Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
RETAIL CYCLE
MendedFences27 said:
The \"Retail Cycle\" is being accelerated by on-line ordering. However the underlying problem is population growth. Maybe convert all of the closed Malls to housing. Your poem captures the rise and fall of Big Box stores precisely. If only we could keep all of the villages intact Love this one - Phil A.
February 10th, 2017 13:41
MendedFences27 said:
The \"Retail Cycle\" is being accelerated by on-line ordering. However the underlying problem is population growth. Maybe convert all of the closed Malls to housing. Your poem captures the rise and fall of Big Box stores precisely. If only we could keep all of the villages intact Love this one - Phil A.
February 10th, 2017 13:41
RETAIL CYCLE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Great Visual MICHAEL ~ conjuring a bygone age ~ before the whole of England is encased in concrete. Every person in the USA has eight times the space we have in the UK and it shows. Concrete prevents drainage and each tree and blade of grass reduces photosynthesis which removes CO2 from the atmosphere and replaces it with oxygen. Urbanisation is one of several reasons that the % of CO2 in the atmosphere increases year by year. BRIAN.
February 10th, 2017 09:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Great Visual MICHAEL ~ conjuring a bygone age ~ before the whole of England is encased in concrete. Every person in the USA has eight times the space we have in the UK and it shows. Concrete prevents drainage and each tree and blade of grass reduces photosynthesis which removes CO2 from the atmosphere and replaces it with oxygen. Urbanisation is one of several reasons that the % of CO2 in the atmosphere increases year by year. BRIAN.
February 10th, 2017 09:32
TWO TRAMPS
MendedFences27 said:
Two mice who wouldn\'t pay the price.
Alone in the night, \'cause the price wasn\'t right.
Your poem was my chuckle for the day. Snows falling 1-2 ft., so I needed a laugh before facing it. Thanks for that. - Phil A.
February 9th, 2017 16:12
MendedFences27 said:
Two mice who wouldn\'t pay the price.
Alone in the night, \'cause the price wasn\'t right.
Your poem was my chuckle for the day. Snows falling 1-2 ft., so I needed a laugh before facing it. Thanks for that. - Phil A.
February 9th, 2017 16:12
TWO TRAMPS
Christina8 said:
Amusing little mice and poem. I like very much!--Christina
February 9th, 2017 05:14
Christina8 said:
Amusing little mice and poem. I like very much!--Christina
February 9th, 2017 05:14
TWO TRAMPS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL great poem and a classic cartoon of MUS MUSCULUS ! My ANCESTORS tell me that there was a time ~ that when the light (The SUN) went out ~ they went to bed ~ when the light came on again (The SUN) they got up and started work ! With artificial lighting the light never goes out ! BRIAN
February 9th, 2017 05:08
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL great poem and a classic cartoon of MUS MUSCULUS ! My ANCESTORS tell me that there was a time ~ that when the light (The SUN) went out ~ they went to bed ~ when the light came on again (The SUN) they got up and started work ! With artificial lighting the light never goes out ! BRIAN
February 9th, 2017 05:08
TWO TRAMPS
Michael Edwards said:
Thanks Kat - yes thanks so much regarding your reply - I will get back to you later
February 9th, 2017 04:46
Michael Edwards said:
Thanks Kat - yes thanks so much regarding your reply - I will get back to you later
February 9th, 2017 04:46
HER EPITAPH YET WRITTEN
MendedFences27 said:
To me this feels like someone in remorse trying to cope and mend their ways. \"She lives,\' yet I question is this a person in truth? Well it\'s pretty surreal, but it makes one think, and reads smooth and flowing. Nice art. - Phil A.
February 8th, 2017 13:08
MendedFences27 said:
To me this feels like someone in remorse trying to cope and mend their ways. \"She lives,\' yet I question is this a person in truth? Well it\'s pretty surreal, but it makes one think, and reads smooth and flowing. Nice art. - Phil A.
February 8th, 2017 13:08
HER EPITAPH YET WRITTEN
Christina8 said:
I love the watercolor! The poem evokes much thought (i see WBL already said that--well, I agree!) :-) Very well done!
February 8th, 2017 13:02
Christina8 said:
I love the watercolor! The poem evokes much thought (i see WBL already said that--well, I agree!) :-) Very well done!
February 8th, 2017 13:02
HER EPITAPH YET WRITTEN
WriteBeLight said:
Invokes much thought Michael. Excellent watercolor.
February 8th, 2017 06:58
WriteBeLight said:
Invokes much thought Michael. Excellent watercolor.
February 8th, 2017 06:58
INSIDE OUTSIDE
MendedFences27 said:
Humor and art, Refreshing. Now a jumper, that\'s like a sweater, correct? Nice little village. - Phil A.
February 7th, 2017 15:52
MendedFences27 said:
Humor and art, Refreshing. Now a jumper, that\'s like a sweater, correct? Nice little village. - Phil A.
February 7th, 2017 15:52
INSIDE OUTSIDE
P.H.Rose said:
Brilliant Michael
This is so good.
I love it....
Can you do illustrations..?
February 7th, 2017 15:49
P.H.Rose said:
Brilliant Michael
This is so good.
I love it....
Can you do illustrations..?
February 7th, 2017 15:49
INSIDE OUTSIDE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHEAL ~ Great picture and a great comic poem ! I knew a man who wore a VEST to keep the coldness off his CHEST ~ Weather in the EAST\'s a BEAST so he went WEST ~ AMEN Yours BRIAN
February 7th, 2017 11:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHEAL ~ Great picture and a great comic poem ! I knew a man who wore a VEST to keep the coldness off his CHEST ~ Weather in the EAST\'s a BEAST so he went WEST ~ AMEN Yours BRIAN
February 7th, 2017 11:18
INSIDE OUTSIDE
willyweed said:
and the moral is he wanted to look skinning,. lovely picture Michael. you paint Michael WW
February 7th, 2017 02:54
willyweed said:
and the moral is he wanted to look skinning,. lovely picture Michael. you paint Michael WW
February 7th, 2017 02:54
NIGHT
MendedFences27 said:
This ia a beautiful description of night from a \"practised mind.\" Should that be \"contrasting\" in stanza 2? Your poem is pure poetry and great art. Please don\'t be offended by my dumb question.
I love your work. - Phil A.
February 6th, 2017 13:12
MendedFences27 said:
This ia a beautiful description of night from a \"practised mind.\" Should that be \"contrasting\" in stanza 2? Your poem is pure poetry and great art. Please don\'t be offended by my dumb question.
I love your work. - Phil A.
February 6th, 2017 13:12
NIGHT
Christina8 said:
This poem is just excellent! A pleasure to read! I really like the painting too. A masterpiece!
February 6th, 2017 08:03
Christina8 said:
This poem is just excellent! A pleasure to read! I really like the painting too. A masterpiece!
February 6th, 2017 08:03
NIGHT
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for another excellent poem and complementary painting. Both are modern (free verse) but very meaningful ~ Yours BRIAN Please check my latest poem and fusion ~ Thanks B
February 6th, 2017 05:19
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for another excellent poem and complementary painting. Both are modern (free verse) but very meaningful ~ Yours BRIAN Please check my latest poem and fusion ~ Thanks B
February 6th, 2017 05:19
THE GREAT UNREAD
MendedFences27 said:
Great painting. Here are my comments: 1)
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- Phil A.
February 5th, 2017 12:45
MendedFences27 said:
Great painting. Here are my comments: 1)
2)
- Phil A.
February 5th, 2017 12:45
THE GREAT UNREAD
Christina8 said:
Beautiful picture! I absolutely loved that fun poem!
February 5th, 2017 11:47
Christina8 said:
Beautiful picture! I absolutely loved that fun poem!
February 5th, 2017 11:47
THE GREAT UNREAD
rrodriguez said:
I went back to unsee the poem, but my eyes failed. I stick with the great intro and the amazing pic.
February 5th, 2017 08:11
rrodriguez said:
I went back to unsee the poem, but my eyes failed. I stick with the great intro and the amazing pic.
February 5th, 2017 08:11
THE GREAT UNREAD
rrodriguez said:
Very clever the way you thought the poem out. Your painting is superb.
February 5th, 2017 08:08
rrodriguez said:
Very clever the way you thought the poem out. Your painting is superb.
February 5th, 2017 08:08
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