Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
THREE SMILES
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the smiles to balance some of the very sad poems we get on MPS ! Love the painting and the mini~roundabouts (like a dinner plate in the road) also cause me to smile. If I\'m feeling frivolous I sometimes I drive right over them ! Yours BRIAN
April 11th, 2017 07:57
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the smiles to balance some of the very sad poems we get on MPS ! Love the painting and the mini~roundabouts (like a dinner plate in the road) also cause me to smile. If I\'m feeling frivolous I sometimes I drive right over them ! Yours BRIAN
April 11th, 2017 07:57
THREE SMILES
lovelydarkanddeep said:
I loved the last one! Nice write Michael. love, Izzy
April 11th, 2017 07:15
lovelydarkanddeep said:
I loved the last one! Nice write Michael. love, Izzy
April 11th, 2017 07:15
THREE SMILES
willyweed said:
Good work Michael all very relevant and the painting is just great they are starting to use those round a bouts here I hate them.
April 11th, 2017 07:04
willyweed said:
Good work Michael all very relevant and the painting is just great they are starting to use those round a bouts here I hate them.
April 11th, 2017 07:04
THREE SMILES
P.H.Rose said:
Brilliant love them
Michael, the litter one
Made me chuckle
I don\'t know if you\'ve
Read my poem
\" mysterious brown mail \"
It was a bit of humour aimed
At the ridiculous amount of
Junk mail we get.. all adds
To the litter problem. If you
Haven\'t read it, please if you
Find 5 mins read it and let
Me know what you think..
April 11th, 2017 05:26
P.H.Rose said:
Brilliant love them
Michael, the litter one
Made me chuckle
I don\'t know if you\'ve
Read my poem
\" mysterious brown mail \"
It was a bit of humour aimed
At the ridiculous amount of
Junk mail we get.. all adds
To the litter problem. If you
Haven\'t read it, please if you
Find 5 mins read it and let
Me know what you think..
April 11th, 2017 05:26
THREE SMILES
Fay Slimm. said:
Another smile raised by your valued sayings dear Michael and as for the watercolour - -- wow so real I felt I was there
April 11th, 2017 04:37
Fay Slimm. said:
Another smile raised by your valued sayings dear Michael and as for the watercolour - -- wow so real I felt I was there
April 11th, 2017 04:37
THREE SMILES
Garry said:
Absolutely love the second one. Wish I\'d written it. Didn\'t realise you could be so wicked. Excellent, keep it up.
April 11th, 2017 03:15
Garry said:
Absolutely love the second one. Wish I\'d written it. Didn\'t realise you could be so wicked. Excellent, keep it up.
April 11th, 2017 03:15
THREE SMILES
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, the one about the litter really resonates.
The pub on the corner looks like it may serve a good pint.
April 11th, 2017 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, the one about the litter really resonates.
The pub on the corner looks like it may serve a good pint.
April 11th, 2017 01:24
MY PLACE
MendedFences27 said:
How do you do watercolors without a water supply?
Nice little poem about a nice little place, where two artists hang out, the painter and the poet. All I do is write and my place is a mess, much like my mind. Loved it. - Phil A.
April 10th, 2017 20:38
MendedFences27 said:
How do you do watercolors without a water supply?
Nice little poem about a nice little place, where two artists hang out, the painter and the poet. All I do is write and my place is a mess, much like my mind. Loved it. - Phil A.
April 10th, 2017 20:38
MY PLACE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ we all need a bolthole ~ somewhere private we can escape to for SOLITUDE ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN ~ Love your studio ~ B.
April 10th, 2017 15:36
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ we all need a bolthole ~ somewhere private we can escape to for SOLITUDE ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN ~ Love your studio ~ B.
April 10th, 2017 15:36
MY PLACE
WriteBeLight said:
Great looking digs Michael. I have my desk in the loft with large windows. Great to be in at any time. Your poem is right on!
April 10th, 2017 09:51
WriteBeLight said:
Great looking digs Michael. I have my desk in the loft with large windows. Great to be in at any time. Your poem is right on!
April 10th, 2017 09:51
MY PLACE
willyweed said:
glad to hear that, I was thinking boy willy you are a slob, its all good Michael!
April 10th, 2017 07:12
willyweed said:
glad to hear that, I was thinking boy willy you are a slob, its all good Michael!
April 10th, 2017 07:12
MY PLACE
Goldfinch60 said:
WE all need places to be ourselves, yours looks ideal.
Yours is the world to create in words and art.
April 10th, 2017 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
WE all need places to be ourselves, yours looks ideal.
Yours is the world to create in words and art.
April 10th, 2017 00:49
SECLUSION
MendedFences27 said:
A quiet place for art and the art of love. What more could a person want? A lovely garden and a lovely poem, perhaps the \"node\" where their \"paths\" cross? A terrific write. - Phil A.
April 9th, 2017 19:10
MendedFences27 said:
A quiet place for art and the art of love. What more could a person want? A lovely garden and a lovely poem, perhaps the \"node\" where their \"paths\" cross? A terrific write. - Phil A.
April 9th, 2017 19:10
SECLUSION
willyweed said:
very nice I\'ll be over for tea!
and I\'ll read that fine poem again.ww
April 9th, 2017 08:13
willyweed said:
very nice I\'ll be over for tea!
and I\'ll read that fine poem again.ww
April 9th, 2017 08:13
SECLUSION
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, those lonely spots can be beautiful.
April 9th, 2017 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, those lonely spots can be beautiful.
April 9th, 2017 01:43
BINDING VOWS
MendedFences27 said:
Nice poem, nice photo, nice garden. Can I come for tea? Veyt interesting form. One I\'ll have to look up and play with. Thanks for all the above. - Phil A.
April 8th, 2017 21:34
MendedFences27 said:
Nice poem, nice photo, nice garden. Can I come for tea? Veyt interesting form. One I\'ll have to look up and play with. Thanks for all the above. - Phil A.
April 8th, 2017 21:34
BINDING VOWS
WriteBeLight said:
Wow! I have chills. What a beautiful picture and so kind of you to note me in your Author\'s comment. I am so jealous. I will try to do the same and take a picture of our garden, once we can get out there. Right now there is still some snow. Nice poem to accompany such a beautiful garden Michael. So, so green and lush!! Thanks!!!
April 8th, 2017 06:40
WriteBeLight said:
Wow! I have chills. What a beautiful picture and so kind of you to note me in your Author\'s comment. I am so jealous. I will try to do the same and take a picture of our garden, once we can get out there. Right now there is still some snow. Nice poem to accompany such a beautiful garden Michael. So, so green and lush!! Thanks!!!
April 8th, 2017 06:40
BINDING VOWS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ lovely garden ~ lovely Month ! Love tHe poem with a \"Tale in the Sting !\" TYBURN FORM ~ You should explain the form ! Six line poem with a 222299 syllable pattern and rhyming pattern aaaa bb Lines 1 to 4 are VERBS and in lines 5 & 6 the 5th through 8th syllables use the words in lines 1 & 2 and 3 & 4 respectively. Yours is the Edwards variation ~ Poetic Licence Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN I will post a FOX variation next week ~ space this watch !
April 8th, 2017 05:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ lovely garden ~ lovely Month ! Love tHe poem with a \"Tale in the Sting !\" TYBURN FORM ~ You should explain the form ! Six line poem with a 222299 syllable pattern and rhyming pattern aaaa bb Lines 1 to 4 are VERBS and in lines 5 & 6 the 5th through 8th syllables use the words in lines 1 & 2 and 3 & 4 respectively. Yours is the Edwards variation ~ Poetic Licence Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN I will post a FOX variation next week ~ space this watch !
April 8th, 2017 05:37
BINDING VOWS
Garry said:
Very good, but comes with a definite air of menace.
You reaped what you sowed, big time.
April 8th, 2017 02:35
Garry said:
Very good, but comes with a definite air of menace.
You reaped what you sowed, big time.
April 8th, 2017 02:35
BINDING VOWS
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write.
Would you like to come and sort my garden out? I intend to go to battle today with my pyrocantha!!
April 8th, 2017 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write.
Would you like to come and sort my garden out? I intend to go to battle today with my pyrocantha!!
April 8th, 2017 01:23
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