Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



AGEING COUPLETS (2)
dusk arising said:

Two lines which encapsulate my appearance.

You pic today has an uncanny likeness to a close up of the threadbare sofa we threw out 20 odd years ago.(just kidding).

July 8th, 2020 09:12

AGEING COUPLETS (2)
orchidee said:

Good write and pic M.
You on the way out?! Not for along time, I hope. How old is Miss Berles now?

July 8th, 2020 01:55

AGEING COUPLETS (2)
Goldfinch60 said:

Maybe but not yet Michael, not yet.

Andy

You\'ve done it again with your artwork, I can see so much in it once more.

July 8th, 2020 01:20

AGEING COUPLETS (1)
Suresh said:

so I can go back to having garlic again????????

July 7th, 2020 23:37

AGEING COUPLETS (1)
Fay Slimm. said:

Ha ha - how true Michael. More aging couplets please.

July 7th, 2020 15:04

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MendedFences27 said:

Both very clever. Clever art, clever humor. If only they had grown onions in Eden. Could have saved a lot of trouble.- Phil A.

July 7th, 2020 15:02

AGEING COUPLETS (1)
Neville said:


it seems you know your onions sir....

laugh, I nearly cried....

July 7th, 2020 12:38

AGEING COUPLETS (1)
dusk arising said:

Don\'t waste any time starving yourself of apples... that doctor is not going to call for fear you will cough at them. I wonder whether any GPs have been furlowed.... i really can\'t imagine what they get up yo during their \'working day\' at the moment, they\'re not seeing any patients in my neck of the orchard.

Onions, I love them.

Your srtwork today reminded me of the album cover of Chicago 3 back in the early 70\'s.

July 7th, 2020 12:14

AGEING COUPLETS (1)
๐Ÿคs.zaynab.kamoonpuri๐ŸŒท๐Ÿฆ๐Ÿ˜ฝ said:

Woah wow yay clever!! We use onions everyday in cooking and a lot of people speak of its benefits. Must be good for these crazy flu times I suppose too. Cheers!

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too. Thanks

July 7th, 2020 06:03

AGEING COUPLETS (1)
FineB said:

Hi Michael

Excellent write๐Ÿ‘

Keep writing โœ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB

July 7th, 2020 05:03

AGEING COUPLETS (1)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BRIAN HERE ~ Good Morning Uncle MIKE ~ Thanks for the SMILE ~ oral hygiene is very important by mutual consent neither Angela or I chew GARLIC ! Lots of VAMPS but no VAMP~IRES in Essex ! Love the abstract I have titled it *DECONTRUCTED TARTAN No 51* Please check *PLANET EARTH ~ MANS RESPONSIBILITY* Thanks !

Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
LOVE ~ Angela & Brian ๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›

July 7th, 2020 03:10

AGEING COUPLETS (1)
orchidee said:

Oh lol good write and pic M.
Does Miss Berles have a sprout - or 10 - or baked beans, to keep the doctor away?!

July 7th, 2020 01:39

AGEING COUPLETS (1)
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you Michael, my first smile of the day.

Intriguing artwork as well.

Andy

July 7th, 2020 00:36

WHERE NO MEN TREAD
Neville said:

I swear I posted a comment here earlier....

It seems I was either wrong, or the site could of course be haunted... whatever the case, This is an impressive post Michael... Stay safe

Neville

July 3rd, 2020 09:07

WHERE NO MEN TREAD
dusk arising said:

What? .. no slugs and creepy crawlies, no snot hanging from trees?
I wouldn\'t go to lands like that......

But this wonderful place you describe has me enthralled.... i wish to explore, indeed i already have. Re reading is so rewarding here.
The reality of places seldom romanced into poetry.
A must also for my fav\'s. You certainly can turn out some real beauties.

July 3rd, 2020 08:14

WHERE NO MEN TREAD
Accidental Poet said:

Excellent poetry and artwork Michael.

July 3rd, 2020 07:13

EQUALITY
FineB said:

Hi Michael,

A brilliant write.

Thanks for sharing.

Keep writing and safe during these challenging times.
FineB

July 3rd, 2020 07:00

WHERE NO MEN TREAD
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

I see a |HOOFPRINT in your DAUB
A painting into *Paths not trod* of course
When I venture into *Lifes Hidden Orb*
I always saddle up my Horse !
It give me height & Horspower Might
Saves me a-pricking from the Gorse !

ANGELA HERE - Good Morning Uncle Mike !
Lovely symbiotic & ethereal Pic & Poem.
Like FAY I too have added both to my FAVES !

Love it when you wax lyrical
Love - Peace & Joy - ANGELA !

July 3rd, 2020 04:10

WHERE NO MEN TREAD
Fay Slimm. said:

The force of your words along with the strength of texture and colour in your artwork makes this posting one to remember - into my faves with this little gem .................

July 3rd, 2020 03:34

WHERE NO MEN TREAD
orchidee said:

It\'s all right for some, ain\'t it, being umbrageous! *Gets out dictionary*.
I know that quaggy moss, and horse manure, along a track, so deep I had to turn back and take the long route!
How are Miss Berles ram-berles these days? Where does she go?

July 3rd, 2020 01:44

WHERE NO MEN TREAD
Goldfinch60 said:

As I see those lands ahead
Those lands where no men tread,
I see that wondrous piece of art
Which pulls me strongly to its heart.
So along those lands I\'ll go
And to that painting I will bow.

Andy

July 3rd, 2020 01:30

ANTI SOCIAL HAIR BEHAVIOUR
FineB said:

Hi Michael,

Great write and lovely picture accompanying your poem

Social distancing I certainly had an interesting experience when I went into the EE mobile store in Wembley to get my phone updated. The assistants now wear space age caps when they serve you

Keep writing and safe during these challenging times.
FineB

June 30th, 2020 16:50

ANTI SOCIAL HAIR BEHAVIOUR
Suresh said:

After reading how you have so accurately describes me, I guess I\'ll have to go into \'lock-down\', all because of facial distancing. HA!

June 30th, 2020 10:09

ANTI SOCIAL HAIR BEHAVIOUR
Neville said:


what else could it be...

I am feeling a bit sheepish myself and thinking of changing my name to Sean :)

June 30th, 2020 06:07

ANTI SOCIAL HAIR BEHAVIOUR
dusk arising said:

I now have a full head of skin. But the choices of off the shelf polishes have brought a new enthusiasm into my life.
And hats, now a necessity in colder times.... i have hats for every mood.

June 30th, 2020 06:00

ANTI SOCIAL HAIR BEHAVIOUR
Accidental Poet said:

Andy\'s comment goes for me as well. Great write and art work Michael.

June 30th, 2020 05:35

ANTI SOCIAL HAIR BEHAVIOUR
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - BUENAS DIAS TIO MIKE ! Love the foto of your Hair from up above - please keep out of El Sol ! Men are suffereing follically (and its not funny !) Growing beards and hair like Street Buskers ! Where their WIFE has had a go it really shows ! Zilch back & sides & Fuzzy Wuzzy on TOP ! This is another of the 50 ways in which Girls Score ! As our Hair gets longer Men have more to Play with and we save Money on Extensions. Brian is learning more about us Females now He is married (His Lady Friends say He is Bewitched - Bohered & Bewildered - aren*t ALL MEN ?). I noticed in the box marked REINCARNATION (on our will) hes crossed out TIGER and replaced it with HUMAN (FEMALE). Love the POME excellent choice of Words for a Tuesday !

Blessings & Joy to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey !

June 30th, 2020 01:57

ANTI SOCIAL HAIR BEHAVIOUR
orchidee said:

Good write and pic M.
Does Miss Berles wear her hair in a bun?!

June 30th, 2020 01:45

ANTI SOCIAL HAIR BEHAVIOUR
Goldfinch60 said:

I wish the hair on my head was receding, I am definitely coming very close to my 1970s hair style!

Andy

June 30th, 2020 01:03

YET SLEEP ALONE
Suresh said:

Multi-talented, a grossly under-rated term when referring to yourself

June 29th, 2020 09:01



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