Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
AIM HIGH
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Michael, we must always try to achieve the best we can in life.
Andy
January 21st, 2021 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Michael, we must always try to achieve the best we can in life.
Andy
January 21st, 2021 01:45
I WOKED
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - - you have such a way of using rhyme-words - another bit of welcome wit from your clever pen Michael - --- it well describes my nightly trials too.
January 19th, 2021 12:08
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - - you have such a way of using rhyme-words - another bit of welcome wit from your clever pen Michael - --- it well describes my nightly trials too.
January 19th, 2021 12:08
I WOKED
L. B. Mek said:
I like the somber tone to the bright water colours you\'ve utilised, especially framed by that grey - as if a reminder, that just beyond this listless dreary days of Winter: our months of Spring and Summer await our arrival with muted anticipation.
Let all do our best to say safe and once more experience: Nature\'s blossoming seasons...
a wonderful artwork Michael, subtle - ever so subtle,
January 19th, 2021 05:57
L. B. Mek said:
I like the somber tone to the bright water colours you\'ve utilised, especially framed by that grey - as if a reminder, that just beyond this listless dreary days of Winter: our months of Spring and Summer await our arrival with muted anticipation.
Let all do our best to say safe and once more experience: Nature\'s blossoming seasons...
a wonderful artwork Michael, subtle - ever so subtle,
January 19th, 2021 05:57
I WOKED
dusk arising said:
D\'you ever wonder on opening yer eyes
How sleeptime lingers or sometimes flies
then the brain recovers
as you throw back your covers
and the missus farts as soundly she lies
January 19th, 2021 05:29
dusk arising said:
D\'you ever wonder on opening yer eyes
How sleeptime lingers or sometimes flies
then the brain recovers
as you throw back your covers
and the missus farts as soundly she lies
January 19th, 2021 05:29
I WOKED
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M.
How is Miss B\'s sleep? Does she count syllables to get to sleep, instead of sheep?
January 19th, 2021 02:58
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M.
How is Miss B\'s sleep? Does she count syllables to get to sleep, instead of sheep?
January 19th, 2021 02:58
I WOKED
Goldfinch60 said:
I woke up early
And found these words
And saw the painting
I am off to a good day.
Andy
January 19th, 2021 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
I woke up early
And found these words
And saw the painting
I am off to a good day.
Andy
January 19th, 2021 02:07
DAYS END
L. B. Mek said:
always surprises me how your artwork and words, combine to help me recall specific elements within literature I have read:
here, I immediately gravitate to that small DIY store \'start-up\' by \'Momma\', Maya Angelou\'s grandma from \'I know why...\'
one tiny shop and miniscule element of her book, that helped give the world, one of 20th century\'s great Poets...
I\'m sure you were calling on far more local and \'lighter in topic\' sources for inspiration,
all the same what a wonderful artwork and read Michael
January 18th, 2021 04:11
L. B. Mek said:
always surprises me how your artwork and words, combine to help me recall specific elements within literature I have read:
here, I immediately gravitate to that small DIY store \'start-up\' by \'Momma\', Maya Angelou\'s grandma from \'I know why...\'
one tiny shop and miniscule element of her book, that helped give the world, one of 20th century\'s great Poets...
I\'m sure you were calling on far more local and \'lighter in topic\' sources for inspiration,
all the same what a wonderful artwork and read Michael
January 18th, 2021 04:11
DAYS END
Neville said:
......... nowt quite like it is there .... I can taste it and smell it this very moment ...
January 17th, 2021 17:10
Neville said:
......... nowt quite like it is there .... I can taste it and smell it this very moment ...
January 17th, 2021 17:10
DAYS END
FredPeyer said:
Those were the days! Now it\'s stick it into the microwave!
January 17th, 2021 12:35
FredPeyer said:
Those were the days! Now it\'s stick it into the microwave!
January 17th, 2021 12:35
DAYS END
orchidee said:
Good writes and pic M.
Miss B got any bread? Or any dough? Maybe meaning money - she got any for us?!
January 17th, 2021 03:10
orchidee said:
Good writes and pic M.
Miss B got any bread? Or any dough? Maybe meaning money - she got any for us?!
January 17th, 2021 03:10
DAYS END
Goldfinch60 said:
Thee very good 5-7-5s Michael.
Strangely I am just about to make some bread as i do every Sunday morning.
Andy
January 17th, 2021 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Thee very good 5-7-5s Michael.
Strangely I am just about to make some bread as i do every Sunday morning.
Andy
January 17th, 2021 01:38
RAIN
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful poem Michael.
The artwork is great as well.
Andy
January 17th, 2021 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful poem Michael.
The artwork is great as well.
Andy
January 17th, 2021 01:13
RAIN
Neville said:
... this is rapidly becoming one of my most favourite poetic forms ... superbly executed Michael ...
January 16th, 2021 14:25
Neville said:
... this is rapidly becoming one of my most favourite poetic forms ... superbly executed Michael ...
January 16th, 2021 14:25
RAIN
FredPeyer said:
You are really getting the hang of that haibun format, Michael. Well done.
January 16th, 2021 13:58
FredPeyer said:
You are really getting the hang of that haibun format, Michael. Well done.
January 16th, 2021 13:58
RAIN
Jerry Reynolds said:
Loved the poem and the watercolor,
which contains some irony.
Make a wrong choice nature will be a
ruthless critic.
January 16th, 2021 12:15
Jerry Reynolds said:
Loved the poem and the watercolor,
which contains some irony.
Make a wrong choice nature will be a
ruthless critic.
January 16th, 2021 12:15
RAIN
Fay Slimm. said:
Sp clearly described I was there and watching those drops of cascading rain - a meaningful posting of the disaster wintery floods can wreak
January 16th, 2021 08:20
Fay Slimm. said:
Sp clearly described I was there and watching those drops of cascading rain - a meaningful posting of the disaster wintery floods can wreak
January 16th, 2021 08:20
RAIN
Doggerel Dave said:
A bucolic poem about a not very bucolic landscape at that moment. Very evocative.
Thanks, Dave
January 16th, 2021 04:37
Doggerel Dave said:
A bucolic poem about a not very bucolic landscape at that moment. Very evocative.
Thanks, Dave
January 16th, 2021 04:37
PUT THE FIRE OUT
Suresh said:
Missing from the painting is a well
For your words do cast a spell
Glad it wasn\'t the building in your painting
January 14th, 2021 13:47
Suresh said:
Missing from the painting is a well
For your words do cast a spell
Glad it wasn\'t the building in your painting
January 14th, 2021 13:47
PUT THE FIRE OUT
Fay Slimm. said:
Giggled a bit at your infectious wit Mike but oh what a picture where water makes real every light in that rural scene - (plus your wonderful talent of course)
January 14th, 2021 09:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Giggled a bit at your infectious wit Mike but oh what a picture where water makes real every light in that rural scene - (plus your wonderful talent of course)
January 14th, 2021 09:15
PUT THE FIRE OUT
dusk arising said:
Loved that, didn\'t see that one coming.
Hello M.E. artist,. well met
in yer finest fireman\'s helmet
you know that u ought\'a
go fetch some water
before those flames reach the pelmet.
January 14th, 2021 08:42
dusk arising said:
Loved that, didn\'t see that one coming.
Hello M.E. artist,. well met
in yer finest fireman\'s helmet
you know that u ought\'a
go fetch some water
before those flames reach the pelmet.
January 14th, 2021 08:42
PUT THE FIRE OUT
L. B. Mek said:
why is it I see a graveyard picture that\'s a little light in tone and immediately I hear:
\'My father\'s family name being Pirrip, and my christian name Philip, my infant tongue could make of both names nothing longer or more explicit than Pip. So, I called myself Pip, and came to be called Pip.\'
thank you for that Michael, time for a re-read I think
January 14th, 2021 07:47
L. B. Mek said:
why is it I see a graveyard picture that\'s a little light in tone and immediately I hear:
\'My father\'s family name being Pirrip, and my christian name Philip, my infant tongue could make of both names nothing longer or more explicit than Pip. So, I called myself Pip, and came to be called Pip.\'
thank you for that Michael, time for a re-read I think
January 14th, 2021 07:47
PUT THE FIRE OUT
Doggerel Dave said:
Didn\'t do the picture in a morning through, did you Michael? Come on - fess up... your pictures make me quite nostalgic, actually.
Dave
January 14th, 2021 05:03
Doggerel Dave said:
Didn\'t do the picture in a morning through, did you Michael? Come on - fess up... your pictures make me quite nostalgic, actually.
Dave
January 14th, 2021 05:03
PUT THE FIRE OUT
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you so much for my first laugh of the day Michael.
Andy
January 14th, 2021 03:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you so much for my first laugh of the day Michael.
Andy
January 14th, 2021 03:09
PUT THE FIRE OUT
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write and pic M.
So it was not the Fire Exit door you opened. That has to be kept closed at all times. Doh!
January 14th, 2021 02:46
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write and pic M.
So it was not the Fire Exit door you opened. That has to be kept closed at all times. Doh!
January 14th, 2021 02:46
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