Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
YET SLEEP ALONE
Accidental Poet said:
Two more great works of art Michael. Love them both.
June 27th, 2020 08:25
Accidental Poet said:
Two more great works of art Michael. Love them both.
June 27th, 2020 08:25
ON SUMMER NIGHTS LIKE THESE
Accidental Poet said:
Two masterpieces from the master himself. I bet the birds are frequent visitors.
June 27th, 2020 08:11
Accidental Poet said:
Two masterpieces from the master himself. I bet the birds are frequent visitors.
June 27th, 2020 08:11
YET SLEEP ALONE
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Looks like a room that echoes
A Room That Echoes
I\'m gonna write that That Michael... on day... Hope you\'re keeping well... And sane... I miss the out doors nit just outdoors... the real outdoors the world...I think that\'s what I take fro m your abstract today
Excellent anyway you know I love an abstract so many possibilities
June 27th, 2020 04:58
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Looks like a room that echoes
A Room That Echoes
I\'m gonna write that That Michael... on day... Hope you\'re keeping well... And sane... I miss the out doors nit just outdoors... the real outdoors the world...I think that\'s what I take fro m your abstract today
Excellent anyway you know I love an abstract so many possibilities
June 27th, 2020 04:58
YET SLEEP ALONE
dusk arising said:
He he he your ruminating belly rumbles beneath the duvet. Have those rumblings become a comforting lullaby for your good lady?
June 27th, 2020 03:03
dusk arising said:
He he he your ruminating belly rumbles beneath the duvet. Have those rumblings become a comforting lullaby for your good lady?
June 27th, 2020 03:03
YET SLEEP ALONE
orchidee said:
And furthermore - you having hot summer nights, enjoying \'em?! I\'m not! All I do when it gets to 28C = 82F is faint, whether it\'s palindromic or not! * Gets out dictionary*!.
June 27th, 2020 01:51
orchidee said:
And furthermore - you having hot summer nights, enjoying \'em?! I\'m not! All I do when it gets to 28C = 82F is faint, whether it\'s palindromic or not! * Gets out dictionary*!.
June 27th, 2020 01:51
YET SLEEP ALONE
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M.
Miss Berles has furbelows. In one sense, it\'s related to petticoats. I googled that, of course.
Woof! Fido won\'t let me pursue it further. He says \'Take the definition of \"adorn with trimmings\"\'. lol.
June 27th, 2020 01:48
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M.
Miss Berles has furbelows. In one sense, it\'s related to petticoats. I googled that, of course.
Woof! Fido won\'t let me pursue it further. He says \'Take the definition of \"adorn with trimmings\"\'. lol.
June 27th, 2020 01:48
YET SLEEP ALONE
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M.
Miss Berles has furbelows. In one sense, it\'s related to petticoats. I googled that, of course.
Woof! Fido won\'t let me pursue it further. He says \'Take the definition of \"adorn with trimmings\"\'. lol.
June 27th, 2020 01:48
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M.
Miss Berles has furbelows. In one sense, it\'s related to petticoats. I googled that, of course.
Woof! Fido won\'t let me pursue it further. He says \'Take the definition of \"adorn with trimmings\"\'. lol.
June 27th, 2020 01:48
YET SLEEP ALONE
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
REDUCTIO AD ABSTRACTUM = Modern ART
REDUCTIO AD ABSURBUM = Modern POETRY
ANGELA Here - Always up Bright & Early on the Sabbath to Carpe Diem ! Good Sabbath - Uncle Mike. I am pleased to see you waxing lyrical again ! Just as the ultimate *ABSTRACT* is *White on White* so the ultimate *ABSURD* is the *Nonecu* the *Sans Mots / Sin Parablas*. Such Paintings & Poems leave MUCH for the Imagination but ZILCH for the Soul ! Nice to see your *Abstracts* in situ it gives them VITA LITY - AMEN !
Love the Lyric *YET SLEEP ALONE* as a collolary to *ON SUMMER NIGHTS LIKE THESE*. Being Spanish - I love the *Piquante y Caliente* in Food & Climate (& Hombres !) and when we pass the palindromic 28C = 82F I come alive ! We love the *Hot Summer Nights* and all the abstactions of the supernatural agencies ! Love & life (in our esperiences) are always ameliorated by *temperatura* ! We notice you have still employed - yesterdays last line - *in ruminating silences*. Is that for continuity or choice or circumstance. Thanks for sharing your Pics & Poem & Abode - Excelente !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey !
June 27th, 2020 01:38
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
REDUCTIO AD ABSTRACTUM = Modern ART
REDUCTIO AD ABSURBUM = Modern POETRY
ANGELA Here - Always up Bright & Early on the Sabbath to Carpe Diem ! Good Sabbath - Uncle Mike. I am pleased to see you waxing lyrical again ! Just as the ultimate *ABSTRACT* is *White on White* so the ultimate *ABSURD* is the *Nonecu* the *Sans Mots / Sin Parablas*. Such Paintings & Poems leave MUCH for the Imagination but ZILCH for the Soul ! Nice to see your *Abstracts* in situ it gives them VITA LITY - AMEN !
Love the Lyric *YET SLEEP ALONE* as a collolary to *ON SUMMER NIGHTS LIKE THESE*. Being Spanish - I love the *Piquante y Caliente* in Food & Climate (& Hombres !) and when we pass the palindromic 28C = 82F I come alive ! We love the *Hot Summer Nights* and all the abstactions of the supernatural agencies ! Love & life (in our esperiences) are always ameliorated by *temperatura* ! We notice you have still employed - yesterdays last line - *in ruminating silences*. Is that for continuity or choice or circumstance. Thanks for sharing your Pics & Poem & Abode - Excelente !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey !
June 27th, 2020 01:38
YET SLEEP ALONE
Fay Slimm. said:
You caught the reasons for sleep\'s chance to expand and ruminate in silence so lucidly Michael - - fine write and loved the clean lines of your walls plus the artwork.
June 27th, 2020 01:00
Fay Slimm. said:
You caught the reasons for sleep\'s chance to expand and ruminate in silence so lucidly Michael - - fine write and loved the clean lines of your walls plus the artwork.
June 27th, 2020 01:00
YET SLEEP ALONE
Neville said:
cant beat a bit of abstract to kick the day off...
love ya colour scheme and ya poem is just a little bit special too sir...
Neville
June 27th, 2020 00:42
Neville said:
cant beat a bit of abstract to kick the day off...
love ya colour scheme and ya poem is just a little bit special too sir...
Neville
June 27th, 2020 00:42
YET SLEEP ALONE
Goldfinch60 said:
Those abstracts of the day can bring us such wonderful feelings within us.
Andy
June 27th, 2020 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Those abstracts of the day can bring us such wonderful feelings within us.
Andy
June 27th, 2020 00:33
ON SUMMER NIGHTS LIKE THESE
Suresh said:
I can just visualize multitudes of birds visiting, if only to sing a chorus as you recite these words of yours.
June 26th, 2020 23:48
Suresh said:
I can just visualize multitudes of birds visiting, if only to sing a chorus as you recite these words of yours.
June 26th, 2020 23:48
ON SUMMER NIGHTS LIKE THESE
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela here - Good Friday Evening Uncle Mike ! Just catching up on MPS after a hard day in my clinic ! Love the *Table d*Oiseaux* the height is important to stop rodents stealing the Food etc. We have similar on a 5ft Pole which is ideal.. Squirrels & Cats & Rats could possibly scale your support ?
Love the POEM. Nice structure three balanaced *Free verse Quintets*. V 1. The view fom any window is evocative ! V 2. The view not only evokes Nature but also Rustic Human activity. V 3. Living beyond (and before) the here & now ~ AMEN !
A suggested last line as requested in your reply to DA
*FLUID PIXEL RUMINATIONS* That\'s just Girl Talk !
Brians suggestion is *THE EBB & FLOW OF FANTASIES*
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey !
June 26th, 2020 18:17
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela here - Good Friday Evening Uncle Mike ! Just catching up on MPS after a hard day in my clinic ! Love the *Table d*Oiseaux* the height is important to stop rodents stealing the Food etc. We have similar on a 5ft Pole which is ideal.. Squirrels & Cats & Rats could possibly scale your support ?
Love the POEM. Nice structure three balanaced *Free verse Quintets*. V 1. The view fom any window is evocative ! V 2. The view not only evokes Nature but also Rustic Human activity. V 3. Living beyond (and before) the here & now ~ AMEN !
A suggested last line as requested in your reply to DA
*FLUID PIXEL RUMINATIONS* That\'s just Girl Talk !
Brians suggestion is *THE EBB & FLOW OF FANTASIES*
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey !
June 26th, 2020 18:17
ON SUMMER NIGHTS LIKE THESE
dusk arising said:
Today i wandered with your words and journeyed along the tracks lit through a hazy dust and enjoyed a relaxation into a fantasy of childlike fairy tale land from afar.
Then somebody knocked my door. Reality can be such a rude awakening. I really enjoyed this piece.
June 26th, 2020 09:21
dusk arising said:
Today i wandered with your words and journeyed along the tracks lit through a hazy dust and enjoyed a relaxation into a fantasy of childlike fairy tale land from afar.
Then somebody knocked my door. Reality can be such a rude awakening. I really enjoyed this piece.
June 26th, 2020 09:21
ON SUMMER NIGHTS LIKE THESE
Neville said:
I\'m with the rest of the gang Michael...
an excellent poem and a very unique bit o sculptin sir...
Neville
June 26th, 2020 07:16
Neville said:
I\'m with the rest of the gang Michael...
an excellent poem and a very unique bit o sculptin sir...
Neville
June 26th, 2020 07:16
ON SUMMER NIGHTS LIKE THESE
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
I love them both.
Bravo Maestro!
👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
Laura🌻
June 26th, 2020 04:27
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
I love them both.
Bravo Maestro!
👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
Laura🌻
June 26th, 2020 04:27
ON SUMMER NIGHTS LIKE THESE
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh Michael. The image you conjour with these intriguing lines is so powerful - a tale in the telling and here\'s to another installment perhaps. Great stuff as always. - - and p.s. - I love your unique bird-table arrangement.
June 26th, 2020 03:53
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh Michael. The image you conjour with these intriguing lines is so powerful - a tale in the telling and here\'s to another installment perhaps. Great stuff as always. - - and p.s. - I love your unique bird-table arrangement.
June 26th, 2020 03:53
ON SUMMER NIGHTS LIKE THESE
orchidee said:
And both fine to me too!
How do we know we have had 40 winks? Do we count them while we are dozing? Will Miss Berles allow 41 winks, or is that too many?
What am I talking about? If we dunno what we\'re on about, how will others know?! lol. The heat\'s driving me mad - that\'s my excuse.
Miss B. will now explain to me: \'contiguity\'!
June 26th, 2020 01:55
orchidee said:
And both fine to me too!
How do we know we have had 40 winks? Do we count them while we are dozing? Will Miss Berles allow 41 winks, or is that too many?
What am I talking about? If we dunno what we\'re on about, how will others know?! lol. The heat\'s driving me mad - that\'s my excuse.
Miss B. will now explain to me: \'contiguity\'!
June 26th, 2020 01:55
ON SUMMER NIGHTS LIKE THESE
Goldfinch60 said:
Both creations are fine to me Michael.
Andy
June 26th, 2020 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Both creations are fine to me Michael.
Andy
June 26th, 2020 01:11
Another 575
Goldfinch60 said:
I touched that live wire
it threw me up in the air
I became shocking.
Andy
June 22nd, 2020 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
I touched that live wire
it threw me up in the air
I became shocking.
Andy
June 22nd, 2020 00:50
IT\'S
dusk arising said:
Naughty naughty.... hope u have your waders on... watch out for the frogs porn.... you may have heard of snuff videos.... our froggy pals call them croak vids.
That\'s a nice post from you, i must try to remember those wise words.
June 20th, 2020 01:45
dusk arising said:
Naughty naughty.... hope u have your waders on... watch out for the frogs porn.... you may have heard of snuff videos.... our froggy pals call them croak vids.
That\'s a nice post from you, i must try to remember those wise words.
June 20th, 2020 01:45
Another 575
MendedFences27 said:
Too many times was I bitten and felt that jolt, which explains a lot.
Haikus and Senryus have broad subject matter such as Nature and Humanity. I guess everything else is your 575. I truly related to this one.
P.S. - We have moved and I miss my garden. - Phil A.
June 19th, 2020 21:49
MendedFences27 said:
Too many times was I bitten and felt that jolt, which explains a lot.
Haikus and Senryus have broad subject matter such as Nature and Humanity. I guess everything else is your 575. I truly related to this one.
P.S. - We have moved and I miss my garden. - Phil A.
June 19th, 2020 21:49
Another 575
dusk arising said:
Hmm for me arithmetic and poetry should be kept a long way away from each other...... perhaps with an electric fence between, or maybe one of those electric shock collars around the poets neck.
(No poets were harmed during the writing of this comment. If this comment has affected you in any way please consult this months edition of basic electric circuits for enthusiasts edited by D.C. Flashman)
June 19th, 2020 11:36
dusk arising said:
Hmm for me arithmetic and poetry should be kept a long way away from each other...... perhaps with an electric fence between, or maybe one of those electric shock collars around the poets neck.
(No poets were harmed during the writing of this comment. If this comment has affected you in any way please consult this months edition of basic electric circuits for enthusiasts edited by D.C. Flashman)
June 19th, 2020 11:36
Another 575
Fay Slimm. said:
Am shocked with 575 excitement and love your new border Mike ....... gardens ares a place of enjoyment with chosen changes made over time.
June 19th, 2020 08:20
Fay Slimm. said:
Am shocked with 575 excitement and love your new border Mike ....... gardens ares a place of enjoyment with chosen changes made over time.
June 19th, 2020 08:20
DESERTED NOW
Suresh said:
When I pass by a deserted place or a ruin, my mind wanders off to its glorious past, and I am lost to reality. Your words capture that and your art brings it back to life.
June 17th, 2020 23:10
Suresh said:
When I pass by a deserted place or a ruin, my mind wanders off to its glorious past, and I am lost to reality. Your words capture that and your art brings it back to life.
June 17th, 2020 23:10
DESERTED NOW
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Your artwork, complemented by your poem, is extraordinary. Definitely one of my favorites.
Bravo Maestro!
Laura
June 17th, 2020 22:11
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Your artwork, complemented by your poem, is extraordinary. Definitely one of my favorites.
Bravo Maestro!
Laura
June 17th, 2020 22:11
DESERTED NOW
MendedFences27 said:
Let me add some more praise upon this poem and artwork. \"Fire-light fingers,\" is brilliant, no pun intended. Now, I too must save this to fav.
I love the coloration of your art piece.- Phil A.
June 17th, 2020 18:25
MendedFences27 said:
Let me add some more praise upon this poem and artwork. \"Fire-light fingers,\" is brilliant, no pun intended. Now, I too must save this to fav.
I love the coloration of your art piece.- Phil A.
June 17th, 2020 18:25
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