Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
THE MUSIC OF THE SEA
Fay Slimm. said:
I love the feel and flow of this oceanic rhyme Michael - Also the watery-blue look of the beautiful painting of course.
April 17th, 2017 06:43
Fay Slimm. said:
I love the feel and flow of this oceanic rhyme Michael - Also the watery-blue look of the beautiful painting of course.
April 17th, 2017 06:43
THE MUSIC OF THE SEA
WriteBeLight said:
Such a lovely poem Michael and beautiful painting. You have caught the power and serenity of the sea so very well.
April 17th, 2017 06:31
WriteBeLight said:
Such a lovely poem Michael and beautiful painting. You have caught the power and serenity of the sea so very well.
April 17th, 2017 06:31
THE MUSIC OF THE SEA
Garry said:
Great write.vivid images. Particularly the last two lines.
April 17th, 2017 03:25
Garry said:
Great write.vivid images. Particularly the last two lines.
April 17th, 2017 03:25
THE MUSIC OF THE SEA
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, the symphony of the sea can be wonderful.
Like the artwork.
April 17th, 2017 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, the symphony of the sea can be wonderful.
Like the artwork.
April 17th, 2017 00:57
ARRIVAL
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SPRING MICHAEL ~ Is the FIRST SEASON and always will be # that uis why it is so so important. Someone took a photograph everyday of a Garden during SPRING (92 DAYS) He was amazed how much the pictures changed each day ~ no other Season is like this ~ change but no decay ~ just new life. Spring is the most Spiritual Month which is why the Christian Church chose SPRING to celebrate EASTER as a movable feast. The Council of Nicea (325 BC) decreed that EASTER DAY (Ressurection) should be on a SUNDAY and the CRUCIFIXION on the preceeding FRIDAY ~ GOOD FRIDAY ! So Spring is very sacred ! DISCUSS ~ BRIAN
April 15th, 2017 14:09
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SPRING MICHAEL ~ Is the FIRST SEASON and always will be # that uis why it is so so important. Someone took a photograph everyday of a Garden during SPRING (92 DAYS) He was amazed how much the pictures changed each day ~ no other Season is like this ~ change but no decay ~ just new life. Spring is the most Spiritual Month which is why the Christian Church chose SPRING to celebrate EASTER as a movable feast. The Council of Nicea (325 BC) decreed that EASTER DAY (Ressurection) should be on a SUNDAY and the CRUCIFIXION on the preceeding FRIDAY ~ GOOD FRIDAY ! So Spring is very sacred ! DISCUSS ~ BRIAN
April 15th, 2017 14:09
ARRIVAL
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
MERCI MICHAEL ~I love all 3D art especially that which seeks to mirror nature ! The best one in my opinion is any model of the DNA double helix. Rosalind Franklin (who did the X-ray crystallographic on DNA) said ~ when she saw Crick & Watson\'s structure (molecular model) \"It is too too beautiful ~ not to be correct !\" Beauty is in the eye of the beholder ! We made a model from LEGO which had the advantage that the two anti-parallel helical chains were easily separated for replication and also the formation of messenger RNA which is the blueprint to synthesise PROTEIN. There is more Art in Science than this World dreams of ! DISCUSS ~ BRIAN
April 15th, 2017 13:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
MERCI MICHAEL ~I love all 3D art especially that which seeks to mirror nature ! The best one in my opinion is any model of the DNA double helix. Rosalind Franklin (who did the X-ray crystallographic on DNA) said ~ when she saw Crick & Watson\'s structure (molecular model) \"It is too too beautiful ~ not to be correct !\" Beauty is in the eye of the beholder ! We made a model from LEGO which had the advantage that the two anti-parallel helical chains were easily separated for replication and also the formation of messenger RNA which is the blueprint to synthesise PROTEIN. There is more Art in Science than this World dreams of ! DISCUSS ~ BRIAN
April 15th, 2017 13:30
ARRIVAL
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanks for this poetic look at the season\'s push toward more colourful outside - a look too at at inside bit of talented palette. Love the sculptured fish Michael.
April 15th, 2017 07:52
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanks for this poetic look at the season\'s push toward more colourful outside - a look too at at inside bit of talented palette. Love the sculptured fish Michael.
April 15th, 2017 07:52
COMICAL COUPLETS
MendedFences27 said:
Humor and sculpting, Wow! Funny stuff that, the jokes not the sculptures. And you made it into a poem as well. Well, I enjoyed a laugh and for that I am grateful. Nice work. - Phil A.
April 14th, 2017 20:59
MendedFences27 said:
Humor and sculpting, Wow! Funny stuff that, the jokes not the sculptures. And you made it into a poem as well. Well, I enjoyed a laugh and for that I am grateful. Nice work. - Phil A.
April 14th, 2017 20:59
COMICAL COUPLETS
WriteBeLight said:
Are bears bare? Great job Michael! A very right write!
April 14th, 2017 13:23
WriteBeLight said:
Are bears bare? Great job Michael! A very right write!
April 14th, 2017 13:23
COMICAL COUPLETS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"There was a Young Fellow called MICHAEL ~ who on MPS his droll jokes did cycle ~ If you heard them before (Michael isn\'t a bore) but he recycles them ~ again & again ! Thanks MICHEAL we all need a smile with our boiled egg on Good Friday Morning ! Happy Easter BRIAN. Please check my poem ~ Thanks B.
April 14th, 2017 02:41
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"There was a Young Fellow called MICHAEL ~ who on MPS his droll jokes did cycle ~ If you heard them before (Michael isn\'t a bore) but he recycles them ~ again & again ! Thanks MICHEAL we all need a smile with our boiled egg on Good Friday Morning ! Happy Easter BRIAN. Please check my poem ~ Thanks B.
April 14th, 2017 02:41
COMICAL COUPLETS
orchidee said:
Dunno who\'s there - can\'t hear the door knocker. Try ringing the bell!
April 14th, 2017 02:11
orchidee said:
Dunno who\'s there - can\'t hear the door knocker. Try ringing the bell!
April 14th, 2017 02:11
COMICAL COUPLETS
orchidee said:
Heehee. Good write and pic. My very old joke is \'Why is abbreviation such a long word?\' People have given up laughing at it. Well, I might only know about 3 jokes, and they\'ve heard it 100 times! lol.
April 14th, 2017 02:10
orchidee said:
Heehee. Good write and pic. My very old joke is \'Why is abbreviation such a long word?\' People have given up laughing at it. Well, I might only know about 3 jokes, and they\'ve heard it 100 times! lol.
April 14th, 2017 02:10
COMICAL COUPLETS
Goldfinch60 said:
\"Knock, knock\"
\"Who\'s there?\"
\"Knock\"
\"Knock who?\"
\"Knock,knock\"
April 14th, 2017 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
\"Knock, knock\"
\"Who\'s there?\"
\"Knock\"
\"Knock who?\"
\"Knock,knock\"
April 14th, 2017 01:37
LEICESTER STATION
MendedFences27 said:
Terrific poem, great use of historic and modern comparison. Hand-wound clock, really? Wow! Is this the original station or has it been expanded over time? Loved the poem. - Phil A.
April 13th, 2017 19:46
MendedFences27 said:
Terrific poem, great use of historic and modern comparison. Hand-wound clock, really? Wow! Is this the original station or has it been expanded over time? Loved the poem. - Phil A.
April 13th, 2017 19:46
LEICESTER STATION
P.H.Rose said:
Absolutely love this
Michael.... my kind
Of poem.....
April 13th, 2017 17:58
P.H.Rose said:
Absolutely love this
Michael.... my kind
Of poem.....
April 13th, 2017 17:58
LEICESTER STATION
WriteBeLight said:
I feel the hustle and bustle in the writing Michael. Great again on both accounts!
April 13th, 2017 06:28
WriteBeLight said:
I feel the hustle and bustle in the writing Michael. Great again on both accounts!
April 13th, 2017 06:28
LEICESTER STATION
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Well done today MICHAEL ~ I consider that the Painting & the Poem should always be symbiotic and you really do deserve a star today ! I did some research at Leicester University a fine City and still a fine Footy Team ! Love the poem and your use of half-rhyme ~ a lost art ~ especially when combined with disciplined meter ! Please check my RISPETTO ~ BRIAN
April 13th, 2017 05:17
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Well done today MICHAEL ~ I consider that the Painting & the Poem should always be symbiotic and you really do deserve a star today ! I did some research at Leicester University a fine City and still a fine Footy Team ! Love the poem and your use of half-rhyme ~ a lost art ~ especially when combined with disciplined meter ! Please check my RISPETTO ~ BRIAN
April 13th, 2017 05:17
LEICESTER STATION
Fay Slimm. said:
Leicester has reason to be proud of both picture an poem dear Michael - - an excellent duo.
April 13th, 2017 03:36
Fay Slimm. said:
Leicester has reason to be proud of both picture an poem dear Michael - - an excellent duo.
April 13th, 2017 03:36
LEICESTER STATION
orchidee said:
Yes, lovely write and picture. I seem ot often combine words and tunes, though I can\'t write music!
April 13th, 2017 01:43
orchidee said:
Yes, lovely write and picture. I seem ot often combine words and tunes, though I can\'t write music!
April 13th, 2017 01:43
LEICESTER STATION
Goldfinch60 said:
This painting is so very good and the poem complements it superbly. Thank you Michael for sharing them both with us.
April 13th, 2017 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
This painting is so very good and the poem complements it superbly. Thank you Michael for sharing them both with us.
April 13th, 2017 01:17
LEICESTER STATION
Frank Prem said:
What a fine picture Michael. Forgive me for not paying sufficient attention previously - I hadn\'t realised you were illustrating as well as writing.
These are a fine double act. I like them much.
April 13th, 2017 00:51
Frank Prem said:
What a fine picture Michael. Forgive me for not paying sufficient attention previously - I hadn\'t realised you were illustrating as well as writing.
These are a fine double act. I like them much.
April 13th, 2017 00:51
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