Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
THREE COUPLETS
MendedFences27 said:
Loved the couplets. Loved the painting. Clouds in the sky? We all see things differently, just like art. Eye of the beholder and all. Words too, can be appreciated in many different ways. My favorite is stanza 2, perception on leaves, floating. A great image, as is the painting. - Phil A.
March 22nd, 2017 20:16
MendedFences27 said:
Loved the couplets. Loved the painting. Clouds in the sky? We all see things differently, just like art. Eye of the beholder and all. Words too, can be appreciated in many different ways. My favorite is stanza 2, perception on leaves, floating. A great image, as is the painting. - Phil A.
March 22nd, 2017 20:16
THREE COUPLETS
Garry said:
Lovely use of words. It flows beautifully. Nice imagery. Love the painting too.
March 22nd, 2017 17:33
Garry said:
Lovely use of words. It flows beautifully. Nice imagery. Love the painting too.
March 22nd, 2017 17:33
THREE COUPLETS
willyweed said:
wow Michael maybe I am amazed , beautiful on both counts! ww
March 22nd, 2017 15:12
willyweed said:
wow Michael maybe I am amazed , beautiful on both counts! ww
March 22nd, 2017 15:12
THREE COUPLETS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for an exquisite painting and elegant couplets my favourite rhyming pattern ! Ha\' but nature the power gie us ~ to ken oorsen as ithers see us ! Thanks for sharing BRIAN. Please clock my ode ~ thanks B.
March 22nd, 2017 02:09
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for an exquisite painting and elegant couplets my favourite rhyming pattern ! Ha\' but nature the power gie us ~ to ken oorsen as ithers see us ! Thanks for sharing BRIAN. Please clock my ode ~ thanks B.
March 22nd, 2017 02:09
BENEATH A PEWTERED SKY
MendedFences27 said:
I\'m still working on my interpretation, but so far I think someone is being burned alive, or a volcano is erupting. Though a volcano would be anything but \"quiescent.\" Then again he raised his arms which isn\'t possible if you are tied to the stake. So, I\'m lost. Without further ado, let me say that I loved reading this. Words well chosen, interesting depiction, nice rhymes. All in all a stellar poem. - Phil A.
March 21st, 2017 18:46
MendedFences27 said:
I\'m still working on my interpretation, but so far I think someone is being burned alive, or a volcano is erupting. Though a volcano would be anything but \"quiescent.\" Then again he raised his arms which isn\'t possible if you are tied to the stake. So, I\'m lost. Without further ado, let me say that I loved reading this. Words well chosen, interesting depiction, nice rhymes. All in all a stellar poem. - Phil A.
March 21st, 2017 18:46
BENEATH A PEWTERED SKY
Tony36 said:
Short but a well written amd beautiful write
March 21st, 2017 13:19
Tony36 said:
Short but a well written amd beautiful write
March 21st, 2017 13:19
BENEATH A PEWTERED SKY
Christina8 said:
A wonderful poem. Very descriptive. I love the beautiful watercolor of the church--wish I had that talent!
March 21st, 2017 09:58
Christina8 said:
A wonderful poem. Very descriptive. I love the beautiful watercolor of the church--wish I had that talent!
March 21st, 2017 09:58
BENEATH A PEWTERED SKY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Great paintung Michael ~ The C of E own some of the most iconic buildings in the UK. Our Anglican Cathedral in Liverpool ~ in red sandstone ~ is awesome inside and out. Great evocative poem reminded me of Lattimer & Ridley being burned for their protestant Faith in OXFORD. There is a bronze cross ~ set into the carpark outside Balliol College to mark the spot. If you stand on it and meditate you feel the haet ~ AMEN ! In Puebla Mexico one Sunday Morning I was caught in an ash fall out from POPOCATEPETL when we came out of the Church ~ it rerminded me of that too and Pompeii and Herculaneum both of which i have visited. Great poem & picture for World Poetry Day ! Please check my ODE ~ Thanks BRIAN.
March 21st, 2017 04:34
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Great paintung Michael ~ The C of E own some of the most iconic buildings in the UK. Our Anglican Cathedral in Liverpool ~ in red sandstone ~ is awesome inside and out. Great evocative poem reminded me of Lattimer & Ridley being burned for their protestant Faith in OXFORD. There is a bronze cross ~ set into the carpark outside Balliol College to mark the spot. If you stand on it and meditate you feel the haet ~ AMEN ! In Puebla Mexico one Sunday Morning I was caught in an ash fall out from POPOCATEPETL when we came out of the Church ~ it rerminded me of that too and Pompeii and Herculaneum both of which i have visited. Great poem & picture for World Poetry Day ! Please check my ODE ~ Thanks BRIAN.
March 21st, 2017 04:34
BENEATH A PEWTERED SKY
Goldfinch60 said:
I do like this Michael, the imagery is superb. A painting with words.
Into favourites it goes.
March 21st, 2017 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
I do like this Michael, the imagery is superb. A painting with words.
Into favourites it goes.
March 21st, 2017 02:16
MY FIRST VILLANELLE
MendedFences27 said:
A great write in a highly structured form. It\'s so difficult to accomplish and have it flow and make sense. I think you\'ve done it perfectly. I just wonder how much wine it took, - Phil A.
March 20th, 2017 13:15
MendedFences27 said:
A great write in a highly structured form. It\'s so difficult to accomplish and have it flow and make sense. I think you\'ve done it perfectly. I just wonder how much wine it took, - Phil A.
March 20th, 2017 13:15
MY FIRST VILLANELLE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhhhhhhhhh MICHAEL you have succumbed at last to the siren lure of the VILLANELLE ! The choice of the only two rhymes in the poem is very important and ~INE gives plenty of scope as in WINE ~ MINE ~ DEFINE etc and also ~O which allows ~UE and ~EW etc. The subject will gladden the hearts of all PHILOENICS. Thanks for increasing the CLASSIC content of MPS ~ much appreciated ~ BRIAN ~ Love the painting ~ do I glimpse a WINE BAR ?
March 20th, 2017 05:49
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhhhhhhhhh MICHAEL you have succumbed at last to the siren lure of the VILLANELLE ! The choice of the only two rhymes in the poem is very important and ~INE gives plenty of scope as in WINE ~ MINE ~ DEFINE etc and also ~O which allows ~UE and ~EW etc. The subject will gladden the hearts of all PHILOENICS. Thanks for increasing the CLASSIC content of MPS ~ much appreciated ~ BRIAN ~ Love the painting ~ do I glimpse a WINE BAR ?
March 20th, 2017 05:49
MY FIRST VILLANELLE
WriteBeLight said:
Yes. Great job Michael. There is nothing like a good glass of wine. :)
March 20th, 2017 05:38
WriteBeLight said:
Yes. Great job Michael. There is nothing like a good glass of wine. :)
March 20th, 2017 05:38
MY FIRST VILLANELLE
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a good and fits the correct form.
Like the picture as well.
March 20th, 2017 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a good and fits the correct form.
Like the picture as well.
March 20th, 2017 01:59
WINE UNTAINTED
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing and caring MICHAEL your poems and paintings always delight the mind ~ the eye and the heart. Wine ~ which maketh glad the Heart of Man and enlivens the Spirit of Woman ~ is always worthy of an ode. Wine matures for us in the cask ~ we should always exercise care in the release of its bouquet ~ AMEN ~ Please check my Sunday Sonnet ~ thanks BRIAN
March 19th, 2017 04:33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing and caring MICHAEL your poems and paintings always delight the mind ~ the eye and the heart. Wine ~ which maketh glad the Heart of Man and enlivens the Spirit of Woman ~ is always worthy of an ode. Wine matures for us in the cask ~ we should always exercise care in the release of its bouquet ~ AMEN ~ Please check my Sunday Sonnet ~ thanks BRIAN
March 19th, 2017 04:33
WINE UNTAINTED
Philip said:
A good Chianti for me. As someone says drink the good wine now. Phil.G
March 19th, 2017 03:24
Philip said:
A good Chianti for me. As someone says drink the good wine now. Phil.G
March 19th, 2017 03:24
WINE UNTAINTED
Goldfinch60 said:
May your Rioja be dust free.
Good painting, like the detail in the windows.
March 19th, 2017 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
May your Rioja be dust free.
Good painting, like the detail in the windows.
March 19th, 2017 02:20
YACKY ZEBRAS
MendedFences27 said:
Yacky zebras permeate the NFL. You may not understand, but your American friends will. It\'s a commentary on referees who wear striped shirts and talk too much. As for arrogant bears, well, they\'re all from Chicago. Maybe it\'s the poor quality replays that make the yacky zebras take so damn long to move the game forward. Bet you never expected to inspire that rant. Oh well, A fun poem and great art. (Pamplona street scene?) - Phil A.
March 18th, 2017 19:06
MendedFences27 said:
Yacky zebras permeate the NFL. You may not understand, but your American friends will. It\'s a commentary on referees who wear striped shirts and talk too much. As for arrogant bears, well, they\'re all from Chicago. Maybe it\'s the poor quality replays that make the yacky zebras take so damn long to move the game forward. Bet you never expected to inspire that rant. Oh well, A fun poem and great art. (Pamplona street scene?) - Phil A.
March 18th, 2017 19:06
THE MAN NEXT DOOR
Will Hiltz said:
A wonderful breath of fresh air, Michael! Nicely written on every level. Thanks.
March 18th, 2017 14:37
Will Hiltz said:
A wonderful breath of fresh air, Michael! Nicely written on every level. Thanks.
March 18th, 2017 14:37
YACKY ZEBRAS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for stepping up to the plate MICHAEL ~ a great effort to produce an ABCD ZOO POEM and all the words are Oxford Dictionary Certified. Did you paint the picture after the poem or did the picture inspire the poem ? Looking at them symbiotically ~ in the picture from (L to R): I see a SICKLY TURTLE clutching his X-ray ~ next a HIPPO logging a jump followed by the head of a BEAR dining on \"Kikkerbillen\". YACKY ZEBRAS are luirking in the background. Then three NATTERJACKS striving in a RELAY (or should that be REPLAY ?). Thanks for sharing Poem & Picture ~ Yours BRIAN
March 18th, 2017 10:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for stepping up to the plate MICHAEL ~ a great effort to produce an ABCD ZOO POEM and all the words are Oxford Dictionary Certified. Did you paint the picture after the poem or did the picture inspire the poem ? Looking at them symbiotically ~ in the picture from (L to R): I see a SICKLY TURTLE clutching his X-ray ~ next a HIPPO logging a jump followed by the head of a BEAR dining on \"Kikkerbillen\". YACKY ZEBRAS are luirking in the background. Then three NATTERJACKS striving in a RELAY (or should that be REPLAY ?). Thanks for sharing Poem & Picture ~ Yours BRIAN
March 18th, 2017 10:15
THE MAN NEXT DOOR
WriteBeLight said:
So cheery and bright Michael. Great painting!
March 18th, 2017 07:34
WriteBeLight said:
So cheery and bright Michael. Great painting!
March 18th, 2017 07:34
YACKY ZEBRAS
WriteBeLight said:
Quality job with both on display here Michael!
March 18th, 2017 07:13
WriteBeLight said:
Quality job with both on display here Michael!
March 18th, 2017 07:13
YACKY ZEBRAS
Jooles said:
That was a hard challenge but thr end result made me smile
March 18th, 2017 04:07
Jooles said:
That was a hard challenge but thr end result made me smile
March 18th, 2017 04:07
YACKY ZEBRAS
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - -such a clever fun-write and very inventive.
March 18th, 2017 01:49
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - -such a clever fun-write and very inventive.
March 18th, 2017 01:49
YACKY ZEBRAS
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write, love the yacky zebras.
Intriguing painting, would love to see it full size.
March 18th, 2017 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write, love the yacky zebras.
Intriguing painting, would love to see it full size.
March 18th, 2017 01:32
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