Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
DROLL COUPLETS (4)
Michael Edwards said:
It wasn\'t the cough that carried him off, but the coffin they carried him off in
August 12th, 2019 00:26
Michael Edwards said:
It wasn\'t the cough that carried him off, but the coffin they carried him off in
August 12th, 2019 00:26
DROLL COUPLETS (4)
Christina8 said:
I\'m so young I haven\'t made enough money to die yet!! DA\'s comments were hilarious!! Very good couplet Michael, always a conversation starter!
August 12th, 2019 00:21
Christina8 said:
I\'m so young I haven\'t made enough money to die yet!! DA\'s comments were hilarious!! Very good couplet Michael, always a conversation starter!
August 12th, 2019 00:21
DROLL COUPLETS (4)
Goldfinch60 said:
The costs are increasing all the time,
I am wondering if I can afford to die!
(Not my problem though, the kids can just chuck me in My River).
August 12th, 2019 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
The costs are increasing all the time,
I am wondering if I can afford to die!
(Not my problem though, the kids can just chuck me in My River).
August 12th, 2019 00:18
DROLL COUPLETS (4)
dusk arising said:
Wrap my body in a carpet roll
and bury me deep
in a 6ft hole
Dontcha spend no money to see me off
told ya what would kill me
was this tickling cough
Why does it have to be so expensive to die? I honestly want a cardboard box or similar and a hole if i can (nutrients back to mother earth) or burn me if its cheaper.
You hit the nail for us older fogies today.
August 12th, 2019 00:16
dusk arising said:
Wrap my body in a carpet roll
and bury me deep
in a 6ft hole
Dontcha spend no money to see me off
told ya what would kill me
was this tickling cough
Why does it have to be so expensive to die? I honestly want a cardboard box or similar and a hole if i can (nutrients back to mother earth) or burn me if its cheaper.
You hit the nail for us older fogies today.
August 12th, 2019 00:16
FULL CIRCLE
Suresh said:
A scene straight out of a thousand movies, but your pen paints a real scene
August 11th, 2019 11:55
Suresh said:
A scene straight out of a thousand movies, but your pen paints a real scene
August 11th, 2019 11:55
THE DREAM - THE REALITY
Suresh said:
No matter how passionate but ...
- when one first awakes
- after a smoke
- a garlic or whatever
and so many more
I gotta go hygienic
..but passion is passion, it makes us all sub-human
Really enjoyed the reality
August 11th, 2019 11:50
Suresh said:
No matter how passionate but ...
- when one first awakes
- after a smoke
- a garlic or whatever
and so many more
I gotta go hygienic
..but passion is passion, it makes us all sub-human
Really enjoyed the reality
August 11th, 2019 11:50
FULL CIRCLE
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
The true circular economy very well expressed Michael.
The backbone of this wonderful country of ours... gone but NOT forgotten
August 11th, 2019 08:50
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
The true circular economy very well expressed Michael.
The backbone of this wonderful country of ours... gone but NOT forgotten
August 11th, 2019 08:50
FULL CIRCLE
dusk arising said:
Always ruunin ooutta bread me mam was..... an \'ovis dun\'t taste like it uused tu neevah!
Took me back to living in the mining community of Nottinghamshire..... pit head baths/showers saved the tin bath regeime but the houses were there with smokey chimneys and stained brick.
Well written compact story within a poem taking many a reader straight along memory lane.
August 11th, 2019 05:06
dusk arising said:
Always ruunin ooutta bread me mam was..... an \'ovis dun\'t taste like it uused tu neevah!
Took me back to living in the mining community of Nottinghamshire..... pit head baths/showers saved the tin bath regeime but the houses were there with smokey chimneys and stained brick.
Well written compact story within a poem taking many a reader straight along memory lane.
August 11th, 2019 05:06
FULL CIRCLE
Fay Slimm. said:
Full circle indeed Mike - - your flow of atmosphere shows there was and is no ending to the rigid requirements of living with miners.
August 11th, 2019 03:11
Fay Slimm. said:
Full circle indeed Mike - - your flow of atmosphere shows there was and is no ending to the rigid requirements of living with miners.
August 11th, 2019 03:11
FULL CIRCLE
Neville said:
fine words painted on the page and as well as being beautiful, Lowery sprang to mind.... Neville
August 11th, 2019 02:09
Neville said:
fine words painted on the page and as well as being beautiful, Lowery sprang to mind.... Neville
August 11th, 2019 02:09
FULL CIRCLE
Goldfinch60 said:
I was taken right into that place and that time Michael.
August 11th, 2019 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
I was taken right into that place and that time Michael.
August 11th, 2019 01:17
FULL CIRCLE
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Is Miss Berles going round in circles?!
August 11th, 2019 01:17
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Is Miss Berles going round in circles?!
August 11th, 2019 01:17
THE DREAM - THE REALITY
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
A lovely write.
Good stuff.
Keep writing
FineB
August 10th, 2019 09:23
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
A lovely write.
Good stuff.
Keep writing
FineB
August 10th, 2019 09:23
THE DREAM - THE REALITY
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
I guess now you’re having lunch...
and from what I read,
PASSION fruit is on your menu!
Enjoy!
I certainly enjoyed reading your penned words...
with a smile! 😊
The colorful flowers in your garden are amazing!
Have a wonderful weekend!
~Laura~
August 10th, 2019 06:36
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
I guess now you’re having lunch...
and from what I read,
PASSION fruit is on your menu!
Enjoy!
I certainly enjoyed reading your penned words...
with a smile! 😊
The colorful flowers in your garden are amazing!
Have a wonderful weekend!
~Laura~
August 10th, 2019 06:36
THE DREAM - THE REALITY
Neville said:
many a true word written in jest eh friend...... tis a damn good un this un....
Neville :)
August 10th, 2019 05:10
Neville said:
many a true word written in jest eh friend...... tis a damn good un this un....
Neville :)
August 10th, 2019 05:10
THE DREAM - THE REALITY
dusk arising said:
Age brings the humour of accepting fallibility though passion will still reign.
Or is that rain?
August 10th, 2019 02:52
dusk arising said:
Age brings the humour of accepting fallibility though passion will still reign.
Or is that rain?
August 10th, 2019 02:52
THE DREAM - THE REALITY
Fay Slimm. said:
Best laugh of my morning so far Michael ................ so is the reality.
August 10th, 2019 02:16
Fay Slimm. said:
Best laugh of my morning so far Michael ................ so is the reality.
August 10th, 2019 02:16
THE DREAM - THE REALITY
orchidee said:
Doh! I was about to swoon, then the second verse came along! lol.
A ghastly thing is, e.g. \'An affair in Eastenders\' is advertised. Just don\'t let us see any details - no bed scenes - *shudders in horror*.
August 10th, 2019 01:41
orchidee said:
Doh! I was about to swoon, then the second verse came along! lol.
A ghastly thing is, e.g. \'An affair in Eastenders\' is advertised. Just don\'t let us see any details - no bed scenes - *shudders in horror*.
August 10th, 2019 01:41
THE DREAM - THE REALITY
Christina8 said:
This is excellent Michael!! Needed an early morning laugh! So well done....Christina
August 10th, 2019 01:15
Christina8 said:
This is excellent Michael!! Needed an early morning laugh! So well done....Christina
August 10th, 2019 01:15
THE DREAM - THE REALITY
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful Michael, you have done it again, I burst out laughing! Thank you.
August 10th, 2019 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful Michael, you have done it again, I burst out laughing! Thank you.
August 10th, 2019 00:57
THE DREAM - THE REALITY
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Thank you Michael I needed that after my morning... with the dogs
August 10th, 2019 00:57
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Thank you Michael I needed that after my morning... with the dogs
August 10th, 2019 00:57
DROLL COUPLETS (3)
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
That’s a good one! At least now she can’t get her knickers in a twist!
Love the pic!
~Laura~
August 9th, 2019 22:59
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
That’s a good one! At least now she can’t get her knickers in a twist!
Love the pic!
~Laura~
August 9th, 2019 22:59
DROLL COUPLETS (3)
Neville said:
Very good.... Michael made me laugh so it did....
August 9th, 2019 15:23
Neville said:
Very good.... Michael made me laugh so it did....
August 9th, 2019 15:23
DROLL COUPLETS (3)
Suresh said:
...then the underground sent up a blast of air,
Now she had nothing left to hide or share...
Thnx for such drools my friend
August 9th, 2019 13:47
Suresh said:
...then the underground sent up a blast of air,
Now she had nothing left to hide or share...
Thnx for such drools my friend
August 9th, 2019 13:47
DROLL COUPLETS (3)
dusk arising said:
He really was a clever chap
Wearing mirrors on his toe caps.
August 9th, 2019 08:13
dusk arising said:
He really was a clever chap
Wearing mirrors on his toe caps.
August 9th, 2019 08:13
UNSAID
sylviasearcher said:
I think the passing ships made me feel a sense of sorrow at their still and silent lips
But that is because everything reminds me of ode on a Grecian urn lately
Beauty is Truth and all that
A thought provoking eloquent write
August 9th, 2019 04:33
sylviasearcher said:
I think the passing ships made me feel a sense of sorrow at their still and silent lips
But that is because everything reminds me of ode on a Grecian urn lately
Beauty is Truth and all that
A thought provoking eloquent write
August 9th, 2019 04:33
DROLL COUPLETS (3)
Goldfinch60 said:
Another first smile of the day Michael - Thank you.
August 9th, 2019 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Another first smile of the day Michael - Thank you.
August 9th, 2019 01:22
DROLL COUPLETS (3)
orchidee said:
Oh heehee M. There was a comment on a Page 3 girl:\' Ohh, it\'s a bit chilly love; put ya long johns on, and be a sensible gal!\'
August 9th, 2019 01:22
orchidee said:
Oh heehee M. There was a comment on a Page 3 girl:\' Ohh, it\'s a bit chilly love; put ya long johns on, and be a sensible gal!\'
August 9th, 2019 01:22
DROLL COUPLETS (2)
PoeticBiscuit said:
A good laugh can make a day much better. Thank you for doing just that!
August 8th, 2019 20:17
PoeticBiscuit said:
A good laugh can make a day much better. Thank you for doing just that!
August 8th, 2019 20:17
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