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Neville said:
just like some sounds, tastes, smells, sights and feelings of course, there are also some shapes that make one go aahhh .. your super little 575 in combination with your fine symbolic sketch are two such good examples .. Neville
August 12th, 2020 17:15
Neville said:
just like some sounds, tastes, smells, sights and feelings of course, there are also some shapes that make one go aahhh .. your super little 575 in combination with your fine symbolic sketch are two such good examples .. Neville
August 12th, 2020 17:15
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Fay Slimm. said:
Mystical listening in your wonderful art-work signifies music is magically alluring the mood of the image. Great stuff Michael.
August 12th, 2020 13:02
Fay Slimm. said:
Mystical listening in your wonderful art-work signifies music is magically alluring the mood of the image. Great stuff Michael.
August 12th, 2020 13:02
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MendedFences27 said:
Music is a stimulant: Energizing the nervous system, exciting the brain, raising the oxygen level, bringing reactions of many kinds to our minds and bodies.What a great drawing. Did you do all that without lifting the pen? - Phil A.
August 12th, 2020 09:30
MendedFences27 said:
Music is a stimulant: Energizing the nervous system, exciting the brain, raising the oxygen level, bringing reactions of many kinds to our minds and bodies.What a great drawing. Did you do all that without lifting the pen? - Phil A.
August 12th, 2020 09:30
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L. B. Mek said:
in this suffocating heatwave we are experiencing (UK), rain with a side of jazz music is a sobering mirage (from your comment reply to Andy),
love the lines in your picture
August 12th, 2020 02:31
L. B. Mek said:
in this suffocating heatwave we are experiencing (UK), rain with a side of jazz music is a sobering mirage (from your comment reply to Andy),
love the lines in your picture
August 12th, 2020 02:31
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Goldfinch60 said:
So much music, so little time.
Andy
August 12th, 2020 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
So much music, so little time.
Andy
August 12th, 2020 01:00
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Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - well that one way to save water dear Micheal -- but Hic ! - - I had already made that decision and find it addictive.
August 11th, 2020 02:43
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - well that one way to save water dear Micheal -- but Hic ! - - I had already made that decision and find it addictive.
August 11th, 2020 02:43
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L. B. Mek said:
the layers here...!
so witty and full of diamond sharp sarcasm,
as genuinely British (a poem) as the all day breakfast sign in the pic,
btw don\'t forget that essential \'tonic\'...
another of your works that made me lol
August 11th, 2020 02:37
L. B. Mek said:
the layers here...!
so witty and full of diamond sharp sarcasm,
as genuinely British (a poem) as the all day breakfast sign in the pic,
btw don\'t forget that essential \'tonic\'...
another of your works that made me lol
August 11th, 2020 02:37
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orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. lol.
My poem is \'Save gin; add more water!\' In my role here as the phantom tipple-waterer! They will shoot me for it. lol
But what a cad, a bounder - on a show a business person approved an idea just cos she liked gin!
August 11th, 2020 02:00
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. lol.
My poem is \'Save gin; add more water!\' In my role here as the phantom tipple-waterer! They will shoot me for it. lol
But what a cad, a bounder - on a show a business person approved an idea just cos she liked gin!
August 11th, 2020 02:00
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Neville said:
Dare I say how extraordinarily, typically, & delightfully British sir Michael ... Now where\'s the HP ..
Neville
August 11th, 2020 00:35
Neville said:
Dare I say how extraordinarily, typically, & delightfully British sir Michael ... Now where\'s the HP ..
Neville
August 11th, 2020 00:35
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Goldfinch60 said:
Good idea Michael, we need to save the world somehow.
Love the cartoon.
Andy
August 11th, 2020 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Good idea Michael, we need to save the world somehow.
Love the cartoon.
Andy
August 11th, 2020 00:22
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Neville said:
the sum of the parts is far greater than their whole, or summat.. some mite say......... well penned my friend .. the both of em I say..
August 9th, 2020 01:14
Neville said:
the sum of the parts is far greater than their whole, or summat.. some mite say......... well penned my friend .. the both of em I say..
August 9th, 2020 01:14
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orchidee said:
Ooh yes, keep plodding on - about 20 more poems to the 1,000!
August 8th, 2020 10:40
orchidee said:
Ooh yes, keep plodding on - about 20 more poems to the 1,000!
August 8th, 2020 10:40
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dusk arising said:
A porky young man from Tobago
wrote poetry to make the day go
but when evening came
it was all children\'s games
for they stuffed him quite full with their play-doh
August 8th, 2020 06:56
dusk arising said:
A porky young man from Tobago
wrote poetry to make the day go
but when evening came
it was all children\'s games
for they stuffed him quite full with their play-doh
August 8th, 2020 06:56
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orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. lol. Does Miss Berles do this, to save washing up?!
August 8th, 2020 01:53
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. lol. Does Miss Berles do this, to save washing up?!
August 8th, 2020 01:53
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ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Good Morning Uncle Mike ~ Thanks for two smiles to start the day ! Please check *La Mia Poema - Gracias !* Have you been to Las Ramblas & visited the GAUDI ?
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela - Brian - Smokey XXX
August 8th, 2020 01:33
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Good Morning Uncle Mike ~ Thanks for two smiles to start the day ! Please check *La Mia Poema - Gracias !* Have you been to Las Ramblas & visited the GAUDI ?
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela - Brian - Smokey XXX
August 8th, 2020 01:33
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Goldfinch60 said:
Humour in both the words and the cartoon to start my day in a wonderful way Michael.
Andy
August 8th, 2020 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Humour in both the words and the cartoon to start my day in a wonderful way Michael.
Andy
August 8th, 2020 00:57
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orchidee said:
Cooeee! Is Miss Berles heard by everyone?! lol.
And - all that wot LB Mek and others said too! I\'m not that educated to make so fine and expressive comments!
August 6th, 2020 14:30
orchidee said:
Cooeee! Is Miss Berles heard by everyone?! lol.
And - all that wot LB Mek and others said too! I\'m not that educated to make so fine and expressive comments!
August 6th, 2020 14:30
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MendedFences27 said:
Just as I clicked to read this I was perusing Emerson\'s \"Threnody.\"
I shall not presume to compare the two. (His contained no artwork.) I must say though, that the wordplay in yours is brilliant. Your artwork is most stimulating. And if a lament contains the flow of wordsmanship
displayed here, then start wailing. - Phil A.
August 5th, 2020 16:54
MendedFences27 said:
Just as I clicked to read this I was perusing Emerson\'s \"Threnody.\"
I shall not presume to compare the two. (His contained no artwork.) I must say though, that the wordplay in yours is brilliant. Your artwork is most stimulating. And if a lament contains the flow of wordsmanship
displayed here, then start wailing. - Phil A.
August 5th, 2020 16:54
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Fay Slimm. said:
Glad you finished playing with words and posted this gem of a free-style, semi-abstract piece of intriguing perspective on frustration. Great read Michael.
August 5th, 2020 06:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Glad you finished playing with words and posted this gem of a free-style, semi-abstract piece of intriguing perspective on frustration. Great read Michael.
August 5th, 2020 06:01
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L. B. Mek said:
I think you captured that subtle state of introspection, spontaneous and entirely without objective at its outset - but somehow, yielding concrete breakthroughs to niggling obstacles,
only, the mere feat of discovering this untameable skill renders us momentarily stunned - in that crucial moment where we should be at our most alert: so as to record and cherish those inspirational thoughts or ideas,
later - once removed from that rainbow mirage of temporary enlightenment: we question, if we truly experienced what we think we did and are left frustrated for not taking full opportunity of such a rare gift,
and thus we resume that chorus of lament - we pace our daily strides to...
(or you were just writing in a broody mood, lol)
brilliant write! evocative with insightful depth
(sorry for lengthy comment, I get excited when reading such thought provoking work)
August 5th, 2020 03:57
L. B. Mek said:
I think you captured that subtle state of introspection, spontaneous and entirely without objective at its outset - but somehow, yielding concrete breakthroughs to niggling obstacles,
only, the mere feat of discovering this untameable skill renders us momentarily stunned - in that crucial moment where we should be at our most alert: so as to record and cherish those inspirational thoughts or ideas,
later - once removed from that rainbow mirage of temporary enlightenment: we question, if we truly experienced what we think we did and are left frustrated for not taking full opportunity of such a rare gift,
and thus we resume that chorus of lament - we pace our daily strides to...
(or you were just writing in a broody mood, lol)
brilliant write! evocative with insightful depth
(sorry for lengthy comment, I get excited when reading such thought provoking work)
August 5th, 2020 03:57
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orchidee said:
Erm, eys, good Mitwok M. I dunno what it means! lol. Is ignorance always bliss?!
August 5th, 2020 01:48
orchidee said:
Erm, eys, good Mitwok M. I dunno what it means! lol. Is ignorance always bliss?!
August 5th, 2020 01:48
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ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good MITWOK Uncle Mike - Thanks for an enigmatic Pic *n Poem - but as they say on Classic FM there is paradoxically a LINK ! We*ve been to ALASKA (Cruise) to see the Whales and the *not so Abstract* is a Whale just breaking the Surface in the Alaskan Waters ~ OK !
Well wheres the LINK ? Well a THRENODY is NOT a *Trio of Gnomes* ~ GOD FORBID ! - but a WAIL or LAMENT - Which it certainly is !
So there we have it - enigma solved - Your presentation is ~
A WAIL accmpanied by a Picture of a WHALE
Two for the price of ONE ~ Boris* offer for WEDNESDAY !
Seeing we solved your enigma can you please add a Poem
on WALES to our *Staycation Fusion* and also check ~
*Love of the Horse* todays POEM ~ Thanks A & B !
Blessings & Peace & Love to You & Yours
Angela & Brian & Smokey Cat 💛💛💛
August 5th, 2020 01:36
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good MITWOK Uncle Mike - Thanks for an enigmatic Pic *n Poem - but as they say on Classic FM there is paradoxically a LINK ! We*ve been to ALASKA (Cruise) to see the Whales and the *not so Abstract* is a Whale just breaking the Surface in the Alaskan Waters ~ OK !
Well wheres the LINK ? Well a THRENODY is NOT a *Trio of Gnomes* ~ GOD FORBID ! - but a WAIL or LAMENT - Which it certainly is !
So there we have it - enigma solved - Your presentation is ~
A WAIL accmpanied by a Picture of a WHALE
Two for the price of ONE ~ Boris* offer for WEDNESDAY !
Seeing we solved your enigma can you please add a Poem
on WALES to our *Staycation Fusion* and also check ~
*Love of the Horse* todays POEM ~ Thanks A & B !
Blessings & Peace & Love to You & Yours
Angela & Brian & Smokey Cat 💛💛💛
August 5th, 2020 01:36
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Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write Michael, is there any compassion left in our world?
Andy
August 5th, 2020 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write Michael, is there any compassion left in our world?
Andy
August 5th, 2020 01:27
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ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Afternoon Uncle Mike very droll Cartoon (it happens) and Ode !. Pastry is not the safest Haven ~ but for me ~ anything but CUSTARD (even BIRDS !) ~Thanks for sharing ! We have a COVID Poem today *2020 ~ that was the Year ..... ? Please check !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Brian - Angela & Smokey 💛💛💛
August 3rd, 2020 09:12
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Afternoon Uncle Mike very droll Cartoon (it happens) and Ode !. Pastry is not the safest Haven ~ but for me ~ anything but CUSTARD (even BIRDS !) ~Thanks for sharing ! We have a COVID Poem today *2020 ~ that was the Year ..... ? Please check !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Brian - Angela & Smokey 💛💛💛
August 3rd, 2020 09:12
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L. B. Mek said:
- and swim in the hollowness
of a life: without biting substance...
another quirky offering, your work offers such effortless whimsy - of well-lived, shimmering silver wisdom: displayed with deftly subtle tones
August 3rd, 2020 05:57
L. B. Mek said:
- and swim in the hollowness
of a life: without biting substance...
another quirky offering, your work offers such effortless whimsy - of well-lived, shimmering silver wisdom: displayed with deftly subtle tones
August 3rd, 2020 05:57
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orchidee said:
Fido would faint at \'Pudding Club\'. lol.
Good write and pic M. Miss Berles having pie and custard?
August 3rd, 2020 01:42
orchidee said:
Fido would faint at \'Pudding Club\'. lol.
Good write and pic M. Miss Berles having pie and custard?
August 3rd, 2020 01:42
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Andrew Charles Forrest said:
What! No cream?
Love it Michael
August 3rd, 2020 01:37
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
What! No cream?
Love it Michael
August 3rd, 2020 01:37
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