Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



HE THOUGHT
orchidee said:

Any more info on this and I might swoon! A fine write Michael.

August 12th, 2018 01:15

TO SLEEP
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write Michael. I can fall asleep as soon as my head hits the pillow.
The discussion about the painting is interesting as I believe this one or one very similar has been posted before, or was that one of a pub. No matter it is always good to see your art.

August 12th, 2018 00:02

TO SLEEP
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

Love the painting! The pastel colors are very pleasing to the eye!
I believe you posted this one with another poem. If I remember correctly, I think there’s a second painting you posted about the same subject!

As far as sleeping patterns, I’m glad I don’t have any issues with that...yet!
I love how you weaved the words DELTA, ALPHA, BETA into your poem!

~Laura~

August 11th, 2018 10:25

TO SLEEP
Heartwriter said:

You are the artist we like to see each morning! Enjoyed.

August 11th, 2018 06:16

TO SLEEP
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. Yes, the two buildings on either side are played down well, with the lighter tones. I think.
Doh! I gotta study a bit of Greek now, before I know what sleep patterns I\'m having. Can one dream in Greek?! You asleep now, and can\'t reply yet?

August 11th, 2018 03:19

THEIR SANCTUARY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MIKE ~ Lovely forest scene love the visual too ~ more plese BRIAN. Please check Five Fabulos Females ~ Thanks B !

August 10th, 2018 05:00

THEIR SANCTUARY
FineB said:

A vivid, poignant write.

Thanks Michael

Beautiful and awesome.

The watercolour is beautiful!

Keep writing
FineB

August 10th, 2018 03:48

THEIR SANCTUARY
Fay Slimm. said:

First class writing and painting Michael - - a delightful posting and a pleasure to catch your work.

August 10th, 2018 03:32

THEIR SANCTUARY
orchidee said:

A fine write Michael. I forgot what dryads are!
You got any little acorns? From them mighty oaks grow, as is said!

August 10th, 2018 02:01

THEIR SANCTUARY
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write Michael, love the last line.
\"where dryads seek their sanctuary.\"

August 10th, 2018 00:56

THOUGHTS OF DEATH (2)
Fay Slimm. said:

I am still giggling at your clever image - small is big to a palette like yours Mike - -- as for cloud numbers I favour the nine for drifting me into my own little paradise. Great stuff.

August 9th, 2018 16:42

THOUGHTS OF DEATH (2)
orchidee said:

Ma again! Thoughts of death - I\'m about to sing! lol.

August 9th, 2018 10:00

THOUGHTS OF DEATH (2)
Heartwriter said:

Michael if goodness gets one there. Perhaps we will pass on a cloud and share some poems written in the sky!!!!!! Great write.

August 9th, 2018 09:52

THOUGHTS OF DEATH (2)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

A MAN lay down by a SEWER
And by that SEWER died
At the Coroners inquest
They called it SEWERSIDE !

Thanks for another Poeme de Morte ~ very droll
My COMPUTER does not have a CELESTIAL KEY
Perhaps one day it will~ a direct line to JEHOVAH !

Yours as always BRIAN.


August 9th, 2018 08:19

THOUGHTS OF DEATH (2)
orchidee said:

Erm, I\'ve not been there (as yet) to find out! I expect it\'s as Goldie says.
Oh lol, good write and pic M.

August 9th, 2018 01:31

THOUGHTS OF DEATH (2)
Goldfinch60 said:

There is no need for any of these in heaven, including computers. See you there Michael.

August 9th, 2018 00:45

THOUGHTS OF DEATH (1)
Heartwriter said:

Haha! You too funny. They gonna smell it up?

August 8th, 2018 09:29

THOUGHTS OF DEATH (1)
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

Love it!
No worries...
sharing is good!
Only one thing...
let’s not forget the wine!🍷

~Laura ~

August 8th, 2018 06:05

THOUGHTS OF DEATH (1)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

McTavish is dead ~ an\' his Brother don\'t know it
His Brother is dead ~ an\' McTavish don\'t know it
There\'s both o\' them dead ~ an\' they\'re in the same bed
And neither one knows that t\'other one\'s DEAD !
At the inquest they blamed CO from parafine heater !

Thanks for sharing MIKE Morbid poems often funniest
Please check my Poem today \"Dancing & Romancing\"
Yours as always BRIAN & ANGELA.

August 8th, 2018 04:48

THOUGHTS OF DEATH (1)
dusk arising said:

That\'ll be a smelly place! I do so hope that you don\'t find a certain \'trump\' there as well.

August 8th, 2018 02:02

THOUGHTS OF DEATH (1)
Fay Slimm. said:

Ha ha ha - who but you could think up an last line like that !! A smilngly good read.

August 8th, 2018 01:39

THOUGHTS OF DEATH (1)
orchidee said:

Aww, are they all farts?! Oohh! lol.

August 8th, 2018 01:39

THOUGHTS OF DEATH (1)
Goldfinch60 said:

Yes, I will be there as well, shall we share a bottle of red or white?

August 8th, 2018 00:42

THOUGHTS OF DEATH (1)
Adam Shirley said:

Love the sentence at the end, gave me quite the smile on a short poem dedicated to a dear one, my condolences. Wonderful poem.

August 8th, 2018 00:15

THE FLY
orchidee said:

Hey, me wife KP ( I forgot I married her) is avoiding being declared bankrupt. She spent it all on Botox!

August 7th, 2018 13:09

THE FLY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

FLIES have their place
In the ecological race
But I don\'t want one to POOP
When he lands in my SOOP
That would be crass
Soop flavoured with with frass !

Thanks again UNCLE MIKE for seasoning
MPS with a soupcon of humour
Yours appreciatively BRIAN & ANGELA

Please add a POEM to our FUSION on AFRICA ~ Thanks A & B !
Please check ANGELA\'s POEM ~ LONG WHITE CLOUD ~ Thanks

August 7th, 2018 10:48

THE FLY
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

Love this little cartoon fly write! I will not shoo it away. It’s worth the save in my faves!
It reminded me of the first time I visited Pennsylvania in the USA and ate a piece of ‘shoo-fly’ pie at a Pennsylvania Dutch restaurant called ‘‘Good ‘N Plenty’’!
I was looking for the flies in the pie! To my surprise, they had all been shooed away! 🤣
Shoo-fly...shoooo

~Laura~


August 7th, 2018 08:20

THE FLY
dusk arising said:

Excellent cartoon and poem.

^^8^^ don\'t buzz round the house
when the weathers this hot
^^8^^ Mike Edwards will swipe you
he\'s bought a new \'swat\'

August 7th, 2018 05:26

THE FLY
Heartwriter said:

Lol! No one wants a fly bugging around. I guess they have their purpose. Just not indoors.

August 7th, 2018 05:17

THE FLY
sylviasearcher said:

I often feel sorry for flies.. I bet they wish they were birds. 🤔

August 7th, 2018 03:28



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