Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



DABBLINGS IN DAFTNESS (2)
orchidee said:

Is Miss Berles right all her life? Have any sylla berles gone into isolation? If so, which ones?
I\'m still waffling on like some twittering wreck. I dunno what I\'m on about. lol

March 26th, 2020 03:13

DABBLINGS IN DAFTNESS (2)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GOOD MORNING UNCLE MIKE ~ ANGELA & I are Honeymooning together in Sunny Essex and enjoying every minute of it. Its so so perfect we feel we should have gotten Married the day after we met ! Still Ive NOW crossed the Stoop o* oor own little But an* Ben with ANGELA in my Arms and we have lived Happily ever after ~ 2 Days !
Love the Picture ~ is that a prediction ?
Angela wi* oor twa Wee Bairns in 2030 !
Love the Poem ~ it increased our SMILE ~
with our Morning Coffee & Shortbread !
Please check Yesterdays POEM ~ Love & Marriage ~ Thanks !

Blessings & Joy & Peace to You and Yours
Love MR & MRS BRIAN WILLIAMS ๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›

March 26th, 2020 02:53

DABBLINGS IN DAFTNESS (2)
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

Maybe it was this time that you were wrong Michael.

Kind regards, Alan


March 26th, 2020 02:24

DABBLINGS IN DAFTNESS (2)
Goldfinch60 said:

Been there, done that, got the tee-shirt.

Andy

March 26th, 2020 02:14

DABBLINGS IN DAFTNESS (1)
Neville said:

squeeze gently he said
she did
it was the last thing he said....

I do like these Michael and is there a name for the outline sketch you posted today....

March 24th, 2020 17:24

DABBLINGS IN DAFTNESS (1)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks for sharing Mike ~ CORVID 19 is a platform fo BLACK HUMOUR ! Your Pome & Pic (Fish in coitious ?) reminded me of the cavallier attitude to C 19 ! Everyone out & about ~ jostling & joggling for space because the SUN was out ! And the SUPAMARKETS meyhem like M & S @ Christmas ! Boris is like Captain Mainwaring trying to keep calm. He calls on Sargent Wilson (GOVE) to give the orders and the UNDERTAKER (REES-MOGG) telling us were all DOOMED ! The Health Minister (working 24/7) is like Cpl Jones ~ telling us all DONT PANIC ~ DONT PANIC ! We seem to have captured some of the WW2 Spirit & Humour.
Angela & I are acctually getting Married (in the sight of GOD) @ 2pm today our two MAMAS as Matrons of Honour ~ PAPA giving Angela away & My DAD as BEST MAN C\'est la Vie. This will enable us to occupy BETHANY (Our First House) as MAN & WIFE. The big *DO* has been postponed for at least a YEAR ! Angela & I are not phased because a Simple Wedding suits us (in the present circumstances) and we did not want to put any one @ risk !

Blessing & Peace to you & Yours
Love Brian & Angela ๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›

March 24th, 2020 04:17

DABBLINGS IN DAFTNESS (1)
orchidee said:

Should Miss Berles try this game?!
I tried it with my marriage to KP. I loaded every gun with bullets when it was her turn! Well, I didn\'t know the rules of the game. That\'s my excuse. Oohh heehee.

March 24th, 2020 02:59

DABBLINGS IN DAFTNESS (1)
dusk arising said:

Now that made me laugh out loud and i\'m still smiling. Top marks.

March 24th, 2020 02:57

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Goldfinch60 said:

Surely you mean try, try, try, try, trBANG! again.

Andy

March 24th, 2020 02:43

DABBLINGS IN DAFTNESS (1)
Saxon Crow said:

Nothing like going out with a bang!

March 24th, 2020 02:07

HIDDEN BENEFITS
dusk arising said:

DOH! This explains then why there are no rape scenes in the Simpsons perhaps.

March 22nd, 2020 17:58

HIDDEN BENEFITS
FredPeyer said:

It takes an artist like you, Michael, to find something positive in such a negative situation.

March 22nd, 2020 12:42

HIDDEN BENEFITS
orchidee said:

Was this a relative of Burl Ington-Berles?! lol.

March 22nd, 2020 03:31

HIDDEN BENEFITS
Goldfinch60 said:

I know I shouldn\'t laugh at rape and pillage but that final line made me laugh Michael.

Andy

March 22nd, 2020 02:21

THE ARTISTS DILEMMA
orchidee said:

What\'s Burl Ington-Bertie doing in the present days? Is he rich with his double-barrelled surname? Will he share out the berles among the needy poets?!
And why am I talking rubbish?! lol.

March 21st, 2020 06:52

THE ARTISTS DILEMMA
Goldfinch60 said:

That stormy see can be captured in your mind and then it will be still.

Good one Michael.

Love the minimalist artwork. So few lines, so much shown.

Andy

March 21st, 2020 04:14

THE ARTISTS DILEMMA
orchidee said:

A fine write M.

March 21st, 2020 02:48

THE ARTISTS DILEMMA
dusk arising said:

Ha! Maybe if you drank a certain liquid you, easel pallet and all, would sway just like the sea.

March 21st, 2020 01:36

3 MORE COUPLETS
FredPeyer said:

You must have been thinking of me when you wrote that first one!
The second one is so true, and the third one I wouldn\'t know wearing slippers and t-shirts all the time.

March 20th, 2020 21:29

3 MORE COUPLETS
Fay Slimm. said:

Ha - - love your funny couplets - - more please dear fashionista.

March 20th, 2020 16:47

3 MORE COUPLETS
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening Uncle Mike ~ Last day @ Work today ~ Virus dont inspirus ! Love the Silly Wet ~ she leaves much to the imagination ! Because we have cancelled the oft castigated GCSES & A-Levels ~ I should warn we are now grading all coarse work ~ including couplets !

GRADINGS (A la GCSE English) I am an infernal examiner !

1. A fitting *Ode to a Unidexter* ~ Grade B
2. A good Mantra for Teens ~ Grade B
3. Excellent use of Rhyme ~ Grade A

I have used tte old gradings which made more sense !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿค๐Ÿ’™

March 20th, 2020 12:27

3 MORE COUPLETS
dusk arising said:

A ploughman who severed one arm
wore it round his neck iike a charm

Farmers wife said he was no use
he suffered so much abuse

he set up his home where once he would furrow
lived with three rabbits in a well comfy burrow

Enjoyed your three gems today.... thought i\'d break a few rules and maybe raise a smile above.

March 20th, 2020 10:36

3 MORE COUPLETS
orchidee said:

Good writes and pic M.
How are Miss Berles and Co. coping at this time? Is there a ration on syllables? Are they on top of the situation?!

March 20th, 2020 02:54

3 MORE COUPLETS
Goldfinch60 said:

Did the leg fit properly?
Sometimes the heart is right
I was a dedicated follower of fashion in the 1970s now in my real 70s I wear what is comfortable.
Three good ones Michael.

Andy

March 20th, 2020 02:18

NEEDLES
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Good Morning Uncle Mike - Evening Clinic today so time to post a Poem (Education ! Education ! Education !) a comment on the latest victim of the Arch-Virus - COVID 19. I am a qualified ACTUPUNCTURIST - and (at the point of puncture) I supply it free on the NHS ! HEDGEPIGS are not the most Hygienic of critters but I liked the concept. Brian & I have been accused of writing *Boring & Factual Poems sans Emotion* so it is just as well we have some MSN Clowns & Jokers to balance the Odds ! Love the visual (poppy seed heads) so few lines - so much meaning !

Blessings & Joy to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿค๐Ÿ’™

March 19th, 2020 06:06

NEEDLES
dusk arising said:

oh no panic buying of hedgehog food and toothpaste..... you never see them at the dentissts do u.

love your fun piece today sir

March 19th, 2020 03:48

NEEDLES
orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write M.

March 19th, 2020 03:15

NEEDLES
Poetic Dan said:

Fantastic stuff as ever!

March 19th, 2020 03:14

NEEDLES
Goldfinch60 said:

OUCH!!

Andy

March 19th, 2020 02:13

A COUPLE OF COUPLETS
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun writes Michael.

Andy

March 18th, 2020 16:33



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