Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
LANTURNES BY THREE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE for lighting the LANTURNES for us today ~ Lovely form ~ lovely trio !
Adam was a silly man
He gets no pardoner
Cos he was a GARDENER
He should have known
Life of a LEAF in the Fall is brief !
Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN !
Please check A RAINBOW VALLEY
May 5th, 2018 08:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE for lighting the LANTURNES for us today ~ Lovely form ~ lovely trio !
Adam was a silly man
He gets no pardoner
Cos he was a GARDENER
He should have known
Life of a LEAF in the Fall is brief !
Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN !
Please check A RAINBOW VALLEY
May 5th, 2018 08:42
LANTURNES BY THREE
Accidental Poet said:
Love the verse and sculpture Michael. I\'d take the wood version over the bronze and not because it was less $$. I believe it to be worth more as the original piece.
May 5th, 2018 08:36
Accidental Poet said:
Love the verse and sculpture Michael. I\'d take the wood version over the bronze and not because it was less $$. I believe it to be worth more as the original piece.
May 5th, 2018 08:36
LANTURNES BY THREE
Lorna said:
Wow ... and your 2nd verse and your sculpture are perfect together..........
May 5th, 2018 07:29
Lorna said:
Wow ... and your 2nd verse and your sculpture are perfect together..........
May 5th, 2018 07:29
LANTURNES BY THREE
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Or in one case, in no poetic form:
A shower of incense at church
Covered us in a cloud
Couldn\'t see a thing
Brought on an asthma attack
For some poor soul
Sitting too near the front
And got the full blast of the incense!
May 5th, 2018 01:41
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Or in one case, in no poetic form:
A shower of incense at church
Covered us in a cloud
Couldn\'t see a thing
Brought on an asthma attack
For some poor soul
Sitting too near the front
And got the full blast of the incense!
May 5th, 2018 01:41
LANTURNES BY THREE
Laura🌻 said:
A
bouquet
of flowers
to wake up your
nose.
Black
liquid
in a well,
dip the feather
pen.
Eve
always
there to keep
him warm with a
smile!
~~~~~~~~~~~
Michael,
I love that sculpture and the write! I thought of three of my own. I hope they can keep yours company!
~Laura~
May 5th, 2018 01:25
Laura🌻 said:
A
bouquet
of flowers
to wake up your
nose.
Black
liquid
in a well,
dip the feather
pen.
Eve
always
there to keep
him warm with a
smile!
~~~~~~~~~~~
Michael,
I love that sculpture and the write! I thought of three of my own. I hope they can keep yours company!
~Laura~
May 5th, 2018 01:25
RESTITUTION
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ nice poem ~ nice structure (flexible ?) ~ nice subject ~ RESTITUTION ! I love \"rhyming couplets\" because I\'m a PP (Performance Poet) and I used them in my DODECET (6 RC\'s mainly in iambic pentameter) Syllabi rule OK ~ Many of our MPS Family find Syllable counts in poems difficult and I do get sent some otherwise excellent poems to syllabise ! THE CON-VERSE structure has both a syllabus pattern and a rhyme pattern ~ which in my \"classical book\" makes it a PROPER POEM ~ OK !
Thanks for educating ~ Yours BRIAN \"A Form poet !\"
May 4th, 2018 16:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ nice poem ~ nice structure (flexible ?) ~ nice subject ~ RESTITUTION ! I love \"rhyming couplets\" because I\'m a PP (Performance Poet) and I used them in my DODECET (6 RC\'s mainly in iambic pentameter) Syllabi rule OK ~ Many of our MPS Family find Syllable counts in poems difficult and I do get sent some otherwise excellent poems to syllabise ! THE CON-VERSE structure has both a syllabus pattern and a rhyme pattern ~ which in my \"classical book\" makes it a PROPER POEM ~ OK !
Thanks for educating ~ Yours BRIAN \"A Form poet !\"
May 4th, 2018 16:03
RESTITUTION
Christina8 said:
Always love to see your poems in new forms. And pictures from your garden!
May 4th, 2018 12:02
Christina8 said:
Always love to see your poems in new forms. And pictures from your garden!
May 4th, 2018 12:02
RESTITUTION
orchidee said:
Ms Berles been helping again?! A fine write and pic Michael.
May 4th, 2018 09:48
orchidee said:
Ms Berles been helping again?! A fine write and pic Michael.
May 4th, 2018 09:48
RESTITUTION
Lorna said:
Terrific short pictures Michael! Says so much in so little....... and I love your Forget Me Nots (I think that\'s what I\'m seeing)........
May 4th, 2018 05:08
Lorna said:
Terrific short pictures Michael! Says so much in so little....... and I love your Forget Me Nots (I think that\'s what I\'m seeing)........
May 4th, 2018 05:08
RESTITUTION
Birddie Jane said:
I am taking a screen shot of this and making it my screen saver.... Bravo
May 4th, 2018 02:02
Birddie Jane said:
I am taking a screen shot of this and making it my screen saver.... Bravo
May 4th, 2018 02:02
WORDS
ron parrish aka wordman said:
words written or spoken will be with someone for eternity
May 3rd, 2018 23:37
ron parrish aka wordman said:
words written or spoken will be with someone for eternity
May 3rd, 2018 23:37
WORDS
FineB said:
A wonderful vivid and superb write Michael on Words and their power.
Keep writing
FineB
May 3rd, 2018 13:39
FineB said:
A wonderful vivid and superb write Michael on Words and their power.
Keep writing
FineB
May 3rd, 2018 13:39
WORDS
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
An impressive write! I’m fascinated by words! As an English language learner, I’m always curious about words and their usage!
Beautiful red tulips! Great pic of them! They look very velvety!
~Laura~
May 3rd, 2018 09:48
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
An impressive write! I’m fascinated by words! As an English language learner, I’m always curious about words and their usage!
Beautiful red tulips! Great pic of them! They look very velvety!
~Laura~
May 3rd, 2018 09:48
WORDS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MIKE ~ The pen has always (ad ultimatum) been mightier than the sword ! I love the ultimate definition of MODERN POETRY ~ and the are many examples on MPS !
MODERN POETRY ~ is just WORDS
any WORDS in any ORDER !
Generally without RHYME and ~
often without REASON !
Thanks for posting ~ Love WORDS
Love TULIPS ~ Yours BRIAN
Please check my Internal Organs ~ I will
post a MODERN POEM ~ tomorrow !
May 3rd, 2018 06:13
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MIKE ~ The pen has always (ad ultimatum) been mightier than the sword ! I love the ultimate definition of MODERN POETRY ~ and the are many examples on MPS !
MODERN POETRY ~ is just WORDS
any WORDS in any ORDER !
Generally without RHYME and ~
often without REASON !
Thanks for posting ~ Love WORDS
Love TULIPS ~ Yours BRIAN
Please check my Internal Organs ~ I will
post a MODERN POEM ~ tomorrow !
May 3rd, 2018 06:13
ONCE HONED
Fay Slimm. said:
Just caught up with this deep and meaningful write Micheal - sorry hear about you and yours being rained on so much during your break - Norfolk can be beautiful when the sun favours the days - -still you were all together as a happy family and celebrating a special birthday with moments to treasure no doubt - good to have your work back again with this piece which shows such wise perception of time\'s gift to family elders. Great read.
May 3rd, 2018 02:11
Fay Slimm. said:
Just caught up with this deep and meaningful write Micheal - sorry hear about you and yours being rained on so much during your break - Norfolk can be beautiful when the sun favours the days - -still you were all together as a happy family and celebrating a special birthday with moments to treasure no doubt - good to have your work back again with this piece which shows such wise perception of time\'s gift to family elders. Great read.
May 3rd, 2018 02:11
WORDS
Goldfinch60 said:
Words are so important in our lives, they can be so powerful both for good and evil. Good write Michael.
May 3rd, 2018 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Words are so important in our lives, they can be so powerful both for good and evil. Good write Michael.
May 3rd, 2018 00:39
ONCE HONED
Lorna said:
Such a great message! You got rained on..... but at least someone else made the bed and cooked the meals! Welcome back.
May 2nd, 2018 09:36
Lorna said:
Such a great message! You got rained on..... but at least someone else made the bed and cooked the meals! Welcome back.
May 2nd, 2018 09:36
ONCE HONED
Laura🌻 said:
Hi, Michael! Glad you’re back!
Andy really honed in to the message conveyed in your poem! A great write and beautiful pic!
~Laura~
May 2nd, 2018 08:05
Laura🌻 said:
Hi, Michael! Glad you’re back!
Andy really honed in to the message conveyed in your poem! A great write and beautiful pic!
~Laura~
May 2nd, 2018 08:05
ONCE HONED
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the Violets ~ very Springy ! Thanks for a very thoughtful poem ~ I\'m 35 this year so I can look back ~ nostalgically ~ but also forward and your Poem give me hope for the future ! Nice to have a \"MICHEAL\" to ponder on at work today ! Yours BRIAN
May 2nd, 2018 03:25
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the Violets ~ very Springy ! Thanks for a very thoughtful poem ~ I\'m 35 this year so I can look back ~ nostalgically ~ but also forward and your Poem give me hope for the future ! Nice to have a \"MICHEAL\" to ponder on at work today ! Yours BRIAN
May 2nd, 2018 03:25
ONCE HONED
orchidee said:
I\'ll threaten to sing this! heehee. It reads rather melodically! That will blunt one\'s blade! A fine write M.
May 2nd, 2018 01:50
orchidee said:
I\'ll threaten to sing this! heehee. It reads rather melodically! That will blunt one\'s blade! A fine write M.
May 2nd, 2018 01:50
ONCE HONED
Goldfinch60 said:
Those blunted blades when sharpened can cut through the sorrow of life into a glorious future.
Good write Michael.
May 2nd, 2018 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Those blunted blades when sharpened can cut through the sorrow of life into a glorious future.
Good write Michael.
May 2nd, 2018 00:41
LIMERICK No54
FineB said:
Thank you Michael!
That was good! It has cheered me up on this wet and miserable day outside.
Keep writing
FineB
April 27th, 2018 07:20
FineB said:
Thank you Michael!
That was good! It has cheered me up on this wet and miserable day outside.
Keep writing
FineB
April 27th, 2018 07:20
LIMERICK No54
kitcat said:
Loved it Michael Great poem thought it so funny Brilliant humour Loved the pic too
April 26th, 2018 15:08
kitcat said:
Loved it Michael Great poem thought it so funny Brilliant humour Loved the pic too
April 26th, 2018 15:08
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