Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



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Poetic Dan said:

And now I\'ll delightfully go look at the rest!

July 16th, 2021 01:40

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myself and me said:

Both the poem and the paint are perfect.

July 8th, 2021 21:59

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Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, Michael.
A fine gesture that horse very sellable piece.

July 8th, 2021 14:57

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L. B. Mek said:

these words take me back
to an idiom I could never comprehend
guilty \'pleasures\';
as a concept, guilt is bathed in regret
and yet
we need only, flick through our memories
to realise
most of our own personal guilt, is born - mainly
from getting caught
because there\'s so many skeletons, we hide
in those cramped closets
that we simply forget, unless someone reminds us
with a pointed finger
or that sobering click of a handcuff;
and so I wonder
is our morality, an outlined concept
not filled-in or coloured
because we know, it might be a galloping
high-horse of righteousness
one day, and the next be warped into a snivelling weasel
of regressed: regret\'s, guilt...
(not sure if I interpreted your words and artwork
in a feasibly comprehendible manner
but, this is what my feeble mind came up with) lol
great to see you a little more regularly Michael
touch-wood, that\'s a promising sign 🤞🙏


July 8th, 2021 05:32

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Doggerel Dave said:

True, Michael - but we can try to make amends to the offspring of the wronged where they suffer disadvantage as a result.
That horse - alive and kicking with so few lines - brilliant.

July 8th, 2021 04:54

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Fay Slimm. said:

Never a truer last line here Michael - - shall be remembering it too for into my list of faves goes this little gem.

July 8th, 2021 04:46

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Neville said:



.. superbly said sir ..

July 8th, 2021 03:25

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Goldfinch60 said:

So true Michael.

Can I have a ride on the horse? 🐴🐴🐴

Andy

July 8th, 2021 02:58

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myself and me said:

I see a new creative vision here.

July 2nd, 2021 21:05

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Doggerel Dave said:

Michael, for me this evoked very visual images, as the first line gave me a picture of a wide open and naturally fertile landscape, while the second saw a heavy duty bulldozer right through the middle.
Never got that much out of a shorty before.

July 2nd, 2021 18:41

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L. B. Mek said:

Amen!
as your Art
a wonderful window into your wisdom
your words offer;
sombre tones, but colourful
like the hopeful heart
gifting them, that brushstroke of life

July 2nd, 2021 04:58

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Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Michael.

Do I see a new artform being explored?

Andy

July 2nd, 2021 02:46

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orchidee said:

Good write M.
Is this about Miss Drib Berles and Miss Drab Berles?!

July 2nd, 2021 01:51

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Doggerel Dave said:

Life was much simpler then - or maybe still is for all I know...
Nice piece of art - I\'m not complaining, Michael, But you could have done one more illustrative of the matter in hand (so to speak) surely?

June 26th, 2021 08:26

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Neville said:


Superb sir .. the perfect marriage between two of my most fave art forms ...

and tis good to have ya back and truly :)


June 26th, 2021 03:02

THE LIFE ARTIST
Goldfinch60 said:

My first laugh of the day Michael, thank you so very much.

Another very intriguing artwork.

Andy

June 26th, 2021 00:39

THE LIFE ARTIST
Saxon Crow said:

Please tell me you still used a brush to paint!

June 26th, 2021 00:28

THE LIFE ARTIST
dusk arising said:

When the artist said it was rude
he was considered to be quite a prude
but when he ripped off his clothes
and struck up a pose
he landed in court being sued

June 25th, 2021 17:06

THE LIFE ARTIST
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

So happy and grateful to see your artwork and to read your poem today.

I’ve been absent for a while due to medical reasons. I’m so appreciative to be able to read again and comment on the posts.

All the best to you and your family. Hope all’s well with everyone.

Laura🌻


June 25th, 2021 16:49

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orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write M.
Me usual poem got lost somehow today! A mad moment from me.

June 25th, 2021 13:35

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Fay Slimm. said:

Ha ha - - a twist of the usual which gave me a big smile - - great to see you back posting again Michael my friend - hope all is well with you and yours.

June 25th, 2021 12:33

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L. B. Mek said:

that duality conundrum of balance: in life..
a wonderful shorty Michael

June 17th, 2021 03:25

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Doggerel Dave said:

Picture makes me all nostalgic again. Middle building a pub (lettering over doorway)?
With respect to health problems , wish you both the very best outcome,

June 17th, 2021 01:11

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Dove said:

Great Painting, love the shadows and detail, and the pint size of wisdom

June 17th, 2021 00:58

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Goldfinch60 said:

Oh so very true Michael.

Andy

June 17th, 2021 00:13

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Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, Michael.
Placement of the two figures walking towards us- Poetry.

June 16th, 2021 08:42

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orchidee said:

Good write and pic M.
Miss Berles contribute to sport?

June 16th, 2021 05:08

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Fay Slimm. said:

A truth indeed Michael and good to see you back posting your wonderful water colours again.

June 16th, 2021 05:06

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dusk arising said:

Great picture. Well guessing that your poetry is your sport, it\'s recent absence from MPS must mean there\'s lots of money coming in.

Good to see you ME.

June 16th, 2021 02:50

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SureshG said:

FOUR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

June 7th, 2021 23:23



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