Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
IMMERSED IN TIME
MendedFences27 said:
Memories, recalled within the mind, and some are toxic reminders. We carry them with us throughout life, but it seems they choose when to pop up. I think your abstract looks like one of those ghosts trapped in a poisonous environment, yet it is still a beautiful thing. - Phil A.
April 5th, 2017 22:24
MendedFences27 said:
Memories, recalled within the mind, and some are toxic reminders. We carry them with us throughout life, but it seems they choose when to pop up. I think your abstract looks like one of those ghosts trapped in a poisonous environment, yet it is still a beautiful thing. - Phil A.
April 5th, 2017 22:24
IMMERSED IN TIME
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ for caring & sharing. Love the abstract ~ it has what i call inner glow like many of the images from the Hubble Telescope. As both GF and Willy have noted the painting does draw one into the centre and creates a desire to explore. This (for me) is true of all the Hubble images ~ OK. Now to the poem ! That too is enigmatic and poses many questions and mysteries ~ a true enigma ~ about everything and nothing simultaneously ~ exploring the memories complex corridors ~ awesome ! Thanks for scaring ! Yours BRIAN
April 5th, 2017 12:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ for caring & sharing. Love the abstract ~ it has what i call inner glow like many of the images from the Hubble Telescope. As both GF and Willy have noted the painting does draw one into the centre and creates a desire to explore. This (for me) is true of all the Hubble images ~ OK. Now to the poem ! That too is enigmatic and poses many questions and mysteries ~ a true enigma ~ about everything and nothing simultaneously ~ exploring the memories complex corridors ~ awesome ! Thanks for scaring ! Yours BRIAN
April 5th, 2017 12:32
IMMERSED IN TIME
willyweed said:
the poem is deep and your painting is examining me? I love this work Michael , I\'m sinking in. ww
April 5th, 2017 05:45
willyweed said:
the poem is deep and your painting is examining me? I love this work Michael , I\'m sinking in. ww
April 5th, 2017 05:45
IMMERSED IN TIME
Goldfinch60 said:
Good though provoking write.
Similarly the picture is drawing me into it. Into where? Watch this space.
April 5th, 2017 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Good though provoking write.
Similarly the picture is drawing me into it. Into where? Watch this space.
April 5th, 2017 01:47
DOOR
MendedFences27 said:
Perfecto! I love the door image. I know not why. Perhaps an open door represents hope, or the future. Great piece of art, both. - Phil A.
April 4th, 2017 21:06
MendedFences27 said:
Perfecto! I love the door image. I know not why. Perhaps an open door represents hope, or the future. Great piece of art, both. - Phil A.
April 4th, 2017 21:06
DOOR
Michael Edwards said:
Thanks - I\'ve left the door open so I can write another verse if the mood takes me.
April 4th, 2017 15:44
Michael Edwards said:
Thanks - I\'ve left the door open so I can write another verse if the mood takes me.
April 4th, 2017 15:44
DOOR
P.H.Rose said:
I generally push
Doors so hard
I take them off
Their hinges....
Is the painting
Venice ???
Short but very sweet..
April 4th, 2017 13:22
P.H.Rose said:
I generally push
Doors so hard
I take them off
Their hinges....
Is the painting
Venice ???
Short but very sweet..
April 4th, 2017 13:22
DOOR
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the poem (style and subject) and the painting. Doors are always enigmatic and two sided ~ and always a great subject for an Odd Ode ~ Thanks BRIAN
April 4th, 2017 08:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the poem (style and subject) and the painting. Doors are always enigmatic and two sided ~ and always a great subject for an Odd Ode ~ Thanks BRIAN
April 4th, 2017 08:11
DOOR
Garry said:
Short but sweet. The best things comes in small packages. I often think there are lots of poems that would be improved by being culled slightly.
This paints vivid image in just a few words. Well done.
April 4th, 2017 05:59
Garry said:
Short but sweet. The best things comes in small packages. I often think there are lots of poems that would be improved by being culled slightly.
This paints vivid image in just a few words. Well done.
April 4th, 2017 05:59
MY FAVOURITE TIPPLE
MendedFences27 said:
Not a wine drinker, but I like your poem.Is this another form I don\'t know about, or one you created. It\'s very clever and probably hard to write. I did enjoy it though. - Phil A.
April 3rd, 2017 20:29
MendedFences27 said:
Not a wine drinker, but I like your poem.Is this another form I don\'t know about, or one you created. It\'s very clever and probably hard to write. I did enjoy it though. - Phil A.
April 3rd, 2017 20:29
MY FAVOURITE TIPPLE
rrodriguez said:
Wine nor beer for me, but for the poem, serve me another one! Great write...!
April 3rd, 2017 19:43
rrodriguez said:
Wine nor beer for me, but for the poem, serve me another one! Great write...!
April 3rd, 2017 19:43
MY FAVOURITE TIPPLE
P.H.Rose said:
Good poem Michael
But alas I am not
A grape drinker
Run and beer...
But not in the same
Glass !!!!!
April 3rd, 2017 08:05
P.H.Rose said:
Good poem Michael
But alas I am not
A grape drinker
Run and beer...
But not in the same
Glass !!!!!
April 3rd, 2017 08:05
MY FAVOURITE TIPPLE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Wine which maketh GLAD ~ The heart of Man ~ Beer I fear makes Man morose ~ and MAD ! Thanks for sharing your bottle ~ love reverse poems ~ please check mine today ~ Thanks BRIAN. Interesting that you posted a GRAVEYARD with a wine poem. If you search the gravestones you will find an epitaph which reads: SIR WILLIAM OVERTIPPLE Here lies a Knight ~ Fell out of bed while drinking RED ~ Should have stuck to WHITE ! BRIAN
April 3rd, 2017 03:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Wine which maketh GLAD ~ The heart of Man ~ Beer I fear makes Man morose ~ and MAD ! Thanks for sharing your bottle ~ love reverse poems ~ please check mine today ~ Thanks BRIAN. Interesting that you posted a GRAVEYARD with a wine poem. If you search the gravestones you will find an epitaph which reads: SIR WILLIAM OVERTIPPLE Here lies a Knight ~ Fell out of bed while drinking RED ~ Should have stuck to WHITE ! BRIAN
April 3rd, 2017 03:27
MY FAVOURITE TIPPLE
Garry said:
Very neat and well crafted. A good pint of real ale served without too much head and about room temperature. Can\'t beat it.
April 3rd, 2017 02:58
Garry said:
Very neat and well crafted. A good pint of real ale served without too much head and about room temperature. Can\'t beat it.
April 3rd, 2017 02:58
MY FAVOURITE TIPPLE
Goldfinch60 said:
Mine is a Rioja - Cheers!
Good watercolour as well.
April 3rd, 2017 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Mine is a Rioja - Cheers!
Good watercolour as well.
April 3rd, 2017 01:42
A SUNDAY SMILE
Michael Edwards said:
Cheers PH - this is the top of the High Road in Market Harborough. Just had a big row because BT removed a telephone box situated where the dark shadows are in this painting. After a great furore they have agreed to replace it. Oh the trials and tribulations of local politics.
April 2nd, 2017 11:21
Michael Edwards said:
Cheers PH - this is the top of the High Road in Market Harborough. Just had a big row because BT removed a telephone box situated where the dark shadows are in this painting. After a great furore they have agreed to replace it. Oh the trials and tribulations of local politics.
April 2nd, 2017 11:21
A SUNDAY SMILE
P.H.Rose said:
So very good Michael
Well done....
Me and my lovely
Wife have just been
To the pier in my
Town for a walk
Around the marina
Your painting looks like
Exactly where we parked
April 2nd, 2017 10:13
P.H.Rose said:
So very good Michael
Well done....
Me and my lovely
Wife have just been
To the pier in my
Town for a walk
Around the marina
Your painting looks like
Exactly where we parked
April 2nd, 2017 10:13
A SUNDAY SMILE
willyweed said:
I just call this \" I like it\" and the painting too!
April 2nd, 2017 08:37
willyweed said:
I just call this \" I like it\" and the painting too!
April 2nd, 2017 08:37
A SUNDAY SMILE
Michael Edwards said:
Committed? I think I omitted is the word - apologies we all get it wrong from time to time - aw heck off to do some gardening. Cheers Brian.
April 2nd, 2017 05:10
Michael Edwards said:
Committed? I think I omitted is the word - apologies we all get it wrong from time to time - aw heck off to do some gardening. Cheers Brian.
April 2nd, 2017 05:10
A SUNDAY SMILE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Two more HAIKU with gentle humour accompanied by a an equally gentle painting ! Thanks for caring and sharing. For JAPANESE HAIKU and SENRYU there are rules as strict as the EU ~ but we English have more laissez faire and subject is as important as style. So we aim for 5-7-5 but don\'t always achieve it ~ we are renowned globally for our humour and we like our ditties to rhyme so my HAIKU (and SENRYU) often break three GOLDEN RULES and I am careful never to visit JAPAN ! In your comment I think you committed the word NOT after the forth word. Like the infamous \"Sinners Bible\" which states the Seventh Commandment as THOU SHALT COMMIT ADULTERY ~ It sold out in a day ! Yours BRIAN Please check my Poem ~ Thanks B
April 2nd, 2017 03:45
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Two more HAIKU with gentle humour accompanied by a an equally gentle painting ! Thanks for caring and sharing. For JAPANESE HAIKU and SENRYU there are rules as strict as the EU ~ but we English have more laissez faire and subject is as important as style. So we aim for 5-7-5 but don\'t always achieve it ~ we are renowned globally for our humour and we like our ditties to rhyme so my HAIKU (and SENRYU) often break three GOLDEN RULES and I am careful never to visit JAPAN ! In your comment I think you committed the word NOT after the forth word. Like the infamous \"Sinners Bible\" which states the Seventh Commandment as THOU SHALT COMMIT ADULTERY ~ It sold out in a day ! Yours BRIAN Please check my Poem ~ Thanks B
April 2nd, 2017 03:45
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