Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



SARTORIAL INELEGANCIES (3)
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

A beautiful splash of colors those flowers do make! Are they all planted in one pot?

A fine short sartorial write to which I agree!

~Laura~

August 5th, 2018 08:40

SARTORIAL INELEGANCIES (3)
dusk arising said:

Crikey yes ties i remember those.

August 5th, 2018 08:35

SARTORIAL INELEGANCIES (3)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Ahhhhhhhh MISTER EDWARDS ~ The ubiquitous TIE ~ I have over 50 for all my Clubs & Societies ! I can turn up naked provided I\'m wearing the right Kipper Tie and it covers my Tackle !

They threw Him from the Nudist Club
And here\'s the reason WHY
Because He turned up on parade
Wearing His Old School Tie !

I\'m what the Americans call a GREETER @ Church today. So despite the Weather I am booted & suited ~ Van Heuston long sleeved Shirt (broad blue stripe) and a Blue Royal Society of Chemistry (A very Spiritual Organisation !) TIE ~ just hitting the waistline. At work (remember that !) I always wear a tie for Meetings ~ Interviews ~ Formal Dinners (A Bow Tie if I am Chef de Rang) and if I visit other Colleges as a MODERATOR etc etc. So on balance I am still a TIEMAN for 50% of the time. An interesting SUBJECT ~ My Sister always buys me a TIE @ Christmas one of which plays JINGLE BELLS when least expected ~ SUCH FUN. Thanks for sharing ~ love the Flowers ~ I have some Ties like that that my Granddad wore in the 60\'s FLOWER POWER ! Every blessing ~ BRIAN TIEMAN !

August 5th, 2018 04:02

I WRITE
livsxxxx said:

Wow. Simple but so effective ! Great poem x

August 5th, 2018 04:00

SARTORIAL INELEGANCIES (3)
orchidee said:

A fine write Michael. I hardly wear ties. Feel like I\'m being hanged, especially in this weather.

August 5th, 2018 01:12

SARTORIAL INELEGANCIES (3)
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Michael. It takes a great deal of practice to get it right and it must also be dead to the braces on the occasion that you where them.

August 5th, 2018 00:38

PURE COMMERCE
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

Back in the hood where the undesirable deals are constant...unfortunately!

Love your pic!
How’s your new computer working out?

~Laura~

August 4th, 2018 19:20

PURE COMMERCE
orchidee said:

Cooeee - how\'s that evening going?!

August 4th, 2018 11:38

PURE COMMERCE
Heartwriter said:

You describe crooked deals so well!!!! Great write.

August 4th, 2018 08:16

PURE COMMERCE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Ahhhh Mon Ami Michael ~ Tousjours et Tousou ? C\'e la vie aujours d\'hui ! Your Friends too BRIAN et ANGELA

August 4th, 2018 05:36

PURE COMMERCE
Michael Edwards said:

Probably trading in very small packets of flour - making fairy cakes?

August 4th, 2018 03:11

PURE COMMERCE
orchidee said:

What they up to there?! heehee.

August 4th, 2018 01:38

PURE COMMERCE
Michael Edwards said:

Thanks Andy

August 4th, 2018 01:24

PURE COMMERCE
Goldfinch60 said:

So true and so often carried out Michael - and that is just the politicians!

August 4th, 2018 01:08

I WRITE
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

Great poem! Love this idea of shuffling words! This reminds me of the technique I’d use for the “shy” writers when I taught elementary schools! We’d call it the “word game”...not very original, but they liked it and made them write! The aim was accomplished!

Beautiful flowers!

~Laura~

August 3rd, 2018 18:05

I WRITE
Lorna said:

You channel your little island\'s wonderful history of words!

August 3rd, 2018 15:03

I WRITE
dusk arising said:

Ah, so thats how you do it.

August 3rd, 2018 07:57

I WRITE
Heartwriter said:

You always pick them up in perfect order! Thanks, Michael.

August 3rd, 2018 06:51

I WRITE
Fay Slimm. said:

Random happenings can produce serious poetry - good thoughts here Michael - - - am now off to tumble my shelved books and see what words come up to shuffle. Great stuff again.

August 3rd, 2018 04:13

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onepauly said:

really good rythme.

August 3rd, 2018 03:19

I WRITE
orchidee said:

The nuttiness draws near - October and Hastings. There\'s one in NZ. A Plymouth too (see Brian & Angela recent poem with map).
I could celebrate it there - on me own! Ya would not have to listen to my ramblings on then.

August 3rd, 2018 03:10

I WRITE
orchidee said:

This another feel I good write Michael is.
Oops, sorry I did not unshuffled the words before commenting here.

August 3rd, 2018 01:33

I WRITE
Goldfinch60 said:

Those words when shuffled can come out in wondrous ways as yours have Michael.

August 3rd, 2018 01:23

AUGUST
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS MIKE ~ August come she must ! I the N Hemisphere always the most profuse flowering even ina heat wave ! Thanks for sparing time to share ! Yours as ever Brian & Angela. Please check WELLINGTON by ANGELA and our FUSION \"ICE CREAM\" Thanks A & B !

August 2nd, 2018 09:11

AUGUST
Heartwriter said:

I enjoyed this Michael. August is such a beautiful time of year. As your poem describes.

August 2nd, 2018 04:53

AUGUST
dusk arising said:

Lovely, i see small wildlife scurrying from my path.

August 2nd, 2018 02:12

AUGUST
orchidee said:

I never knew some much happened in August! Does coruscating and crenellating only happen in August?!
*gets out dictionary!*

August 2nd, 2018 01:43

AUGUST
Goldfinch60 said:

Superb description of walking through natures art.

August 2nd, 2018 00:46

AUGUST
Fay Slimm. said:

What a well observed and beautiful description of light\'s ability as August burgeons growth. The word coruscate is so apt - - lovely first read of my day.

August 2nd, 2018 00:25

A POET
dusk arising said:

I\'m no poet mate, I\'m just in therapy here.

I live in fear of laptop death. I loathe learning new operating systems. Windows 95, 98, 98 SE, XP, Vista, & 7. Been through them all. You think i want to know about win 10?

August 1st, 2018 09:13



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