Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



BUTTERFLY
Goldfinch60 said:

They are beautiful to watch while I sit in the garden drinking my Rioja.

May 18th, 2018 01:04

MERLOT
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Michael,
I agree! A good vintage Merlot will do it for me and my husband! Iā€™ll admit that in the past, as an adult, I only drank Pinot Grigio!
My husband is still strictly red!
Depending on the meal,
I do well with both!
So hereā€™s to you šŸ·, Maestro, for a super write and a super painting!

~Laura~


May 17th, 2018 10:12

MERLOT
FineB said:

Thank you Michael.

A charming lovely poem.

I see you\'re a red man !

I confess that I am a white wine person all the way!

Keep writing
FineB

May 17th, 2018 06:52

MERLOT
dusk arising said:

Yes i agree, merlot can be relied upon and available in a range of moderate to low prices. My fav is cabernet sauvignon but it doesn\'t do to buy a cheaper one.
I have consumed more merlot in recent years. Such good taste!

May 17th, 2018 04:28

MERLOT
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Michael. Reminds me to reach for the sherry.... What? This time of day? I\'ve started early....! I shall not be ablesh to comment mucsh latersh on. Good acting innit?!

May 17th, 2018 01:25

MERLOT
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good painting Michael.

Good write as well, Merlot is OK but I would always reach for the Rioja.

May 17th, 2018 01:09

PREJUDICES
SLR said:

So true. We have to get past any prejudices before we can truly open our minds and hearts to new people, things and even experiences. Great write Mr Michael!

May 16th, 2018 22:55

SHE SWAM IN A LUMINOUS SKY
SLR said:

This is beautiful. I have different beliefs about the end of someone life but I can still appreciate the beauty, peace and serenity expressed. Beautiful piece.

May 16th, 2018 19:44

PREJUDICES
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Michael,
Spot on with this write!

Love the pic of dainty flowers!

~Laura~

May 16th, 2018 10:37

PREJUDICES
dusk arising said:

Great analogy, whereas the thinking mind IS on a flexible \'line\', those prejudices are ever present to trip us up.

Are they still there when we\'re \'pegged - out?\' ... sorry, couldn\'t resist that.

May 16th, 2018 10:26

PREJUDICES
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MIKE for the \"BEAUTY\" of the Flowers and the \"WARNING\" in the Poem. Thanks for DALI ~ I have posted \"The Persistence of Memories\" hope that was an apt choice ! Please check my SENRYU on LADIES ! Yours BRIAN ~ Unprejudiced ?

May 16th, 2018 03:45

PREJUDICES
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Michael. Ohh it\'s too psychological this time of day - and far too long a word for this time of day. See ya later, when I\'ve had a lie down to recover!

May 16th, 2018 01:46

PREJUDICES
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, may those prejudices soon be dispelled.

May 16th, 2018 01:14

SHE SWAM IN A LUMINOUS SKY
orchidee said:

She swimming still?!

May 15th, 2018 11:37

SHE SWAM IN A LUMINOUS SKY
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Michael,
Today must be one of those days! Yours is the second write that Iā€™ve read about a peaceful death!
My dadā€™s was a peaceful death...3:00a.m. ...8 1/2 years ago!
Your exquisite verse beautifully expresses how I felt about my dadā€™s passing! Well done my friend!
Love the pic of the aquilegia! Too bad Iā€™m not allowed to plant flowers at his gravesite! Like you, he loved his garden!

~Laura~


May 15th, 2018 09:34

SHE SWAM IN A LUMINOUS SKY
Christina8 said:

Just loved this poem for today! Loved the last two lines, they were my favorite. Great flower pic!

May 15th, 2018 08:54

SHE SWAM IN A LUMINOUS SKY
Lorna said:

Beautiful death!

May 15th, 2018 04:59

SHE SWAM IN A LUMINOUS SKY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MIKE for a beautiful REQUIEM IN PACE poem ~ My Grandma passed away just like that ~ peacefully ! Love the AQUILEGIA ~ like dancing fairies so delicate ~ thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN. Please check my HAIKU and add an Artist (I will add the picture) to my NEW FUSION ~ thanks BRIAN

May 15th, 2018 04:36

SHE SWAM IN A LUMINOUS SKY
dusk arising said:

Transitional beauty here. I\'m interpreting this as the passing at the end of life. I hope i have this right because anyone reading this piece with thoughts of the end of their days will surely see the passing over as a time of.magical transition.
Lovely words.

May 15th, 2018 03:22

SHE SWAM IN A LUMINOUS SKY
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Michael. She on Cloud Nine now?!

May 15th, 2018 01:33

SHE SWAM IN A LUMINOUS SKY
Goldfinch60 said:

Another beautiful write Michael.

May 15th, 2018 01:19

SHE SWAM IN A LUMINOUS SKY
Resa71 said:

So beautifully written.
You always capture such a peaceful feeling when you write.
Iā€™m pretty much the opposite.
Guess we balance things out :)
Resa

May 15th, 2018 00:45

A COUPLE MORE COUPLETS
SLR said:

Mankind\'s unrelenting obliviousness of the direct result of their actions. History repeats itself because humans never learn. A sad tragic truth of humanity. Pretty flowers. I\'ve never seen those. I\'m going to have to start saving your pics. I don\'t think we have those here.

May 14th, 2018 12:41

A COUPLE MORE COUPLETS
dusk arising said:

The custom of ghosts - a haunting line indeed. Joking apart - very clever phrase.

May 14th, 2018 08:32

A COUPLE MORE COUPLETS
Lorna said:

The couplets are lovely and the pretty little flower world is captivating Michael!

May 14th, 2018 06:35

A COUPLE MORE COUPLETS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MIKE ~ CARPE DIEM ! Brian !

May 14th, 2018 03:47

A COUPLE MORE COUPLETS
orchidee said:

Aww, and I wanted to say more. I will have to say: A fine xouple of xouplets xonveyed with xlarity and no xonfusion and...... now I\'ve run out of \'x\'s, and the spell-checker\'s gone into overtime!

May 14th, 2018 03:06

A COUPLE MORE COUPLETS
orchidee said:

A fine couple of couplets, and pic M. Have we run out of \'c\'s now?!

May 14th, 2018 01:17

A COUPLE MORE COUPLETS
Goldfinch60 said:

Good couplets Michael, especially the first one - when will they ever learn.

May 14th, 2018 00:58

A NAANI
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL ~ We can learn much from Eastern Poets in both FORM & FUNCTION ! Thanks for EDUCATING ~ Yours BRIAN ~ the recent heatwave (85F+ in Essex !) together with an abundance of Rain has really coaxed the Spring Flowers (wild and cultivated) out of their seeds ! Please check my Poem for today ~ There is a lovely Spring Meadow in the video ~ Your Friend BRIAN

May 13th, 2018 03:26



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