Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
CHANGES
Goldfinch60 said:
Like this and love the last line
\"on matures contract made with man\"
February 24th, 2017 02:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Like this and love the last line
\"on matures contract made with man\"
February 24th, 2017 02:33
THE CORN STANDS ERECT
willyweed said:
For the Glory of Rome! a very corny poem. WW
February 23rd, 2017 21:54
willyweed said:
For the Glory of Rome! a very corny poem. WW
February 23rd, 2017 21:54
THE CORN STANDS ERECT
janetaylor said:
both are absolutely stunning! the simplicity and elegance are unsurpassed!
February 23rd, 2017 14:04
janetaylor said:
both are absolutely stunning! the simplicity and elegance are unsurpassed!
February 23rd, 2017 14:04
THE CORN STANDS ERECT
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ for a great poem (and great abstract !) to ameliorate my morning Corn Flakes ~ Shakespeare rules ~ OK BRIAN ~ Don\'t miss an OPPORTUNITY !
February 23rd, 2017 03:05
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ for a great poem (and great abstract !) to ameliorate my morning Corn Flakes ~ Shakespeare rules ~ OK BRIAN ~ Don\'t miss an OPPORTUNITY !
February 23rd, 2017 03:05
MEMORIES
MendedFences27 said:
I have to agree with Fay a bit, I love the flow of your words in this one. As she said, the pace seems just perfect for the portrayal of his reverie. It gives the reader time to ponder each image and to reflect. Loved it. - Phil A.
February 22nd, 2017 15:03
MendedFences27 said:
I have to agree with Fay a bit, I love the flow of your words in this one. As she said, the pace seems just perfect for the portrayal of his reverie. It gives the reader time to ponder each image and to reflect. Loved it. - Phil A.
February 22nd, 2017 15:03
MEMORIES
Christina8 said:
A wonderful poem. Very descriptive. Goes lovely with picture!
February 22nd, 2017 14:08
Christina8 said:
A wonderful poem. Very descriptive. Goes lovely with picture!
February 22nd, 2017 14:08
MEMORIES
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for a perfect poem and a perfect picture. You pen & brush are in perfect harmony ~ delightful ! BRIAN
February 22nd, 2017 05:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for a perfect poem and a perfect picture. You pen & brush are in perfect harmony ~ delightful ! BRIAN
February 22nd, 2017 05:42
MEMORIES
Fay Slimm. said:
The slow pace of line makes such a peaceful flow to this read Michael - - poignancy mixes with country stillness as the past creeps from each stanza. A fine duo of beautiful picture and poem.
February 22nd, 2017 05:18
Fay Slimm. said:
The slow pace of line makes such a peaceful flow to this read Michael - - poignancy mixes with country stillness as the past creeps from each stanza. A fine duo of beautiful picture and poem.
February 22nd, 2017 05:18
LIMERICKS 10, 11, and 12
MendedFences27 said:
Beautiful artwork. Three funny limericks. How does one judge a limerick, by humor, or poetic value? I say if you smile or laugh it\'s great. I loved number 12. Where the heck is Pinner, anyways? As usual, great stuff. - Phil A.
February 21st, 2017 10:27
MendedFences27 said:
Beautiful artwork. Three funny limericks. How does one judge a limerick, by humor, or poetic value? I say if you smile or laugh it\'s great. I loved number 12. Where the heck is Pinner, anyways? As usual, great stuff. - Phil A.
February 21st, 2017 10:27
LIMERICKS 10, 11, and 12
BrutalityPotato said:
These are great! I like 11 and 12 in particular.
February 21st, 2017 09:09
BrutalityPotato said:
These are great! I like 11 and 12 in particular.
February 21st, 2017 09:09
LIMERICKS 10, 11, and 12
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Love the WC Michael and you really are waxing LYMERICAL ~ what the Yanks make of them I wonder ? Bude ~ Purley ~ Pinner Oh yes I remember them well ~ and your Limericks are very appropriate ! Thanks for the memories ~ BRIAN
February 21st, 2017 04:50
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Love the WC Michael and you really are waxing LYMERICAL ~ what the Yanks make of them I wonder ? Bude ~ Purley ~ Pinner Oh yes I remember them well ~ and your Limericks are very appropriate ! Thanks for the memories ~ BRIAN
February 21st, 2017 04:50
PLUNDER
Augustus said:
In my youth I walked the Woods and. Swamps. The water was clear and potable. Now what little is left is covered in slime.great write and water coloring.
February 20th, 2017 19:18
Augustus said:
In my youth I walked the Woods and. Swamps. The water was clear and potable. Now what little is left is covered in slime.great write and water coloring.
February 20th, 2017 19:18
PLUNDER
P.H.Rose said:
Wonderful poem
Michael...
Just so good..
Well done !!!
February 20th, 2017 19:01
P.H.Rose said:
Wonderful poem
Michael...
Just so good..
Well done !!!
February 20th, 2017 19:01
PLUNDER
MendedFences27 said:
It truly is a plundering of our legacy. The pirating of land for progress\' sake is the booty. What was once a village is now an obscene concrete block called a city. Nature yields, giving up her beauty, her creatures, her air and water, and for what? Another MacDonalds? Please. . . give me the open spaces.
Loved your painting and your poem. So eloquently spoken and directly spot on. - Phil A.
February 20th, 2017 10:44
MendedFences27 said:
It truly is a plundering of our legacy. The pirating of land for progress\' sake is the booty. What was once a village is now an obscene concrete block called a city. Nature yields, giving up her beauty, her creatures, her air and water, and for what? Another MacDonalds? Please. . . give me the open spaces.
Loved your painting and your poem. So eloquently spoken and directly spot on. - Phil A.
February 20th, 2017 10:44
PLUNDER
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ as is your wont ~ the picture perfectly complements the poem ! Globally we are becoming more Urban annually ! Scenes that you picture & paint & poemise are in fact disappearing fast being replaced by faceless Malls as in the USA. We must fight (in the UK) to preserve our amazing Villages and Green Belts. Concrete is the root of all Rural destruction ~ BRIAN
February 20th, 2017 09:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ as is your wont ~ the picture perfectly complements the poem ! Globally we are becoming more Urban annually ! Scenes that you picture & paint & poemise are in fact disappearing fast being replaced by faceless Malls as in the USA. We must fight (in the UK) to preserve our amazing Villages and Green Belts. Concrete is the root of all Rural destruction ~ BRIAN
February 20th, 2017 09:10
PLUNDER
WriteBeLight said:
I can relate. I love the picture and your poem is very telling about the future. We have enough huge buildings and roads. Too much is just too much.
February 20th, 2017 07:27
WriteBeLight said:
I can relate. I love the picture and your poem is very telling about the future. We have enough huge buildings and roads. Too much is just too much.
February 20th, 2017 07:27
PLUNDER
Fay Slimm. said:
Rich with poetic eloquence the verse epitomizes heedless uprooting of much old countryside legacy in place after place -- a triumph of a poem along with the wonderfully alive watercolour - thanks for sharing both with us Michael.
February 20th, 2017 03:29
Fay Slimm. said:
Rich with poetic eloquence the verse epitomizes heedless uprooting of much old countryside legacy in place after place -- a triumph of a poem along with the wonderfully alive watercolour - thanks for sharing both with us Michael.
February 20th, 2017 03:29
LIMERICK No 9
Augustus said:
Thanks for the humor respite. Great water coloring as well to match the poem.
February 19th, 2017 15:36
Augustus said:
Thanks for the humor respite. Great water coloring as well to match the poem.
February 19th, 2017 15:36
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