Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



A COUPLET COLLECTION (13-15)
Neville said:


I entirely concur ... all three spot on sir

December 16th, 2021 12:46

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L. B. Mek said:

there\'s so much I wish I could write in response to these two
beautiful works of art, but
since you\'re probably tired of reading my BS
I\'ll just refrain myself
and thank you for sharing, my friend
(absolutely loved the painting\'s, \'crayon effect\' colouring
transported my eyes to their childhood\'s
naïve way of looking at life..)
however fleeting, what a gift

December 16th, 2021 06:07

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orchidee said:

Good writes and pic M.
Has Miss Berles run out of \'l\'s, and gave you an \'r\' instead?

December 16th, 2021 03:11

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Saxon Crow said:

Very well written Michael. They both have a lovely flow to them.

December 16th, 2021 02:24

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Neville said:


absolutely splendid Michael .. before reading, I imagined your take on a Benny Hill crip on celibacy might be forthcoming ... my absolutely splendid remark up there hardly does these little gems the justice they so writefully deserve ..................................... N


December 16th, 2021 02:20

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Caring dove said:

Lovely writing 🙂 I like your choice of words … flows nicely

December 16th, 2021 01:38

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dusk arising said:

Beautifully woven words to please my cerebral yuletide conscious.

On the other hind (hic) i like to cerebrate (hic) wiff a glass or two of pop (wink wink) .... why? (hic) because it\'s there!

December 16th, 2021 00:25

A COUPLET COLLECTION (13-15)
dusk arising said:

More pearls of wisdom.

December 15th, 2021 09:54

A COUPLET COLLECTION (13-15)
Goldfinch60 said:

Three good couplets Michael.

Andy

December 15th, 2021 03:18

A COUPLET COLLECTION (13-15)
orchidee said:

Good writes and pic M.
No.1 - It\'s tricky then, if the country is being run by Bozo, Coco, and Co.
No.2 - I would come out of the tunnel, but there\'s that pesky Fire Door at the end of it, which must always be kept closed.
No.3 - Miss Berles played her ram\'s horn lately?!

December 15th, 2021 03:13

THE GUY WHO ISN’T THERE - A COLLABORATION
myself and me said:

Marvelous!

December 11th, 2021 13:04

A COUPLET COLLECTION (10-12)
myself and me said:

Can\'t resist the humor.

December 11th, 2021 12:54

A COUPLET COLLECTION (10-12)
Goldfinch60 said:

Three more good ones MIchael .

Andy

December 6th, 2021 01:43

A COUPLET COLLECTION (10-12)
Fay Slimm. said:

Your wit knows no end with both art-work and verses MIke - so good to see you back posting again -- can you hear my loud chuckle at your middle couplet !!!

December 5th, 2021 16:39

A COUPLET COLLECTION (10-12)
Neville said:


I am sooooooooooooooooooo glad he\'s back folks ....................... N :)

December 5th, 2021 13:51

A COUPLET COLLECTION (10-12)
SureshG said:

By the scent

They are all waxed, as she gets a Brazilian

Of course it’s the ‘s’, no I meant the ‘c’, well it’s the English for you

December 5th, 2021 09:03

A COUPLET COLLECTION (10-12)
orchidee said:

Good writes M. lol.
You can see the \'c\' is silent in scent, but you can\'t hear it!
I was incensed. I was not angry.
A censer tipped over and covered me in incense!
Don\'t ask Miss Berles about number two!

December 5th, 2021 05:38

A COUPLET COLLECTION (10-12)
Paul Bell said:

Why didn\'t Boris ask this question when he got stuck for words? I mean, I\'m sure, Mr\'s Peppa pig would have answered them. When I brought her back, the wrong scent, all the words were silent.

December 5th, 2021 05:35

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Lorna said:

Ah and for the first one.... did that treee actually fall in the woods if we didn\'t see and hear it? So many queestions! No one even answered
Why is the sky blue......

December 5th, 2021 04:52

A COUPLET COLLECTION (10-12)
Rozina said:

Apologies, I cannot answer any of them! And a fascinating drawing too.

December 5th, 2021 04:32

THE GUY WHO ISN’T THERE - A COLLABORATION
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good one, Michael.
A much-needed laugh.

December 3rd, 2021 16:54

THE GUY WHO ISN’T THERE - A COLLABORATION
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

I’m glad I read this re-write. Thank you for penning it and sharing it with your MPS readers. I missed the one penned by Coyote.

I love your artwork.

Laura🌻
P.S.- My love and best wishes to your dear Jeanne. I hope she’s doing better.❤️

December 3rd, 2021 12:18

THE GUY WHO ISN’T THERE - A COLLABORATION
SureshG said:

Most of us speak to the “guy whose isn’t there”,
knowing that he’s silently listening, hoping that he cares.

Thoroughly enjoyed

December 3rd, 2021 11:43

THE GUY WHO ISN’T THERE - A COLLABORATION
Dove said:

The. Mind holds a many good things, the heart even more



December 3rd, 2021 10:55

THE GUY WHO ISN’T THERE - A COLLABORATION
Coyote said:

Love the re-write. Nice work Michael🙂

December 3rd, 2021 10:46

THE GUY WHO ISN’T THERE - A COLLABORATION
dusk arising said:

Is it me? I haven\'t been on that bench you know. Am i the bloke who wasn\'t there?

December 3rd, 2021 06:51

THE GUY WHO ISN’T THERE - A COLLABORATION
L. B. Mek said:

you outed hypocrisy, so eloquently

December 3rd, 2021 06:13

THE GUY WHO ISN’T THERE - A COLLABORATION
Neville said:


Yep .. not half bad .. and I do mean both halves .. a seamless collaboration, I can see I shall have to go check out that Coyote .... Neville


December 3rd, 2021 04:44

THE GUY WHO ISN’T THERE - A COLLABORATION
Goldfinch60 said:

Super words Michael and Coyote.

Andy

December 3rd, 2021 03:18

THE GUY WHO ISN’T THERE - A COLLABORATION
orchidee said:

A sort of \'agreeing to disagree\' comment - I think of people saying prayers or \'talking to God\' or to a \'god\' when I read this.
In my belief, someone is there. We may talk to someone or some thing that we can\'t see visibly.
Is Miss Berles there? Can she be seen? Or is she busy sorting out the syllaberles?!

December 3rd, 2021 03:08



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