Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



THE MAN NEXT DOOR
Michael Edwards said:

I do my share of gloom as well which is fine but a little bit of lighter stuff to balance the books is always welcome - look forward to seeing your future postings Garry.

March 29th, 2017 13:07

THE MAN NEXT DOOR
Garry said:

I have done my bit of \"gloomy\" and have yet more gloom to add.
However i have tried to balance the books with a few recent efforts. Which are bit lighter and a couple more to come over the next few weeks. Mixed in with the darker stuff of course. Hope they cheer you up as much as this cheered me.

March 29th, 2017 12:56

WAS IT LOVE - THE CONCLUSION
Tony36 said:

Awesome conclusion to an awesome write

March 29th, 2017 10:09

WAS IT LOVE - THE CONCLUSION
willyweed said:

Brilliant piece of work in its entirety! Bravo Poet!

March 29th, 2017 06:57

WAS IT LOVE - THE CONCLUSION
WriteBeLight said:

Finally Michael. Very sweet!

March 29th, 2017 03:46

WAS IT LOVE - THE CONCLUSION
Garry said:

Perfect ending. Good job.

March 29th, 2017 03:43

WAS IT LOVE - THE CONCLUSION
Goldfinch60 said:

The \'key\' obviously fitted. The whole work is very good and each stanza would work on there own.

Mine\'s a pint of bitter please in that well painted pub.

March 29th, 2017 01:13

WAS IT LOVE ? (5)
MendedFences27 said:

Thank you for that>>. What room, bedroom, kitchen, living room, or even bathroom? Where is Sherlock when you need him? Following with baited breathe. - Phil A.

March 28th, 2017 20:03

WAS IT LOVE ? (5)
WriteBeLight said:

Oh for crying out loud! Ha Ha. Great picture. Does it have something to do with that? That is, your story?

March 28th, 2017 18:43

WAS IT LOVE ? (5)
Tony36 said:

Awesome

March 28th, 2017 10:12

WAS IT LOVE ? (5)
willyweed said:

great work Michael...

March 28th, 2017 09:32

WAS IT LOVE (4)
willyweed said:

oh this is cool Michael!

March 28th, 2017 09:30

WAS IT LOVE - PART3
willyweed said:

can\'t wait I\'ll read 4&5 now

March 28th, 2017 09:28

WAS IT LOVE ? (2)
willyweed said:

getting better all the time!

March 28th, 2017 09:26

WAS IT LOVE ?
willyweed said:

I\'m playing catch up , very nice!

March 28th, 2017 09:24

WAS IT LOVE ? (5)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL ~ Creaking stairs & keys ~ Oh yes I remember it well ~ tomorrow will be the denouement (it was ever thus ~ BRIAN ~ Please check my HAIKU ~ Thank B

March 28th, 2017 05:47

WAS IT LOVE ? (5)
Fay Slimm. said:

I love the continuation of this romantic story - - good idea Michael - your words have indeed aroused curiosity

March 28th, 2017 04:15

WAS IT LOVE ? (5)
Goldfinch60 said:

I hope we will find out tomorrow.

March 28th, 2017 02:44

WAS IT LOVE (4)
rrodriguez said:

Keep the intrigue and the love flowing... great job with both, the poem and the painting.

March 27th, 2017 19:13

WAS IT LOVE (4)
MendedFences27 said:

Onward and upward. What\'s at the top of those stairs? Are they really stairs? The intrigue mounts. I want you to install a >> key.Great write, holds everyone\'s attention. Keeps us mystified. Wanting more. - Phil A.

March 27th, 2017 15:10

WAS IT LOVE (4)
Tony36 said:

Been loving the whole set. Can\'t wait for the rest. Great write

March 27th, 2017 08:01

WAS IT LOVE (4)
WriteBeLight said:

Is everybody lit? A line from one of my favorite movies. Humm... trying to visualize where this is going.

March 27th, 2017 01:58

WAS IT LOVE (4)
Goldfinch60 said:

Now I am really intrigued.

March 27th, 2017 00:56

WAS IT LOVE (4)
ron parrish aka wordman said:

this is very interesting ,kinda walks you through the relationship
i have one similar is it love

March 27th, 2017 00:27

WAS IT LOVE - PART3
ron parrish aka wordman said:

beautiful sentiment,i read all 3

March 26th, 2017 23:47

WAS IT LOVE - PART3
MendedFences27 said:

I have a million questions, as I\'m sure some of your other readers do as well: Who are they, where are they, do they know each other, is this their first time meeting, are they a couple, etc.?
Can you answer them all in just three more stanzas? I hope so. - Phil A.


March 26th, 2017 19:06

WAS IT LOVE - PART3
Augustus said:

Like a dream

March 26th, 2017 15:21

WAS IT LOVE - PART3
Garry said:

Very good, developing well. Love the watercolours.

March 26th, 2017 13:03

WAS IT LOVE - PART3
Christina8 said:

Very nice poem. I\'ll tune in tomorrow! Very nice watercolor!

March 26th, 2017 12:39

WAS IT LOVE - PART3
WriteBeLight said:

I sure hope they are looking at each other! :)


March 26th, 2017 08:18



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