Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



CONVERGING PATHS
Pintu Mahakul said:

Leaving alone is so sad. But new direction is sought here. Relationship is now gently settling. Friendship is now formed with empathy and understanding. This is very beautiful poem.

January 20th, 2017 03:19

MILE OVEN DYE
Terry dailey said:

Great write.

January 19th, 2017 15:28

MILE OVEN DYE
Augustus said:

Fun to read
Fun to figure out
Fun to compose
Fun to check into a cheap hotel......

January 19th, 2017 11:03

MILE OVEN DYE
WriteBeLight said:

Ha Ha. Great idea!

January 19th, 2017 10:13

MILE OVEN DYE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS MICHAEL ~ We need a bit of humour on MPS (Please check my latest poem SPAM HAIKU !) Fortunately my GRANDAD is Siamese so I got the same translation as PHR so it must be right. Do we both get a TOFFEE ~ I like creamy whirls ! Thanks BRIAM

January 19th, 2017 05:08

MILE OVEN DYE
P.H.Rose said:

My love and I

I book into a cheap hotel
A nice surprise for her
We made love all night
And we did lay
Till morning and where
Late to stir
My love and i

I\'ve just woke up
Got a bit of eye
Exercise doing this.
Thanks...

January 19th, 2017 04:27

CAGE AND CREED
Augustus said:

I was not familiar with either and did look them up. Being more a traditionalist, it was not my thing. However your tribute to them is outstanding. Sunnyde M\'s comment is profund.

January 18th, 2017 13:15

CAGE AND CREED
janetaylor said:

wow ~ i was seriously transported! very beautifully written! i love the mystique and mystery feeling to these eloquent lines.

January 18th, 2017 12:06

CAGE AND CREED
Tony36 said:

Your poems are always a joy to read, I love reading them all, your artwork is outstanding and a joy to look at

January 18th, 2017 11:29

CAGE AND CREED
P.H.Rose said:

And I\'m number 3
Your poems are
Always very well
Written and contain
So much...

January 18th, 2017 10:34

CAGE AND CREED
WriteBeLight said:

I agree totally with SunnydeMajesty. Always wonderful works you post.

January 18th, 2017 06:48

CAGE AND CREED
SunnydeMajesty said:

Work of art is a matter of fact and faith. Most of your thoughts are \'unseen\' yet you have that faith to communicate the fact you have not seen. Bravo that is a nice poem.

January 18th, 2017 01:47

IDYLL
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Phenomenal poem! Very descriptive and has a nice flow to it. Loved it!

January 17th, 2017 20:06

WHERE EAGLES FLY
Augustus said:

Enigmatic, perhaps biblical. Enjoyed.

January 17th, 2017 12:42

WHERE EAGLES FLY
Tony36 said:

Amazing write and picture

January 17th, 2017 12:18

WHERE EAGLES FLY
Christina8 said:

Excellent poem. I am intrigued by the painting as well. Great job!

January 17th, 2017 12:10

WHERE EAGLES FLY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL for an abstract painting to illustrate an abstract poem ~ awesome. Yours BRIAN

January 17th, 2017 09:35

WHERE EAGLES FLY
P.H.Rose said:

Wow... Love this...

January 17th, 2017 08:08

WHERE EAGLES FLY
WriteBeLight said:

Very excellent!

January 17th, 2017 06:12

NOT YET DEAD
janetaylor said:

:0) love the humor intertwined with the wait for the long box - great poetry!

January 16th, 2017 17:10

ALONE
willyweed said:

perhaps but it will in the fathers heart
speaking mine is a glow with your work. the writer of ww

January 16th, 2017 15:51

ALONE
Christina8 said:

Beautiful write. I really like the second stanza. And a beautiful painting too!

January 16th, 2017 13:51

ALONE
Tony36 said:

Love it both painting and verse

January 16th, 2017 10:41

ALONE
Fay Slimm. said:

Stunningly good painting and words of aloneness which read slowly evoke tears - a compelling read.

January 16th, 2017 04:39

IDYLL
Augustus said:

The meter was so flowing I had to read it again as I swore there was rhyme. A tribute to your towne.

January 15th, 2017 19:10

IDYLL
Tony36 said:

Love the poem, and love the painting

January 15th, 2017 11:37

IDYLL
Michael Edwards said:

Thanks for looking and commenting PH and WBL - much appreciated.

January 15th, 2017 11:01

IDYLL
WriteBeLight said:

Lovely tribute and painting!

January 15th, 2017 08:09

IDYLL
P.H.Rose said:

Really lovely poem
Michael and a very
Good picture fantastic
Colours in it... very nice
Well done sir on both

January 15th, 2017 04:26

IDYLL
Michael Edwards said:

Thanks so much for the encouragement Hippy and Brian - this is also my favourite verse form (at the moment anyway).

January 15th, 2017 04:21



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