Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
A DREAM
Lorna said:
Isn\'t it funny how in our dreams we never question what is going on but just roll along with it (unless it\'s a nightmare of course). Another magical abstract Michael!
June 6th, 2018 07:10
Lorna said:
Isn\'t it funny how in our dreams we never question what is going on but just roll along with it (unless it\'s a nightmare of course). Another magical abstract Michael!
June 6th, 2018 07:10
A DREAM
dusk arising said:
Daytimes beta brain wave patters cannot assimilate the information which passes through our brain in the theta and alpha brain patterns of our dreams. Hence, on waking, our wonderful dream, once so vivid, falls from consciousness.
Not a very poetic way of describing a dream is it? Whereas yours is simply a \'dream\' by comparison.
June 6th, 2018 06:25
dusk arising said:
Daytimes beta brain wave patters cannot assimilate the information which passes through our brain in the theta and alpha brain patterns of our dreams. Hence, on waking, our wonderful dream, once so vivid, falls from consciousness.
Not a very poetic way of describing a dream is it? Whereas yours is simply a \'dream\' by comparison.
June 6th, 2018 06:25
A DREAM
Fay Slimm. said:
The mystery of a dream described perfectly and with poetic prowess.
June 6th, 2018 01:53
Fay Slimm. said:
The mystery of a dream described perfectly and with poetic prowess.
June 6th, 2018 01:53
A DREAM
orchidee said:
Well, a church is having a new midweek meeting: \'Dreams interpretations evenings\'. It helps if we can remember the dream! Or else it\'s like trying to watch telly without plugging it in!
June 6th, 2018 01:47
orchidee said:
Well, a church is having a new midweek meeting: \'Dreams interpretations evenings\'. It helps if we can remember the dream! Or else it\'s like trying to watch telly without plugging it in!
June 6th, 2018 01:47
A DREAM
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Aww, why people wish that the light of day will never hear my singing!
June 6th, 2018 01:45
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Aww, why people wish that the light of day will never hear my singing!
June 6th, 2018 01:45
A DREAM
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, dreams can be awe inspiring as are these words and the wonderful abstract.
June 6th, 2018 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, dreams can be awe inspiring as are these words and the wonderful abstract.
June 6th, 2018 01:14
PERCEPTION
dusk arising said:
Maybe Trump is the first prominent U.S. leader to actually acknowledge that America has \'lost\' something and he wants to re-dress that.
Certainly we are led to believe that in a lot of countries the U.S. is regarded with scorn. If he is able to change this then that alone will be a move for the betterment of America. Certainly a move in the right direction anyway.
But hey, i\'m only a Brit.
June 5th, 2018 18:13
dusk arising said:
Maybe Trump is the first prominent U.S. leader to actually acknowledge that America has \'lost\' something and he wants to re-dress that.
Certainly we are led to believe that in a lot of countries the U.S. is regarded with scorn. If he is able to change this then that alone will be a move for the betterment of America. Certainly a move in the right direction anyway.
But hey, i\'m only a Brit.
June 5th, 2018 18:13
PERCEPTION
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes the word \"again\" begs a question here Michael -and I agree it opens a hot topic. Love the flowers.
June 5th, 2018 16:18
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes the word \"again\" begs a question here Michael -and I agree it opens a hot topic. Love the flowers.
June 5th, 2018 16:18
PERCEPTION
(That\'s all I\'m Telling You) said:
Well done, it\'s great.
Really makes you think about the 9/11
Thanks for sharing this
June 5th, 2018 09:56
(That\'s all I\'m Telling You) said:
Well done, it\'s great.
Really makes you think about the 9/11
Thanks for sharing this
June 5th, 2018 09:56
PERCEPTION
Lorna said:
It needs saying. Nothing bears looking at too closely......... Full of opportunities so that is/was good for the huddled masses. Then they \"made it\" and lost humility. Full of \"might is right\" which is/was bad. Ask the poor Indian tribes. Also this country has had very little in the way of humbling moments on its home ground (unlike Europe). The reaction to 9/11 was to me over the top and exploited as if no one else in the world had ever experienced anything like it.... wonder how we would have responded to day and night bombing for months on end......... Trump is a symptom...... let\'s see if we can right ourselves by getting rid of him.
June 5th, 2018 06:43
Lorna said:
It needs saying. Nothing bears looking at too closely......... Full of opportunities so that is/was good for the huddled masses. Then they \"made it\" and lost humility. Full of \"might is right\" which is/was bad. Ask the poor Indian tribes. Also this country has had very little in the way of humbling moments on its home ground (unlike Europe). The reaction to 9/11 was to me over the top and exploited as if no one else in the world had ever experienced anything like it.... wonder how we would have responded to day and night bombing for months on end......... Trump is a symptom...... let\'s see if we can right ourselves by getting rid of him.
June 5th, 2018 06:43
PERCEPTION
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
MISTER TRUMP THINKS SO ! Being raised in the 51st STATE (Liverpool) I have always considered that Geologically the USA had much that was GREAT ~ Old Faithful ~ The Rockies ~ Grand Canyon ~ Niagara & the Great Lakes etc makes the UK look like LEGO LAND ! That great Scenery has invoked Great Films ~ Great Music ~ Jazz ~ Country ~ Blues ~ Rock & Roll and even Classical and Great Art ~ Georgia O\'Keefe ~ Pollock ~ Wharhol and it has inspired Hockney ~ Great Autos ~ Model T ~ Pink Cadialacs ~ Harleys and First man on the Moon and Great Scientists ~ Great performers ~ Crosby ~ Sinatra ~ Elvis ~ John Wayne and Athletes ~ Mohammed Ali etc and Great Statesmen ~ Jefferson ~ Lincoln etc ~ The list is endless ! FOR ME ~ America IS GREAT ~ Always WAS and always WILL BE ~ Thank GOD for MICKEY MOUSE ~ AMEN ~ Still your Friend ~ BRIAN ~ Please check my RHYMING SLANG POEM ~ I\'m blaming YOU ! Love the FUCHSIAS ~ AWESOME !
June 5th, 2018 03:24
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
MISTER TRUMP THINKS SO ! Being raised in the 51st STATE (Liverpool) I have always considered that Geologically the USA had much that was GREAT ~ Old Faithful ~ The Rockies ~ Grand Canyon ~ Niagara & the Great Lakes etc makes the UK look like LEGO LAND ! That great Scenery has invoked Great Films ~ Great Music ~ Jazz ~ Country ~ Blues ~ Rock & Roll and even Classical and Great Art ~ Georgia O\'Keefe ~ Pollock ~ Wharhol and it has inspired Hockney ~ Great Autos ~ Model T ~ Pink Cadialacs ~ Harleys and First man on the Moon and Great Scientists ~ Great performers ~ Crosby ~ Sinatra ~ Elvis ~ John Wayne and Athletes ~ Mohammed Ali etc and Great Statesmen ~ Jefferson ~ Lincoln etc ~ The list is endless ! FOR ME ~ America IS GREAT ~ Always WAS and always WILL BE ~ Thank GOD for MICKEY MOUSE ~ AMEN ~ Still your Friend ~ BRIAN ~ Please check my RHYMING SLANG POEM ~ I\'m blaming YOU ! Love the FUCHSIAS ~ AWESOME !
June 5th, 2018 03:24
PERCEPTION
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
This is a āhotā topic!
Personally, America has always been great for me! Iām grateful for all the wonderful opportunities it has offered me and my family!
Beautiful flowers!
~Laura~
June 5th, 2018 01:35
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
This is a āhotā topic!
Personally, America has always been great for me! Iām grateful for all the wonderful opportunities it has offered me and my family!
Beautiful flowers!
~Laura~
June 5th, 2018 01:35
PERCEPTION
orchidee said:
Was you with us M. when Gold and I landed there in 1620?
Is this similar to \'Good Morning\' and the reply \'What\'s good about it?!\'
June 5th, 2018 01:28
orchidee said:
Was you with us M. when Gold and I landed there in 1620?
Is this similar to \'Good Morning\' and the reply \'What\'s good about it?!\'
June 5th, 2018 01:28
PERCEPTION
Goldfinch60 said:
I too may be in trouble with this response!
It was probably great before we English landed on its shores in 1620.
June 5th, 2018 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
I too may be in trouble with this response!
It was probably great before we English landed on its shores in 1620.
June 5th, 2018 00:54
COCKNEY RHYMING SLANG IS SPOKE
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
A most entertaining write!
I had fun reading it!
Imagine...if you can...
an Italian-American trying
to read all of that! š¤£
I did enjoy trying to! My husband was hysterical!
A beautiful picture! A London pride indeed!
~Laura~
June 4th, 2018 18:16
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
A most entertaining write!
I had fun reading it!
Imagine...if you can...
an Italian-American trying
to read all of that! š¤£
I did enjoy trying to! My husband was hysterical!
A beautiful picture! A London pride indeed!
~Laura~
June 4th, 2018 18:16
COCKNEY RHYMING SLANG IS SPOKE
FineB said:
Thank you Matey. A great poem.
Keep writing
FineB
June 4th, 2018 13:56
FineB said:
Thank you Matey. A great poem.
Keep writing
FineB
June 4th, 2018 13:56
COCKNEY RHYMING SLANG IS SPOKE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELL WHO\'D ave fought it ! Me old CHINA (plate = mate) MIKE usin the Cockney Rhymin Slang ~ an im in his bessie WHISTLE (an flute = suit) wiv a smile on is BOAT (race = face) an avin a BUBBLE (baff = laff) in the BATTLE (cruiser = boozer) ! I love CRS and we hear a lot of it in ESSEX cos we\'re near the SMOKE (London) ! What bamboozles Foreigners is that we don\'t use the RHYMING WORD but the other one ! Thus ALANS = KNICKERS from ALAN WHICKERS ! I have friends and colleagues who often slip in a word in CRS so I need a few words ! Thanks ~ Yer ole CHINA ~ BRIAN PS ~ You forgot to post the LONDON PRIDE picture !
June 4th, 2018 10:55
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELL WHO\'D ave fought it ! Me old CHINA (plate = mate) MIKE usin the Cockney Rhymin Slang ~ an im in his bessie WHISTLE (an flute = suit) wiv a smile on is BOAT (race = face) an avin a BUBBLE (baff = laff) in the BATTLE (cruiser = boozer) ! I love CRS and we hear a lot of it in ESSEX cos we\'re near the SMOKE (London) ! What bamboozles Foreigners is that we don\'t use the RHYMING WORD but the other one ! Thus ALANS = KNICKERS from ALAN WHICKERS ! I have friends and colleagues who often slip in a word in CRS so I need a few words ! Thanks ~ Yer ole CHINA ~ BRIAN PS ~ You forgot to post the LONDON PRIDE picture !
June 4th, 2018 10:55
WINTER
Lorna said:
Love your painting Michael (of course)! And I do love the \"skeletal\" winter landscape - it opens up the sky doesn\'t it.
June 4th, 2018 07:49
Lorna said:
Love your painting Michael (of course)! And I do love the \"skeletal\" winter landscape - it opens up the sky doesn\'t it.
June 4th, 2018 07:49
COCKNEY RHYMING SLANG IS SPOKE
Lorna said:
Bloody \'ell - is it really dying? It has to wait till I see it!
June 4th, 2018 07:39
Lorna said:
Bloody \'ell - is it really dying? It has to wait till I see it!
June 4th, 2018 07:39
COCKNEY RHYMING SLANG IS SPOKE
dusk arising said:
Well me old china (plate - mate), just along the frog (and toad -road) where they sort me barnet (fair - hair) if ya kick off yer daiseys (daisey roots - booots) - so long as it aint too harry (harry and billy - chilly) theres a rub-a-dub (pub) where youll end up brahms (brahms and liszt - pissed) for less than a pony (Ā£25).
OK cock?
June 4th, 2018 03:11
dusk arising said:
Well me old china (plate - mate), just along the frog (and toad -road) where they sort me barnet (fair - hair) if ya kick off yer daiseys (daisey roots - booots) - so long as it aint too harry (harry and billy - chilly) theres a rub-a-dub (pub) where youll end up brahms (brahms and liszt - pissed) for less than a pony (Ā£25).
OK cock?
June 4th, 2018 03:11
COCKNEY RHYMING SLANG IS SPOKE
orchidee said:
I gave up watching EastEnders after the first episode - well, almost! Oh lol, fine write M.
June 4th, 2018 02:06
orchidee said:
I gave up watching EastEnders after the first episode - well, almost! Oh lol, fine write M.
June 4th, 2018 02:06
COCKNEY RHYMING SLANG IS SPOKE
Goldfinch60 said:
Lor\' luv a duck! I often get mistaken fer a cockney as da place in Ken\' where I spen\' da first Bullseye years ov me life used ter \'ave Eastenders come down durin\' da \'op pickin\' season an\' many stayed so there is an area in da Medway towns what sounds like East London. Know what I mean?
June 4th, 2018 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Lor\' luv a duck! I often get mistaken fer a cockney as da place in Ken\' where I spen\' da first Bullseye years ov me life used ter \'ave Eastenders come down durin\' da \'op pickin\' season an\' many stayed so there is an area in da Medway towns what sounds like East London. Know what I mean?
June 4th, 2018 00:57
A COUPLE OF COUPLETS
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
The irises are very beautiful! They remind me of my very young years when I lived with my grandmother for a while! Her garden was full of them! She would let me pick some of them for the vase I kept on her dining room table!
Great couplets...
I guess in our own private kingdom, we can afford to live with our head in the clouds!
~Laura~
June 3rd, 2018 16:50
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
The irises are very beautiful! They remind me of my very young years when I lived with my grandmother for a while! Her garden was full of them! She would let me pick some of them for the vase I kept on her dining room table!
Great couplets...
I guess in our own private kingdom, we can afford to live with our head in the clouds!
~Laura~
June 3rd, 2018 16:50
A COUPLE OF COUPLETS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE ~ Lovely picture ~ My MUM has yellow IRIS in her pond ~ very spectacular ~ like much in life ~ Transient & Beautiful ! Loved the doublets ~ No. 1 is my fave ~ know many people like that ! Yours BRIAN
For Poetry and Dress he chose
A fine DOUBLET and tartan HOSE !
June 3rd, 2018 03:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE ~ Lovely picture ~ My MUM has yellow IRIS in her pond ~ very spectacular ~ like much in life ~ Transient & Beautiful ! Loved the doublets ~ No. 1 is my fave ~ know many people like that ! Yours BRIAN
For Poetry and Dress he chose
A fine DOUBLET and tartan HOSE !
June 3rd, 2018 03:15
A COUPLE OF COUPLETS
orchidee said:
a fine write and pic Michael. Was he living in cloud cuckoo land (the second couplet)?! And where is Cloud 9? Why everyone want to live there? Why can\'t some live on Cloud 10, 11, etc?!
June 3rd, 2018 01:25
orchidee said:
a fine write and pic Michael. Was he living in cloud cuckoo land (the second couplet)?! And where is Cloud 9? Why everyone want to live there? Why can\'t some live on Cloud 10, 11, etc?!
June 3rd, 2018 01:25
WINTER
MendedFences27 said:
I like this one. Michael. The passing of Winter into the nether regions. Only to be lurking among the dark, dank and drear, waiting to blast us once again with frost and snow.
In your picture I see the skeletal bones, floating among vapors purple (dark), green (dank), and white (drear). There are eye sockets and an almost completely missing face. Perhaps Winter is a faceless season? Unrecognizable at times. Liked it a lot. - Phil A.
June 2nd, 2018 15:16
MendedFences27 said:
I like this one. Michael. The passing of Winter into the nether regions. Only to be lurking among the dark, dank and drear, waiting to blast us once again with frost and snow.
In your picture I see the skeletal bones, floating among vapors purple (dark), green (dank), and white (drear). There are eye sockets and an almost completely missing face. Perhaps Winter is a faceless season? Unrecognizable at times. Liked it a lot. - Phil A.
June 2nd, 2018 15:16
WINTER
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ Depends which HEMISPHERE you\'re in ! ANGELA has just woken up (on Sunday) and loves this because 1st JUNE is the first day of Winter in NEW ZEALAND ~ she does not expect any snow in Auckland but hopes to visit Mt Cook (S Island) for some skiing ! Love the poem & the painting ! We have had a talk on OWLS this afternoon at the Bird Sanctuary and your \"abstract\" (L to R as orientated) clearly shows a nest of fledglings (with open beaks) ready to receive a meal from MUM ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN & ANGELA
June 2nd, 2018 12:05
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ Depends which HEMISPHERE you\'re in ! ANGELA has just woken up (on Sunday) and loves this because 1st JUNE is the first day of Winter in NEW ZEALAND ~ she does not expect any snow in Auckland but hopes to visit Mt Cook (S Island) for some skiing ! Love the poem & the painting ! We have had a talk on OWLS this afternoon at the Bird Sanctuary and your \"abstract\" (L to R as orientated) clearly shows a nest of fledglings (with open beaks) ready to receive a meal from MUM ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN & ANGELA
June 2nd, 2018 12:05
WINTER
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
What a great painting! Beautiful colors!
It certainly awakens the senses along with your excellent write! Very pleasing!
~Laura~
June 2nd, 2018 07:57
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
What a great painting! Beautiful colors!
It certainly awakens the senses along with your excellent write! Very pleasing!
~Laura~
June 2nd, 2018 07:57
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