Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
PURE COMMERCE
Goldfinch60 said:
So true and so often carried out Michael - and that is just the politicians!
August 4th, 2018 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
So true and so often carried out Michael - and that is just the politicians!
August 4th, 2018 01:08
I WRITE
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Great poem! Love this idea of shuffling words! This reminds me of the technique I’d use for the “shy” writers when I taught elementary schools! We’d call it the “word game”...not very original, but they liked it and made them write! The aim was accomplished!
Beautiful flowers!
~Laura~
August 3rd, 2018 18:05
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Great poem! Love this idea of shuffling words! This reminds me of the technique I’d use for the “shy” writers when I taught elementary schools! We’d call it the “word game”...not very original, but they liked it and made them write! The aim was accomplished!
Beautiful flowers!
~Laura~
August 3rd, 2018 18:05
I WRITE
Lorna said:
You channel your little island\'s wonderful history of words!
August 3rd, 2018 15:03
Lorna said:
You channel your little island\'s wonderful history of words!
August 3rd, 2018 15:03
I WRITE
Heartwriter said:
You always pick them up in perfect order! Thanks, Michael.
August 3rd, 2018 06:51
Heartwriter said:
You always pick them up in perfect order! Thanks, Michael.
August 3rd, 2018 06:51
I WRITE
Fay Slimm. said:
Random happenings can produce serious poetry - good thoughts here Michael - - - am now off to tumble my shelved books and see what words come up to shuffle. Great stuff again.
August 3rd, 2018 04:13
Fay Slimm. said:
Random happenings can produce serious poetry - good thoughts here Michael - - - am now off to tumble my shelved books and see what words come up to shuffle. Great stuff again.
August 3rd, 2018 04:13
I WRITE
orchidee said:
The nuttiness draws near - October and Hastings. There\'s one in NZ. A Plymouth too (see Brian & Angela recent poem with map).
I could celebrate it there - on me own! Ya would not have to listen to my ramblings on then.
August 3rd, 2018 03:10
orchidee said:
The nuttiness draws near - October and Hastings. There\'s one in NZ. A Plymouth too (see Brian & Angela recent poem with map).
I could celebrate it there - on me own! Ya would not have to listen to my ramblings on then.
August 3rd, 2018 03:10
I WRITE
orchidee said:
This another feel I good write Michael is.
Oops, sorry I did not unshuffled the words before commenting here.
August 3rd, 2018 01:33
orchidee said:
This another feel I good write Michael is.
Oops, sorry I did not unshuffled the words before commenting here.
August 3rd, 2018 01:33
I WRITE
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words when shuffled can come out in wondrous ways as yours have Michael.
August 3rd, 2018 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words when shuffled can come out in wondrous ways as yours have Michael.
August 3rd, 2018 01:23
AUGUST
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MIKE ~ August come she must ! I the N Hemisphere always the most profuse flowering even ina heat wave ! Thanks for sparing time to share ! Yours as ever Brian & Angela. Please check WELLINGTON by ANGELA and our FUSION \"ICE CREAM\" Thanks A & B !
August 2nd, 2018 09:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MIKE ~ August come she must ! I the N Hemisphere always the most profuse flowering even ina heat wave ! Thanks for sparing time to share ! Yours as ever Brian & Angela. Please check WELLINGTON by ANGELA and our FUSION \"ICE CREAM\" Thanks A & B !
August 2nd, 2018 09:11
AUGUST
Heartwriter said:
I enjoyed this Michael. August is such a beautiful time of year. As your poem describes.
August 2nd, 2018 04:53
Heartwriter said:
I enjoyed this Michael. August is such a beautiful time of year. As your poem describes.
August 2nd, 2018 04:53
AUGUST
dusk arising said:
Lovely, i see small wildlife scurrying from my path.
August 2nd, 2018 02:12
dusk arising said:
Lovely, i see small wildlife scurrying from my path.
August 2nd, 2018 02:12
AUGUST
orchidee said:
I never knew some much happened in August! Does coruscating and crenellating only happen in August?!
*gets out dictionary!*
August 2nd, 2018 01:43
orchidee said:
I never knew some much happened in August! Does coruscating and crenellating only happen in August?!
*gets out dictionary!*
August 2nd, 2018 01:43
AUGUST
Fay Slimm. said:
What a well observed and beautiful description of light\'s ability as August burgeons growth. The word coruscate is so apt - - lovely first read of my day.
August 2nd, 2018 00:25
Fay Slimm. said:
What a well observed and beautiful description of light\'s ability as August burgeons growth. The word coruscate is so apt - - lovely first read of my day.
August 2nd, 2018 00:25
A POET
dusk arising said:
I\'m no poet mate, I\'m just in therapy here.
I live in fear of laptop death. I loathe learning new operating systems. Windows 95, 98, 98 SE, XP, Vista, & 7. Been through them all. You think i want to know about win 10?
August 1st, 2018 09:13
dusk arising said:
I\'m no poet mate, I\'m just in therapy here.
I live in fear of laptop death. I loathe learning new operating systems. Windows 95, 98, 98 SE, XP, Vista, & 7. Been through them all. You think i want to know about win 10?
August 1st, 2018 09:13
A POET
Lorna said:
Hit it Michael - that always works. Yes you\'re right - the man who writes the techie manuals isn\'t a poet.......
August 1st, 2018 06:09
Lorna said:
Hit it Michael - that always works. Yes you\'re right - the man who writes the techie manuals isn\'t a poet.......
August 1st, 2018 06:09
A POET
Heartwriter said:
A fine shortie! Miss you. Have a great one. I have a feeling you will manuver that computer with ease.
August 1st, 2018 04:11
Heartwriter said:
A fine shortie! Miss you. Have a great one. I have a feeling you will manuver that computer with ease.
August 1st, 2018 04:11
A POET
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
A MAN may not always act MANLY
But XY chromosomes define him as a MALE
Alas many WOMEN are not LADIES
But XX chromosomes define them as FEMALES !
The sign on the TOILET DOOR is the dividing line !
What POETS write is not necessarily POETRY
But what a POET writes is (alas) always written
TRANSGENDER want to open all DOORS !
Thanks MIKE for an enigmatic doublet
If there wasn\'t a BAN ~ DOUBLET & HOSE
Thanks for sharing B & A
Hi MIKE please check \"CLOUDS\" ANGELA XXXX
August 1st, 2018 03:17
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
A MAN may not always act MANLY
But XY chromosomes define him as a MALE
Alas many WOMEN are not LADIES
But XX chromosomes define them as FEMALES !
The sign on the TOILET DOOR is the dividing line !
What POETS write is not necessarily POETRY
But what a POET writes is (alas) always written
TRANSGENDER want to open all DOORS !
Thanks MIKE for an enigmatic doublet
If there wasn\'t a BAN ~ DOUBLET & HOSE
Thanks for sharing B & A
Hi MIKE please check \"CLOUDS\" ANGELA XXXX
August 1st, 2018 03:17
SARTORINaL INELEGANCIES (2)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE ~ Today in many peoples minds ~ Dress Sense = Dress Nonsense and anything (or nothing goes) POLO SHIRTS are kool on and off the Horse. But I agree I wore them in the Heatwave because exterior to the waistband they ventilate and keep the body beautiful & kool ! I always wear a normal shirt ~ neatly tucked in ~ all mine tend to have a tail and if worn \"out\" make me look like a dook ! Yours BRIAN ~ Angela being a FEMALE has no dress rules as you may have noticed in the recent Indian Summer. If I am reincarnated I have ticked the HUMAN & FEMALE boxes and that\'s just for the SHOES ~ AMEN. Yours BRIAN
July 31st, 2018 11:34
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE ~ Today in many peoples minds ~ Dress Sense = Dress Nonsense and anything (or nothing goes) POLO SHIRTS are kool on and off the Horse. But I agree I wore them in the Heatwave because exterior to the waistband they ventilate and keep the body beautiful & kool ! I always wear a normal shirt ~ neatly tucked in ~ all mine tend to have a tail and if worn \"out\" make me look like a dook ! Yours BRIAN ~ Angela being a FEMALE has no dress rules as you may have noticed in the recent Indian Summer. If I am reincarnated I have ticked the HUMAN & FEMALE boxes and that\'s just for the SHOES ~ AMEN. Yours BRIAN
July 31st, 2018 11:34
SARTORINaL INELEGANCIES (2)
Lorna said:
I have to add that the \"Three Englishteers\" are more fun than a barrel of monkeys.........1066 or otherwise.
July 31st, 2018 07:56
Lorna said:
I have to add that the \"Three Englishteers\" are more fun than a barrel of monkeys.........1066 or otherwise.
July 31st, 2018 07:56
SARTORINaL INELEGANCIES (2)
Lorna said:
Oh boys! The latest is that we (women at least) only tuck in 1/2 of the shirt just near a fancy belt buckle so that the buckle shows itself off and there is a sort of low slung cunning around the waist (assuming one still has one - a waist that is). But you\'re right - I\'ve been to real polo games and by the end of it all the polo shirts were definitely not tucked in.........
July 31st, 2018 07:52
Lorna said:
Oh boys! The latest is that we (women at least) only tuck in 1/2 of the shirt just near a fancy belt buckle so that the buckle shows itself off and there is a sort of low slung cunning around the waist (assuming one still has one - a waist that is). But you\'re right - I\'ve been to real polo games and by the end of it all the polo shirts were definitely not tucked in.........
July 31st, 2018 07:52
SARTORINaL INELEGANCIES (2)
orchidee said:
Tally-ho! I\'m on me polo horse! Pity I didn\'t have such a good horse in 1066.
July 31st, 2018 06:56
orchidee said:
Tally-ho! I\'m on me polo horse! Pity I didn\'t have such a good horse in 1066.
July 31st, 2018 06:56
SARTORINaL INELEGANCIES (2)
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
To tuck or not to tuck...
that is the question!
When in doubt,
throw it out!
Shirtless...
is the way to go...LOL
~Laura~
July 31st, 2018 06:37
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
To tuck or not to tuck...
that is the question!
When in doubt,
throw it out!
Shirtless...
is the way to go...LOL
~Laura~
July 31st, 2018 06:37
SARTORINaL INELEGANCIES (2)
Heartwriter said:
I have never really played golf. I have played putt- putt. That alone tells me I have no gift for the green! Enjoyed and let those polo tails fly free!
July 31st, 2018 05:32
Heartwriter said:
I have never really played golf. I have played putt- putt. That alone tells me I have no gift for the green! Enjoyed and let those polo tails fly free!
July 31st, 2018 05:32
SARTORINaL INELEGANCIES (2)
Fay Slimm. said:
Agreed Mike - polo shirts tucked in are over the top in my estimation - - - UGH !
July 31st, 2018 05:30
Fay Slimm. said:
Agreed Mike - polo shirts tucked in are over the top in my estimation - - - UGH !
July 31st, 2018 05:30
SARTORINaL INELEGANCIES (2)
dusk arising said:
Murphy was disappointed with his score in the olympic high diving 2.2 3.1 2/2 1.9 2.2 his trainer was reassuring, oh its not so bad murphy considering you have a rip in yer donkey jacket and a plash of mud on yer wellies.
July 31st, 2018 03:04
dusk arising said:
Murphy was disappointed with his score in the olympic high diving 2.2 3.1 2/2 1.9 2.2 his trainer was reassuring, oh its not so bad murphy considering you have a rip in yer donkey jacket and a plash of mud on yer wellies.
July 31st, 2018 03:04
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