Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



ME, A SNOB?
fuche_bu said:

mickie dees is an abbreviation for mcdonalds that we use stateside.

September 1st, 2018 19:24

ME, A SNOB?
fuche_bu said:

I ate at Mickie Dee\'s twice so my street cred is that much better. I also ate at Denny\'s once so I really know all about slumming.

September 1st, 2018 12:08

ME, A SNOB?
orchidee said:

How\'s the evening going? Miss Berles keeps asking me to enquire.

September 1st, 2018 11:30

ME, A SNOB?
dusk arising said:

You wont find me inMcDonalds when there\'s a perfectly good meal to be had in the bins round the back where one\'s fellow diners are such good company.

September 1st, 2018 10:27

ME, A SNOB?
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

You...a snob?!
I think not!

Your great sculpture reminds me of the little Italian countryside church/school that I went to when I was a child. Love it. Many fond memories.

~Laura~

September 1st, 2018 07:01

ME, A SNOB?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

DEAR UNCLE MIKE
How very nice
Please don\'t tell BRIAN
I ate a BIG MAC
T W I C E !

Very DROLL : Confession
Is good for the Soul !

Love the CHURCH why not come tomorrow (UK that is not NZ). You wil find it has changed a lot since 1960 and mostly for the BETTER !

Love & Blessings SISTER ANGELA XXXX 💖

September 1st, 2018 04:26

ME, A SNOB?
orchidee said:

So did I once, I think - or maybe more times. But I have to eat plain foods, and be fussy! A fine write and pic M.

September 1st, 2018 01:38

ME, A SNOB?
Goldfinch60 said:

I too ate in Macdonalds ONCE, that was back in the 1980s, I swore I would never go in one again, and so far so good.
Great words Michael and I do like the sculpture.

September 1st, 2018 00:32

LIMERICK No 53
orchidee said:

Ccooooeeeee! That shattered the peace of your evening? What do I want now? Erm, how\'s that evening going? Or has it gone by now?!

August 31st, 2018 14:10

LIMERICK No 53
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

Your fine limerick speaks the truth!
Love your sculptures! Nostalgic for me. They remind me of my great grandfather’s house. Thank you for sharing!

~Laura~



August 31st, 2018 10:01

LIMERICK No 53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

There was a Young Artist called EDWARDS
One MIDNIGHT was travelling BEDWARDS
He slipped on a rug
New he dont look so smug
He is wearing the CHAMBER POT ~ HEADWARDS !

GOOD MORNING ~ UNCLE STEVE Love all the LIMERICKS and the wooden Houses very BERGEN !
Please check ANGELAS Poem NEW ZEALAND WINES ~ Thanks ~ Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 💕

August 31st, 2018 05:29

LIMERICK No 53
Fay Slimm. said:

This limerick sums up what is wrong with most folk - - the \"we \" and \"them\" to their mind is no joke. Love the telling artwork too Michael.

August 31st, 2018 02:01

LIMERICK No 53
orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write an pic M. Based on a true story from recently?! Someone said too may foreigners in Spain, or somewhere.
How many berles in this limerick - Cilla Berles?

August 31st, 2018 01:53

LIMERICK No 53
dusk arising said:

Whilst trying so hard not to show it
Our chivalrous wordsmith the poet
Had stopped buying grass
It\'s a thing of my past
For indeed he\'s now known to grow it

(not bad for the spur of the moment)

August 31st, 2018 01:05

LIMERICK No 53
Goldfinch60 said:

Good limerick Michael.

The artwork amused me as soon as I saw it, my day has started well.

August 31st, 2018 00:53

THIS WORLD, THIS LIBERAL PANTHEON
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MIKE ~ Love the STRUCTURE ~ Three neat quatrains with a discernible Rhyme (and half-rhyme) pattern abxc acxb acxb In line 3 I would replace \"societies\" with \"society\" for rhyme & flow ! The subject is quasi-political but (prenez gare) it hovered on the MODERN. I interpreted it as the essence and effluent of the UK & USA main Political Parties !
Marinate in Vanity (Conservatives) Bland Piety (Socialists) Naivety & no Sanctity (Trump Republicans) Equality, Populism, Dispersal of Power, savoured with Sanity (Democrats). Love the House-Boat could you build one for Angela & I to live in Auckland Harbour ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 😉 😉

August 30th, 2018 16:36

THIS WORLD, THIS LIBERAL PANTHEON
dusk arising said:

Will common sense prevail? Are the roots of a political movement a moveable feast or cast in stone for any who wear a tie of allegiance.


August 30th, 2018 15:09

THIS WORLD, THIS LIBERAL PANTHEON
Nicholas Browning said:

Glad to see you\'re still kickin\'. Bit of old mind probing \"Hard to understand\" dramatization never hurt anyone. Politics don\'t mean much to me, but I see your point.

August 30th, 2018 04:48

THIS WORLD, THIS LIBERAL PANTHEON
orchidee said:

You in Rome or Greece? Pantheon - a Roman Temple. Parthenon - a Greek Temple?
The theme to me looks like what the world serves up to us, and its menu.
I\'m lost on the last verse. I\'ve blown a fuse thinking too much! lol.


August 30th, 2018 01:49

THIS WORLD, THIS LIBERAL PANTHEON
Goldfinch60 said:

Very clever write Michael, it needed to be read twice and like your abstract artwork there is more in it the more you read it.

August 30th, 2018 00:40

TORMENT
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks UNCLE MIKE: Your triplet accurately describes the state of my Heart knowing that on Saturday (its already 7:30 am THURSDAY here) MY BRIAN will be flying 11,500 miles away from me and I\'ll be \"Alone again Naturally\". Trouble is he is a key cog in the Science Faculty Engine and must be there : Suited & Booted on Monday @ 8am : so even all My Feminine Charms cant keep him here! However he does have an interview with the Professor of Applied Science @ Auckland University on FRIDAY : Hope springs eternal ............ ! Love the model, BRIAN likes to work in 3D. Is that your Holiday Home in Cornwall ? Love your postings ~ A Blessing : Love ANGELA XXXX

August 29th, 2018 14:44

TORMENT
Fay Slimm. said:

Oh I agree that love can be torment when its unfettered force uses no thought. Great piece of wisdom on which to ponder dear friend.

August 29th, 2018 13:59

TORMENT
orchidee said:

Miss Berles live in a house built on wood? Or built of wood? One of them log cabin things?

August 29th, 2018 11:49

TORMENT
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

A super shortie with a great piece of art!

~Laura~

August 29th, 2018 02:26

TORMENT
sylviasearcher said:

Great poem capturing the torment in unfettered love.

Did you swim around Aphrodite\'s rock before collecting your wood for the house?

August 29th, 2018 01:39

TORMENT
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. I thought this was gonna be on the theme of my singing, with that title! heehee.

August 29th, 2018 01:27

TORMENT
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Michael.

The house built on wood is not mentioned in the Bible.

August 29th, 2018 01:11

PLASTIC WASTE
onepauly said:

good enough.

August 28th, 2018 21:55

PLASTIC WASTE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks Uncle MIKE ~ We loved the poem and the tale in the sting ! ABSTRACT MICHAEL ? Because we are in NZ it screeeeeeamed FISH to both of us. At first we tough it was culled from Attenborough\'s Blue Planet ! I have called it MILFORD SOUND because it resembled (mystically) the Dolphins following our Boat (2013 for my 30th Birthday) Ive copied it and will frame it for my KITCHEN (FISH ~ OK?). Please check Angelas Poem NEW ZEALAND TRIP ~ Thanks Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 💕💕

August 28th, 2018 15:22

PLASTIC WASTE
orchidee said:

Miss Berles got any credit cards? And why does she always have to interfere?! lol.

August 28th, 2018 07:27



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