Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
A PAIR OF SOCK COUPLETS
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, strangely my wife and I were talking about this yesterday.
May 22nd, 2018 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, strangely my wife and I were talking about this yesterday.
May 22nd, 2018 02:00
THE LADY DRESSED IN BLACK
Fay Slimm. said:
The picture expresses the depth in such poignant poetic lines Michael -
- - -leaving a real sense of loss and described with simplicity.
May 21st, 2018 13:29
Fay Slimm. said:
The picture expresses the depth in such poignant poetic lines Michael -
- - -leaving a real sense of loss and described with simplicity.
May 21st, 2018 13:29
THE LADY DRESSED IN BLACK
dusk arising said:
Bloody graffiti artists get everywhere! Even showing up in your poetry now!
Whatever next, writing on marble statuary, you cant leave a statue anywhere these days.
May 21st, 2018 10:58
dusk arising said:
Bloody graffiti artists get everywhere! Even showing up in your poetry now!
Whatever next, writing on marble statuary, you cant leave a statue anywhere these days.
May 21st, 2018 10:58
THE LADY DRESSED IN BLACK
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for an awesome Poeme Noire and a haunting Abstract. I presume she died in a plane crash ~ which is abstractly pictured in the painting as orientated. To me that\'s the most untimely death of all (our Prayers are with Cuba) and it does lead to hauntings as there is no time to say GOODBYE ! Thanks for scaring ~ BRIAN
May 21st, 2018 03:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for an awesome Poeme Noire and a haunting Abstract. I presume she died in a plane crash ~ which is abstractly pictured in the painting as orientated. To me that\'s the most untimely death of all (our Prayers are with Cuba) and it does lead to hauntings as there is no time to say GOODBYE ! Thanks for scaring ~ BRIAN
May 21st, 2018 03:40
THE LADY DRESSED IN BLACK
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. I didn\'t see her, dressed in her black. Why not? Well, she was in a coal shed at midnight! Dunno why she was there, but it was somewhat dark then!
May 21st, 2018 01:54
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. I didn\'t see her, dressed in her black. Why not? Well, she was in a coal shed at midnight! Dunno why she was there, but it was somewhat dark then!
May 21st, 2018 01:54
THE LADY DRESSED IN BLACK
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Michael, it put me i mind of a Johnny Cash song - https://youtu.be/0TE8445gIBo
Love the abstract, I will need to study that one but I can already see things in it.
May 21st, 2018 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Michael, it put me i mind of a Johnny Cash song - https://youtu.be/0TE8445gIBo
Love the abstract, I will need to study that one but I can already see things in it.
May 21st, 2018 00:56
A COUPLE OF 575s
orchidee said:
You see my joke? Ahh-kooo?! or you ignored it, it being too corny?! lol
May 20th, 2018 10:22
orchidee said:
You see my joke? Ahh-kooo?! or you ignored it, it being too corny?! lol
May 20th, 2018 10:22
A COUPLE OF 575s
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
A fine write! The second verse is very relatable at the moment! Beautiful red poppies! Enjoyed the read and pic!
~Laura~
May 20th, 2018 08:50
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
A fine write! The second verse is very relatable at the moment! Beautiful red poppies! Enjoyed the read and pic!
~Laura~
May 20th, 2018 08:50
A COUPLE OF 575s
willyweed said:
Short and sweet I found myself writing verse in between the lines of this lovely piece. Red poppies reserved for war vets here in USA wonderful work Mike. ww
May 20th, 2018 08:18
willyweed said:
Short and sweet I found myself writing verse in between the lines of this lovely piece. Red poppies reserved for war vets here in USA wonderful work Mike. ww
May 20th, 2018 08:18
A COUPLE OF 575s
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
MORNIN\' MICHAEL ~ Love non~rhyming 5 7 5 \'s 17 syllables is just enough to paint a picture ~ love them both ~ also the Red Welsh Poppies ~ elegant ! Please check my Balm in Gilead ~ Thanks BRIAN
May 20th, 2018 03:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
MORNIN\' MICHAEL ~ Love non~rhyming 5 7 5 \'s 17 syllables is just enough to paint a picture ~ love them both ~ also the Red Welsh Poppies ~ elegant ! Please check my Balm in Gilead ~ Thanks BRIAN
May 20th, 2018 03:59
A COUPLE OF 575s
dusk arising said:
I like that, pulsing hum of street traffic, the heart of the town. All the traffic has been driven out of my towns by pedestrianised (horrible word) zones. The hum has indeed become distant.
Your first piece here though invites me and readily I visualise and feel the sweltering sun and stifling humidity.
May 20th, 2018 03:53
dusk arising said:
I like that, pulsing hum of street traffic, the heart of the town. All the traffic has been driven out of my towns by pedestrianised (horrible word) zones. The hum has indeed become distant.
Your first piece here though invites me and readily I visualise and feel the sweltering sun and stifling humidity.
May 20th, 2018 03:53
A COUPLE OF 575s
orchidee said:
At they Haikus? Did someone sneeze? Ahh-kooo! Go back to bed Orchi and think up some better jokes! lol.
May 20th, 2018 01:04
orchidee said:
At they Haikus? Did someone sneeze? Ahh-kooo! Go back to bed Orchi and think up some better jokes! lol.
May 20th, 2018 01:04
A COUPLE OF 575s
orchidee said:
A fine location expressed in this poem, and fine pic too Michael.
May 20th, 2018 01:03
orchidee said:
A fine location expressed in this poem, and fine pic too Michael.
May 20th, 2018 01:03
THIS LAND
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Beautiful words, beautiful painting!
To paraphrase dusk,
you create love and see beauty in your writings, paintings, and photos! It is a pleasure to view and enjoy your works of art!
~Laura~
May 19th, 2018 13:43
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Beautiful words, beautiful painting!
To paraphrase dusk,
you create love and see beauty in your writings, paintings, and photos! It is a pleasure to view and enjoy your works of art!
~Laura~
May 19th, 2018 13:43
THIS LAND
dusk arising said:
The eyes of an artist see beauty where others see nought. The hands of an artist create love where others fumble.
Wonderful picture, no wonder it was desired so much.
May 19th, 2018 12:09
dusk arising said:
The eyes of an artist see beauty where others see nought. The hands of an artist create love where others fumble.
Wonderful picture, no wonder it was desired so much.
May 19th, 2018 12:09
THIS LAND
willyweed said:
Bravo Michael another master piece in art and verse. ww
May 19th, 2018 10:45
willyweed said:
Bravo Michael another master piece in art and verse. ww
May 19th, 2018 10:45
THIS LAND
MrNobody40 said:
It is so easy to rush through life, and we do so when we are young. As I get older, I find myself slowing down to enjoy things more. Time goes by so quickly
May 19th, 2018 08:19
MrNobody40 said:
It is so easy to rush through life, and we do so when we are young. As I get older, I find myself slowing down to enjoy things more. Time goes by so quickly
May 19th, 2018 08:19
THIS LAND
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THIS LAND is my LAND
The Blest and Perfect
Land of ENGLAND
No matter where I roam
Terra Firma or Aqua Foam
You will always hear me
Singing this SONG
SHOW ME THE WAY TO GO HOME !
Thank Michael for a lovely Poem and a typically ENGLISH BEACH ! I am only 10 miles (as the car drives !) form the nearest BEACH ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN !
May 19th, 2018 02:28
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THIS LAND is my LAND
The Blest and Perfect
Land of ENGLAND
No matter where I roam
Terra Firma or Aqua Foam
You will always hear me
Singing this SONG
SHOW ME THE WAY TO GO HOME !
Thank Michael for a lovely Poem and a typically ENGLISH BEACH ! I am only 10 miles (as the car drives !) form the nearest BEACH ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN !
May 19th, 2018 02:28
THIS LAND
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. I went on an \'Arts Trail\' spread over three areas, even bordering different counties. I covered two of the areas, the other one was too far out.
May 19th, 2018 01:07
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. I went on an \'Arts Trail\' spread over three areas, even bordering different counties. I covered two of the areas, the other one was too far out.
May 19th, 2018 01:07
BUTTERFLY
SLR said:
I love butterflies. So delicately beautiful. God sighs and butterflies break free from their chrysalis and grace us with their beauty. Hard to believe they\'re just beautiful insects. The \'flittering and fluttering\' does sound like butterfly wings, but I do also like dusks\' \'pulsing fluff\'. You guys are great!
May 18th, 2018 22:18
SLR said:
I love butterflies. So delicately beautiful. God sighs and butterflies break free from their chrysalis and grace us with their beauty. Hard to believe they\'re just beautiful insects. The \'flittering and fluttering\' does sound like butterfly wings, but I do also like dusks\' \'pulsing fluff\'. You guys are great!
May 18th, 2018 22:18
BUTTERFLY
dusk arising said:
Lovely to watch aren\'t they. I think you do catch their flitting flight well in your piece. Earlier this year i included the sound of a butterfly\'s beating wings in a poem, i described it as sounding like \'pulsing fluff\'.
Oddly, a lady i met recently was terrified of butterflies to the point of running away screaming. It takes all kinds i suppose.
I think of them as one of the most beautiful of all creations and the peace they bring to our countryside when one is immersed in it is quite tangible.
Thanks for making mme think butterfly.
May 18th, 2018 09:00
dusk arising said:
Lovely to watch aren\'t they. I think you do catch their flitting flight well in your piece. Earlier this year i included the sound of a butterfly\'s beating wings in a poem, i described it as sounding like \'pulsing fluff\'.
Oddly, a lady i met recently was terrified of butterflies to the point of running away screaming. It takes all kinds i suppose.
I think of them as one of the most beautiful of all creations and the peace they bring to our countryside when one is immersed in it is quite tangible.
Thanks for making mme think butterfly.
May 18th, 2018 09:00
BUTTERFLY
FineB said:
A butterfly so symbolic of hot beautiful sunny days.
A sweet, vivid and charming poem!
Thank you Michael!
Keep writing
FineB
May 18th, 2018 03:27
FineB said:
A butterfly so symbolic of hot beautiful sunny days.
A sweet, vivid and charming poem!
Thank you Michael!
Keep writing
FineB
May 18th, 2018 03:27
BUTTERFLY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for a fine SEXTET Micheal ~ full of flutter & flow ! Love the AQUILEGIA ~ Yes the butterflies are out in Mum\'s Garden ~ difficult to photograph with OPEN WINGS ~ BRIAN !
May 18th, 2018 03:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for a fine SEXTET Micheal ~ full of flutter & flow ! Love the AQUILEGIA ~ Yes the butterflies are out in Mum\'s Garden ~ difficult to photograph with OPEN WINGS ~ BRIAN !
May 18th, 2018 03:23
BUTTERFLY
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Ohh and there was I, battling through heavy rain, getting sodden, but \'snail-saving\', helping them on to the grass. Well, it takes them a long time to cross the path!
May 18th, 2018 01:31
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Ohh and there was I, battling through heavy rain, getting sodden, but \'snail-saving\', helping them on to the grass. Well, it takes them a long time to cross the path!
May 18th, 2018 01:31
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