Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
RAIN
Neville said:
... this is rapidly becoming one of my most favourite poetic forms ... superbly executed Michael ...
January 16th, 2021 14:25
Neville said:
... this is rapidly becoming one of my most favourite poetic forms ... superbly executed Michael ...
January 16th, 2021 14:25
RAIN
FredPeyer said:
You are really getting the hang of that haibun format, Michael. Well done.
January 16th, 2021 13:58
FredPeyer said:
You are really getting the hang of that haibun format, Michael. Well done.
January 16th, 2021 13:58
RAIN
Jerry Reynolds said:
Loved the poem and the watercolor,
which contains some irony.
Make a wrong choice nature will be a
ruthless critic.
January 16th, 2021 12:15
Jerry Reynolds said:
Loved the poem and the watercolor,
which contains some irony.
Make a wrong choice nature will be a
ruthless critic.
January 16th, 2021 12:15
RAIN
Fay Slimm. said:
Sp clearly described I was there and watching those drops of cascading rain - a meaningful posting of the disaster wintery floods can wreak
January 16th, 2021 08:20
Fay Slimm. said:
Sp clearly described I was there and watching those drops of cascading rain - a meaningful posting of the disaster wintery floods can wreak
January 16th, 2021 08:20
RAIN
Doggerel Dave said:
A bucolic poem about a not very bucolic landscape at that moment. Very evocative.
Thanks, Dave
January 16th, 2021 04:37
Doggerel Dave said:
A bucolic poem about a not very bucolic landscape at that moment. Very evocative.
Thanks, Dave
January 16th, 2021 04:37
PUT THE FIRE OUT
Suresh said:
Missing from the painting is a well
For your words do cast a spell
Glad it wasn\'t the building in your painting
January 14th, 2021 13:47
Suresh said:
Missing from the painting is a well
For your words do cast a spell
Glad it wasn\'t the building in your painting
January 14th, 2021 13:47
PUT THE FIRE OUT
Fay Slimm. said:
Giggled a bit at your infectious wit Mike but oh what a picture where water makes real every light in that rural scene - (plus your wonderful talent of course)
January 14th, 2021 09:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Giggled a bit at your infectious wit Mike but oh what a picture where water makes real every light in that rural scene - (plus your wonderful talent of course)
January 14th, 2021 09:15
PUT THE FIRE OUT
dusk arising said:
Loved that, didn\'t see that one coming.
Hello M.E. artist,. well met
in yer finest fireman\'s helmet
you know that u ought\'a
go fetch some water
before those flames reach the pelmet.
January 14th, 2021 08:42
dusk arising said:
Loved that, didn\'t see that one coming.
Hello M.E. artist,. well met
in yer finest fireman\'s helmet
you know that u ought\'a
go fetch some water
before those flames reach the pelmet.
January 14th, 2021 08:42
PUT THE FIRE OUT
L. B. Mek said:
why is it I see a graveyard picture that\'s a little light in tone and immediately I hear:
\'My father\'s family name being Pirrip, and my christian name Philip, my infant tongue could make of both names nothing longer or more explicit than Pip. So, I called myself Pip, and came to be called Pip.\'
thank you for that Michael, time for a re-read I think
January 14th, 2021 07:47
L. B. Mek said:
why is it I see a graveyard picture that\'s a little light in tone and immediately I hear:
\'My father\'s family name being Pirrip, and my christian name Philip, my infant tongue could make of both names nothing longer or more explicit than Pip. So, I called myself Pip, and came to be called Pip.\'
thank you for that Michael, time for a re-read I think
January 14th, 2021 07:47
PUT THE FIRE OUT
Doggerel Dave said:
Didn\'t do the picture in a morning through, did you Michael? Come on - fess up... your pictures make me quite nostalgic, actually.
Dave
January 14th, 2021 05:03
Doggerel Dave said:
Didn\'t do the picture in a morning through, did you Michael? Come on - fess up... your pictures make me quite nostalgic, actually.
Dave
January 14th, 2021 05:03
PUT THE FIRE OUT
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you so much for my first laugh of the day Michael.
Andy
January 14th, 2021 03:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you so much for my first laugh of the day Michael.
Andy
January 14th, 2021 03:09
PUT THE FIRE OUT
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write and pic M.
So it was not the Fire Exit door you opened. That has to be kept closed at all times. Doh!
January 14th, 2021 02:46
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write and pic M.
So it was not the Fire Exit door you opened. That has to be kept closed at all times. Doh!
January 14th, 2021 02:46
LIMERICK 73 ( Plus 3 Variants )
Suresh said:
I thought I made sure, there was no one about.
Loved the first one.
January 12th, 2021 14:09
Suresh said:
I thought I made sure, there was no one about.
Loved the first one.
January 12th, 2021 14:09
LIMERICK 73 ( Plus 3 Variants )
Neville said:
tis those variants ya got to worry about .. or so they keep telling me ....
Stay safe Michael .... N
January 12th, 2021 02:47
Neville said:
tis those variants ya got to worry about .. or so they keep telling me ....
Stay safe Michael .... N
January 12th, 2021 02:47
LIMERICK 73 ( Plus 3 Variants )
dusk arising said:
Tramp over there he\'s a itchin and a scratchin
you look down your nose, but you\'re just a watchin
would you walk in his shoes
he\'s got nothin to lose
\'cept maybe one or two maggots he\'s a hatchin
January 11th, 2021 10:53
dusk arising said:
Tramp over there he\'s a itchin and a scratchin
you look down your nose, but you\'re just a watchin
would you walk in his shoes
he\'s got nothin to lose
\'cept maybe one or two maggots he\'s a hatchin
January 11th, 2021 10:53
LIMERICK 73 ( Plus 3 Variants )
Fay Slimm. said:
ha ha - -the last one appealed to my sense of humour - thouigh have to admit I grinned at the others.......
January 11th, 2021 10:35
Fay Slimm. said:
ha ha - -the last one appealed to my sense of humour - thouigh have to admit I grinned at the others.......
January 11th, 2021 10:35
LIMERICK 73 ( Plus 3 Variants )
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
I vote for the first version, not a classic limerick, but in consistent verse.
This old man rather often stands in the bushes and gets out his spout, and I\'m not a tramp, though the pandemic has left me looking like one.
January 11th, 2021 09:32
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
I vote for the first version, not a classic limerick, but in consistent verse.
This old man rather often stands in the bushes and gets out his spout, and I\'m not a tramp, though the pandemic has left me looking like one.
January 11th, 2021 09:32
LIMERICK 73 ( Plus 3 Variants )
L. B. Mek said:
a fun read Michael...
its all fun and games
until we all reach that certain age
and all we\'re left are endless nights
of knee entwined shuffles
to and from those horrid corridors
between us
and our white porcelain
of salvation...
January 11th, 2021 08:07
L. B. Mek said:
a fun read Michael...
its all fun and games
until we all reach that certain age
and all we\'re left are endless nights
of knee entwined shuffles
to and from those horrid corridors
between us
and our white porcelain
of salvation...
January 11th, 2021 08:07
LIMERICK 73 ( Plus 3 Variants )
Doggerel Dave said:
And there once was a tramp from near Barking
Who whipped out his (18+) for an airing;
For this offense he had to pay,
A constable took him away
With a knot in it for safekeeping.
Great picture - as usual, Michael.
Dave
January 11th, 2021 05:34
Doggerel Dave said:
And there once was a tramp from near Barking
Who whipped out his (18+) for an airing;
For this offense he had to pay,
A constable took him away
With a knot in it for safekeeping.
Great picture - as usual, Michael.
Dave
January 11th, 2021 05:34
LIMERICK 73 ( Plus 3 Variants )
orchidee said:
Well, I dunno lol. There\'s hundreds of names, but dunno if I\'ve heard it called spout before! Would Miss B know these things? Good pic too.
January 11th, 2021 02:53
orchidee said:
Well, I dunno lol. There\'s hundreds of names, but dunno if I\'ve heard it called spout before! Would Miss B know these things? Good pic too.
January 11th, 2021 02:53
LIMERICK 73 ( Plus 3 Variants )
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one(s) Michael.
Beautiful painting.
January 11th, 2021 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one(s) Michael.
Beautiful painting.
January 11th, 2021 01:32
REMEMBERED
Dove said:
Much enjoyed Micheal! Rules were made to be danced upon!
Love your flowery beginning, the remembrance at the end
Sad! Love your painting !
January 10th, 2021 12:10
Dove said:
Much enjoyed Micheal! Rules were made to be danced upon!
Love your flowery beginning, the remembrance at the end
Sad! Love your painting !
January 10th, 2021 12:10
REMEMBERED
FredPeyer said:
Michael, the heck with all the technical interpretations. I just love your writing! The prose is awesome!
January 9th, 2021 15:11
FredPeyer said:
Michael, the heck with all the technical interpretations. I just love your writing! The prose is awesome!
January 9th, 2021 15:11
REMEMBERED
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
Your 5-7-5 verse at the end would be described as a senryū in the Japanese tradition. This Wikipedia paragraph says it clearly:
>>Senryū (川柳, literally \'river willow\') is a Japanese form of short poetry similar to haiku... Senryū tend to be about human foibles while haiku tend to be about nature, and senryū are often cynical or darkly humorous while haiku are more serious. Unlike haiku, senryū do not include a kireji (cutting word), and do not generally include a kigo, or season word.
January 9th, 2021 11:18
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
Your 5-7-5 verse at the end would be described as a senryū in the Japanese tradition. This Wikipedia paragraph says it clearly:
>>Senryū (川柳, literally \'river willow\') is a Japanese form of short poetry similar to haiku... Senryū tend to be about human foibles while haiku tend to be about nature, and senryū are often cynical or darkly humorous while haiku are more serious. Unlike haiku, senryū do not include a kireji (cutting word), and do not generally include a kigo, or season word.
January 9th, 2021 11:18
REMEMBERED
Jerry Reynolds said:
Michael- this is terrific. Love that watercolor. Do you make any prints of them?
January 9th, 2021 10:49
Jerry Reynolds said:
Michael- this is terrific. Love that watercolor. Do you make any prints of them?
January 9th, 2021 10:49
REMEMBERED
dusk arising said:
I\'ll stick with limericks, haibun\'s far too complex for the likes of me.
So M.E. has wrote us a haibun
it musta been hard to compose one
was he helped by his muse
with a flagon of booze
or forced into it with a shotgun?
January 9th, 2021 06:03
dusk arising said:
I\'ll stick with limericks, haibun\'s far too complex for the likes of me.
So M.E. has wrote us a haibun
it musta been hard to compose one
was he helped by his muse
with a flagon of booze
or forced into it with a shotgun?
January 9th, 2021 06:03
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