Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



LIMERICK 57
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

There was a Young Lady from BATH
who was always game for a LAFF
Daily she grooms
In the Famous Pump Rooms
But I\'ve never seen Her
in her in her BAFF

Thanks MIKE for sharing another \"L\"
a smile for a Saturday Morning !
Angela and romping on SCYPE !
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA

June 9th, 2018 03:20

LIMERICK 57
orchidee said:

Oh lol, a good write and pic Michael. Would I know where? And should I meet her to find out where?!

June 9th, 2018 01:46

LIMERICK 57
Goldfinch60 said:

Romp away Michael, romp away.

June 9th, 2018 00:30

TWILIGHT
Christina8 said:

beautiful verse as well as pic of flowers! Nice!

June 8th, 2018 18:12

TWILIGHT
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MIKE ~ as we both know ~ noting in this life is permanent and everything fades and dies and is forgotten like the rest ! Even the BEAUTIFUL and LOVELY like the Snap Dragon and of course Princess Diana 20 years ago as we have been reminded recently ! I\'m a similar age to William & Harry so I am empathetic with them and for them ~ Yours BRIAN

June 8th, 2018 14:41

TWILIGHT
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,
What a beautiful Antirrhinum!
Love the colors that nature used to paint it. Super!

I’m so happy that you tell us the botanical names of the flowers you post! I would have to spent a lot of time researching the ones whose name I don’t know...such as this one!

Sadly, the poem reminds me of my parents...one is gone and the other slowly going! Such is life!
The bright side...
I’m grateful she is living a long life!

~Laura~


June 8th, 2018 09:53

TWILIGHT
Heartwriter said:

Beautiful poem and summed up by a lovely flower.

June 8th, 2018 08:54

TWILIGHT
Lorna said:

A sad one full of longing - a winter poem........

June 8th, 2018 07:58

TWILIGHT
MrNobody40 said:

Beautiful and sad. Thank you for sharing

June 8th, 2018 06:07

TWILIGHT
Fay Slimm. said:

Quite a depth to this moving write Michael - - and to counterbalance the poignant mood such a glorious shade of apricot-pink on that lovely self-seed.

June 8th, 2018 01:59

TWILIGHT
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Michael. You wiser now?!

June 8th, 2018 01:16

TWILIGHT
Goldfinch60 said:

Good emotive write Michael.

June 8th, 2018 00:33

PERCEPTION
SLR said:

Trump is a horrific joke come true. He was featured in cartoons decades ago as president! As a joke! I CANNOT believe they made that moron the president! He\'s practically illiterate. Have you listened to him speak when he\'s not quoting a speech he\'s memorized that someone else wrote?! America used to be great in several ways but there have been several prominent people admit that we\'ve lost a lot of what made it great. It\'s sad to think that with all the advancements we have made, this is the mess that we are leaving our children. Btw, the natives were horrendously treated and many still are. Although the government, has over time, given them certain rights and benefits to attempt to make up for stealing so much from them in the past. (Too little, too late if you ask me) I have native great grandparents and some of the stories I\'ve heard are truly horrific. You\'ve really started something this time Michael!! Lots of comments and opinions. Well, you\'ve gotten us all thinking!

June 7th, 2018 21:43

THE BOATYARD
SLR said:

I\'ve always admired the craftsmanship that goes into each boat. This is a wonderfully descriptive piece. The flowers are beautiful and exotic looking. We don\'t have those here. I usually screenshot your work (and a few of the flowers) to read (and look at) whenever I want (they\'re saved in my pics) I\'ve saved both of these! Another great post! I always make a point of checking your posts whenever I can get to MPS. Thank you for sharing your vision.

June 7th, 2018 20:24

THE BOATYARD
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL ~ Wonderful tribute to the Boat Builders. I have watched ~ small and large craft being created and there is no more mesmerising journey \"From LOG to LAUNCH\" ! Love the NIGELLAS ~ almost as BEAUTIFUL as Nigella Lawson the Kitchen Goddess! Yours BRIAN

June 7th, 2018 16:00

THE BOATYARD
Heartwriter said:

Very lovely pic. Well written. Enjoyed it.

June 7th, 2018 09:22

THE BOATYARD
Fay Slimm. said:

Boat-building described with an artist\'s flair - great read and lovely Nigella-pic Michael.

June 7th, 2018 07:35

THE BOATYARD
Lorna said:

This is such a wonderful description you could fool us into thinking it was you building the boat. Well as a craftsman you probably took it all in by osmosis.
What do you do with the seeds?

June 7th, 2018 06:25

THE BOATYARD
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,
An engaging read!
I can almost hear his humming!

Beautiful pic of the Nigella.
Do you actually use the seeds?

( Before I read the poem, I read the author comments! I thought you were talking about Nigella Lawson. Silly me...or better yet...dopey me!)

I enjoyed the whole reading experience with your write and visual!
Thank you for sharing, Maestro!

~Laura~




June 7th, 2018 03:16

THE BOATYARD
dusk arising said:

A clinker built piece today - no wait is it carvel or double diagonal?
A nocturnal chandler.... i\'m asking myself why does he work by night? Aha, his day job is accountancy.... have i lost the plot?

June 7th, 2018 01:57

THE BOATYARD
orchidee said:

A fine write Michael. He building an Ark?!

June 7th, 2018 01:36

THE BOATYARD
Goldfinch60 said:

A wonderful image of the boat being built. One of my friends used to build his own boats many years ago.

June 7th, 2018 00:44

A DREAM
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS MICHAEL ~ Now that ANGELA is in NZ ~ all I have to do to meet her @ the top of Auckland Tower is:

Dream ~ Dream ~ Dream
Dream ~ Dream ~ Dream
Whenever I need Her
And with LOVE to feed Her
All i have to do is DREAM !

Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN


June 6th, 2018 17:37

A DREAM
orchidee said:

Ahh, that explains why out tellys have not come on. We been plugging them into the sink! Hmm, never knew that before now!

June 6th, 2018 11:03

A DREAM
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,
Perfect abstract for a Dream sequence...the ones we want to go back to sleep again and continue the Dream! (Not the nightmarish ones as Lorna said)
I enjoyed the read!
Great work, Maestro!

~Laura~


June 6th, 2018 09:22

A DREAM
Lorna said:

Isn\'t it funny how in our dreams we never question what is going on but just roll along with it (unless it\'s a nightmare of course). Another magical abstract Michael!

June 6th, 2018 07:10

A DREAM
dusk arising said:

Daytimes beta brain wave patters cannot assimilate the information which passes through our brain in the theta and alpha brain patterns of our dreams. Hence, on waking, our wonderful dream, once so vivid, falls from consciousness.
Not a very poetic way of describing a dream is it? Whereas yours is simply a \'dream\' by comparison.

June 6th, 2018 06:25

A DREAM
Fay Slimm. said:

The mystery of a dream described perfectly and with poetic prowess.

June 6th, 2018 01:53

A DREAM
orchidee said:

Well, a church is having a new midweek meeting: \'Dreams interpretations evenings\'. It helps if we can remember the dream! Or else it\'s like trying to watch telly without plugging it in!

June 6th, 2018 01:47

A DREAM
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Michael. Aww, why people wish that the light of day will never hear my singing!

June 6th, 2018 01:45



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