Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
THE FLY
orchidee said:
Oh lol good write Michael. We swat flies, but I read they only live 3 weeks anyway.
August 7th, 2018 01:41
orchidee said:
Oh lol good write Michael. We swat flies, but I read they only live 3 weeks anyway.
August 7th, 2018 01:41
THE FLY
Goldfinch60 said:
You\'re down on the floor
No longer a thriller
Your life is no more
Extinct by fly killer.
August 7th, 2018 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
You\'re down on the floor
No longer a thriller
Your life is no more
Extinct by fly killer.
August 7th, 2018 01:13
SPIRITS NOW ENTWINED
Heartwriter said:
The words helped make it a favorite. Those flowers forced it so. My favorite of all flowers in a planter. Loved it.
August 6th, 2018 16:27
Heartwriter said:
The words helped make it a favorite. Those flowers forced it so. My favorite of all flowers in a planter. Loved it.
August 6th, 2018 16:27
SPIRITS NOW ENTWINED
MendedFences27 said:
Who knows where true love is to be found? Watching a bee-hive seems now, to be a honey of a spot. And the sweetness will remain , forever.
Terrific poem Michael.
August 6th, 2018 14:43
MendedFences27 said:
Who knows where true love is to be found? Watching a bee-hive seems now, to be a honey of a spot. And the sweetness will remain , forever.
Terrific poem Michael.
August 6th, 2018 14:43
SPIRITS NOW ENTWINED
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MIKE ~ New Love is a very powerful force and it can be dangerous to those betrothed ! I fall in Love every day ~ BUT ~ My love for Angela is so powerful (despite being separated by 11,500 miles for at least a YEAR) that I never act on impulse. Also some of Angela\'s Best Mates work at My College ~ so BIG SISTER is watching ME ! Love PLANTERS my MUM has many which I have water to water when they are on Hols. Thanks for sharing BRIAN
August 6th, 2018 11:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MIKE ~ New Love is a very powerful force and it can be dangerous to those betrothed ! I fall in Love every day ~ BUT ~ My love for Angela is so powerful (despite being separated by 11,500 miles for at least a YEAR) that I never act on impulse. Also some of Angela\'s Best Mates work at My College ~ so BIG SISTER is watching ME ! Love PLANTERS my MUM has many which I have water to water when they are on Hols. Thanks for sharing BRIAN
August 6th, 2018 11:30
SPIRITS NOW ENTWINED
orchidee said:
That snapping of twigs might make me swoon! A fine write and pic Michael.
August 6th, 2018 01:24
orchidee said:
That snapping of twigs might make me swoon! A fine write and pic Michael.
August 6th, 2018 01:24
SPIRITS NOW ENTWINED
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful lovelorn write. May their Spirits entwine for eternity.
August 6th, 2018 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful lovelorn write. May their Spirits entwine for eternity.
August 6th, 2018 01:08
SPIRITS NOW ENTWINED
dusk arising said:
Eyyup lad, i\'m off t\'woods to snap a twig underfoot. Appen as i\'m feelin lucky (wink wink).
This is you at your best ME in classical form and metaphor.
August 6th, 2018 01:08
dusk arising said:
Eyyup lad, i\'m off t\'woods to snap a twig underfoot. Appen as i\'m feelin lucky (wink wink).
This is you at your best ME in classical form and metaphor.
August 6th, 2018 01:08
SARTORIAL INELEGANCIES (3)
orchidee said:
How\'s that evening? You got a tie on this evening there?! None of those nice flowers are wearing ties!
August 5th, 2018 11:31
orchidee said:
How\'s that evening? You got a tie on this evening there?! None of those nice flowers are wearing ties!
August 5th, 2018 11:31
SARTORIAL INELEGANCIES (3)
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
A beautiful splash of colors those flowers do make! Are they all planted in one pot?
A fine short sartorial write to which I agree!
~Laura~
August 5th, 2018 08:40
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
A beautiful splash of colors those flowers do make! Are they all planted in one pot?
A fine short sartorial write to which I agree!
~Laura~
August 5th, 2018 08:40
SARTORIAL INELEGANCIES (3)
dusk arising said:
Crikey yes ties i remember those.
August 5th, 2018 08:35
dusk arising said:
Crikey yes ties i remember those.
August 5th, 2018 08:35
SARTORIAL INELEGANCIES (3)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhhhhhh MISTER EDWARDS ~ The ubiquitous TIE ~ I have over 50 for all my Clubs & Societies ! I can turn up naked provided I\'m wearing the right Kipper Tie and it covers my Tackle !
They threw Him from the Nudist Club
And here\'s the reason WHY
Because He turned up on parade
Wearing His Old School Tie !
I\'m what the Americans call a GREETER @ Church today. So despite the Weather I am booted & suited ~ Van Heuston long sleeved Shirt (broad blue stripe) and a Blue Royal Society of Chemistry (A very Spiritual Organisation !) TIE ~ just hitting the waistline. At work (remember that !) I always wear a tie for Meetings ~ Interviews ~ Formal Dinners (A Bow Tie if I am Chef de Rang) and if I visit other Colleges as a MODERATOR etc etc. So on balance I am still a TIEMAN for 50% of the time. An interesting SUBJECT ~ My Sister always buys me a TIE @ Christmas one of which plays JINGLE BELLS when least expected ~ SUCH FUN. Thanks for sharing ~ love the Flowers ~ I have some Ties like that that my Granddad wore in the 60\'s FLOWER POWER ! Every blessing ~ BRIAN TIEMAN !
August 5th, 2018 04:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhhhhhh MISTER EDWARDS ~ The ubiquitous TIE ~ I have over 50 for all my Clubs & Societies ! I can turn up naked provided I\'m wearing the right Kipper Tie and it covers my Tackle !
They threw Him from the Nudist Club
And here\'s the reason WHY
Because He turned up on parade
Wearing His Old School Tie !
I\'m what the Americans call a GREETER @ Church today. So despite the Weather I am booted & suited ~ Van Heuston long sleeved Shirt (broad blue stripe) and a Blue Royal Society of Chemistry (A very Spiritual Organisation !) TIE ~ just hitting the waistline. At work (remember that !) I always wear a tie for Meetings ~ Interviews ~ Formal Dinners (A Bow Tie if I am Chef de Rang) and if I visit other Colleges as a MODERATOR etc etc. So on balance I am still a TIEMAN for 50% of the time. An interesting SUBJECT ~ My Sister always buys me a TIE @ Christmas one of which plays JINGLE BELLS when least expected ~ SUCH FUN. Thanks for sharing ~ love the Flowers ~ I have some Ties like that that my Granddad wore in the 60\'s FLOWER POWER ! Every blessing ~ BRIAN TIEMAN !
August 5th, 2018 04:02
SARTORIAL INELEGANCIES (3)
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. I hardly wear ties. Feel like I\'m being hanged, especially in this weather.
August 5th, 2018 01:12
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. I hardly wear ties. Feel like I\'m being hanged, especially in this weather.
August 5th, 2018 01:12
SARTORIAL INELEGANCIES (3)
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Michael. It takes a great deal of practice to get it right and it must also be dead to the braces on the occasion that you where them.
August 5th, 2018 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Michael. It takes a great deal of practice to get it right and it must also be dead to the braces on the occasion that you where them.
August 5th, 2018 00:38
PURE COMMERCE
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Back in the hood where the undesirable deals are constant...unfortunately!
Love your pic!
How’s your new computer working out?
~Laura~
August 4th, 2018 19:20
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Back in the hood where the undesirable deals are constant...unfortunately!
Love your pic!
How’s your new computer working out?
~Laura~
August 4th, 2018 19:20
PURE COMMERCE
Heartwriter said:
You describe crooked deals so well!!!! Great write.
August 4th, 2018 08:16
Heartwriter said:
You describe crooked deals so well!!!! Great write.
August 4th, 2018 08:16
PURE COMMERCE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhh Mon Ami Michael ~ Tousjours et Tousou ? C\'e la vie aujours d\'hui ! Your Friends too BRIAN et ANGELA
August 4th, 2018 05:36
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhh Mon Ami Michael ~ Tousjours et Tousou ? C\'e la vie aujours d\'hui ! Your Friends too BRIAN et ANGELA
August 4th, 2018 05:36
PURE COMMERCE
Michael Edwards said:
Probably trading in very small packets of flour - making fairy cakes?
August 4th, 2018 03:11
Michael Edwards said:
Probably trading in very small packets of flour - making fairy cakes?
August 4th, 2018 03:11
PURE COMMERCE
Goldfinch60 said:
So true and so often carried out Michael - and that is just the politicians!
August 4th, 2018 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
So true and so often carried out Michael - and that is just the politicians!
August 4th, 2018 01:08
I WRITE
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Great poem! Love this idea of shuffling words! This reminds me of the technique I’d use for the “shy” writers when I taught elementary schools! We’d call it the “word game”...not very original, but they liked it and made them write! The aim was accomplished!
Beautiful flowers!
~Laura~
August 3rd, 2018 18:05
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Great poem! Love this idea of shuffling words! This reminds me of the technique I’d use for the “shy” writers when I taught elementary schools! We’d call it the “word game”...not very original, but they liked it and made them write! The aim was accomplished!
Beautiful flowers!
~Laura~
August 3rd, 2018 18:05
I WRITE
Lorna said:
You channel your little island\'s wonderful history of words!
August 3rd, 2018 15:03
Lorna said:
You channel your little island\'s wonderful history of words!
August 3rd, 2018 15:03
I WRITE
Heartwriter said:
You always pick them up in perfect order! Thanks, Michael.
August 3rd, 2018 06:51
Heartwriter said:
You always pick them up in perfect order! Thanks, Michael.
August 3rd, 2018 06:51
I WRITE
Fay Slimm. said:
Random happenings can produce serious poetry - good thoughts here Michael - - - am now off to tumble my shelved books and see what words come up to shuffle. Great stuff again.
August 3rd, 2018 04:13
Fay Slimm. said:
Random happenings can produce serious poetry - good thoughts here Michael - - - am now off to tumble my shelved books and see what words come up to shuffle. Great stuff again.
August 3rd, 2018 04:13
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