Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



JUST A SNORE
Clara said:

Haha Nice! ๐Ÿ‘

March 7th, 2020 04:00

JUST A SNORE
orchidee said:

Lol, a fine write M!

March 7th, 2020 02:54

JUST A SNORE
dusk arising said:

Now that really made me laugh - thank u for brightening up my morning with mirth.

March 7th, 2020 02:31

JUST A SNORE
Goldfinch60 said:

Another good fun write Michael.
Just one thing - are you sure?

Andy

March 7th, 2020 02:06

JUST A SNORE
Saxon Crow said:

If it didnt smell it wasnt a fart! Nice one Mike made me chuckle

March 7th, 2020 01:29

ELEPHANTS ON THE RUN
Neville said:

Which begs the question..

(Q) So how do they get down again...

(A) they sit on a leaf and wait till fall

Nice one sir Michael

Neville

March 6th, 2020 15:25

ELEPHANTS ON THE RUN
FredPeyer said:

They must have been awfully BIG cherries! I do like your humor, Michael.

March 6th, 2020 12:03

ELEPHANTS ON THE RUN
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - GOOD AFTERNOON - Uncle Mike Love the HELIBORES again - Love MAUVE - La Secrete de Victoria et Brain ! Love all Elephant Jokes !

Late arrivals @ the Down Town Strutters Ball - Herr und Frau FANTFUTT - UMBRELASTANDT und Der Jewish Nephew ELI (No 1. In the Late Arrivals @ The Ball Annual 2005)

Love the COUPLETS but Me thinks he could have been snookered ! Have you ever seen an ELE with a cherry sized SCROTUM ? Trust me Im an ANIMAL ANATOMIST !

Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angel & Brian ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿค๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿค๐Ÿงก
Quid pro Quo - Please check *A House and A Home* Thanks !

March 6th, 2020 11:48

ELEPHANTS ON THE RUN
dusk arising said:

They paint the underside of their feet yellow so they cant be seen hiding upside down in the custard. (Whats yellow and dangerous? ... shark infested custard of course)

They get everywhere..... how can u tell the elephants been in the fridge .... footprints in the jelly...... How can u tell theres an elephant in the oven..... u cant close the door....

I could go on and on and.....

March 6th, 2020 10:10

ELEPHANTS ON THE RUN
Saxon Crow said:

I found one in my custard. It had painted its feet yellow. Can\'t trust em

March 6th, 2020 06:10

ELEPHANTS ON THE RUN
orchidee said:

Oh lol, that\'s where they hide then!

March 6th, 2020 02:35

ELEPHANTS ON THE RUN
Goldfinch60 said:

I am laughing out so loud, wonderful start to my day Michael.

Andy

March 6th, 2020 02:30

I SAW A WORM
Clara said:

Oh this is such a lovely little piece. It actually brings joy to heart that you saved that little fella! And wrote about it too! Precious precious!

March 5th, 2020 14:41

I SAW A WORM
FredPeyer said:

Doing your good deed early in the morning sets you free for the whole day! Nice write!

March 5th, 2020 12:50

I SAW A WORM
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BRIAN HERE ~ Thanks Uncle Mike for a rescue that would have made OOOOOOO7 very proud ! Love the rhyming pattern (a b b c c a) and the Photo very flowery !

Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love BRIAN & ANGELA ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿค๐Ÿ’œ
Please check ~ POUNDLAND ~ Thanks !


March 5th, 2020 11:05

I SAW A WORM
Fay Slimm. said:

Dear Michael. - you are person after my own heart - a saver of worms is high on my friend-list - lovely read.

March 5th, 2020 08:51

I SAW A WORM
orchidee said:

Well done! You\'re galloping on into the 900\'s now - number of poems posted on here! Miss Berles will keep an eye on syllables for us still.
You got any iambic pentameters? Are they well-behaved? What do you feed them? (Are they dogs?!) lol.

March 5th, 2020 08:47

I SAW A WORM
dusk arising said:

I saw a worm yesterday, at least i thought i did. What on earth it was doing in the Gents toilet i\'ll never know.

Well saved that man. Worms are rare around here for the whole area is heavy clay soil. Spiders we have by the truck load... little black ones all over the garden. They don\'t come indoors.
A kid in my junior school used to eat worms... yuk.

March 5th, 2020 05:17

I SAW A WORM
Saxon Crow said:

You\'ve got to love a worm really. There should be a national love a worm day. Well done for saving a life M

March 5th, 2020 04:37

I SAW A WORM
Goldfinch60 said:

Worms are so important I see many no them on the croquet lawn and I too pick them up and put them in the long grass.

Andy

\'Boy to boy, \"How is it that collect so many worms for fishing?\" \"Well I get my younger brother to collect them and let him eat every tenth worm he collects\" \'

March 5th, 2020 03:18

I SAW A WORM
orchidee said:

Good write and pic M. I do the same with snails, usually seen on damp days, trying to cross their \'road\' - the pavement!
Oh lo, I\'m on about book-worms today.

March 5th, 2020 02:59

FROM MY LATEST SET OF COUPLETS (2)
Neville said:

Most chucklesome indeed Michael... and those hellebores you have are a sight to behold too

Neville

March 4th, 2020 13:13

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FredPeyer said:

Great write, Michael. At least the holes can be filled. Here a termite and a praying antis got together. Now their offspring says grace before they eat my house!

March 4th, 2020 12:28

FROM MY LATEST SET OF COUPLETS (2)
Saxon Crow said:

Lovely! At least you would have plenty of manure for your roses!!

March 4th, 2020 10:23

FROM MY LATEST SET OF COUPLETS (2)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE (next clinic @ 3 ! Late lunch break Soup & a Sani !) Love the PHOTO & the vintage WC ! All the Spring flowers are wicked and a reminder that as the flowers rise do must the TEMPERATURE ! I love Elephants & worms they boh have heir place in the order of things. Trouble is if your Eli leaves a hoof print it was either Eli or a Flying Umbrella Stand. You cant blame it on the CAT !

Blessings & Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Love in the Spring - Angela & Brian
๐Ÿงก๐Ÿค๐Ÿ’™ ~ ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿค๐Ÿ’™

March 4th, 2020 09:22

FROM MY LATEST SET OF COUPLETS (2)
dusk arising said:

Well you live and learn. I\'ve heard of new laid eggs but new laid grass? What on earth have those two been getting up to?

March 4th, 2020 08:18

FROM MY LATEST SET OF COUPLETS (2)
orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write and pic M. Miss Berles do any gardening?

March 4th, 2020 02:45

FROM MY LATEST SET OF COUPLETS (2)
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you so much Michael, my first laugh of the day.

Andy

March 4th, 2020 02:19

FROM MY LATEST SET OF COUPLETS (1)
myself and me said:

The color of the paint is so warm, absolutely love it. And the couplet, Ha, ha ha.

March 3rd, 2020 14:26

FROM MY LATEST SET OF COUPLETS (1)
Saxon Crow said:

I bet both pants and socks were ironed!

March 3rd, 2020 08:49



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