Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
SWEATY FEET
Fay Slimm. said:
You composed a smell which pervaded the page dear Michael - with this little poetic acrostic outcry against too much entrapment for summertime feet. Great read.
July 16th, 2018 14:13
Fay Slimm. said:
You composed a smell which pervaded the page dear Michael - with this little poetic acrostic outcry against too much entrapment for summertime feet. Great read.
July 16th, 2018 14:13
SWEATY FEET
Goldfinch60 said:
I do wash my feet once a year - whether they need it or not!
July 16th, 2018 08:00
Goldfinch60 said:
I do wash my feet once a year - whether they need it or not!
July 16th, 2018 08:00
SWEATY FEET
orchidee said:
Ooh I\'m off to the Co-op then, to get Odor-Eaters! Woof! \'Watchdog\' here, looking out for F\'s and B\'s. Biting anyone who does not mark poems 18+ if they need to. Or at last barking loudly at them.lol.
July 16th, 2018 07:01
orchidee said:
Ooh I\'m off to the Co-op then, to get Odor-Eaters! Woof! \'Watchdog\' here, looking out for F\'s and B\'s. Biting anyone who does not mark poems 18+ if they need to. Or at last barking loudly at them.lol.
July 16th, 2018 07:01
SWEATY FEET
Heartwriter said:
Lol. That\'s the time to throw those sneakers in the wash. Baby powder helps.
July 16th, 2018 06:46
Heartwriter said:
Lol. That\'s the time to throw those sneakers in the wash. Baby powder helps.
July 16th, 2018 06:46
SWEATY FEET
dusk arising said:
ODOUR EATERS a possible cure?
Obnoxious pongs from
Dubious hygene
Other worldly indifference
Upstaging his aftershave
Rest rooms vacated
Emergency exits
Airways polluted
Tears fill the eyes
Escape now essential
Resistence impossible
Somebody tell him!!!!
July 16th, 2018 01:45
dusk arising said:
ODOUR EATERS a possible cure?
Obnoxious pongs from
Dubious hygene
Other worldly indifference
Upstaging his aftershave
Rest rooms vacated
Emergency exits
Airways polluted
Tears fill the eyes
Escape now essential
Resistence impossible
Somebody tell him!!!!
July 16th, 2018 01:45
SWEATY FEET
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. They need to sort out those evil feet! Erm, socks with sandals? heehee.
July 16th, 2018 01:31
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. They need to sort out those evil feet! Erm, socks with sandals? heehee.
July 16th, 2018 01:31
SELF DOUBT
Stan Rodriguez said:
nicely penned - descriptive - enjoyed your poem - thanks for sharing.
July 15th, 2018 18:32
Stan Rodriguez said:
nicely penned - descriptive - enjoyed your poem - thanks for sharing.
July 15th, 2018 18:32
SELF DOUBT
ron parrish aka wordman said:
lost a lot of good ppl to thi lack of self esteem
July 15th, 2018 16:29
ron parrish aka wordman said:
lost a lot of good ppl to thi lack of self esteem
July 15th, 2018 16:29
SELF DOUBT
dusk arising said:
Though it might be thought mandatory,
That post alcoholic oratory
Such verbal flow
Ought be kept in tow
For the expletives are self explanatory
July 15th, 2018 16:13
dusk arising said:
Though it might be thought mandatory,
That post alcoholic oratory
Such verbal flow
Ought be kept in tow
For the expletives are self explanatory
July 15th, 2018 16:13
SELF DOUBT
onepauly said:
I used to be a very heavy drinker, and suffered for many many years. the pleasure is not worth the fun.
I still drink today but have it under control.
July 15th, 2018 06:49
onepauly said:
I used to be a very heavy drinker, and suffered for many many years. the pleasure is not worth the fun.
I still drink today but have it under control.
July 15th, 2018 06:49
SELF DOUBT
Heartwriter said:
Love the painting. The words too. Double pleasure.
July 15th, 2018 04:09
Heartwriter said:
Love the painting. The words too. Double pleasure.
July 15th, 2018 04:09
SELF DOUBT
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ Lovely symbiosis of Poem \'n Pic as usual ~ you set a very high standard ! Your Village scenes remind me of the Cotswolds ! One of our Extended Family (Rich !) has a Cottage in STOWE where I often stay for the Sense & Sensibility. ANGELA has posed a Hymn in Maori for us today ~ enjoy ~ Yours BRIAN ~ If it\'s your round mine\'s a GOLDEN HEN ~ AMEN !
July 15th, 2018 03:09
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ Lovely symbiosis of Poem \'n Pic as usual ~ you set a very high standard ! Your Village scenes remind me of the Cotswolds ! One of our Extended Family (Rich !) has a Cottage in STOWE where I often stay for the Sense & Sensibility. ANGELA has posed a Hymn in Maori for us today ~ enjoy ~ Yours BRIAN ~ If it\'s your round mine\'s a GOLDEN HEN ~ AMEN !
July 15th, 2018 03:09
OR SO WE BOTH VOWED
dusk arising said:
For an experience, try out a \'concert\'/gig where caribbean or reggae music is played. You\'ll find a wholly different approach to audience participatiion. Mostly referee type whistles ae blown in rythmn and appreciation by enthusiastic fans whilst the band is still playing.
Joyous music which encourages one to moves ones body.
July 14th, 2018 08:41
dusk arising said:
For an experience, try out a \'concert\'/gig where caribbean or reggae music is played. You\'ll find a wholly different approach to audience participatiion. Mostly referee type whistles ae blown in rythmn and appreciation by enthusiastic fans whilst the band is still playing.
Joyous music which encourages one to moves ones body.
July 14th, 2018 08:41
OR SO WE BOTH VOWED
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the abstract it conjured up Chopin\'s Revolutionary as performed by JOHN LILL on our BECHSTEIN GRAND @ College ! I totally agree My Dad is an Amateur Concert Pianist & Church Organist and several of my Extended Family are classical musicians. I attended Classical Concerts @ Liverpool Philharmonic Hall when I was Young and my Dad always insisted I went dressed in my Sunday Suit and when \"To Clap or not to Clap ~ that was the question !\" My Dad was born in the 1950\'s but is a touch Edwardian like my Great Grandad (who died when I was a child) who was born in 1903 ! Pop concerts are wild (I blame Elvis & the Beatles) ! When we have JAZZ Concerts @ College there is an OPEN BAR and people walk in and out with a PINT which I deplore ! last time I visited the OPRY (Nashville TN) it was the Johnny Cash Memorial Concert (2003) orchestrated by KRISS KRISTOPHERSON ~ there was some Whoopin\' & Hollerin\' but also great respect and reverence because of the occasion. Country Music Concerts are generally more modulated than POP CONCERTS. Folk Music Concerts and Open Mic Concerts & Karaoke are CRAZY ! Yours Musically Nephew Brian ~ Please check my TIME BOMB (sorry POEM !) ~ Thanks B !
July 14th, 2018 04:57
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the abstract it conjured up Chopin\'s Revolutionary as performed by JOHN LILL on our BECHSTEIN GRAND @ College ! I totally agree My Dad is an Amateur Concert Pianist & Church Organist and several of my Extended Family are classical musicians. I attended Classical Concerts @ Liverpool Philharmonic Hall when I was Young and my Dad always insisted I went dressed in my Sunday Suit and when \"To Clap or not to Clap ~ that was the question !\" My Dad was born in the 1950\'s but is a touch Edwardian like my Great Grandad (who died when I was a child) who was born in 1903 ! Pop concerts are wild (I blame Elvis & the Beatles) ! When we have JAZZ Concerts @ College there is an OPEN BAR and people walk in and out with a PINT which I deplore ! last time I visited the OPRY (Nashville TN) it was the Johnny Cash Memorial Concert (2003) orchestrated by KRISS KRISTOPHERSON ~ there was some Whoopin\' & Hollerin\' but also great respect and reverence because of the occasion. Country Music Concerts are generally more modulated than POP CONCERTS. Folk Music Concerts and Open Mic Concerts & Karaoke are CRAZY ! Yours Musically Nephew Brian ~ Please check my TIME BOMB (sorry POEM !) ~ Thanks B !
July 14th, 2018 04:57
OR SO WE BOTH VOWED
Heartwriter said:
I agree. There is a time to applaud after the show. Otherwise it takes away from the performance. Great write.
July 14th, 2018 03:26
Heartwriter said:
I agree. There is a time to applaud after the show. Otherwise it takes away from the performance. Great write.
July 14th, 2018 03:26
OR SO WE BOTH VOWED
orchidee said:
So you don\'t tune into \'common\' things like The X Factor? Far too common for you!
I understand - as Goldie says too. At some churches they request no applause, not even at the end of recitals.
But - either applaud or not. Not some feeble applause, as if clapping is just too much effort.
July 14th, 2018 01:38
orchidee said:
So you don\'t tune into \'common\' things like The X Factor? Far too common for you!
I understand - as Goldie says too. At some churches they request no applause, not even at the end of recitals.
But - either applaud or not. Not some feeble applause, as if clapping is just too much effort.
July 14th, 2018 01:38
OR SO WE BOTH VOWED
Poetic Dan said:
Very good indeed, you\'re not only my friend with this!
July 14th, 2018 01:17
Poetic Dan said:
Very good indeed, you\'re not only my friend with this!
July 14th, 2018 01:17
OR SO WE BOTH VOWED
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true we need to be able to hear the music at concerts. I go to jazz concerts and there the norm is slightly different as each solo played is normally given a short round of applause.
One of the most telling concerts that I have been to though was a performance of the St Matthew Passion that Joyce was singing in with Rochester Choral Society, the audience was asked not to applaud at the end, you probably wouldn\'t have been able to hear the applause over the tears.
July 14th, 2018 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true we need to be able to hear the music at concerts. I go to jazz concerts and there the norm is slightly different as each solo played is normally given a short round of applause.
One of the most telling concerts that I have been to though was a performance of the St Matthew Passion that Joyce was singing in with Rochester Choral Society, the audience was asked not to applaud at the end, you probably wouldn\'t have been able to hear the applause over the tears.
July 14th, 2018 00:53
CHANGES
dusk arising said:
I were only talking to me mate the poet here yesterday, we was lookin at this site and he says to me, \'this \'ere internet is marvelous you know but you cant beat t\'feel of poetry on parchment lad\'.
\'Aye\' i said \'them wo\' days.... i remember when that MPS place was just fields\'.
July 13th, 2018 15:59
dusk arising said:
I were only talking to me mate the poet here yesterday, we was lookin at this site and he says to me, \'this \'ere internet is marvelous you know but you cant beat t\'feel of poetry on parchment lad\'.
\'Aye\' i said \'them wo\' days.... i remember when that MPS place was just fields\'.
July 13th, 2018 15:59
CHANGES
orchidee said:
I got the corned beef and the watch! Now stop hogging the comments Orchi, by talking rubbish and being completely irrelevant! lol.
July 13th, 2018 04:51
orchidee said:
I got the corned beef and the watch! Now stop hogging the comments Orchi, by talking rubbish and being completely irrelevant! lol.
July 13th, 2018 04:51
CHANGES
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Yes, I was involved in some 1066 excavations. Well, a church fairly near us dates from 1084.
Who is Moggy- wotsit?! Or Moddy.
July 13th, 2018 01:43
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Yes, I was involved in some 1066 excavations. Well, a church fairly near us dates from 1084.
Who is Moggy- wotsit?! Or Moddy.
July 13th, 2018 01:43
CHANGES
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Michael, I read it that the site was one of bad memories.
Good image, is this a new style of an adaption of one of your other styles.
July 13th, 2018 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Michael, I read it that the site was one of bad memories.
Good image, is this a new style of an adaption of one of your other styles.
July 13th, 2018 00:48
BE TOUGH
Fay Slimm. said:
Clever rhyming with terse lines telling how far to go down before reaching read self - - love the images too.
July 12th, 2018 17:11
Fay Slimm. said:
Clever rhyming with terse lines telling how far to go down before reaching read self - - love the images too.
July 12th, 2018 17:11
BE TOUGH
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
I see the Modigliani inspiration, Maestro, and an inspiring poem to complement the art! Great work!
~Laura~
July 12th, 2018 16:38
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
I see the Modigliani inspiration, Maestro, and an inspiring poem to complement the art! Great work!
~Laura~
July 12th, 2018 16:38
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