Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
THE ORCHARD BY NIGHT
Fay Slimm. said:
Wonderful - - both picture and words. Another gem Michael.
February 3rd, 2017 06:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Wonderful - - both picture and words. Another gem Michael.
February 3rd, 2017 06:15
THE SAD TALE OF THE UNFORTUNATE EGG
MendedFences27 said:
I really liked this one Michael. Maybe I was in the mood for something a bit light and I also happen to like Penguins. I think they are the funniest (humorous) creatures on Earth.
I also happen to like eggs, boiled slightly, with a runny yoke, crack their heads and dip your toast.
About the painting - Penguins are Southern Hemisphere birds and Eskimos are Northern, but this only adds to the humor. Great job on both the poem and painting. Thanks for making me smile. - Phil A.
February 2nd, 2017 19:50
MendedFences27 said:
I really liked this one Michael. Maybe I was in the mood for something a bit light and I also happen to like Penguins. I think they are the funniest (humorous) creatures on Earth.
I also happen to like eggs, boiled slightly, with a runny yoke, crack their heads and dip your toast.
About the painting - Penguins are Southern Hemisphere birds and Eskimos are Northern, but this only adds to the humor. Great job on both the poem and painting. Thanks for making me smile. - Phil A.
February 2nd, 2017 19:50
THE SAD TALE OF THE UNFORTUNATE EGG
Tony36 said:
Great write and great picture. Eggs will never look the same again
February 2nd, 2017 09:14
Tony36 said:
Great write and great picture. Eggs will never look the same again
February 2nd, 2017 09:14
THE SAD TALE OF THE UNFORTUNATE EGG
Christina8 said:
Love this cute and clever rhyming poem! Adorable painting as well!
February 2nd, 2017 07:34
Christina8 said:
Love this cute and clever rhyming poem! Adorable painting as well!
February 2nd, 2017 07:34
THE SAD TALE OF THE UNFORTUNATE EGG
rrodriguez said:
Nicely done my friend. Clever!
February 2nd, 2017 07:29
rrodriguez said:
Nicely done my friend. Clever!
February 2nd, 2017 07:29
THE SAD TALE OF THE UNFORTUNATE EGG
WriteBeLight said:
Very cute and playfully written. Nice painting as well.
February 2nd, 2017 06:17
WriteBeLight said:
Very cute and playfully written. Nice painting as well.
February 2nd, 2017 06:17
HE LOOKED NO MORE FOR BRIDGES
MendedFences27 said:
Well, I like it. Glad you chose that title. We can go searching endlessly, only to find that for which we were looking was always near at hand. No need to cross bridges. Lovely poem and a beautiful painting. - Phil A.
February 1st, 2017 14:37
MendedFences27 said:
Well, I like it. Glad you chose that title. We can go searching endlessly, only to find that for which we were looking was always near at hand. No need to cross bridges. Lovely poem and a beautiful painting. - Phil A.
February 1st, 2017 14:37
HE LOOKED NO MORE FOR BRIDGES
rrodriguez said:
First the painting then the poem, but maybe the poem and then the painting. Well, both... great job.
February 1st, 2017 13:49
rrodriguez said:
First the painting then the poem, but maybe the poem and then the painting. Well, both... great job.
February 1st, 2017 13:49
HE LOOKED NO MORE FOR BRIDGES
mammyo3 said:
like the poem and the painting :) thanks.
February 1st, 2017 06:04
mammyo3 said:
like the poem and the painting :) thanks.
February 1st, 2017 06:04
POEM - WORK IN PROGRESS
Christina8 said:
It\'s interesting to see how you make your artwork and poems. I really liked your poem today. Can\'t wait to see what you post tomorrow!!
January 31st, 2017 11:52
Christina8 said:
It\'s interesting to see how you make your artwork and poems. I really liked your poem today. Can\'t wait to see what you post tomorrow!!
January 31st, 2017 11:52
POEM - WORK IN PROGRESS
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes we have to look out the window to see the light and realize that the bridge to Paradise is a two way crossing.Our attitudes, our outlook on life, and life in general is a blank canvas. We choose the image, the color, the lighting.
A great idea for your poem. Old feelings (soiled water) are refreshed by (snow melt waters). No need to search for a better place. Happiness is here. Will look forward to tomorrow\'s post. - Phil A.
January 31st, 2017 11:47
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes we have to look out the window to see the light and realize that the bridge to Paradise is a two way crossing.Our attitudes, our outlook on life, and life in general is a blank canvas. We choose the image, the color, the lighting.
A great idea for your poem. Old feelings (soiled water) are refreshed by (snow melt waters). No need to search for a better place. Happiness is here. Will look forward to tomorrow\'s post. - Phil A.
January 31st, 2017 11:47
POEM - WORK IN PROGRESS
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Thanks for sharing this! Cannot wait to see the finished work!
January 31st, 2017 11:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Thanks for sharing this! Cannot wait to see the finished work!
January 31st, 2017 11:35
POEM - WORK IN PROGRESS
janetaylor said:
wow ~ you do work clean! so glad you posted this so that we could get a view into your studio and additionally into the creative process of your poetry writing! can\'t wait to see the finished product, although the unfinished product is pretty amazing in and of itself!
January 31st, 2017 10:59
janetaylor said:
wow ~ you do work clean! so glad you posted this so that we could get a view into your studio and additionally into the creative process of your poetry writing! can\'t wait to see the finished product, although the unfinished product is pretty amazing in and of itself!
January 31st, 2017 10:59
POEM - WORK IN PROGRESS
rrodriguez said:
Your first stage certainly has a form to sculp a beautiful poem. The process of writing a poem may take tme, but is worth it to produce great work.
January 31st, 2017 07:52
rrodriguez said:
Your first stage certainly has a form to sculp a beautiful poem. The process of writing a poem may take tme, but is worth it to produce great work.
January 31st, 2017 07:52
POEM - WORK IN PROGRESS
WriteBeLight said:
Very educational. Great shot of you!
January 31st, 2017 06:18
WriteBeLight said:
Very educational. Great shot of you!
January 31st, 2017 06:18
POEM - WORK IN PROGRESS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
EXCELLENT MICHAEL ~ Thanks for taking time and space to explain the \"Evolution of a Poem\" One of the problems of composing on a PC is that all the DRAFTS are deleted. When I give a talk on a POET like John Betjeman I show picture of his altered and revised MS because it demonstrates the process you describe. Betjeman\'s finished poems are honed masterpieces and a \"linguisitic and grammar model\" for any Young Poet to try to emulate. My posted poems are not perfect and I do get sent corrections ! I don\'t do it all on the PC but my paper pre-copies are all destroyed ! I look forward to your Poem ~ BRIAN. Please check my latest poem which just flowed and needed no editing ! However if I had thought about I would not have posted it ~ Trump\'s G-Men know where I live ! Thanks B
January 31st, 2017 05:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
EXCELLENT MICHAEL ~ Thanks for taking time and space to explain the \"Evolution of a Poem\" One of the problems of composing on a PC is that all the DRAFTS are deleted. When I give a talk on a POET like John Betjeman I show picture of his altered and revised MS because it demonstrates the process you describe. Betjeman\'s finished poems are honed masterpieces and a \"linguisitic and grammar model\" for any Young Poet to try to emulate. My posted poems are not perfect and I do get sent corrections ! I don\'t do it all on the PC but my paper pre-copies are all destroyed ! I look forward to your Poem ~ BRIAN. Please check my latest poem which just flowed and needed no editing ! However if I had thought about I would not have posted it ~ Trump\'s G-Men know where I live ! Thanks B
January 31st, 2017 05:10
SHE DREAMS
Fay Slimm. said:
Am so pleased to have caught these two little gems - a wonderful start to my time on line today - the read swept me away and as for the watercolour - you are so talented Michael. Keep up the good work.
January 31st, 2017 03:18
Fay Slimm. said:
Am so pleased to have caught these two little gems - a wonderful start to my time on line today - the read swept me away and as for the watercolour - you are so talented Michael. Keep up the good work.
January 31st, 2017 03:18
LIMERICKS 4 5 & 6
janetaylor said:
ha ha :0) oh my gosh i have to tell the last one to my husband. his middle name is eccles and his business partner calls him eccles. thanks for creating smiles and i adore the painting!
January 30th, 2017 15:15
janetaylor said:
ha ha :0) oh my gosh i have to tell the last one to my husband. his middle name is eccles and his business partner calls him eccles. thanks for creating smiles and i adore the painting!
January 30th, 2017 15:15
LIMERICKS 4 5 & 6
Christina8 said:
Wonderful limericks! I echo in what Kathy said in that you do have a way with words! Nice abstract! Work of art!
January 30th, 2017 11:46
Christina8 said:
Wonderful limericks! I echo in what Kathy said in that you do have a way with words! Nice abstract! Work of art!
January 30th, 2017 11:46
SHE DREAMS
janetaylor said:
this absolutely mesmerized me.....had to read it again and again....one of my favorites posted on the net. bravo! encore!
January 29th, 2017 12:58
janetaylor said:
this absolutely mesmerized me.....had to read it again and again....one of my favorites posted on the net. bravo! encore!
January 29th, 2017 12:58
THE VICTIM
janetaylor said:
superbly created and carefully crafted words.....the painting is beautiful! i love the feelings you bring alive in your art!
January 29th, 2017 12:57
janetaylor said:
superbly created and carefully crafted words.....the painting is beautiful! i love the feelings you bring alive in your art!
January 29th, 2017 12:57
SHE DREAMS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Beautiful Painting ~ Beautiful Dream ~ Beautiful Poem ~ Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN.
January 29th, 2017 11:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Beautiful Painting ~ Beautiful Dream ~ Beautiful Poem ~ Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN.
January 29th, 2017 11:47
SHE DREAMS
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Painting and pastel poem wow great combination here in vivid evocative freeverse. Your word choice is elegant and very poetic. Kudos.
Pls do comment on my latest poem too, u r most welcome to. Even one line will do.
January 29th, 2017 03:44
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Painting and pastel poem wow great combination here in vivid evocative freeverse. Your word choice is elegant and very poetic. Kudos.
Pls do comment on my latest poem too, u r most welcome to. Even one line will do.
January 29th, 2017 03:44
AND STILL THE CANDLE BURNED
janetaylor said:
wow! just wow! i was blown away.
January 28th, 2017 10:30
janetaylor said:
wow! just wow! i was blown away.
January 28th, 2017 10:30
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