Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



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ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Little Willy never scored
He only has a Microboard

Good Evening Uncle Mike ~ Kids always seem tp be going in the opposite Direction.

Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Brian & Angela πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›

April 29th, 2020 10:38

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dusk arising said:

Hope he\'s not going to be just another bright spark.

Has he tried the liquidiser?

April 29th, 2020 02:58

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Goldfinch60 said:

Make sure he has no metal about his person.

Andy

April 29th, 2020 02:30

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orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write and pic M.

April 29th, 2020 01:56

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myself and me said:

Ha, ha ha, make my day.

April 29th, 2020 00:15

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MendedFences27 said:

Time for a shot of November third. I think your penguins have more common sense. Two lines of \"dump Trump\" , eloquently expressed. Cheers. - Phil A.

April 28th, 2020 16:02

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Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write but with serious overtones, I will leave you to guess what my feelings are for Trump.

Andy

April 28th, 2020 01:55

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orchidee said:

Will Miss Berles try this new drink?!

April 28th, 2020 01:50

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dusk arising said:

A loud guffaw from me on reading this.
Heinekbleach refreshes the parts other bleaches can\'t reach. Things just pale into insignificance.

You are possibly as big a Trump fan as myself. What does it say about the USA mentality when we consider just how popular this \'leader\' of theirs is over there.
Are lies and pathetic excuses, sweeping mistakes under the carpet so ingrained in their society? Replies on a postcard please or recited through a megaphone at roof top level on a west facing beach.

April 28th, 2020 01:45

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ANGELA & BRIAN said:

YOUR exterior you cant hide
But youll be Whiter than White inside !

ANGELA HERE - Just enjoying Eggs Benedictine for Breakfast before Im off to manipulate a few bones & stretch a few muscles. Aquatherapy today my Favourite. Not many people get paid to work up to their necks in warm water - now I know how a TEA BAG feels- AMEN. I hp U Steve hasnt been encouraging Junior P to sing !

Blesings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ

April 28th, 2020 01:26

DOUBT THREW
SureshG said:

A vicious seed of doubt
Once rooted will sprout
Leaves it’s victim in pain
Trust, difficult to regain

Engrossing subject
Beautifully poemed
Exceptional image

April 27th, 2020 18:15

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ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Brian here - Uncle Mike Buenas Noches ! Love the PENGUINS - If you have a KID in tow & theres a Hole - He*ll always fall right in it !

PARADIGM - A World View underlying the theory & methodology of a Particular SUBJECT - in the NATURAL or BEHAVIOURAL SCIENCES !

Try applying that theorem to LOVE ! After a lifetime of study you would be no nearer the TRUTH than when you first started. Freud (after a lifetime) reached this conclusion about LOVE *Its better FELT than TELT* AMEN !

Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love BRIAN & ANGELA πŸ§‘πŸ€πŸ’™

April 27th, 2020 17:15

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Fay Slimm. said:

Ah this made me near crying to think of the doubts that gave way to that bleeding heart - you have scribed such a familiar result too in that final couplet.... good write Mike - but I fear it must be the long lockdown making me take to tears. sniff sniff.............

April 27th, 2020 09:46

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orchidee said:

You\'re rattling on towards 1,000 poems, I see! That\'s a lot of berles for you - and us other poets. Has Miss Berles got enough syllables in stock for us all?

April 27th, 2020 02:17

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orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M.
I used to think para-dime was pronounced para- did-jum. Enough waffling!
Miss Berles having a spot of trouble there in this poem?!

April 27th, 2020 01:56

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dusk arising said:

Gosh, love\'s paradigm. There\'s a challenge for a partner indeed.

What a wonderful tangled mess of screwed up emotions love can be as we travel along life\'s high-wee.

April 27th, 2020 01:36

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Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words Michael.

Andy

April 27th, 2020 01:17

R McG
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Brian here ~ GOOD MORNING UNCLE MICHEAL ! Roger McGough one of the best of the Liverpool Poets ! Last time I heard him ~ he told us all to get comfortable for one of his longer Poems ~

When all is Said & Done
Theres nothing more
To be SAiD or DONE !

Awesome best recited in a Posh Scouce Accent ~ Like to one we use for Wedding Toasts etc etc. Roger is good example of a performance Poet !

Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love BRIAN & ANGELA πŸ§‘πŸ€πŸ’™

April 26th, 2020 04:11

R McG
dusk arising said:

To smile at each mornings pun
and give Van Gough a fair run
theres a poet i read
not quite the old Bede
yep Michael Edward\'s the one.

Hope i got the apostrophe right on that one.

April 26th, 2020 03:02

R McG
orchidee said:

Good write and pic M. You know McGough Berles? I\'m being daft now!

April 26th, 2020 02:24

R McG
Goldfinch60 said:

So do I Michael, fabulous poet whose poem \'The Railings\' was the first I came across and it drew me to him, read many of them since.

Andy

April 26th, 2020 01:20

THE WORM
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

B HERE ~ Good Friday Uncle Mike ~ Love the VISUAL ! Angela gives all her clients a skipping rope to improve ARM & LEG mobility ~ excellent !
WORMS ! I teach Environmental Studies to my Classes of Lady Dianas (Nursery Nurses) and I let them observe Perspex Wormeries. We put in layers of soil clay chalk etc and within a few days it is all mixed ~ thats one of the many things Earth Worms do.! Most of them have never handled a WORM but that is also part of the course & spiders etc. I teach them to teach Preschool Kids repect for all Flora & Fauna & Minibeasts and to never kick Fungi etc. I love to talk to Native American Kids and wonder @ their knwledge of & respect for Nature ! We also foster this in the Scout Movement. Thanks for sharing ~ please check *Wonderful Words*.

Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love Brian & Angela πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›

April 24th, 2020 04:37

THE WORM
orchidee said:

Yes, the humble worm, bumble bee, and other creatures! You see Hum Berles? Does he pong (hum) or hum a tune, or both?

April 24th, 2020 01:51

THE WORM
dusk arising said:

I haven\'t seen a worm for ages now, not even in the mirror.

April 24th, 2020 01:06

THE WORM
Goldfinch60 said:

They must always be preserved Michael otherwise where would we be?

Andy

April 24th, 2020 00:56

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rrodriguez said:

I enjoy reading your short poems. they are full of so much fun. Thank you for sharing.

April 22nd, 2020 15:17

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dusk arising said:

As soon as I saw your picture on my screen i let out a peel of laughter.... such fun. Love the play on words, this one is a trick i often find amusing.... mental messy pictures of when someone decides to put some soup on etc.

April 22nd, 2020 09:58

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FredPeyer said:

Love to read your poems, Michael, but sometimes I do wonder where you get these ideas from. Didn\'t even know they still made kettles.

April 22nd, 2020 03:36

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Goldfinch60 said:

They just don\'t make those kettles big enough nowadays.

Andy

April 22nd, 2020 03:25

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orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write and pic M. What\'s Miss Berles up to there? is she trying to make a cup of tea?!
If going into some staff canteens, it looks as if they have thrown the food and drink around the room sometimes.

April 22nd, 2020 02:05



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