Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
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Goldfinch60 said:
Your words create a visual image in my mind Michael, that image is mine as others will have their own image in theirs.
Love the artwork.
A great start to the day in both words and art - thank you.
May 6th, 2019 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words create a visual image in my mind Michael, that image is mine as others will have their own image in theirs.
Love the artwork.
A great start to the day in both words and art - thank you.
May 6th, 2019 00:53
SMUTTY YES BUT VULGAR NO
Neville said:
I could not agree more sir.. and although accept there is a critical point.. there is likely to be some blurring of this from one individual, or culture , to another... well said, say\'s I.... Neville
May 5th, 2019 11:27
Neville said:
I could not agree more sir.. and although accept there is a critical point.. there is likely to be some blurring of this from one individual, or culture , to another... well said, say\'s I.... Neville
May 5th, 2019 11:27
SUMMER BEDDING IS NOT AN OPTION
Suresh said:
I\'m glad I read the comment first.
You really served this one well
You meant without meaning to
I smiled without knowing why
One day I\'ll catch up, maybe!
May 5th, 2019 11:08
Suresh said:
I\'m glad I read the comment first.
You really served this one well
You meant without meaning to
I smiled without knowing why
One day I\'ll catch up, maybe!
May 5th, 2019 11:08
SMUTTY YES BUT VULGAR NO
Suresh said:
I swear, this will make even the Queen smile.
I immediately thought of the event when in my high school, in the mid sixties, an English school in New Delhi, run by Brothers, when I used the word \"bloody\" for the first and only time there, how I was sternly admonished physically and verbally.
WOW! how times have changed.
May 5th, 2019 10:45
Suresh said:
I swear, this will make even the Queen smile.
I immediately thought of the event when in my high school, in the mid sixties, an English school in New Delhi, run by Brothers, when I used the word \"bloody\" for the first and only time there, how I was sternly admonished physically and verbally.
WOW! how times have changed.
May 5th, 2019 10:45
SMUTTY YES BUT VULGAR NO
Poetic Dan said:
What A awesome read on a Sunday
Inspirational words from a one of a kind!
Much appreciated
With peace and respect
May 5th, 2019 05:50
Poetic Dan said:
What A awesome read on a Sunday
Inspirational words from a one of a kind!
Much appreciated
With peace and respect
May 5th, 2019 05:50
SMUTTY YES BUT VULGAR NO
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing UNCLE MIKE Im safe and sound in the UK. Please check ANGELAS POEM (nothing vulgar just one line about COMANDOS !) Angela & I dont like VULGARITY ~ but inuendo and double entendre (a la Caryy on Films and Ken Dodd and Les Dawson etc) is the essence of British Humour and Best Man Speeches are a MINEFIELD ! WE know you would never dishonour your ARTISTIC LICENCE in VISION or in VERSE. We both love BERYL COOK and she is a fine example of an ARTIST who draws a fine line between INUENDO & VULGARITY ~ AMEN
Blessings & much JOY in all your WORK
Love through Art B & A 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 5th, 2019 03:46
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing UNCLE MIKE Im safe and sound in the UK. Please check ANGELAS POEM (nothing vulgar just one line about COMANDOS !) Angela & I dont like VULGARITY ~ but inuendo and double entendre (a la Caryy on Films and Ken Dodd and Les Dawson etc) is the essence of British Humour and Best Man Speeches are a MINEFIELD ! WE know you would never dishonour your ARTISTIC LICENCE in VISION or in VERSE. We both love BERYL COOK and she is a fine example of an ARTIST who draws a fine line between INUENDO & VULGARITY ~ AMEN
Blessings & much JOY in all your WORK
Love through Art B & A 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 5th, 2019 03:46
SMUTTY YES BUT VULGAR NO
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Yes yes vulgarity smarrity
Upon the licence 04/02 to 04/16 is this period 14 days or 14 years Michael
... and I am concerned about it being awarded by A DAP
I.m not convinced
May 5th, 2019 03:44
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Yes yes vulgarity smarrity
Upon the licence 04/02 to 04/16 is this period 14 days or 14 years Michael
... and I am concerned about it being awarded by A DAP
I.m not convinced
May 5th, 2019 03:44
SMUTTY YES BUT VULGAR NO
orchidee said:
A good write M. Fido is at hand to bark at any poems that are too much! lol.
May 5th, 2019 01:45
orchidee said:
A good write M. Fido is at hand to bark at any poems that are too much! lol.
May 5th, 2019 01:45
SMUTTY YES BUT VULGAR NO
Fay Slimm. said:
I agree entirely - vulgar is put into differing places but wherever it is that word draws the line where acceptable reading ends for me. Thanks Mike for this well needed reminder and you sure are an artist of distinction.
May 5th, 2019 01:26
Fay Slimm. said:
I agree entirely - vulgar is put into differing places but wherever it is that word draws the line where acceptable reading ends for me. Thanks Mike for this well needed reminder and you sure are an artist of distinction.
May 5th, 2019 01:26
SMUTTY YES BUT VULGAR NO
Goldfinch60 said:
It can be surprising how peoples ideas of vulgarity are drawn.
One thing that surprised me many years ago was my father, a very placid man, while my brother and I were growing he only used mild swear words, b\'s mainly but one day when I was in my later teens/early twenties we were going up the pub for a pint when he used the f word for some reason, I think that was the only time I heard him use that word - I was most surprised.
May 5th, 2019 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
It can be surprising how peoples ideas of vulgarity are drawn.
One thing that surprised me many years ago was my father, a very placid man, while my brother and I were growing he only used mild swear words, b\'s mainly but one day when I was in my later teens/early twenties we were going up the pub for a pint when he used the f word for some reason, I think that was the only time I heard him use that word - I was most surprised.
May 5th, 2019 01:04
FROM COMMENTS (3)
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Michael, thank you.
\"I was passing Beethoven\'s grave and heard his music being played backwards coming from it, I asked a gardener about it and he said \"Oh yes, he is decomposing\".
May 5th, 2019 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Michael, thank you.
\"I was passing Beethoven\'s grave and heard his music being played backwards coming from it, I asked a gardener about it and he said \"Oh yes, he is decomposing\".
May 5th, 2019 00:25
FROM COMMENTS (3)
MendedFences27 said:
Refresh the memories, with something new. Yuck! Replace the old music with today\'s junk. Never! I must agree though that clearing out the old memories and living for today is a wise choice.- Phil A.
May 4th, 2019 12:16
MendedFences27 said:
Refresh the memories, with something new. Yuck! Replace the old music with today\'s junk. Never! I must agree though that clearing out the old memories and living for today is a wise choice.- Phil A.
May 4th, 2019 12:16
FROM COMMENTS (3)
Suresh said:
i believe you poem is saying:
\"Erase that which I can\'t recall and is fading from memory\"
Maybe I am on the wrong track.
May 4th, 2019 10:46
Suresh said:
i believe you poem is saying:
\"Erase that which I can\'t recall and is fading from memory\"
Maybe I am on the wrong track.
May 4th, 2019 10:46
FROM COMMENTS (3)
Neville said:
and when a tree falls in a forest with no one to hear, does it make a sound... kinda springs to mind .. certainly enjoyed.... Neville
May 4th, 2019 05:18
Neville said:
and when a tree falls in a forest with no one to hear, does it make a sound... kinda springs to mind .. certainly enjoyed.... Neville
May 4th, 2019 05:18
FROM COMMENTS (3)
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Aww, why they hope this will happen to my tunes when I start to sing? lol.
May 4th, 2019 01:52
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Aww, why they hope this will happen to my tunes when I start to sing? lol.
May 4th, 2019 01:52
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ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Did the DRAGON FLY
Lick : The flagon dry ?
GOOD MORNING FRIEND its 7:30pm (SAT) here ! Thanks UNCLE MIKE for making me SMILE through my tears : My BIG BEAR has flown and I am all alone again : naturally. Loved the POEM *The Carnival is over* and it really is for ME til October ! In retrospect the South Island Mystery Tour was too too MAGICAL and it ended too too soon. I*ll be back @ work on Monday and that will ease my PAIN : I need a top to toe MASSAGE !
Blessings & much JOY
Love through ART : Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 4th, 2019 01:32
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Did the DRAGON FLY
Lick : The flagon dry ?
GOOD MORNING FRIEND its 7:30pm (SAT) here ! Thanks UNCLE MIKE for making me SMILE through my tears : My BIG BEAR has flown and I am all alone again : naturally. Loved the POEM *The Carnival is over* and it really is for ME til October ! In retrospect the South Island Mystery Tour was too too MAGICAL and it ended too too soon. I*ll be back @ work on Monday and that will ease my PAIN : I need a top to toe MASSAGE !
Blessings & much JOY
Love through ART : Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 4th, 2019 01:32
THE WELL OF TIME
MendedFences27 said:
Art - Looks to my eye like music flowing from an old 78.
Poetry - The old well still breathes. Neglected, but still hanging on to its nature. No water, just a \"foggy mist.\".
\"Well\" done. - Phil A.
May 3rd, 2019 15:38
MendedFences27 said:
Art - Looks to my eye like music flowing from an old 78.
Poetry - The old well still breathes. Neglected, but still hanging on to its nature. No water, just a \"foggy mist.\".
\"Well\" done. - Phil A.
May 3rd, 2019 15:38
THE WELL OF TIME
Suresh said:
There is much depth in these words
Times we lived now memories
P.S. Your comment - sometimes a few well placed words speak volumes, I got to learn them those words.
May 3rd, 2019 11:55
Suresh said:
There is much depth in these words
Times we lived now memories
P.S. Your comment - sometimes a few well placed words speak volumes, I got to learn them those words.
May 3rd, 2019 11:55
THE WELL OF TIME
Neville said:
you have every write indeed to be justifiably proud of these words... Neville
May 3rd, 2019 08:24
Neville said:
you have every write indeed to be justifiably proud of these words... Neville
May 3rd, 2019 08:24
THE WELL OF TIME
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the abstracted imagery in both verse and artwork -Michael - \"fixity\" is a wonderful word to use as an intro. to emotion\'s descent.
May 3rd, 2019 03:32
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the abstracted imagery in both verse and artwork -Michael - \"fixity\" is a wonderful word to use as an intro. to emotion\'s descent.
May 3rd, 2019 03:32
THE WELL OF TIME
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M, both with depth. Erm, a well is deep too!
What\'s all them (Sylla) Berles doing lying around on your study floor?!
I don\'t tend to re-visit much of my stuff really. I just Ram Berle on sometimes.
May 3rd, 2019 01:49
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M, both with depth. Erm, a well is deep too!
What\'s all them (Sylla) Berles doing lying around on your study floor?!
I don\'t tend to re-visit much of my stuff really. I just Ram Berle on sometimes.
May 3rd, 2019 01:49
THE WELL OF TIME
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing write and artwork Michael, both could be studied for many years.
May 3rd, 2019 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing write and artwork Michael, both could be studied for many years.
May 3rd, 2019 01:31
THE WELL OF TIME
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excelent abstract in both respects this time Michael
The art and the Literature, in it;s precis form it says it all
Speaks to me of our mortality we\'ve served our time and soon to be forgotten great emotion...
BRAVO!
May 3rd, 2019 01:30
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excelent abstract in both respects this time Michael
The art and the Literature, in it;s precis form it says it all
Speaks to me of our mortality we\'ve served our time and soon to be forgotten great emotion...
BRAVO!
May 3rd, 2019 01:30
THE WELL OF TIME
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing UNCLE MIKE : Love the psychadelic abstract ! It reminded me of all the Love Song CD\'s I will console myself with when my BIG BEAR (BRIAN !) is 11,500 miles away til October ! Love the POEM : As I sadly weep into the Well of Separation ! Your Pics \'n Poems can still make a Girl Cry : You Old Romantic !
Blessings & Joy for A Romantic Boy
Love through Poetry & Art : ANGELA : 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 3rd, 2019 01:15
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing UNCLE MIKE : Love the psychadelic abstract ! It reminded me of all the Love Song CD\'s I will console myself with when my BIG BEAR (BRIAN !) is 11,500 miles away til October ! Love the POEM : As I sadly weep into the Well of Separation ! Your Pics \'n Poems can still make a Girl Cry : You Old Romantic !
Blessings & Joy for A Romantic Boy
Love through Poetry & Art : ANGELA : 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 3rd, 2019 01:15
FROM COMMENTS (2)
Suresh said:
There\'s a whole world hidden in such art,
Just as in the mind of a philosopher
You hold the key to both of them
May 2nd, 2019 11:06
Suresh said:
There\'s a whole world hidden in such art,
Just as in the mind of a philosopher
You hold the key to both of them
May 2nd, 2019 11:06
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MendedFences27 said:
The art is filled with so many possibilities;If I envision things moving left, it\'s a supersonic jet moving through a clouded sky, and if things move to the right I see a body floating just below the surface of the ocean, and now I,m afraid to turn the image. A moving piece.
I think we all are our own philosophers, choosing our own paths through life. Lines are for timid folk. Why are lines always drawn in sand? Can they not be drawn on concrete with chalk, or on highways to keep us timid folk in lanes. I prefer the lines you draw on canvas. Nuff said. - Phil A.
May 2nd, 2019 07:58
MendedFences27 said:
The art is filled with so many possibilities;If I envision things moving left, it\'s a supersonic jet moving through a clouded sky, and if things move to the right I see a body floating just below the surface of the ocean, and now I,m afraid to turn the image. A moving piece.
I think we all are our own philosophers, choosing our own paths through life. Lines are for timid folk. Why are lines always drawn in sand? Can they not be drawn on concrete with chalk, or on highways to keep us timid folk in lanes. I prefer the lines you draw on canvas. Nuff said. - Phil A.
May 2nd, 2019 07:58
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ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HEY UNCLE MIKE : ANGELA here ! We didn\'t see you sketching our YACHT in a squall on Auckland Bay : Ive copied that for a later POEM : SQUAILING ! Its 9:30pm here and we are relaxing in the HOT TUB after an exciting Day sailing with RUTH & DAVID in the BAY in RUTHS Uncles CRAFT ! We are so so fortunate !
BLESSINGS & Joy through Poems \'n Paint
LOVE ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Love the Poignancy of the Poem !
May 2nd, 2019 03:39
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HEY UNCLE MIKE : ANGELA here ! We didn\'t see you sketching our YACHT in a squall on Auckland Bay : Ive copied that for a later POEM : SQUAILING ! Its 9:30pm here and we are relaxing in the HOT TUB after an exciting Day sailing with RUTH & DAVID in the BAY in RUTHS Uncles CRAFT ! We are so so fortunate !
BLESSINGS & Joy through Poems \'n Paint
LOVE ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Love the Poignancy of the Poem !
May 2nd, 2019 03:39
FROM COMMENTS (2)
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. Mr Berle-Ington bought any of your pics?
May 2nd, 2019 01:47
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. Mr Berle-Ington bought any of your pics?
May 2nd, 2019 01:47
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