Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
PLASTIC WASTE
orchidee said:
You rich? That looks like a lot of credit cards used?!
August 28th, 2018 01:38
orchidee said:
You rich? That looks like a lot of credit cards used?!
August 28th, 2018 01:38
PLASTIC WASTE
Goldfinch60 said:
Brilliant last line Michael.
The style of the artwork is different to your previous abstracts but once more there is so much in them that conjures images in my mind. (There must be a poem there)
August 28th, 2018 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Brilliant last line Michael.
The style of the artwork is different to your previous abstracts but once more there is so much in them that conjures images in my mind. (There must be a poem there)
August 28th, 2018 00:29
PLASTIC WASTE
Michael Edwards said:
Okay I know botox has a bacterium as its basis but the effects look very plastic and unnatural - why do they do it?
August 28th, 2018 00:29
Michael Edwards said:
Okay I know botox has a bacterium as its basis but the effects look very plastic and unnatural - why do they do it?
August 28th, 2018 00:29
WRITINGS
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
Sublime!
Maestro...
Your words speak volumes!
~Laura~
August 25th, 2018 08:11
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
Sublime!
Maestro...
Your words speak volumes!
~Laura~
August 25th, 2018 08:11
WRITINGS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~ The benefits of a classical education ~ alas now only available in Public Schools (rite of passage of the privileged classes) and Grammar Schools (rite of those with intelligent & astute parents). Dry Garden / Herbarium That like a forgotten rose petal ~ Preserved indeed between the pages ! A great thought for the day. Please check \"I left my Heart in Auckland City\" ~ Thanks ~ Yours BRIAN & ANGELA in BAY of ISLANDS (NZ).
August 25th, 2018 04:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~ The benefits of a classical education ~ alas now only available in Public Schools (rite of passage of the privileged classes) and Grammar Schools (rite of those with intelligent & astute parents). Dry Garden / Herbarium That like a forgotten rose petal ~ Preserved indeed between the pages ! A great thought for the day. Please check \"I left my Heart in Auckland City\" ~ Thanks ~ Yours BRIAN & ANGELA in BAY of ISLANDS (NZ).
August 25th, 2018 04:10
WRITINGS
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words are always there preserved in heart and mind ready to be resurrected when needed.
August 25th, 2018 00:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words are always there preserved in heart and mind ready to be resurrected when needed.
August 25th, 2018 00:28
I\'M A LONER
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI MIKE ~ very droll ! Being a SCOUCER I\'m just the opposite (think KEN DODD) and I love a Party and I\'m well known for being able to talk to anybody of any nationality on any Subject. I can hold a conversation in Spanish French Italian & German which is a help especially if one is on a Table on a Cruise with non-English Speakers (there are some). Al Scientists are very well versed in the Arts & Sport etc so we can talk about the Colonisation of Mars as well as Gauguin & Bach & Manchester United or American politics etc. Being brought up in Liverpool helped because it is a very articulate City and Ken Dodd is one of our more introspective Citizens. Of course being a Trained Teacher & A Preacher & A Public Speaker & Entertainer (Angela & I even do Flamenco Dancing to entertain the Seniors) all helps. But you and I complement each other which is good. My ART is a JOKE ! Thanks for sharing BRIAN.
August 24th, 2018 14:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI MIKE ~ very droll ! Being a SCOUCER I\'m just the opposite (think KEN DODD) and I love a Party and I\'m well known for being able to talk to anybody of any nationality on any Subject. I can hold a conversation in Spanish French Italian & German which is a help especially if one is on a Table on a Cruise with non-English Speakers (there are some). Al Scientists are very well versed in the Arts & Sport etc so we can talk about the Colonisation of Mars as well as Gauguin & Bach & Manchester United or American politics etc. Being brought up in Liverpool helped because it is a very articulate City and Ken Dodd is one of our more introspective Citizens. Of course being a Trained Teacher & A Preacher & A Public Speaker & Entertainer (Angela & I even do Flamenco Dancing to entertain the Seniors) all helps. But you and I complement each other which is good. My ART is a JOKE ! Thanks for sharing BRIAN.
August 24th, 2018 14:58
I\'M A LONER
Netashi said:
Very nice poem social interaction is like a meeting of people who know exactly what to say to be bothersome or noisy. Keep up the writing
-Theta
August 24th, 2018 12:31
Netashi said:
Very nice poem social interaction is like a meeting of people who know exactly what to say to be bothersome or noisy. Keep up the writing
-Theta
August 24th, 2018 12:31
I\'M A LONER
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
Not...
āA Lonerā...
Just bored out of your mind!
Depending on the occasion, some social gatherings are exactly how youāve described them...especially for my husband. Heāll avoid them whenever he can; except if itās a golf social gathering.
Enjoy your afternoon.
~Laura~
August 24th, 2018 07:50
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
Not...
āA Lonerā...
Just bored out of your mind!
Depending on the occasion, some social gatherings are exactly how youāve described them...especially for my husband. Heāll avoid them whenever he can; except if itās a golf social gathering.
Enjoy your afternoon.
~Laura~
August 24th, 2018 07:50
EARLY BIRD 5 & 6
Fay Slimm. said:
Hope all those worms that early birds get do not mean their later brethren will have to go hungry.......... this read raised a big smile - - love it Michael.
August 23rd, 2018 16:17
Fay Slimm. said:
Hope all those worms that early birds get do not mean their later brethren will have to go hungry.......... this read raised a big smile - - love it Michael.
August 23rd, 2018 16:17
EARLY BIRD 5 & 6
dusk arising said:
The early bird gets the worm.
Gardner clamps down on localised bullying
The early bird gets the worm
Says sparrow\'s defence lawyer in nocturnal raid on butchers shop case.
The early bird gets \'The Worm\'
Batteries not included.
August 23rd, 2018 15:29
dusk arising said:
The early bird gets the worm.
Gardner clamps down on localised bullying
The early bird gets the worm
Says sparrow\'s defence lawyer in nocturnal raid on butchers shop case.
The early bird gets \'The Worm\'
Batteries not included.
August 23rd, 2018 15:29
EARLY BIRD 5 & 6
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
Very entertaining!
Thank you for sharing and making us laugh!
~Laura~
August 23rd, 2018 04:39
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
Very entertaining!
Thank you for sharing and making us laugh!
~Laura~
August 23rd, 2018 04:39
EARLY BIRD 5 & 6
orchidee said:
How early does the bird have to get out of bed to catch the worm?
August 23rd, 2018 01:33
orchidee said:
How early does the bird have to get out of bed to catch the worm?
August 23rd, 2018 01:33
EARLY BIRD 5 & 6
Goldfinch60 said:
Two boys go fishing, one of them has a lot of worms \"How did you get so many worms?\" the other asks.
\"I get my younger brother to get them for me and let him eat every tenth one he digs up\"
August 23rd, 2018 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Two boys go fishing, one of them has a lot of worms \"How did you get so many worms?\" the other asks.
\"I get my younger brother to get them for me and let him eat every tenth one he digs up\"
August 23rd, 2018 00:52
EARLY BIRD 5 & 6
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve just popped those published here in Community in Fusions so a CHALLENGE - come on you lot add one (or two or three or more) to the fusions.
It would be great fun to see other poets suggestions.
August 23rd, 2018 00:32
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve just popped those published here in Community in Fusions so a CHALLENGE - come on you lot add one (or two or three or more) to the fusions.
It would be great fun to see other poets suggestions.
August 23rd, 2018 00:32
CLEAR CONSCIENCE
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
...and the truth will set us free...
or put us behind bars!
It all depends...
A nice shorty!
~Laura~
August 22nd, 2018 16:59
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
...and the truth will set us free...
or put us behind bars!
It all depends...
A nice shorty!
~Laura~
August 22nd, 2018 16:59
CLEAR CONSCIENCE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE for a \"Midweek Thought to Ponder !\" Saul of Tarsus exhorts us to \"Be transformed by the renewing of your MIND\" good advice. I clear my conscience every night and wake up with a Clear Head ! SOT also says \"This one thing I do ~ I clear my MIND & my CONSCIENCE of the negative things of the PAST ~ and PRESS ON to a brighter Future !\" Good advice or what ? Thanks for sharing YOURS BRIAN .
August 22nd, 2018 03:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE for a \"Midweek Thought to Ponder !\" Saul of Tarsus exhorts us to \"Be transformed by the renewing of your MIND\" good advice. I clear my conscience every night and wake up with a Clear Head ! SOT also says \"This one thing I do ~ I clear my MIND & my CONSCIENCE of the negative things of the PAST ~ and PRESS ON to a brighter Future !\" Good advice or what ? Thanks for sharing YOURS BRIAN .
August 22nd, 2018 03:02
CLEAR CONSCIENCE
orchidee said:
A fine write M.
A shorter one. Victor Hugo, I think it was, once wrote a letter consisting of: \"!\".
The reply was equally short: \"?\".
That could teach us not to waffle.
You entertaining Miss Berles?
August 22nd, 2018 01:33
orchidee said:
A fine write M.
A shorter one. Victor Hugo, I think it was, once wrote a letter consisting of: \"!\".
The reply was equally short: \"?\".
That could teach us not to waffle.
You entertaining Miss Berles?
August 22nd, 2018 01:33
CLEAR CONSCIENCE
dusk arising said:
Several meanings come to mind. My chosen interpretation is of the \'emptyheadedness\' following the frustration which built up within until one finallyspoke/wrote the thoughts harboured for too long.
A clear/empty head having got it off one\'s chest.
August 22nd, 2018 00:18
dusk arising said:
Several meanings come to mind. My chosen interpretation is of the \'emptyheadedness\' following the frustration which built up within until one finallyspoke/wrote the thoughts harboured for too long.
A clear/empty head having got it off one\'s chest.
August 22nd, 2018 00:18
CORRECTNESS
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
An interesting and awesome poem.
The painting is stunning and a lovely combination of colours.
Keep writing
FineB
August 21st, 2018 13:21
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
An interesting and awesome poem.
The painting is stunning and a lovely combination of colours.
Keep writing
FineB
August 21st, 2018 13:21
CORRECTNESS
dusk arising said:
Read all the comments here (lest i say the wrong thing) and by and large agree. PC has become a joke but.... like a lot of things, they start off being over-stated before they level off into common sense useage. Older folk among us will recall how it used to be difficult to use the word \'black\' in UK for a period, even when referring to coffee or birds (feathered) or blackboards etc. The silly period passed and common sense prevails.... lessons were learned though, it wasn\'t a waste of time.
Language is a fluid thing which changes readily.... as kids we used to use \'fabulous\' or \'fab\' to describe something as good. That\'s progressed through such interesting periods where \'wicked\' and \'bad\' were its replacements.
All in all, language is communication and i would sooner communicate than fight due to non communication. Sadly though, here in the west, we know that certain ears do not want to hear.
Your piece today is not only beautifully penned but extremely provocative. Well done sir!
August 21st, 2018 12:46
dusk arising said:
Read all the comments here (lest i say the wrong thing) and by and large agree. PC has become a joke but.... like a lot of things, they start off being over-stated before they level off into common sense useage. Older folk among us will recall how it used to be difficult to use the word \'black\' in UK for a period, even when referring to coffee or birds (feathered) or blackboards etc. The silly period passed and common sense prevails.... lessons were learned though, it wasn\'t a waste of time.
Language is a fluid thing which changes readily.... as kids we used to use \'fabulous\' or \'fab\' to describe something as good. That\'s progressed through such interesting periods where \'wicked\' and \'bad\' were its replacements.
All in all, language is communication and i would sooner communicate than fight due to non communication. Sadly though, here in the west, we know that certain ears do not want to hear.
Your piece today is not only beautifully penned but extremely provocative. Well done sir!
August 21st, 2018 12:46
CORRECTNESS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ From the ABSURD to the ABSTRACT and all on a TUESDAY ! Because my mind set is MAORI your abstract again looks like an arial view of the Bay of Islands (NZ) and they did have (like OZ) some heath fires earlier in the year ! I (being a Scouser) always speak my mind and have oft been castigated for it and (once or twice) even regretted it ! Love all your Poetry ~ Yours BRIAN
August 21st, 2018 03:28
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ From the ABSURD to the ABSTRACT and all on a TUESDAY ! Because my mind set is MAORI your abstract again looks like an arial view of the Bay of Islands (NZ) and they did have (like OZ) some heath fires earlier in the year ! I (being a Scouser) always speak my mind and have oft been castigated for it and (once or twice) even regretted it ! Love all your Poetry ~ Yours BRIAN
August 21st, 2018 03:28
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