Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
PAST DREAMS
Goldfinch60 said:
May those dreams reach that empyrean height and become real.
Andy
March 21st, 2021 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
May those dreams reach that empyrean height and become real.
Andy
March 21st, 2021 02:21
HIDDEN DEEP
L. B. Mek said:
a worded bridge between fantasy and reality\'s \'trucked light\'s,
where wrongful deeds come with consequences that resonate way after that last page has been read and a gavel\'s echo, has been felt..
so glad to read you\'re doing well my friend!
March 11th, 2021 05:20
L. B. Mek said:
a worded bridge between fantasy and reality\'s \'trucked light\'s,
where wrongful deeds come with consequences that resonate way after that last page has been read and a gavel\'s echo, has been felt..
so glad to read you\'re doing well my friend!
March 11th, 2021 05:20
HIDDEN DEEP
Dove said:
Cool, been doing lots of Art myself!
Cute poem and great drawings!
March 10th, 2021 19:08
Dove said:
Cool, been doing lots of Art myself!
Cute poem and great drawings!
March 10th, 2021 19:08
HIDDEN DEEP
Jerry Reynolds said:
Hi Michael. Fix that leak in the Garage? Great art Good poem.
March 10th, 2021 17:50
Jerry Reynolds said:
Hi Michael. Fix that leak in the Garage? Great art Good poem.
March 10th, 2021 17:50
HIDDEN DEEP
Fay Slimm. said:
We have both been away for the same while Mike and so nice now I am back on line to see you at your art-work again - - love the scary-worded verse and the inspiringly clever triptychs.
March 10th, 2021 17:33
Fay Slimm. said:
We have both been away for the same while Mike and so nice now I am back on line to see you at your art-work again - - love the scary-worded verse and the inspiringly clever triptychs.
March 10th, 2021 17:33
HIDDEN DEEP
MendedFences27 said:
\"Truckled light\" submissive to one\'s control. If only we could \"truckle light,\" then instead of \"trucking down the highway\" we could be \"truckling across the universe.\" Enjoyed that word and all the rest of them. This one is a keeper. - Phil A.
March 10th, 2021 16:49
MendedFences27 said:
\"Truckled light\" submissive to one\'s control. If only we could \"truckle light,\" then instead of \"trucking down the highway\" we could be \"truckling across the universe.\" Enjoyed that word and all the rest of them. This one is a keeper. - Phil A.
March 10th, 2021 16:49
HIDDEN DEEP
dusk arising said:
Good to see you again and a great piece which enlivens my mind to venture there...... with my mind\'s fantasy beings.
March 10th, 2021 04:45
dusk arising said:
Good to see you again and a great piece which enlivens my mind to venture there...... with my mind\'s fantasy beings.
March 10th, 2021 04:45
HIDDEN DEEP
orchidee said:
I\'m not having them walks in the woods then! Well, not at dusk anyway.
Good write and trip-wotsit M.
March 10th, 2021 03:16
orchidee said:
I\'m not having them walks in the woods then! Well, not at dusk anyway.
Good write and trip-wotsit M.
March 10th, 2021 03:16
HIDDEN DEEP
Goldfinch60 said:
Those maleficent forces shall be shown when the light hits them.
Good to see you back Michael and glad all is well.
Doing triptychs now are you? Good work.
Andy
March 10th, 2021 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Those maleficent forces shall be shown when the light hits them.
Good to see you back Michael and glad all is well.
Doing triptychs now are you? Good work.
Andy
March 10th, 2021 01:40
AN ARTISAN
SureshG said:
Her pasties sound like Galaxy\'s nebulas. Both awesome.
February 17th, 2021 10:04
SureshG said:
Her pasties sound like Galaxy\'s nebulas. Both awesome.
February 17th, 2021 10:04
SPRING
SureshG said:
To us, human, on top of the food chain, nature is truly awesome. Every drip of ice melting, every chirp of a chick awakes a certain emotion within us. If we can only learn to hold on to it , for nature already has a lot to deal with, every day.
Maybe, people reading your words will awaken to it.
February 14th, 2021 11:50
SureshG said:
To us, human, on top of the food chain, nature is truly awesome. Every drip of ice melting, every chirp of a chick awakes a certain emotion within us. If we can only learn to hold on to it , for nature already has a lot to deal with, every day.
Maybe, people reading your words will awaken to it.
February 14th, 2021 11:50
SPRING
Goldfinch60 said:
The magic of Nature is always around us Michael and your words highlight it.
Absolutely cracking artwork.
February 14th, 2021 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
The magic of Nature is always around us Michael and your words highlight it.
Absolutely cracking artwork.
February 14th, 2021 01:35
SPRING
Fay Slimm. said:
Your beautifully prosed Spring makes me look even more forward to its bird-chorus - a super write Michael - love the juxtaposed haiku too.
February 13th, 2021 13:20
Fay Slimm. said:
Your beautifully prosed Spring makes me look even more forward to its bird-chorus - a super write Michael - love the juxtaposed haiku too.
February 13th, 2021 13:20
SPRING
Doggerel Dave said:
Got to confess (haven’t been paying attention?) that I retreated to Google to find out what haibun was all about. The words ‘descriptive, sparse poetic imagery’ leaped out. You got that right – nature poetry accessible to me. Plus haiku with just the right message. Ta.
February 13th, 2021 05:46
Doggerel Dave said:
Got to confess (haven’t been paying attention?) that I retreated to Google to find out what haibun was all about. The words ‘descriptive, sparse poetic imagery’ leaped out. You got that right – nature poetry accessible to me. Plus haiku with just the right message. Ta.
February 13th, 2021 05:46
LE MANOIR AUX QUAT’SAISONS
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Michael
Memories of my first date with Margie waited month for a spot at the hottest seat it town, when with one glance at the menu she declared \"I don\'t fancy anything here, can we go to a pub\"?
\'twas then I knew she was the girl for me...
Thanks Michael and congrats on the 50 years,,, must be love... by now?
February 9th, 2021 04:32
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Michael
Memories of my first date with Margie waited month for a spot at the hottest seat it town, when with one glance at the menu she declared \"I don\'t fancy anything here, can we go to a pub\"?
\'twas then I knew she was the girl for me...
Thanks Michael and congrats on the 50 years,,, must be love... by now?
February 9th, 2021 04:32
LE MANOIR AUX QUAT’SAISONS
L. B. Mek said:
firstly Raymond Blanc is one of the most charismatic chefs I have ever come across,
second, do not go to Michelin starred restaurants for a meal, it\'s to be treated as \'gastronomy experience\' (the \'parading\' Art of starving one\'s belly),
most importantly: congratulations, on your anniversary!
ain\'t noti\'n rong wid goin 2 da fish\'n\'chipies 4 som propr grub...
February 4th, 2021 04:54
L. B. Mek said:
firstly Raymond Blanc is one of the most charismatic chefs I have ever come across,
second, do not go to Michelin starred restaurants for a meal, it\'s to be treated as \'gastronomy experience\' (the \'parading\' Art of starving one\'s belly),
most importantly: congratulations, on your anniversary!
ain\'t noti\'n rong wid goin 2 da fish\'n\'chipies 4 som propr grub...
February 4th, 2021 04:54
LE MANOIR AUX QUAT’SAISONS
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh, come now Michael - \'Less is more\' don\'t you know?
Me, I still recommend (my plebeian roots) baked beans on toast, lashings of tomato sauce and a cuppa tea.
BTW he didn\'t take the above dictum to heart when he named his cafe, did he?
Great abstract work there. A triptych really?
February 3rd, 2021 19:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh, come now Michael - \'Less is more\' don\'t you know?
Me, I still recommend (my plebeian roots) baked beans on toast, lashings of tomato sauce and a cuppa tea.
BTW he didn\'t take the above dictum to heart when he named his cafe, did he?
Great abstract work there. A triptych really?
February 3rd, 2021 19:32
LE MANOIR AUX QUAT’SAISONS
FredPeyer said:
Like the French in your title, goes well with \'French\' food. Here is what you do if you want a \'hearty\' meal: Stop at a restaurant with lots of trucks outside. The food is usually good, lots of it, and not expensive!!!
February 3rd, 2021 13:02
FredPeyer said:
Like the French in your title, goes well with \'French\' food. Here is what you do if you want a \'hearty\' meal: Stop at a restaurant with lots of trucks outside. The food is usually good, lots of it, and not expensive!!!
February 3rd, 2021 13:02
LE MANOIR AUX QUAT’SAISONS
SureshG said:
the numbers on the \"check\" are longer than the portions on the plate. Yet we can\'t help ourselves, for the food is so darn good.
Do you think, they think, that if we had too much, they may loose a repeat customer?
Great color coordination
February 3rd, 2021 12:51
SureshG said:
the numbers on the \"check\" are longer than the portions on the plate. Yet we can\'t help ourselves, for the food is so darn good.
Do you think, they think, that if we had too much, they may loose a repeat customer?
Great color coordination
February 3rd, 2021 12:51
LE MANOIR AUX QUAT’SAISONS
dusk arising said:
Firstly, you picture. It brought to mind the magician sawing up a lady into several parts, but when they were put together again .. well... there was a fly in the ointment (thoughts of that film \'the fly\' there).
Oh so true of modern snooty cuisine \'looks good, tastes good, where\'s the rest of it?\'
February 3rd, 2021 07:04
dusk arising said:
Firstly, you picture. It brought to mind the magician sawing up a lady into several parts, but when they were put together again .. well... there was a fly in the ointment (thoughts of that film \'the fly\' there).
Oh so true of modern snooty cuisine \'looks good, tastes good, where\'s the rest of it?\'
February 3rd, 2021 07:04
LE MANOIR AUX QUAT’SAISONS
orchidee said:
You had lunch yet, thinking of restaurants?!
February 3rd, 2021 06:22
orchidee said:
You had lunch yet, thinking of restaurants?!
February 3rd, 2021 06:22
LE MANOIR AUX QUAT’SAISONS
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. Oohhh, they knew what to do - they were trying to save people from obesity. No chance of getting fat on their portions?!
Miss Berles eat much? Bit of German there in the title?
February 3rd, 2021 02:55
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. Oohhh, they knew what to do - they were trying to save people from obesity. No chance of getting fat on their portions?!
Miss Berles eat much? Bit of German there in the title?
February 3rd, 2021 02:55
LE MANOIR AUX QUAT’SAISONS
Goldfinch60 said:
I have been to a place like that. The last company that I worked for did a Christmas \'do\' every year where we to a hotel one Friday before Christmas, had a meal, drank to odd half of shandy and stayed the night, all payed for by the company. One hotel we went to served the meal and on this large plate there was all the food in an area that had a bout a two inch circumference - fine dining was the expression - we were not impressed.
Good words Michael
Andy
February 3rd, 2021 02:52
Goldfinch60 said:
I have been to a place like that. The last company that I worked for did a Christmas \'do\' every year where we to a hotel one Friday before Christmas, had a meal, drank to odd half of shandy and stayed the night, all payed for by the company. One hotel we went to served the meal and on this large plate there was all the food in an area that had a bout a two inch circumference - fine dining was the expression - we were not impressed.
Good words Michael
Andy
February 3rd, 2021 02:52
AN ARTISAN
FredPeyer said:
Read your poem before breakfast, gotta go, am hungry now!
February 2nd, 2021 13:07
FredPeyer said:
Read your poem before breakfast, gotta go, am hungry now!
February 2nd, 2021 13:07
AN ARTISAN
Jerry Reynolds said:
Love the painting. The poem is fantastic, feels, somehow, like part of the things you know. Good morning read my favorite.
February 2nd, 2021 10:03
Jerry Reynolds said:
Love the painting. The poem is fantastic, feels, somehow, like part of the things you know. Good morning read my favorite.
February 2nd, 2021 10:03
AN ARTISAN
L. B. Mek said:
your artwork had me thinking of a work I really like, titled \'the chasm of the Colorado\' by Thomas Moran (I think),
only yours is more like \'the chasm within a cloud\' or a little morosely: \'droplets of ichor, invading our prism of essence\',
my simpleton self, would title it as
\'a dance of pigment\'s, self-introductory waves\'...
my 2 cent$ worth, thankfully its free, lol
February 2nd, 2021 05:52
L. B. Mek said:
your artwork had me thinking of a work I really like, titled \'the chasm of the Colorado\' by Thomas Moran (I think),
only yours is more like \'the chasm within a cloud\' or a little morosely: \'droplets of ichor, invading our prism of essence\',
my simpleton self, would title it as
\'a dance of pigment\'s, self-introductory waves\'...
my 2 cent$ worth, thankfully its free, lol
February 2nd, 2021 05:52
AN ARTISAN
dusk arising said:
Lovely picture.
Great poetry painting a character picture. I feel like I\'m reading a classic piece i have known since childhood.
I think youve produced a real gem.
February 2nd, 2021 05:25
dusk arising said:
Lovely picture.
Great poetry painting a character picture. I feel like I\'m reading a classic piece i have known since childhood.
I think youve produced a real gem.
February 2nd, 2021 05:25
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