Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
POEM - WORK IN PROGRESS
rrodriguez said:
Your first stage certainly has a form to sculp a beautiful poem. The process of writing a poem may take tme, but is worth it to produce great work.
January 31st, 2017 07:52
rrodriguez said:
Your first stage certainly has a form to sculp a beautiful poem. The process of writing a poem may take tme, but is worth it to produce great work.
January 31st, 2017 07:52
POEM - WORK IN PROGRESS
WriteBeLight said:
Very educational. Great shot of you!
January 31st, 2017 06:18
WriteBeLight said:
Very educational. Great shot of you!
January 31st, 2017 06:18
POEM - WORK IN PROGRESS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
EXCELLENT MICHAEL ~ Thanks for taking time and space to explain the \"Evolution of a Poem\" One of the problems of composing on a PC is that all the DRAFTS are deleted. When I give a talk on a POET like John Betjeman I show picture of his altered and revised MS because it demonstrates the process you describe. Betjeman\'s finished poems are honed masterpieces and a \"linguisitic and grammar model\" for any Young Poet to try to emulate. My posted poems are not perfect and I do get sent corrections ! I don\'t do it all on the PC but my paper pre-copies are all destroyed ! I look forward to your Poem ~ BRIAN. Please check my latest poem which just flowed and needed no editing ! However if I had thought about I would not have posted it ~ Trump\'s G-Men know where I live ! Thanks B
January 31st, 2017 05:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
EXCELLENT MICHAEL ~ Thanks for taking time and space to explain the \"Evolution of a Poem\" One of the problems of composing on a PC is that all the DRAFTS are deleted. When I give a talk on a POET like John Betjeman I show picture of his altered and revised MS because it demonstrates the process you describe. Betjeman\'s finished poems are honed masterpieces and a \"linguisitic and grammar model\" for any Young Poet to try to emulate. My posted poems are not perfect and I do get sent corrections ! I don\'t do it all on the PC but my paper pre-copies are all destroyed ! I look forward to your Poem ~ BRIAN. Please check my latest poem which just flowed and needed no editing ! However if I had thought about I would not have posted it ~ Trump\'s G-Men know where I live ! Thanks B
January 31st, 2017 05:10
SHE DREAMS
Fay Slimm. said:
Am so pleased to have caught these two little gems - a wonderful start to my time on line today - the read swept me away and as for the watercolour - you are so talented Michael. Keep up the good work.
January 31st, 2017 03:18
Fay Slimm. said:
Am so pleased to have caught these two little gems - a wonderful start to my time on line today - the read swept me away and as for the watercolour - you are so talented Michael. Keep up the good work.
January 31st, 2017 03:18
LIMERICKS 4 5 & 6
janetaylor said:
ha ha :0) oh my gosh i have to tell the last one to my husband. his middle name is eccles and his business partner calls him eccles. thanks for creating smiles and i adore the painting!
January 30th, 2017 15:15
janetaylor said:
ha ha :0) oh my gosh i have to tell the last one to my husband. his middle name is eccles and his business partner calls him eccles. thanks for creating smiles and i adore the painting!
January 30th, 2017 15:15
LIMERICKS 4 5 & 6
Christina8 said:
Wonderful limericks! I echo in what Kathy said in that you do have a way with words! Nice abstract! Work of art!
January 30th, 2017 11:46
Christina8 said:
Wonderful limericks! I echo in what Kathy said in that you do have a way with words! Nice abstract! Work of art!
January 30th, 2017 11:46
SHE DREAMS
janetaylor said:
this absolutely mesmerized me.....had to read it again and again....one of my favorites posted on the net. bravo! encore!
January 29th, 2017 12:58
janetaylor said:
this absolutely mesmerized me.....had to read it again and again....one of my favorites posted on the net. bravo! encore!
January 29th, 2017 12:58
THE VICTIM
janetaylor said:
superbly created and carefully crafted words.....the painting is beautiful! i love the feelings you bring alive in your art!
January 29th, 2017 12:57
janetaylor said:
superbly created and carefully crafted words.....the painting is beautiful! i love the feelings you bring alive in your art!
January 29th, 2017 12:57
SHE DREAMS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Beautiful Painting ~ Beautiful Dream ~ Beautiful Poem ~ Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN.
January 29th, 2017 11:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Beautiful Painting ~ Beautiful Dream ~ Beautiful Poem ~ Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN.
January 29th, 2017 11:47
SHE DREAMS
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Painting and pastel poem wow great combination here in vivid evocative freeverse. Your word choice is elegant and very poetic. Kudos.
Pls do comment on my latest poem too, u r most welcome to. Even one line will do.
January 29th, 2017 03:44
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Painting and pastel poem wow great combination here in vivid evocative freeverse. Your word choice is elegant and very poetic. Kudos.
Pls do comment on my latest poem too, u r most welcome to. Even one line will do.
January 29th, 2017 03:44
AND STILL THE CANDLE BURNED
janetaylor said:
wow! just wow! i was blown away.
January 28th, 2017 10:30
janetaylor said:
wow! just wow! i was blown away.
January 28th, 2017 10:30
SQUATER\'S RIGHTS
mammyo3 said:
I live in a house with all boys and my husband and thankfully I trained them early on to close the lida as well due to ecoli and other germs that can go through the air on flushing. Truth be told if I find it up I just put it down as I know how it works lol
January 28th, 2017 10:08
mammyo3 said:
I live in a house with all boys and my husband and thankfully I trained them early on to close the lida as well due to ecoli and other germs that can go through the air on flushing. Truth be told if I find it up I just put it down as I know how it works lol
January 28th, 2017 10:08
SQUATER\'S RIGHTS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhhh MICHAEL ~ I did not expect a LAVATORIAL JOKE from you ! It is just another YIN & YANG situation of the \"ups and downs\" of life. Men always want a bigger target to aim at ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN There was always tension in the local CONVENT if they found the SEAT UP ! Thanks for another excellent painting ~ too good for the LOO WALL !
January 28th, 2017 08:50
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhhh MICHAEL ~ I did not expect a LAVATORIAL JOKE from you ! It is just another YIN & YANG situation of the \"ups and downs\" of life. Men always want a bigger target to aim at ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN There was always tension in the local CONVENT if they found the SEAT UP ! Thanks for another excellent painting ~ too good for the LOO WALL !
January 28th, 2017 08:50
SQUATER\'S RIGHTS
WriteBeLight said:
Ha Ha you men! Complaining about the seat again! Very entertaining Michael! Nice painting as well. Excellent title!
January 28th, 2017 08:10
WriteBeLight said:
Ha Ha you men! Complaining about the seat again! Very entertaining Michael! Nice painting as well. Excellent title!
January 28th, 2017 08:10
SQUATER\'S RIGHTS
P.H.Rose said:
Ha ha love this
Michael.....
So the time honoured
Tradition of leaving
The seat up is not
just confined to
My house....
Brilliant....
January 28th, 2017 07:18
P.H.Rose said:
Ha ha love this
Michael.....
So the time honoured
Tradition of leaving
The seat up is not
just confined to
My house....
Brilliant....
January 28th, 2017 07:18
SQUATER\'S RIGHTS
Michael Edwards said:
Thanks Pintu - It\'s interesting to note that it\'s only the women who complain about it being left raised - you never hear men complaining about it being left down. But then there is no written law about it to say which is the correct position :0)
January 28th, 2017 01:55
Michael Edwards said:
Thanks Pintu - It\'s interesting to note that it\'s only the women who complain about it being left raised - you never hear men complaining about it being left down. But then there is no written law about it to say which is the correct position :0)
January 28th, 2017 01:55
SQUATER\'S RIGHTS
Pintu Mahakul said:
I am always telling you and you guess this very well. No matter what the time of day the correct position is raised my dear. This poem is wise and very interesting.
January 28th, 2017 01:12
Pintu Mahakul said:
I am always telling you and you guess this very well. No matter what the time of day the correct position is raised my dear. This poem is wise and very interesting.
January 28th, 2017 01:12
THE VICTIM
Augustus said:
Oh, that just makes my blood boil when that happens. Nice write.
January 27th, 2017 12:50
Augustus said:
Oh, that just makes my blood boil when that happens. Nice write.
January 27th, 2017 12:50
THE VICTIM
WriteBeLight said:
I see a ghost haunting. Nice job on the poem and painting!
January 27th, 2017 09:52
WriteBeLight said:
I see a ghost haunting. Nice job on the poem and painting!
January 27th, 2017 09:52
THE VICTIM
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for picture and words - - your verse bring tears to the eyes Michael and as for that watercolour - well - Wow - superb.
January 27th, 2017 04:00
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for picture and words - - your verse bring tears to the eyes Michael and as for that watercolour - well - Wow - superb.
January 27th, 2017 04:00
AND STILL THE CANDLE BURNED
P.H.Rose said:
Just superb sir
Absolutely superb...
January 26th, 2017 19:56
P.H.Rose said:
Just superb sir
Absolutely superb...
January 26th, 2017 19:56
AND STILL THE CANDLE BURNED
Christina8 said:
A beautiful painting and a wonderful poem. Love the last stanza!
January 26th, 2017 08:24
Christina8 said:
A beautiful painting and a wonderful poem. Love the last stanza!
January 26th, 2017 08:24
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