge sign outside a shop: \'Stationary sold here\'.Heehee.

June 6th, 2019 01:53

SHORE LINE
Goldfinch60 said:

The power of the ocean can bring so many sights and emotions to us, as does your poem Michael.

Another cracking artwork. I really like this type of art that you are doing, for me there is so much depth within it.

June 6th, 2019 00:21

THE MISSING \'E\'
Suresh said:

I found a B, maybe you can use it. Just cut the curves off and you\'ll have a crude E, Mr Dwards, or change your name for that will do too, unless it ff cts your cr ativ xpr ssion.
Thnx for the l ivity.

June 5th, 2019 11:42

THE MISSING \'E\'
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks for sharing UNCLE MIKE ~ Nice bunch of roses in POINTILLISM ~ much quicker with Coarse Wire Wool than a Brush ! I do a CODEWORD each morning in the *I* They give us three letters ~ usually not the *E* ! However the *E* is easy to find if one checks the GRID ~ each letter is replaced by a NUMBER ! E is the most common letter and often ends a WORD or is the penultimate letter in a word ! If one checks the GRID the *E* often ~ jumps out ! Today (5.6.19) 13 in all ~ 4 Ultimate ~ 4 penultimate and 5 in the Body of the Words ~ EASY ~ Hope you find your *E* as quick !

Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡


June 5th, 2019 10:21

THE MISSING \'E\'
dusk arising said:

Great fun from your inventive, creative mind today.

And the P is silent, as in swimming.

June 5th, 2019 07:53

THE MISSING \'E\'
Neville said:

xc ll nt Micha l sir, and that painting aint half bad ith r

N vill

June 5th, 2019 04:49

THE MISSING \'E\'
Fay Slimm. said:

Ha ha - this raised a big smile my friend - I love the unexpected twists of wit which bend words etc - - your mind is amazingly versatile in art of all kinds.

June 5th, 2019 02:57

THE MISSING \'E\'
orchidee said:

Good write and pic M. You know the Dwards family? Fido may have the E.

June 5th, 2019 02:03



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