Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
REMEMBERED
dusk arising said:
I\'ll stick with limericks, haibun\'s far too complex for the likes of me.
So M.E. has wrote us a haibun
it musta been hard to compose one
was he helped by his muse
with a flagon of booze
or forced into it with a shotgun?
January 9th, 2021 06:03
dusk arising said:
I\'ll stick with limericks, haibun\'s far too complex for the likes of me.
So M.E. has wrote us a haibun
it musta been hard to compose one
was he helped by his muse
with a flagon of booze
or forced into it with a shotgun?
January 9th, 2021 06:03
REMEMBERED
orchidee said:
Ahh, a fine poem about Miss Berles, M.
You been in our area? In that fine pic the white building looks like a former Chapel local to me.
January 9th, 2021 02:57
orchidee said:
Ahh, a fine poem about Miss Berles, M.
You been in our area? In that fine pic the white building looks like a former Chapel local to me.
January 9th, 2021 02:57
REMEMBERED
Goldfinch60 said:
That is brilliant Michael and that senryu at the end is so emotive. Another into my favourites.
Andy
January 9th, 2021 02:38
Goldfinch60 said:
That is brilliant Michael and that senryu at the end is so emotive. Another into my favourites.
Andy
January 9th, 2021 02:38
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L. B. Mek said:
beautifully sincere words - to match
your artwork\'s scene
of that everyday serene
we take for granted: too quickly...
a wonderful read Michael, hope this is merely an expression of Artistry and all is well my friend,
January 8th, 2021 05:26
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully sincere words - to match
your artwork\'s scene
of that everyday serene
we take for granted: too quickly...
a wonderful read Michael, hope this is merely an expression of Artistry and all is well my friend,
January 8th, 2021 05:26
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Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful Water Color and poem.
Wish I were there.
January 7th, 2021 10:32
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful Water Color and poem.
Wish I were there.
January 7th, 2021 10:32
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dusk arising said:
Thoughts ever return
to a light ever dawning
perpetuity.
January 7th, 2021 10:16
dusk arising said:
Thoughts ever return
to a light ever dawning
perpetuity.
January 7th, 2021 10:16
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Fay Slimm. said:
such an appealing Sen my friend - - and the artwork is simply superb.
January 7th, 2021 08:54
Fay Slimm. said:
such an appealing Sen my friend - - and the artwork is simply superb.
January 7th, 2021 08:54
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Goldfinch60 said:
Very, very good Senryu Michael, that is going into my favourites as it is so true.
Andy
January 7th, 2021 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Very, very good Senryu Michael, that is going into my favourites as it is so true.
Andy
January 7th, 2021 01:47
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Robert Southwick Richmond said:
Let\'s hope that, with the coming of the vaccine, that Covid (should be capitalized) will become the kigo (season-word) of this haiku. A colon mark after elbows would represent the kireji.
January 5th, 2021 12:12
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
Let\'s hope that, with the coming of the vaccine, that Covid (should be capitalized) will become the kigo (season-word) of this haiku. A colon mark after elbows would represent the kireji.
January 5th, 2021 12:12
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Fay Slimm. said:
I fear not masking the grin this read left as I tried that elbow-touch and missed my distance - - .great artwork again Michael.
January 5th, 2021 11:37
Fay Slimm. said:
I fear not masking the grin this read left as I tried that elbow-touch and missed my distance - - .great artwork again Michael.
January 5th, 2021 11:37
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dusk arising said:
A facemasked greeting
conceals a smile or grimace
secrets of lockdown
January 5th, 2021 11:29
dusk arising said:
A facemasked greeting
conceals a smile or grimace
secrets of lockdown
January 5th, 2021 11:29
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L. B. Mek said:
indeed, an insightful write Michael,
personally, I think I have perfected the best system for receiving package deliveries:
throw down the rope from my ground floor window and wave \'warmly\' with my full hazmat suit zipped-up tight,
then put on my oven mitts, spray it all with 99% killing antibacterial acid, hoping all the time that 1%: doesn\'t get me at night...
\'oh those horror few seconds - we brave, between a cough and our thermometer results of fate...\' lol
(ignore me, I was just having a little fun in my scribbled reply my friend)
January 5th, 2021 05:40
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, an insightful write Michael,
personally, I think I have perfected the best system for receiving package deliveries:
throw down the rope from my ground floor window and wave \'warmly\' with my full hazmat suit zipped-up tight,
then put on my oven mitts, spray it all with 99% killing antibacterial acid, hoping all the time that 1%: doesn\'t get me at night...
\'oh those horror few seconds - we brave, between a cough and our thermometer results of fate...\' lol
(ignore me, I was just having a little fun in my scribbled reply my friend)
January 5th, 2021 05:40
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orchidee said:
Good write and pic M.
Miss B do fist-bumps?!
January 5th, 2021 03:07
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M.
Miss B do fist-bumps?!
January 5th, 2021 03:07
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Goldfinch60 said:
It is so sad that touching is not allowed, even a simple handshake is missed by me.
Ah, back to the artwork I know and love.
Andy
January 5th, 2021 02:27
Goldfinch60 said:
It is so sad that touching is not allowed, even a simple handshake is missed by me.
Ah, back to the artwork I know and love.
Andy
January 5th, 2021 02:27
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Jerry Reynolds said:
A phrase and a fragment straightforward language uncomplicated images
a mention of nature. That\'s a Haiku pal and a good one.
January 4th, 2021 15:55
Jerry Reynolds said:
A phrase and a fragment straightforward language uncomplicated images
a mention of nature. That\'s a Haiku pal and a good one.
January 4th, 2021 15:55
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dusk arising said:
contented alone
he sat upon the throne
thunder resounded
An \"ME-enry-oo\" .
January 4th, 2021 14:12
dusk arising said:
contented alone
he sat upon the throne
thunder resounded
An \"ME-enry-oo\" .
January 4th, 2021 14:12
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L. B. Mek said:
when I marry the imagery of your words to your artwork:
I sense the Sun shining from East to West highlighting your chosen focus
capturing vividly effervescent: one of life\'s nuggets of subtle brilliance,
within that sunbeam
dance \'wisps\' of \'her\' unruly hair, serenading your eyes with their vivacious musicality of all-things gaiety, in the now cherished: so meaningfully dearly...
sorry Michael, I got all tangled-up in my own interpretation, lol
still, what a beautiful offering you\'ve chosen to brighten this dreary start to a new year with my friend,
Brilliant!
January 4th, 2021 07:28
L. B. Mek said:
when I marry the imagery of your words to your artwork:
I sense the Sun shining from East to West highlighting your chosen focus
capturing vividly effervescent: one of life\'s nuggets of subtle brilliance,
within that sunbeam
dance \'wisps\' of \'her\' unruly hair, serenading your eyes with their vivacious musicality of all-things gaiety, in the now cherished: so meaningfully dearly...
sorry Michael, I got all tangled-up in my own interpretation, lol
still, what a beautiful offering you\'ve chosen to brighten this dreary start to a new year with my friend,
Brilliant!
January 4th, 2021 07:28
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Poetic Dan said:
What you\'ve seen the sun! Can you send it down south when you are done...
Great art work as ever my friend!
January 4th, 2021 06:51
Poetic Dan said:
What you\'ve seen the sun! Can you send it down south when you are done...
Great art work as ever my friend!
January 4th, 2021 06:51
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Goldfinch60 said:
A 5-7-5 eh Michael? A good one.
Love the artwork.
Andy
January 4th, 2021 03:13
Goldfinch60 said:
A 5-7-5 eh Michael? A good one.
Love the artwork.
Andy
January 4th, 2021 03:13
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orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. Just enough Berles in it.
January 4th, 2021 02:36
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. Just enough Berles in it.
January 4th, 2021 02:36
I GOT UP
Neville said:
I am so glad I found this, this evening after a bloomin long days volunteering ....... a decent chuckle with a hot chocolate is just what I needed ...
January 1st, 2021 13:12
Neville said:
I am so glad I found this, this evening after a bloomin long days volunteering ....... a decent chuckle with a hot chocolate is just what I needed ...
January 1st, 2021 13:12
I GOT UP
Jerry Reynolds said:
Love the poem, Michael. The art is beautiful as well. Happy New Year.
December 31st, 2020 15:15
Jerry Reynolds said:
Love the poem, Michael. The art is beautiful as well. Happy New Year.
December 31st, 2020 15:15
I GOT UP
dusk arising said:
Though seasonal eatings a chore
i continually gorge more and more
now i\'m saying my prayers
before going downstairs
in case i should fall through the floor
you see, you\'ve again got me started
though my composition may be quite halfhearted
when i fell through that ceiling
there came a rumbling feeling
and then i resoundingly farted
The odour which the arose
got up the olifactory nose
the pong was so lousy
i began to feel drowsy
I\'m writing this quite comatose
December 31st, 2020 07:49
dusk arising said:
Though seasonal eatings a chore
i continually gorge more and more
now i\'m saying my prayers
before going downstairs
in case i should fall through the floor
you see, you\'ve again got me started
though my composition may be quite halfhearted
when i fell through that ceiling
there came a rumbling feeling
and then i resoundingly farted
The odour which the arose
got up the olifactory nose
the pong was so lousy
i began to feel drowsy
I\'m writing this quite comatose
December 31st, 2020 07:49
I GOT UP
L. B. Mek said:
\'The bulldozer outside the kitchen window was quite a big one.
He stared at it.
“Yellow,” he thought, and stomped off back to his bedroom to get dressed.\'
from opening \'scene\' of \'the Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy\',
your words took me right back to that beloved character Michael...
your painting had me dreading those endless pages of Moby Dick and that eventual final battle where Captain Ahab found the end: he so fervently chased...
Happy New Year Michael, stay safe
December 31st, 2020 06:37
L. B. Mek said:
\'The bulldozer outside the kitchen window was quite a big one.
He stared at it.
“Yellow,” he thought, and stomped off back to his bedroom to get dressed.\'
from opening \'scene\' of \'the Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy\',
your words took me right back to that beloved character Michael...
your painting had me dreading those endless pages of Moby Dick and that eventual final battle where Captain Ahab found the end: he so fervently chased...
Happy New Year Michael, stay safe
December 31st, 2020 06:37
I GOT UP
Fay Slimm. said:
Climbing through windows on stairs to the star-way - what a wonderful dream this read stirs in me - - super work Michael.
December 31st, 2020 05:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Climbing through windows on stairs to the star-way - what a wonderful dream this read stirs in me - - super work Michael.
December 31st, 2020 05:39
I GOT UP
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
Happy New Year\'s Eve.
I see you\'re energetic getting up for the New Year that lies in store.
Lets hope it will be a good one.
Good write.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 31st, 2020 02:15
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
Happy New Year\'s Eve.
I see you\'re energetic getting up for the New Year that lies in store.
Lets hope it will be a good one.
Good write.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 31st, 2020 02:15
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