Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
DIBBLES AND DABBLES (6)
Fay Slimm. said:
So good to see you posting again Michael - - I chuckled at your witty two liner and stayed a while longer studying your amazing art work - - do hope things are improving at home health-wise dear friend.
September 23rd, 2021 15:30
Fay Slimm. said:
So good to see you posting again Michael - - I chuckled at your witty two liner and stayed a while longer studying your amazing art work - - do hope things are improving at home health-wise dear friend.
September 23rd, 2021 15:30
DIBBLES AND DABBLES (6)
dusk arising said:
Flora don\'t stand too much study, it melts.
September 23rd, 2021 10:43
dusk arising said:
Flora don\'t stand too much study, it melts.
September 23rd, 2021 10:43
CONSTRUCT
Neville said:
I used to struggle with certain constructs but you made everything fit perfectly mate .... well bloomin done and welcome back ............. N
September 19th, 2021 12:19
Neville said:
I used to struggle with certain constructs but you made everything fit perfectly mate .... well bloomin done and welcome back ............. N
September 19th, 2021 12:19
CONSTRUCT
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes - reminds me a little of my last trip to the Old Country. I don\'t think I will return now - which may be just as well, as everything changes...
Great to see you back, Michael.
September 19th, 2021 06:19
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes - reminds me a little of my last trip to the Old Country. I don\'t think I will return now - which may be just as well, as everything changes...
Great to see you back, Michael.
September 19th, 2021 06:19
CONSTRUCT
dusk arising said:
Taint a permanent boundary though is it. Looking around the perimeters of my city i see HUGE industrial units in what was pastureland two years ago.
Where are we going?
September 19th, 2021 03:13
dusk arising said:
Taint a permanent boundary though is it. Looking around the perimeters of my city i see HUGE industrial units in what was pastureland two years ago.
Where are we going?
September 19th, 2021 03:13
CONSTRUCT
Fay Slimm. said:
So good to read your engaging words again Michael and view your impressive art work - I do agree that those verdant hills are the best medicine for \"man\'s construct\" and ever will be. Warmest of wishes from Fay
September 19th, 2021 03:03
Fay Slimm. said:
So good to read your engaging words again Michael and view your impressive art work - I do agree that those verdant hills are the best medicine for \"man\'s construct\" and ever will be. Warmest of wishes from Fay
September 19th, 2021 03:03
CONSTRUCT
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M.
I would not pinch these words, but could add them as a verse, slightly adapted, to my harvest theme hymn for today - if you wish?
September 19th, 2021 02:25
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M.
I would not pinch these words, but could add them as a verse, slightly adapted, to my harvest theme hymn for today - if you wish?
September 19th, 2021 02:25
CONSTRUCT
Goldfinch60 said:
That verdant land is now suffering so much because of man\'s greed Michael.
Andy
September 19th, 2021 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
That verdant land is now suffering so much because of man\'s greed Michael.
Andy
September 19th, 2021 02:23
Harold\'s Lament
myself and me said:
Obviously, it was not a good idea to bend down to tie the lace.
August 23rd, 2021 16:32
myself and me said:
Obviously, it was not a good idea to bend down to tie the lace.
August 23rd, 2021 16:32
Harold\'s Lament
L. B. Mek said:
a fun read Michael
not sure how we go about verifying
one historical \'fact\'
as being more \'factual\' than another
generally I assume, all information
has its accuracy decrease
with each forgotten second
August 23rd, 2021 05:11
L. B. Mek said:
a fun read Michael
not sure how we go about verifying
one historical \'fact\'
as being more \'factual\' than another
generally I assume, all information
has its accuracy decrease
with each forgotten second
August 23rd, 2021 05:11
Harold\'s Lament
dusk arising said:
CoR! what a shot, right in the chuffer!
Dont think of it as yer downfall
ya could have copped it in the eyeball
he missed by miles
and gave u piles
and a poem thats simply ribald
August 22nd, 2021 14:29
dusk arising said:
CoR! what a shot, right in the chuffer!
Dont think of it as yer downfall
ya could have copped it in the eyeball
he missed by miles
and gave u piles
and a poem thats simply ribald
August 22nd, 2021 14:29
A UNION NOW REGRETTED
Lorna said:
I\'ve come back and I haven\'t seen you but see you posted this early August so hoping you are just on vacation. Waiting for your next one.........
August 15th, 2021 05:31
Lorna said:
I\'ve come back and I haven\'t seen you but see you posted this early August so hoping you are just on vacation. Waiting for your next one.........
August 15th, 2021 05:31
A UNION NOW REGRETTED
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
The first two stanzas of your poem remind me of a special person in my life.
The last two brought tears to my eyes.
The illustration is a poignant one…
for me.
For a few hours a day I stare in that ‘cup’ and contemplate about many things; extracting the best from the past and enjoying the present — while hoping for the best of what will be — one sunset 🌄and one sunrise 🌅 at a time.
Thank you for sharing your words…very helpful.
All the best,
Laura🌻
August 10th, 2021 12:06
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
The first two stanzas of your poem remind me of a special person in my life.
The last two brought tears to my eyes.
The illustration is a poignant one…
for me.
For a few hours a day I stare in that ‘cup’ and contemplate about many things; extracting the best from the past and enjoying the present — while hoping for the best of what will be — one sunset 🌄and one sunrise 🌅 at a time.
Thank you for sharing your words…very helpful.
All the best,
Laura🌻
August 10th, 2021 12:06
A UNION NOW REGRETTED
L. B. Mek said:
there\'s always two murky sides
in every story\'s, Tealeaf details
but how well, you\'ve served
this treat of poetic artistry
with such: outlined clarity..
loved everything, from seeing your name
on the screen, to reaching the final delightful letter
of your poetic inking, thanks Michael
(I won\'t ask
just knock-on-wood and hope
with all fingers crossed,
but I\'ll share these words
so at east you\'ll know, my friend)
August 10th, 2021 04:39
L. B. Mek said:
there\'s always two murky sides
in every story\'s, Tealeaf details
but how well, you\'ve served
this treat of poetic artistry
with such: outlined clarity..
loved everything, from seeing your name
on the screen, to reaching the final delightful letter
of your poetic inking, thanks Michael
(I won\'t ask
just knock-on-wood and hope
with all fingers crossed,
but I\'ll share these words
so at east you\'ll know, my friend)
August 10th, 2021 04:39
A UNION NOW REGRETTED
Goldfinch60 said:
Such fine words on emotion Michael.
Andy
August 10th, 2021 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Such fine words on emotion Michael.
Andy
August 10th, 2021 00:53
A UNION NOW REGRETTED
Neville said:
I\'ve never had one of those .. well not yet anyway .. I\'ve had a number that I try not to think about too often though ..
Your pen worked a little bit of magic here Michael .. much enjoyed and true ................ N :)
August 9th, 2021 16:43
Neville said:
I\'ve never had one of those .. well not yet anyway .. I\'ve had a number that I try not to think about too often though ..
Your pen worked a little bit of magic here Michael .. much enjoyed and true ................ N :)
August 9th, 2021 16:43
DIBBLES AND DABBLES (5)
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Got the solution: Keep my illusions to myself and let gently declining memory remove them gently (works for me).
A great vision of \'a green and pleasant land\', Michael.
July 26th, 2021 17:39
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Got the solution: Keep my illusions to myself and let gently declining memory remove them gently (works for me).
A great vision of \'a green and pleasant land\', Michael.
July 26th, 2021 17:39
DIBBLES AND DABBLES (5)
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
I just love
your sparingly detailed watercolour paintings Michael
and that defiantly disobedient: Haiku
in both wording and rule breaking - ease, lol
a great read, thank you!
July 26th, 2021 06:01
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
I just love
your sparingly detailed watercolour paintings Michael
and that defiantly disobedient: Haiku
in both wording and rule breaking - ease, lol
a great read, thank you!
July 26th, 2021 06:01
DIBBLES AND DABBLES (5)
Fay Slimm. said:
A great short-line but needed reminder Mike to watch the height of our daydreaming - - - and I just love the intensity of those reflections in your beautiful water colour.
July 26th, 2021 01:48
Fay Slimm. said:
A great short-line but needed reminder Mike to watch the height of our daydreaming - - - and I just love the intensity of those reflections in your beautiful water colour.
July 26th, 2021 01:48
DIBBLES AND DABBLES (5)
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M.
Have I been on holiday with Miss Berles?
Nope, I got cut orf for a while!
July 26th, 2021 01:47
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M.
Have I been on holiday with Miss Berles?
Nope, I got cut orf for a while!
July 26th, 2021 01:47
DIBBLES AND DABBLES (5)
dusk arising said:
When flying high, the further to fall.
I\'m a fan of your wisdom in verse.
July 26th, 2021 01:24
dusk arising said:
When flying high, the further to fall.
I\'m a fan of your wisdom in verse.
July 26th, 2021 01:24
DIBBLES AND DABBLES (5)
Saxon Crow said:
Nicely put and an excellent piece of art Mike
July 26th, 2021 00:09
Saxon Crow said:
Nicely put and an excellent piece of art Mike
July 26th, 2021 00:09
DIBBLES AND DABBLES (4)
SureshG said:
Those who can’t, critique, but in my case, even bad press is some recognition,
July 16th, 2021 23:54
SureshG said:
Those who can’t, critique, but in my case, even bad press is some recognition,
July 16th, 2021 23:54
DIBBLES AND DABBLES (4)
Neville said:
we certainly have one or two like that .. I really like this little nugget Michael :)
July 16th, 2021 13:42
Neville said:
we certainly have one or two like that .. I really like this little nugget Michael :)
July 16th, 2021 13:42
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