Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



LAMPOONING
Goldfinch60 said:

My first smile of the day Michael, thank you so much.

October 6th, 2018 00:12

EDELECTS BY THREE
myself and me said:

Very creative. And as always, the first to post.
Poem read
rules learned
wonderful work

October 5th, 2018 20:05

EDELECTS BY THREE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

GOOD MORNING UNCLE MIKE : ANGELA here its 8:30 pm in NZ! Brian is earning a crust to buy us a HOUSE in the UK (or NZ) so I thought I had better respond : Im working on EDELECTS. Love you trio on : Tomes Tears Temperature! Have a nice WEEKEND : Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡 Love your HARBOUR SCENES you would be inspired by AUCKLAND! You have dropped not an H but an E in your title : A!

October 5th, 2018 03:40

EDELECTS BY THREE
dusk arising said:

There was a young man from Bengal
who had a hexagonal ball
its volume times weight
divided by eight
was twice the square root of f..k all

I\'m sticking to what i know.

October 5th, 2018 02:39

EDELECTS BY THREE
orchidee said:

A fine set of writes and pic Michael. In the first one - you read those books yet? you said those words yet?
You speak with forked tongue, or correct number of syllables? Miss Berles will check them.
Do shut up Orchi, you\'re rambling!(how many miles is your ramble?).

October 5th, 2018 01:30

EDELECTS BY THREE
Goldfinch60 said:

Three god ones Michael.

I have not mentioned your sculptures, I think they are wonderful and lift my days.

October 5th, 2018 00:51

TO JEANNE
orchidee said:

How\'s that evening going? It\'s no ordinary one, ya know. It\'s the evening of National Poetry Day, and World Animal Day.

October 4th, 2018 10:12

TO JEANNE
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

“and I know I always will”💞

Congratulations to both of you in celebrating 54 years of not “knowing the meaning of love”! In my humble opinion, that is the meaning of LOVE!♥️

As we say in Italian...
Altri Cento(another hundred)!
Only forty-six more to go!

All the best...

~Laura~

P.S. - Love the piece of artwork.

October 4th, 2018 09:45

TO JEANNE
dusk arising said:

Does the meaning of love matter so much when your very existence is within love itself.
You know you love. She knows you love. Together you ARE love.
And long may it be so.

October 4th, 2018 02:39

TO JEANNE
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write. Many congratulations Michael.

October 4th, 2018 02:22

TO JEANNE
orchidee said:

A lovely write Michael. Who loves my singing?!

October 4th, 2018 01:17

TO JEANNE
Fay Slimm. said:

Your wife will adore this one Mike. Simply lovely.

October 4th, 2018 01:05

HE SPURNS APPROACH
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

Wow...
An outstanding write!
I liked it very much!

A great piece of artwork!

~Laura~



October 3rd, 2018 17:32

HE SPURNS APPROACH
Fay Slimm. said:

A miss-match of marital needs hidden in sensitive imagery Mike - - I know \"fire suppressed\" can cause one-sided torment. A sensuous read.

October 3rd, 2018 13:15

HE SPURNS APPROACH
orchidee said:

Another good evening there?

October 3rd, 2018 13:09

HE SPURNS APPROACH
orchidee said:

A fine write Michael. Could be me - spurning any approach to anything \'exciting\'. Fido always barks to warn me off!

October 3rd, 2018 01:28

HE SPURNS APPROACH
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful emotive write Michael.

October 3rd, 2018 01:02

THE SAME MISTAKE
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

To be sure it\'s a mstake
You MUST make it again
Like leaving your coat
When you know it will rain...
again

Nice Michael I like it!

October 2nd, 2018 10:29

THE SAME MISTAKE
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Michal. Miss Berles will help you not make any mistakes with syllables.

October 2nd, 2018 01:29

THE SAME MISTAKE
Goldfinch60 said:

We must be certain that all is right as we move on in life. At our age Michael we seem to have done pretty well in our lives.

October 2nd, 2018 01:04

LIMERICK No 56
Goldfinch60 said:

At least on then floor you could walk around it, on the ceiling it could drop on you.

September 28th, 2018 00:50

LIMERICK No 56
orchidee said:

Did he defy gravity then?! lol.

September 27th, 2018 01:49

LIMERICK No 56
dusk arising said:

The dirty old bishop of Birmingham,
Buggered his flock whilst confirming \'em,
he sat on his hassock,
and lifted his cassock,
and slipped his episcopal worm in \'em

September 27th, 2018 01:33

A CINQUAIN COLLECTION
Goldfinch60 said:

a fine collection Michael.

September 27th, 2018 00:38

A CINQUAIN COLLECTION
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME UNCLE MICHAEL : We have missed your quirky Art and Odd Odes. I love this melancholy trio : I am nostalgic too missing \"Autumn in Essex\" September does not sit well with Spring. I have composed some KIWI CINQUAINS for tomorrow!
Your Trio deserve titles:
Abandoned House
Abandoned Honour
Abandoned Hope

Every blessing : Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

September 26th, 2018 16:41

A CINQUAIN COLLECTION
dusk arising said:

Formula belong in mathematics not in poetry in my book. \'You shall dream and express your feelings to the following formula my dear Robot\'
Transgression will result in a circuit replacement, yes dear Robot we shall remove a chip off the old block.

September 26th, 2018 16:04

A CINQUAIN COLLECTION
Christina8 said:

Really great set of cinquains Michael!

September 26th, 2018 13:14

A CINQUAIN COLLECTION
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Take your time, Michael.

There\'s no rush for my poetry. Enjoy your time at home. :)

I\'m glad I found your poetry site and will be reading more of your poems later on today. :)

September 26th, 2018 12:52

A CINQUAIN COLLECTION
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Michael, your collection of cinquains are truth spoken in so few words.

A joy to read. :)


September 26th, 2018 05:42

A CINQUAIN COLLECTION
orchidee said:

Did you call her, to come over on the bus? Did you say \'Coooeeee\' (hi) - that\'s two syllables - when you met here?
And furthermore, why am I spouting rubbish?!

September 26th, 2018 02:58



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