Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
LIMERICK 90
dusk arising said:
In the flat up above dont you know
Theyre aware of the peeing below
to show their bad feeling
punched a hole in that ceiling
stuck their bum through and let one go!
as fast as you like - in a wink
Ealing was full of the stink
the air had turned foul
dogs started to howl
and the tellies all went on the blink
the worker was hauled up in court
for the occasion when he was caught short
to pee on the ceiling
was the wrong place i\'m feeling
for a bladder containing one quart
he didnt half feel unwell
when they hauled him off to a cell
like little jack horner
he peed in the corner
and emptied his bowels as well
the gov\'ner would have none of this
the worker was takin the piss
whilst you\'re in prison care
we\'ll have none of that here
but from his trousers there came a loud hiss
don\'t get me started....
February 26th, 2022 10:16
dusk arising said:
In the flat up above dont you know
Theyre aware of the peeing below
to show their bad feeling
punched a hole in that ceiling
stuck their bum through and let one go!
as fast as you like - in a wink
Ealing was full of the stink
the air had turned foul
dogs started to howl
and the tellies all went on the blink
the worker was hauled up in court
for the occasion when he was caught short
to pee on the ceiling
was the wrong place i\'m feeling
for a bladder containing one quart
he didnt half feel unwell
when they hauled him off to a cell
like little jack horner
he peed in the corner
and emptied his bowels as well
the gov\'ner would have none of this
the worker was takin the piss
whilst you\'re in prison care
we\'ll have none of that here
but from his trousers there came a loud hiss
don\'t get me started....
February 26th, 2022 10:16
LIMERICK 90
Doggerel Dave said:
Like yer little \'Wot no...\' man (presumably \'man\') in car, Michael...
February 26th, 2022 05:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Like yer little \'Wot no...\' man (presumably \'man\') in car, Michael...
February 26th, 2022 05:13
LIMERICK 90
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write and pic M.
Who\'s that character, a bit like your in the pic, who peers over walls, I think?
February 26th, 2022 03:18
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write and pic M.
Who\'s that character, a bit like your in the pic, who peers over walls, I think?
February 26th, 2022 03:18
FIVE SEVEN FIVES (ONE)
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
‘Closed minds have no sight.’
So true…
‘closed minds’ will never see;
but, of course, that is never you.☺️
Love the painting.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
February 25th, 2022 16:57
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
‘Closed minds have no sight.’
So true…
‘closed minds’ will never see;
but, of course, that is never you.☺️
Love the painting.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
February 25th, 2022 16:57
FIVE SEVEN FIVES (ONE)
dusk arising said:
Great words ME. Brought to mind how wasted is all our poetry in a world where so few see the poetic.
February 25th, 2022 10:28
dusk arising said:
Great words ME. Brought to mind how wasted is all our poetry in a world where so few see the poetic.
February 25th, 2022 10:28
FIVE SEVEN FIVES (ONE)
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
As simple as it needs to be.
February 25th, 2022 10:02
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
As simple as it needs to be.
February 25th, 2022 10:02
FIVE SEVEN FIVES (ONE)
L. B. Mek said:
forgive my rudeness, Michael
I meant no disrespect, initially
your art took me
to seashore rock faces
and then your words inspired me
to pen a little poetic reply..
thanks for sharing, dear Poetic Artist
such work of deeply insightful commentary..
(hard to budge
dense stubbornness
but formed of, of
survival\'s, pure minerals
so they know
change, is inevitable
but those humane Truth\'s
of life
can never be negotiated,
so let progression\'s moss
cover
and seasonal raindrops
bombard:
\'Rocks wet and shining
Unseen by those who won’t see
Closed minds have no sight.\')
February 25th, 2022 05:34
L. B. Mek said:
forgive my rudeness, Michael
I meant no disrespect, initially
your art took me
to seashore rock faces
and then your words inspired me
to pen a little poetic reply..
thanks for sharing, dear Poetic Artist
such work of deeply insightful commentary..
(hard to budge
dense stubbornness
but formed of, of
survival\'s, pure minerals
so they know
change, is inevitable
but those humane Truth\'s
of life
can never be negotiated,
so let progression\'s moss
cover
and seasonal raindrops
bombard:
\'Rocks wet and shining
Unseen by those who won’t see
Closed minds have no sight.\')
February 25th, 2022 05:34
FIVE SEVEN FIVES (ONE)
Rozina said:
I like the message in your haiku/senryu. So true.
February 25th, 2022 04:28
Rozina said:
I like the message in your haiku/senryu. So true.
February 25th, 2022 04:28
FIVE SEVEN FIVES (ONE)
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. Miss Berles seeing?
February 25th, 2022 03:27
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. Miss Berles seeing?
February 25th, 2022 03:27
LIMERICK 88
Rozina said:
Hehehe good one! There’s actually a runner in our nearby park who runs backwards.
February 24th, 2022 18:18
Rozina said:
Hehehe good one! There’s actually a runner in our nearby park who runs backwards.
February 24th, 2022 18:18
LIMERICK 88
Neville said:
Larf 😂ut loud, so I did sir ................................................... :)
February 24th, 2022 06:11
Neville said:
Larf 😂ut loud, so I did sir ................................................... :)
February 24th, 2022 06:11
LIMERICK 88
L. B. Mek said:
\'ah those moonwalking fanatics
they\'re everywhere
coming back, from where we\'re headed...\'
an intriguing shorty Michael, thank you
(as always, spent a few minutes just getting lost in your artwork)
February 24th, 2022 05:42
L. B. Mek said:
\'ah those moonwalking fanatics
they\'re everywhere
coming back, from where we\'re headed...\'
an intriguing shorty Michael, thank you
(as always, spent a few minutes just getting lost in your artwork)
February 24th, 2022 05:42
LIMERICK 88
dusk arising said:
They said i should worry about the dangers of gluten
or the poison berries on the plants now `fruitin
but what\'s got my stares
is that nothing compares
with the threat today from (ras) Putin
February 24th, 2022 04:14
dusk arising said:
They said i should worry about the dangers of gluten
or the poison berries on the plants now `fruitin
but what\'s got my stares
is that nothing compares
with the threat today from (ras) Putin
February 24th, 2022 04:14
LIMERICK 88
orchidee said:
Well, I saw a guy walking backwards with two bags of shopping. Maybe practising for the Annual Walking Backward Race, organised by Reversa Berles I expect!
February 24th, 2022 03:19
orchidee said:
Well, I saw a guy walking backwards with two bags of shopping. Maybe practising for the Annual Walking Backward Race, organised by Reversa Berles I expect!
February 24th, 2022 03:19
A PAIR OF PEARS (A HAIRY PAIR)
Desertwind said:
So it is , nicely written .
February 24th, 2022 00:56
Desertwind said:
So it is , nicely written .
February 24th, 2022 00:56
LIMERICK 87
Goldfinch60 said:
Could you not have used newpapre as we di \'back in the day\' or does the newspaper on your ipad not do a suitable cleansing job.
Fabulous artwork, is this a new venture as I do not think I have seen this style before. Such a great deal to see in this painting.
Andy
February 23rd, 2022 02:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Could you not have used newpapre as we di \'back in the day\' or does the newspaper on your ipad not do a suitable cleansing job.
Fabulous artwork, is this a new venture as I do not think I have seen this style before. Such a great deal to see in this painting.
Andy
February 23rd, 2022 02:31
LIMERICK 87
Doggerel Dave said:
Limerick provided too many visuals, Michael - definitely needed the abstract above for balance..................... a cacking good read.
February 22nd, 2022 21:46
Doggerel Dave said:
Limerick provided too many visuals, Michael - definitely needed the abstract above for balance..................... a cacking good read.
February 22nd, 2022 21:46
LIMERICK 87
Rozina said:
I didn’t see that man when I was in Sainsburys! Good one!
February 22nd, 2022 21:12
Rozina said:
I didn’t see that man when I was in Sainsburys! Good one!
February 22nd, 2022 21:12
LIMERICK 87
Fay Slimm. said:
He he - - hope you never tried that in the recent wind my delightfully witty and altogether clever artistic friend. - loved this funny limerick to bits Mike.
February 22nd, 2022 16:51
Fay Slimm. said:
He he - - hope you never tried that in the recent wind my delightfully witty and altogether clever artistic friend. - loved this funny limerick to bits Mike.
February 22nd, 2022 16:51
LIMERICK 87
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
You\'ve probably heard this one,it\'s quite old. Here I sit broken hearted,paid a dime but only farted😂Damn,I can\'t remember the rest,but I\'m sure there\'s more,...cheers🍻🌞🕊
February 22nd, 2022 16:50
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
You\'ve probably heard this one,it\'s quite old. Here I sit broken hearted,paid a dime but only farted😂Damn,I can\'t remember the rest,but I\'m sure there\'s more,...cheers🍻🌞🕊
February 22nd, 2022 16:50
LIMERICK 87
Christina8 said:
Hello! How are you? I love this funny limerick, so visual!!
February 22nd, 2022 10:57
Christina8 said:
Hello! How are you? I love this funny limerick, so visual!!
February 22nd, 2022 10:57
LIMERICK 87
Poetic Dan said:
So it is the 22nd, definitely a change of style but loved it all the same!
Thanks for keeping up the roll!
February 22nd, 2022 06:11
Poetic Dan said:
So it is the 22nd, definitely a change of style but loved it all the same!
Thanks for keeping up the roll!
February 22nd, 2022 06:11
LIMERICK 87
L. B. Mek said:
careful of that trail, you leave behind...
(love the diversity of your artworks Michael,
and those light blue tones
at the bottom of that hurricane
are so soothing to me)
February 22nd, 2022 05:32
L. B. Mek said:
careful of that trail, you leave behind...
(love the diversity of your artworks Michael,
and those light blue tones
at the bottom of that hurricane
are so soothing to me)
February 22nd, 2022 05:32
LIMERICK 87
orchidee said:
That\'s a sight for swooning! lol.
Yes, always best to check first. Loo rolls are not always in dispensers. Most embarrassing! Good write and pic M.
Miss Berles syllable cupboard empty?
February 22nd, 2022 03:06
orchidee said:
That\'s a sight for swooning! lol.
Yes, always best to check first. Loo rolls are not always in dispensers. Most embarrassing! Good write and pic M.
Miss Berles syllable cupboard empty?
February 22nd, 2022 03:06
LIMERICK 86
Paul Bell said:
Obviously related to me when I balanced the tin on top of the door for convenience. The rest is history.
February 19th, 2022 05:45
Paul Bell said:
Obviously related to me when I balanced the tin on top of the door for convenience. The rest is history.
February 19th, 2022 05:45
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