Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



CHANGES
livsxxxx said:

Great poem! Really enjoyed reading it.👍🏽

July 13th, 2018 03:27

CHANGES
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Michael. Yes, I was involved in some 1066 excavations. Well, a church fairly near us dates from 1084.
Who is Moggy- wotsit?! Or Moddy.

July 13th, 2018 01:43

CHANGES
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write Michael, I read it that the site was one of bad memories.

Good image, is this a new style of an adaption of one of your other styles.

July 13th, 2018 00:48

BE TOUGH
Fay Slimm. said:

Clever rhyming with terse lines telling how far to go down before reaching read self - - love the images too.

July 12th, 2018 17:11

BE TOUGH
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

I see the Modigliani inspiration, Maestro, and an inspiring poem to complement the art! Great work!

~Laura~




July 12th, 2018 16:38

BE TOUGH
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MIKE very profound for a BLACK THURSDAY ~ What happened to your Friend Harry Kane ~ even my Friend (Everton Goalkeeper) Jordan Pickford had a bad day ! Your Poem reminded me of a Physicist Friend of mine who one day disappeared up his own HYPOTHESIS ~ Touche ! Yours as ever BRIAN

July 12th, 2018 15:08

BE TOUGH
orchidee said:

I\'ve gone deep. Dug me self into this hole here. Miss Berles gave me a shovel!

July 12th, 2018 12:27

BE TOUGH
onepauly said:

I don\'t want to go so deep
that I cant get out of.
I always look forward to your post.

July 12th, 2018 07:55

BE TOUGH
Heartwriter said:

Love the constrast of this write. Deep waters aren\'t so deep when through self-willed survival you rise from the sink. Thanks just what I needed to hear.

July 12th, 2018 06:15

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dusk arising said:

Life its self tends to throw a lifebuoy at certain times - when we are losing balance.
I like the way a lot of your cryptic writing demands several re-reads and a deal of thought.

July 12th, 2018 03:04

BE TOUGH
Goldfinch60 said:

We all need our strength at times in our life. Good one Michael.

July 12th, 2018 02:05

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orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. We could end up being doormats otherwise. I\'m too passive at times. Being \'nice\' is not always the best thing. Not that we turn \'nasty\' but grow a thicker skin - emotional skin, that is.
Got headache now, being all psychological this time of morning!lol.

July 12th, 2018 02:01

THE STARLINGS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

YES INDEED MICHAEL ~ lovely evocative Poem \'n Pic as usual ~ A MURMURATION is an excellent Collective Noun and very apt when one considers the noise they make ~ love their silhouette in the sketch. Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN

July 11th, 2018 15:43

THE STARLINGS
dusk arising said:

A sight i would love to see \'in the flesh\'. Sure to be more staggering than the amazing TV footage i have seen.
Great subject for you.

July 11th, 2018 14:37

THE STARLINGS
orchidee said:

How\'s your evening going? Coooee. I\'m supporting Croatia this evening. heehee. Dunno where it is, mind you? Is it near France or something?! :)

July 11th, 2018 10:08

THE STARLINGS
Heartwriter said:

As always you brought words to life and a picture painted so beautifully.

July 11th, 2018 09:46

THE STARLINGS
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Michael. Could call them picture-poems, even without the actual pictures/drawings, if you see how I mean?
\'Stubble blond\' yes - parched grass scorched yellow these days.

July 11th, 2018 01:51

MEMORIES OF WHAT WILL BE
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

Your great sketch reminds me of my home in Italy!
The poem is intriguing!
“Time-smoothed by water’s flow.”
This line makes me think of getting older in a less stressful manner!

~Laura~


July 11th, 2018 01:50

THE STARLINGS
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

A great write and pic!

“a magic carpet drifts and floats”...
An awesome vision!

Love your drawing.
Is it a charcoal or pencil drawing!

~Laura~

July 11th, 2018 01:26

THE STARLINGS
Goldfinch60 said:

Seeing the murmurations of starlings is one of the wonders of the natural world, I have been privileged to see them in my life and they always take my breath away.

July 11th, 2018 00:34

MEMORIES OF WHAT WILL BE
orchidee said:

What with \'to be or not to be\' and \'que sera sera\', I dunno if I\'m coming or going!\' lol.

July 10th, 2018 10:42

MEMORIES OF WHAT WILL BE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

INTERESTING POEM MIKE ~ The title is a deja vu enigma ~ the poem is a \"que sera sera\" gem ~ Thanks for redonning your \"Mantle of Seriousness\" Love the picture many such inviting \"gates\" in the Essex Villages ! Thanks BRIAN ~ Please visit my ROSE GARDEN.

July 10th, 2018 10:35

MEMORIES OF WHAT WILL BE
Heartwriter said:

Most certainly a fav of mine. Perfect.

July 10th, 2018 09:48

MEMORIES OF WHAT WILL BE
dusk arising said:

Ah yes those memories of what will be. BBC and Dr Who have a lot to answer for. E=\'MC5\', a bunch of musicians from Michigan. Not quite my cup of tea but this 1969 recording is a bit like a glance into what became the future of music:- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yvJGQ_piwI0
Not recommended listening.

July 10th, 2018 01:56

MEMORIES OF WHAT WILL BE
orchidee said:

Lovely write Michael. Got any memories of Miss Berles?!

July 10th, 2018 01:28

MEMORIES OF WHAT WILL BE
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write Michael, I could see the drops and the stream.

July 10th, 2018 00:20

NOBLETS OF NONESENSE (6)
w c said:

very nice

July 9th, 2018 20:19

NOBLETS OF NONESENSE (6)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL ~ For a really shocking couplet ! Love the PENGUINS ! Please add a POEM to ANGELA\'S FUSION ~ I can\'t add mine about KESWICK (there\'s romantic !) until someone else has posted because we share a site. Yours BRIAN ~ I have enjoyed the NOBS & PENS ~ Seven is perfection so SIX is a good point to STOP ~ B !

July 9th, 2018 09:32

NOBLETS OF NONESENSE (6)
Heartwriter said:

Lol! You are a master at this! Loved it.

July 9th, 2018 05:51

NOBLETS OF NONESENSE (6)
FineB said:

Hi Michael.

A superb Noblet. Excellent. An interesting perspective on someone’s last moments in the electric chair.

The penguins 🐧 are lovely.

Keep writing ✍️
FineB

July 9th, 2018 04:19



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