Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
IN THE FORMAT (1)
dusk arising said:
contented alone
he sat upon the throne
thunder resounded
An \"ME-enry-oo\" .
January 4th, 2021 14:12
dusk arising said:
contented alone
he sat upon the throne
thunder resounded
An \"ME-enry-oo\" .
January 4th, 2021 14:12
IN THE FORMAT (1)
L. B. Mek said:
when I marry the imagery of your words to your artwork:
I sense the Sun shining from East to West highlighting your chosen focus
capturing vividly effervescent: one of life\'s nuggets of subtle brilliance,
within that sunbeam
dance \'wisps\' of \'her\' unruly hair, serenading your eyes with their vivacious musicality of all-things gaiety, in the now cherished: so meaningfully dearly...
sorry Michael, I got all tangled-up in my own interpretation, lol
still, what a beautiful offering you\'ve chosen to brighten this dreary start to a new year with my friend,
Brilliant!
January 4th, 2021 07:28
L. B. Mek said:
when I marry the imagery of your words to your artwork:
I sense the Sun shining from East to West highlighting your chosen focus
capturing vividly effervescent: one of life\'s nuggets of subtle brilliance,
within that sunbeam
dance \'wisps\' of \'her\' unruly hair, serenading your eyes with their vivacious musicality of all-things gaiety, in the now cherished: so meaningfully dearly...
sorry Michael, I got all tangled-up in my own interpretation, lol
still, what a beautiful offering you\'ve chosen to brighten this dreary start to a new year with my friend,
Brilliant!
January 4th, 2021 07:28
IN THE FORMAT (1)
Poetic Dan said:
What you\'ve seen the sun! Can you send it down south when you are done...
Great art work as ever my friend!
January 4th, 2021 06:51
Poetic Dan said:
What you\'ve seen the sun! Can you send it down south when you are done...
Great art work as ever my friend!
January 4th, 2021 06:51
IN THE FORMAT (1)
Goldfinch60 said:
A 5-7-5 eh Michael? A good one.
Love the artwork.
Andy
January 4th, 2021 03:13
Goldfinch60 said:
A 5-7-5 eh Michael? A good one.
Love the artwork.
Andy
January 4th, 2021 03:13
IN THE FORMAT (1)
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. Just enough Berles in it.
January 4th, 2021 02:36
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. Just enough Berles in it.
January 4th, 2021 02:36
I GOT UP
Neville said:
I am so glad I found this, this evening after a bloomin long days volunteering ....... a decent chuckle with a hot chocolate is just what I needed ...
January 1st, 2021 13:12
Neville said:
I am so glad I found this, this evening after a bloomin long days volunteering ....... a decent chuckle with a hot chocolate is just what I needed ...
January 1st, 2021 13:12
I GOT UP
Jerry Reynolds said:
Love the poem, Michael. The art is beautiful as well. Happy New Year.
December 31st, 2020 15:15
Jerry Reynolds said:
Love the poem, Michael. The art is beautiful as well. Happy New Year.
December 31st, 2020 15:15
I GOT UP
dusk arising said:
Though seasonal eatings a chore
i continually gorge more and more
now i\'m saying my prayers
before going downstairs
in case i should fall through the floor
you see, you\'ve again got me started
though my composition may be quite halfhearted
when i fell through that ceiling
there came a rumbling feeling
and then i resoundingly farted
The odour which the arose
got up the olifactory nose
the pong was so lousy
i began to feel drowsy
I\'m writing this quite comatose
December 31st, 2020 07:49
dusk arising said:
Though seasonal eatings a chore
i continually gorge more and more
now i\'m saying my prayers
before going downstairs
in case i should fall through the floor
you see, you\'ve again got me started
though my composition may be quite halfhearted
when i fell through that ceiling
there came a rumbling feeling
and then i resoundingly farted
The odour which the arose
got up the olifactory nose
the pong was so lousy
i began to feel drowsy
I\'m writing this quite comatose
December 31st, 2020 07:49
I GOT UP
L. B. Mek said:
\'The bulldozer outside the kitchen window was quite a big one.
He stared at it.
“Yellow,” he thought, and stomped off back to his bedroom to get dressed.\'
from opening \'scene\' of \'the Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy\',
your words took me right back to that beloved character Michael...
your painting had me dreading those endless pages of Moby Dick and that eventual final battle where Captain Ahab found the end: he so fervently chased...
Happy New Year Michael, stay safe
December 31st, 2020 06:37
L. B. Mek said:
\'The bulldozer outside the kitchen window was quite a big one.
He stared at it.
“Yellow,” he thought, and stomped off back to his bedroom to get dressed.\'
from opening \'scene\' of \'the Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy\',
your words took me right back to that beloved character Michael...
your painting had me dreading those endless pages of Moby Dick and that eventual final battle where Captain Ahab found the end: he so fervently chased...
Happy New Year Michael, stay safe
December 31st, 2020 06:37
I GOT UP
Fay Slimm. said:
Climbing through windows on stairs to the star-way - what a wonderful dream this read stirs in me - - super work Michael.
December 31st, 2020 05:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Climbing through windows on stairs to the star-way - what a wonderful dream this read stirs in me - - super work Michael.
December 31st, 2020 05:39
I GOT UP
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
Happy New Year\'s Eve.
I see you\'re energetic getting up for the New Year that lies in store.
Lets hope it will be a good one.
Good write.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 31st, 2020 02:15
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
Happy New Year\'s Eve.
I see you\'re energetic getting up for the New Year that lies in store.
Lets hope it will be a good one.
Good write.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 31st, 2020 02:15
I GOT UP
Goldfinch60 said:
It must be good to go down the \'stars\', I find the stairs are safer.
Andy
December 31st, 2020 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
It must be good to go down the \'stars\', I find the stairs are safer.
Andy
December 31st, 2020 01:52
A PAIR OF ANTIQUES
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
An entertaining write.
Victorian bliomers come to mind when you mean ancient.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 30th, 2020 16:35
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
An entertaining write.
Victorian bliomers come to mind when you mean ancient.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 30th, 2020 16:35
LIMERICKS 70 and 71
Fay Slimm. said:
That second verse of yours Michael sums up how we all feel so wishing the next year brings us more sight of the ending of idle loafing eh ? Love your line drawings my friend.
December 29th, 2020 16:35
Fay Slimm. said:
That second verse of yours Michael sums up how we all feel so wishing the next year brings us more sight of the ending of idle loafing eh ? Love your line drawings my friend.
December 29th, 2020 16:35
LIMERICKS 70 and 71
Neville said:
my radishes are fine .. but I sure do empathise with that second one up there Michael ...............
December 29th, 2020 13:14
Neville said:
my radishes are fine .. but I sure do empathise with that second one up there Michael ...............
December 29th, 2020 13:14
LIMERICKS 70 and 71
Jerry Reynolds said:
This is a lot of fun. Stay Safer and Have a Happy New Year.
December 29th, 2020 10:52
Jerry Reynolds said:
This is a lot of fun. Stay Safer and Have a Happy New Year.
December 29th, 2020 10:52
THE CHIC MURRAY COLLECTION 9
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
A great write and tribute to a goddess.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 29th, 2020 10:18
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
A great write and tribute to a goddess.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 29th, 2020 10:18
THE CHIC MURRAY COLLECTION 8
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
A superb write.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 29th, 2020 10:15
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
A superb write.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 29th, 2020 10:15
THE CHIC MURRAY COLLECTION 7
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
A good write.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 29th, 2020 09:51
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
A good write.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 29th, 2020 09:51
LIMERICKS 70 and 71
dusk arising said:
They told me \"no longer go out\"
for exercise just jump and shout
but theres something quite fishy
about flailing limbs swishy
i\'m afraid ive become an old trout
so at last we\'ve got it for real
that much promised brexit good deal
we put an end to the babble
we conquered the rabble
with stiff upper lip sex appeal
you think lockdown cushy?
well my hairs got quite bushy
the missus complains
and plays video games
while i playfully stroke the pussy
As i\'ve said before, I just can\'t help joining in when i see a good limerick. Yours are super today.
Soddit i will post these today as my muse is on holiday at the moment..... thanks for the inspiration.
December 29th, 2020 08:51
dusk arising said:
They told me \"no longer go out\"
for exercise just jump and shout
but theres something quite fishy
about flailing limbs swishy
i\'m afraid ive become an old trout
so at last we\'ve got it for real
that much promised brexit good deal
we put an end to the babble
we conquered the rabble
with stiff upper lip sex appeal
you think lockdown cushy?
well my hairs got quite bushy
the missus complains
and plays video games
while i playfully stroke the pussy
As i\'ve said before, I just can\'t help joining in when i see a good limerick. Yours are super today.
Soddit i will post these today as my muse is on holiday at the moment..... thanks for the inspiration.
December 29th, 2020 08:51
LIMERICKS 70 and 71
L. B. Mek said:
\'hot\' radishes, might be the oddest thing I have heard recently, though I doubt the kinda \'pickling\' found \'down the drain\' is necessarily all that healthy either... lol
as for \'sore bum cheeks\', I window-peep all that concrete greenery my beloved city has to offer,
and through all the stilled quietude of absent industry - I glimpse, I can\'t help but think: what a nice break for dear old mother nature 2020 has been...
nice write Michael,
December 29th, 2020 06:32
L. B. Mek said:
\'hot\' radishes, might be the oddest thing I have heard recently, though I doubt the kinda \'pickling\' found \'down the drain\' is necessarily all that healthy either... lol
as for \'sore bum cheeks\', I window-peep all that concrete greenery my beloved city has to offer,
and through all the stilled quietude of absent industry - I glimpse, I can\'t help but think: what a nice break for dear old mother nature 2020 has been...
nice write Michael,
December 29th, 2020 06:32
LIMERICKS 70 and 71
Suresh said:
Loafer, is what my father would say,
Seeing my expression of sheer dismay.
Thanks for the laughs
December 29th, 2020 06:06
Suresh said:
Loafer, is what my father would say,
Seeing my expression of sheer dismay.
Thanks for the laughs
December 29th, 2020 06:06
TWO SHORTIES
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful gem you\'ve shared dear friend, the artwork would have been enough for me to favourite, with those juxtaposed set of \'peak\'s\',
one pair at that low colourless tide - by the edge on the \'left\' of life...
and the other off-kilter \'couple\' towering high on the right - coloured in-full and imposing,
as if saying: at all times, we are one - we wait it out, intrusting in that level foundation we built our life\'s musical of love upon...
hope that brave certain \'someone\' in your life gleans all the meaning you\'ve imbued into your wonderful dedication Michael,
a great write as well!
(though I may be interpreting your meaning in my own self-centred way, to find I\'m grasping at straws you never planted, if so: forgive my overzealous nature my friend)
December 29th, 2020 05:33
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful gem you\'ve shared dear friend, the artwork would have been enough for me to favourite, with those juxtaposed set of \'peak\'s\',
one pair at that low colourless tide - by the edge on the \'left\' of life...
and the other off-kilter \'couple\' towering high on the right - coloured in-full and imposing,
as if saying: at all times, we are one - we wait it out, intrusting in that level foundation we built our life\'s musical of love upon...
hope that brave certain \'someone\' in your life gleans all the meaning you\'ve imbued into your wonderful dedication Michael,
a great write as well!
(though I may be interpreting your meaning in my own self-centred way, to find I\'m grasping at straws you never planted, if so: forgive my overzealous nature my friend)
December 29th, 2020 05:33
LIMERICKS 70 and 71
orchidee said:
Good writes M. lol. You all dressed up with nowhere to go?
I only spoil New Years Eve anyway. I turn up at parties with me water syphon - the Phantom Whisky-Waterer!
December 29th, 2020 02:29
orchidee said:
Good writes M. lol. You all dressed up with nowhere to go?
I only spoil New Years Eve anyway. I turn up at parties with me water syphon - the Phantom Whisky-Waterer!
December 29th, 2020 02:29
LIMERICKS 70 and 71
Goldfinch60 said:
The second one is so very true in these Strange Times (though not so strange anymore).
Andy
December 29th, 2020 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
The second one is so very true in these Strange Times (though not so strange anymore).
Andy
December 29th, 2020 01:45
THE CHIC MURRAY COLLECTION 4 - 6
FineB said:
Hi Michael
A superb write and a gorgeous picture.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 28th, 2020 11:50
FineB said:
Hi Michael
A superb write and a gorgeous picture.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 28th, 2020 11:50
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