Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
THOUGHTS OF DEATH (2)
Fay Slimm. said:
I am still giggling at your clever image - small is big to a palette like yours Mike - -- as for cloud numbers I favour the nine for drifting me into my own little paradise. Great stuff.
August 9th, 2018 16:42
Fay Slimm. said:
I am still giggling at your clever image - small is big to a palette like yours Mike - -- as for cloud numbers I favour the nine for drifting me into my own little paradise. Great stuff.
August 9th, 2018 16:42
THOUGHTS OF DEATH (2)
orchidee said:
Ma again! Thoughts of death - I\'m about to sing! lol.
August 9th, 2018 10:00
orchidee said:
Ma again! Thoughts of death - I\'m about to sing! lol.
August 9th, 2018 10:00
THOUGHTS OF DEATH (2)
Heartwriter said:
Michael if goodness gets one there. Perhaps we will pass on a cloud and share some poems written in the sky!!!!!! Great write.
August 9th, 2018 09:52
Heartwriter said:
Michael if goodness gets one there. Perhaps we will pass on a cloud and share some poems written in the sky!!!!!! Great write.
August 9th, 2018 09:52
THOUGHTS OF DEATH (2)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
A MAN lay down by a SEWER
And by that SEWER died
At the Coroners inquest
They called it SEWERSIDE !
Thanks for another Poeme de Morte ~ very droll
My COMPUTER does not have a CELESTIAL KEY
Perhaps one day it will~ a direct line to JEHOVAH !
Yours as always BRIAN.
August 9th, 2018 08:19
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
A MAN lay down by a SEWER
And by that SEWER died
At the Coroners inquest
They called it SEWERSIDE !
Thanks for another Poeme de Morte ~ very droll
My COMPUTER does not have a CELESTIAL KEY
Perhaps one day it will~ a direct line to JEHOVAH !
Yours as always BRIAN.
August 9th, 2018 08:19
THOUGHTS OF DEATH (2)
orchidee said:
Erm, I\'ve not been there (as yet) to find out! I expect it\'s as Goldie says.
Oh lol, good write and pic M.
August 9th, 2018 01:31
orchidee said:
Erm, I\'ve not been there (as yet) to find out! I expect it\'s as Goldie says.
Oh lol, good write and pic M.
August 9th, 2018 01:31
THOUGHTS OF DEATH (2)
Goldfinch60 said:
There is no need for any of these in heaven, including computers. See you there Michael.
August 9th, 2018 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
There is no need for any of these in heaven, including computers. See you there Michael.
August 9th, 2018 00:45
THOUGHTS OF DEATH (1)
Heartwriter said:
Haha! You too funny. They gonna smell it up?
August 8th, 2018 09:29
Heartwriter said:
Haha! You too funny. They gonna smell it up?
August 8th, 2018 09:29
THOUGHTS OF DEATH (1)
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Love it!
No worries...
sharing is good!
Only one thing...
let’s not forget the wine!🍷
~Laura ~
August 8th, 2018 06:05
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Love it!
No worries...
sharing is good!
Only one thing...
let’s not forget the wine!🍷
~Laura ~
August 8th, 2018 06:05
THOUGHTS OF DEATH (1)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
McTavish is dead ~ an\' his Brother don\'t know it
His Brother is dead ~ an\' McTavish don\'t know it
There\'s both o\' them dead ~ an\' they\'re in the same bed
And neither one knows that t\'other one\'s DEAD !
At the inquest they blamed CO from parafine heater !
Thanks for sharing MIKE Morbid poems often funniest
Please check my Poem today \"Dancing & Romancing\"
Yours as always BRIAN & ANGELA.
August 8th, 2018 04:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
McTavish is dead ~ an\' his Brother don\'t know it
His Brother is dead ~ an\' McTavish don\'t know it
There\'s both o\' them dead ~ an\' they\'re in the same bed
And neither one knows that t\'other one\'s DEAD !
At the inquest they blamed CO from parafine heater !
Thanks for sharing MIKE Morbid poems often funniest
Please check my Poem today \"Dancing & Romancing\"
Yours as always BRIAN & ANGELA.
August 8th, 2018 04:48
THOUGHTS OF DEATH (1)
dusk arising said:
That\'ll be a smelly place! I do so hope that you don\'t find a certain \'trump\' there as well.
August 8th, 2018 02:02
dusk arising said:
That\'ll be a smelly place! I do so hope that you don\'t find a certain \'trump\' there as well.
August 8th, 2018 02:02
THOUGHTS OF DEATH (1)
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha ha - who but you could think up an last line like that !! A smilngly good read.
August 8th, 2018 01:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha ha - who but you could think up an last line like that !! A smilngly good read.
August 8th, 2018 01:39
THOUGHTS OF DEATH (1)
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes, I will be there as well, shall we share a bottle of red or white?
August 8th, 2018 00:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes, I will be there as well, shall we share a bottle of red or white?
August 8th, 2018 00:42
THOUGHTS OF DEATH (1)
Adam Shirley said:
Love the sentence at the end, gave me quite the smile on a short poem dedicated to a dear one, my condolences. Wonderful poem.
August 8th, 2018 00:15
Adam Shirley said:
Love the sentence at the end, gave me quite the smile on a short poem dedicated to a dear one, my condolences. Wonderful poem.
August 8th, 2018 00:15
THE FLY
orchidee said:
Hey, me wife KP ( I forgot I married her) is avoiding being declared bankrupt. She spent it all on Botox!
August 7th, 2018 13:09
orchidee said:
Hey, me wife KP ( I forgot I married her) is avoiding being declared bankrupt. She spent it all on Botox!
August 7th, 2018 13:09
THE FLY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
FLIES have their place
In the ecological race
But I don\'t want one to POOP
When he lands in my SOOP
That would be crass
Soop flavoured with with frass !
Thanks again UNCLE MIKE for seasoning
MPS with a soupcon of humour
Yours appreciatively BRIAN & ANGELA
Please add a POEM to our FUSION on AFRICA ~ Thanks A & B !
Please check ANGELA\'s POEM ~ LONG WHITE CLOUD ~ Thanks
August 7th, 2018 10:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
FLIES have their place
In the ecological race
But I don\'t want one to POOP
When he lands in my SOOP
That would be crass
Soop flavoured with with frass !
Thanks again UNCLE MIKE for seasoning
MPS with a soupcon of humour
Yours appreciatively BRIAN & ANGELA
Please add a POEM to our FUSION on AFRICA ~ Thanks A & B !
Please check ANGELA\'s POEM ~ LONG WHITE CLOUD ~ Thanks
August 7th, 2018 10:48
THE FLY
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Love this little cartoon fly write! I will not shoo it away. It’s worth the save in my faves!
It reminded me of the first time I visited Pennsylvania in the USA and ate a piece of ‘shoo-fly’ pie at a Pennsylvania Dutch restaurant called ‘‘Good ‘N Plenty’’!
I was looking for the flies in the pie! To my surprise, they had all been shooed away! 🤣
Shoo-fly...shoooo
~Laura~
August 7th, 2018 08:20
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Love this little cartoon fly write! I will not shoo it away. It’s worth the save in my faves!
It reminded me of the first time I visited Pennsylvania in the USA and ate a piece of ‘shoo-fly’ pie at a Pennsylvania Dutch restaurant called ‘‘Good ‘N Plenty’’!
I was looking for the flies in the pie! To my surprise, they had all been shooed away! 🤣
Shoo-fly...shoooo
~Laura~
August 7th, 2018 08:20
THE FLY
dusk arising said:
Excellent cartoon and poem.
^^8^^ don\'t buzz round the house
when the weathers this hot
^^8^^ Mike Edwards will swipe you
he\'s bought a new \'swat\'
August 7th, 2018 05:26
dusk arising said:
Excellent cartoon and poem.
^^8^^ don\'t buzz round the house
when the weathers this hot
^^8^^ Mike Edwards will swipe you
he\'s bought a new \'swat\'
August 7th, 2018 05:26
THE FLY
Heartwriter said:
Lol! No one wants a fly bugging around. I guess they have their purpose. Just not indoors.
August 7th, 2018 05:17
Heartwriter said:
Lol! No one wants a fly bugging around. I guess they have their purpose. Just not indoors.
August 7th, 2018 05:17
THE FLY
sylviasearcher said:
I often feel sorry for flies.. I bet they wish they were birds. 🤔
August 7th, 2018 03:28
sylviasearcher said:
I often feel sorry for flies.. I bet they wish they were birds. 🤔
August 7th, 2018 03:28
THE FLY
orchidee said:
Oh lol good write Michael. We swat flies, but I read they only live 3 weeks anyway.
August 7th, 2018 01:41
orchidee said:
Oh lol good write Michael. We swat flies, but I read they only live 3 weeks anyway.
August 7th, 2018 01:41
THE FLY
Goldfinch60 said:
You\'re down on the floor
No longer a thriller
Your life is no more
Extinct by fly killer.
August 7th, 2018 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
You\'re down on the floor
No longer a thriller
Your life is no more
Extinct by fly killer.
August 7th, 2018 01:13
SPIRITS NOW ENTWINED
Heartwriter said:
The words helped make it a favorite. Those flowers forced it so. My favorite of all flowers in a planter. Loved it.
August 6th, 2018 16:27
Heartwriter said:
The words helped make it a favorite. Those flowers forced it so. My favorite of all flowers in a planter. Loved it.
August 6th, 2018 16:27
SPIRITS NOW ENTWINED
MendedFences27 said:
Who knows where true love is to be found? Watching a bee-hive seems now, to be a honey of a spot. And the sweetness will remain , forever.
Terrific poem Michael.
August 6th, 2018 14:43
MendedFences27 said:
Who knows where true love is to be found? Watching a bee-hive seems now, to be a honey of a spot. And the sweetness will remain , forever.
Terrific poem Michael.
August 6th, 2018 14:43
SPIRITS NOW ENTWINED
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MIKE ~ New Love is a very powerful force and it can be dangerous to those betrothed ! I fall in Love every day ~ BUT ~ My love for Angela is so powerful (despite being separated by 11,500 miles for at least a YEAR) that I never act on impulse. Also some of Angela\'s Best Mates work at My College ~ so BIG SISTER is watching ME ! Love PLANTERS my MUM has many which I have water to water when they are on Hols. Thanks for sharing BRIAN
August 6th, 2018 11:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MIKE ~ New Love is a very powerful force and it can be dangerous to those betrothed ! I fall in Love every day ~ BUT ~ My love for Angela is so powerful (despite being separated by 11,500 miles for at least a YEAR) that I never act on impulse. Also some of Angela\'s Best Mates work at My College ~ so BIG SISTER is watching ME ! Love PLANTERS my MUM has many which I have water to water when they are on Hols. Thanks for sharing BRIAN
August 6th, 2018 11:30
SPIRITS NOW ENTWINED
orchidee said:
That snapping of twigs might make me swoon! A fine write and pic Michael.
August 6th, 2018 01:24
orchidee said:
That snapping of twigs might make me swoon! A fine write and pic Michael.
August 6th, 2018 01:24
SPIRITS NOW ENTWINED
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful lovelorn write. May their Spirits entwine for eternity.
August 6th, 2018 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful lovelorn write. May their Spirits entwine for eternity.
August 6th, 2018 01:08
SPIRITS NOW ENTWINED
dusk arising said:
Eyyup lad, i\'m off t\'woods to snap a twig underfoot. Appen as i\'m feelin lucky (wink wink).
This is you at your best ME in classical form and metaphor.
August 6th, 2018 01:08
dusk arising said:
Eyyup lad, i\'m off t\'woods to snap a twig underfoot. Appen as i\'m feelin lucky (wink wink).
This is you at your best ME in classical form and metaphor.
August 6th, 2018 01:08
SARTORIAL INELEGANCIES (3)
orchidee said:
How\'s that evening? You got a tie on this evening there?! None of those nice flowers are wearing ties!
August 5th, 2018 11:31
orchidee said:
How\'s that evening? You got a tie on this evening there?! None of those nice flowers are wearing ties!
August 5th, 2018 11:31
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