Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
THE SILENCE BROKEN
Pintu Mahakul said:
Septolet style of writing poem is definitely interesting. The canopy of green in silence motivates mind and does magic. Sometimes natural sound breaks silence but this is pleasurable. This poem is really excellently penned.
May 26th, 2018 21:47
Pintu Mahakul said:
Septolet style of writing poem is definitely interesting. The canopy of green in silence motivates mind and does magic. Sometimes natural sound breaks silence but this is pleasurable. This poem is really excellently penned.
May 26th, 2018 21:47
IN MOSS AND SWAMP
Pintu Mahakul said:
A land of mediaeval dreams is a land of purple path and this has revealed greatest joy in life through perception. A pitcher plant in mossy swamp amazes mind. This poem is really very interestingly drafted with rich imagery and we get a clear essence with great imagery. This poem is excellent poem.
May 26th, 2018 21:42
Pintu Mahakul said:
A land of mediaeval dreams is a land of purple path and this has revealed greatest joy in life through perception. A pitcher plant in mossy swamp amazes mind. This poem is really very interestingly drafted with rich imagery and we get a clear essence with great imagery. This poem is excellent poem.
May 26th, 2018 21:42
IN MOSS AND SWAMP
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MIKE ~ A Pitcher Plant is carnivorous and traps insects for food ! They are also inhabited by FAERIES ! I love mediaeval fantasy poems and this is a good example ! Your metre is impeccable and there is sufficient rhyme & half rhyme to make it smooth to both read and recite ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
May 25th, 2018 04:24
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MIKE ~ A Pitcher Plant is carnivorous and traps insects for food ! They are also inhabited by FAERIES ! I love mediaeval fantasy poems and this is a good example ! Your metre is impeccable and there is sufficient rhyme & half rhyme to make it smooth to both read and recite ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
May 25th, 2018 04:24
IN MOSS AND SWAMP
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Mediaeval - would that be around 1066? If so, I know it well. Or is that too early for it?!
May 25th, 2018 01:41
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Mediaeval - would that be around 1066? If so, I know it well. Or is that too early for it?!
May 25th, 2018 01:41
IN MOSS AND SWAMP
Goldfinch60 said:
I too have seen those faeries, beautiful to watch as was this poem to read.
May 25th, 2018 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
I too have seen those faeries, beautiful to watch as was this poem to read.
May 25th, 2018 01:12
THE SILENCE BROKEN
orchidee said:
CCOOOEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! (shouts in capitals). My version of \'The Silence Broken\'. Very short poem of one word there. Hope it\'s not plagi-wotsit, you know, that long word that sounds like \'plague\'
May 24th, 2018 10:28
orchidee said:
CCOOOEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! (shouts in capitals). My version of \'The Silence Broken\'. Very short poem of one word there. Hope it\'s not plagi-wotsit, you know, that long word that sounds like \'plague\'
May 24th, 2018 10:28
THE SILENCE BROKEN
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Thank you for another awesome cartoon! I must admit, I didn’t know much about the characters! I’m really enjoying them along with the Septolet!
~Laura~
May 24th, 2018 09:00
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Thank you for another awesome cartoon! I must admit, I didn’t know much about the characters! I’m really enjoying them along with the Septolet!
~Laura~
May 24th, 2018 09:00
THE SILENCE BROKEN
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ great septolet and another classic Barrington ~ I did find the LADYBIRD ~ in vertical mode bt Barrington\'s right foot ~ is there a PRIZE (I prefer Rose d\'Anjou !) Yours BRIAN !
May 24th, 2018 05:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ great septolet and another classic Barrington ~ I did find the LADYBIRD ~ in vertical mode bt Barrington\'s right foot ~ is there a PRIZE (I prefer Rose d\'Anjou !) Yours BRIAN !
May 24th, 2018 05:47
THE SILENCE BROKEN
dusk arising said:
Im not a fan of arithmetic layouts for verse but today yours transcends any such negative overview i may have.
So easily i form my minds picture, a really nice scene it is too.
May 24th, 2018 05:21
dusk arising said:
Im not a fan of arithmetic layouts for verse but today yours transcends any such negative overview i may have.
So easily i form my minds picture, a really nice scene it is too.
May 24th, 2018 05:21
THE SILENCE BROKEN
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Michael.
\"The Bells! The Bells!\"
May 24th, 2018 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Michael.
\"The Bells! The Bells!\"
May 24th, 2018 01:04
OBSERVATIONS MADE DURING THE CUTTING OF TOE NAILS
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
This posting is definitely
appropriate for a BELLY
laugh! Lol
It’s hilarious!🤣
Enjoyed it!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
May 23rd, 2018 15:36
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
This posting is definitely
appropriate for a BELLY
laugh! Lol
It’s hilarious!🤣
Enjoyed it!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
May 23rd, 2018 15:36
OBSERVATIONS MADE DURING THE CUTTING OF TOE NAILS
dusk arising said:
What a snip! My belly has been an object in the way of such activity for some time.
May 23rd, 2018 07:46
dusk arising said:
What a snip! My belly has been an object in the way of such activity for some time.
May 23rd, 2018 07:46
OBSERVATIONS MADE DURING THE CUTTING OF TOE NAILS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ For the Barrington & The Bunions ! I\'m still growing and (so far) i can still touch my TOES ~ cut my TOE NAILS and massage my FEET with e-cream ! I miss ANGELA she is a qualified REFLEXOLOGIST (30 seconds to escape from a straight-jacket handcuffed !) Thanks for the warning ! Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my OCTOPUSSY ~ Thanks B
May 23rd, 2018 04:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ For the Barrington & The Bunions ! I\'m still growing and (so far) i can still touch my TOES ~ cut my TOE NAILS and massage my FEET with e-cream ! I miss ANGELA she is a qualified REFLEXOLOGIST (30 seconds to escape from a straight-jacket handcuffed !) Thanks for the warning ! Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my OCTOPUSSY ~ Thanks B
May 23rd, 2018 04:18
OBSERVATIONS MADE DURING THE CUTTING OF TOE NAILS
Poetic Dan said:
Hahaha, I\'ll remember to keep up my flexibility!
May 23rd, 2018 01:52
Poetic Dan said:
Hahaha, I\'ll remember to keep up my flexibility!
May 23rd, 2018 01:52
OBSERVATIONS MADE DURING THE CUTTING OF TOE NAILS
orchidee said:
Oh lol, a fine write and pic Michael.
May 23rd, 2018 01:27
orchidee said:
Oh lol, a fine write and pic Michael.
May 23rd, 2018 01:27
OBSERVATIONS MADE DURING THE CUTTING OF TOE NAILS
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true write Michael, trying to put socks on can be hard as well, luckily in this hot weather no socks are needed with sandals.
May 23rd, 2018 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true write Michael, trying to put socks on can be hard as well, luckily in this hot weather no socks are needed with sandals.
May 23rd, 2018 00:27
A PAIR OF SOCK COUPLETS
dusk arising said:
My damaged lower legs
are such an awful sight
i\'m loathe to expose them
in even darkest of night
for i\'m an exception
to your sartorial rules
lest i attract unwanted attention
from hoi polloi fools
May 22nd, 2018 10:25
dusk arising said:
My damaged lower legs
are such an awful sight
i\'m loathe to expose them
in even darkest of night
for i\'m an exception
to your sartorial rules
lest i attract unwanted attention
from hoi polloi fools
May 22nd, 2018 10:25
THE LADY DRESSED IN BLACK
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Exquisite painting and verse!
It is sad and frustrating losing a loved one when least expected! No matter how many times we visit their grave, there’s always a void...a constant void that gnaws at me!
~Laura~
May 22nd, 2018 10:13
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Exquisite painting and verse!
It is sad and frustrating losing a loved one when least expected! No matter how many times we visit their grave, there’s always a void...a constant void that gnaws at me!
~Laura~
May 22nd, 2018 10:13
A PAIR OF SOCK COUPLETS
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Love the gnomes! Fun fun!
Your couplets ring true! That faux pas was rectified when he married me! Lol
~Laura~
May 22nd, 2018 09:46
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Love the gnomes! Fun fun!
Your couplets ring true! That faux pas was rectified when he married me! Lol
~Laura~
May 22nd, 2018 09:46
A PAIR OF SOCK COUPLETS
orchidee said:
Now - \'Great minds think alike\'. I also heard: \'Small things amuse small minds\'! No names, no pack drill! heehee.
May 22nd, 2018 08:03
orchidee said:
Now - \'Great minds think alike\'. I also heard: \'Small things amuse small minds\'! No names, no pack drill! heehee.
May 22nd, 2018 08:03
A PAIR OF SOCK COUPLETS
MrNobody40 said:
My wife often reminds me of it with our son when getting him dressed. No socks since he\'s wearing his sandals.
May 22nd, 2018 05:43
MrNobody40 said:
My wife often reminds me of it with our son when getting him dressed. No socks since he\'s wearing his sandals.
May 22nd, 2018 05:43
A PAIR OF SOCK COUPLETS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Socks come in PAIRS
The law declares
So what a shock
TO find in MY SOCK DRAWER
A SINGLE SOCK !
Thanks MICHAEL ~ very droll ~ also love the reprise of BARRINGTON
Another reason why I believe the Female of the species (FEMO SAPIENSSE) is much more superior to the Male ~ is summer dress ~ ALL Ladies manage to look stunning (Especial Ladies Day @ the races !) and Ladies are even more beautiful AL NUDO ! men in SUMMER TRIBAL COSTUME all manage to look like merde ! Thanks BRIAN !
Please check \"GIVE THANKS\" and please add a POEM to FUSION ~ HOLIDAYS Offer closes in 15 days ~ B !
May 22nd, 2018 04:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Socks come in PAIRS
The law declares
So what a shock
TO find in MY SOCK DRAWER
A SINGLE SOCK !
Thanks MICHAEL ~ very droll ~ also love the reprise of BARRINGTON
Another reason why I believe the Female of the species (FEMO SAPIENSSE) is much more superior to the Male ~ is summer dress ~ ALL Ladies manage to look stunning (Especial Ladies Day @ the races !) and Ladies are even more beautiful AL NUDO ! men in SUMMER TRIBAL COSTUME all manage to look like merde ! Thanks BRIAN !
Please check \"GIVE THANKS\" and please add a POEM to FUSION ~ HOLIDAYS Offer closes in 15 days ~ B !
May 22nd, 2018 04:03
A PAIR OF SOCK COUPLETS
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, strangely my wife and I were talking about this yesterday.
May 22nd, 2018 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, strangely my wife and I were talking about this yesterday.
May 22nd, 2018 02:00
THE LADY DRESSED IN BLACK
Fay Slimm. said:
The picture expresses the depth in such poignant poetic lines Michael -
- - -leaving a real sense of loss and described with simplicity.
May 21st, 2018 13:29
Fay Slimm. said:
The picture expresses the depth in such poignant poetic lines Michael -
- - -leaving a real sense of loss and described with simplicity.
May 21st, 2018 13:29
THE LADY DRESSED IN BLACK
dusk arising said:
Bloody graffiti artists get everywhere! Even showing up in your poetry now!
Whatever next, writing on marble statuary, you cant leave a statue anywhere these days.
May 21st, 2018 10:58
dusk arising said:
Bloody graffiti artists get everywhere! Even showing up in your poetry now!
Whatever next, writing on marble statuary, you cant leave a statue anywhere these days.
May 21st, 2018 10:58
THE LADY DRESSED IN BLACK
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for an awesome Poeme Noire and a haunting Abstract. I presume she died in a plane crash ~ which is abstractly pictured in the painting as orientated. To me that\'s the most untimely death of all (our Prayers are with Cuba) and it does lead to hauntings as there is no time to say GOODBYE ! Thanks for scaring ~ BRIAN
May 21st, 2018 03:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for an awesome Poeme Noire and a haunting Abstract. I presume she died in a plane crash ~ which is abstractly pictured in the painting as orientated. To me that\'s the most untimely death of all (our Prayers are with Cuba) and it does lead to hauntings as there is no time to say GOODBYE ! Thanks for scaring ~ BRIAN
May 21st, 2018 03:40
THE LADY DRESSED IN BLACK
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. I didn\'t see her, dressed in her black. Why not? Well, she was in a coal shed at midnight! Dunno why she was there, but it was somewhat dark then!
May 21st, 2018 01:54
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. I didn\'t see her, dressed in her black. Why not? Well, she was in a coal shed at midnight! Dunno why she was there, but it was somewhat dark then!
May 21st, 2018 01:54
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