Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



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ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BRIAN HERE ~ Hi Uncle Mike ~ Love the Pic ~ Amor en Pluvia con Una Paragua !
The Poem reminds me of a game we used to play in the Days of Spike Milligan ! One would write a nonsense line ~ which someone had to complement. Here sre my complements to your seven nonsense lines !

1. If its not raining I let mine Dangle !
2. Because they sat al nudo on a Thistle !
3. Cos she fed her face with a Raspberry Ripple !
4. Comes of eating a hot raw Pickle !
5. Met an Alien with a triple NIPPLE !
6. I met a GIRL ~ wished I was single.
(Dont tell Angela weve only been married 4 days !)
7. I prefer to let mine Jangle

Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Brian & Angela πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›

March 27th, 2020 16:51

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Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful fun write Michael.

Andy

March 27th, 2020 15:26

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dusk arising said:

Excellent nonsense! More of this kind of stuff please. Great pic too.

March 27th, 2020 04:28

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FredPeyer said:

Reads really well, but did not understand a word! :-)
Just what you expect from a bloody American and immigrant at that!

March 27th, 2020 03:21

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orchidee said:

It\'s all too much. You been watching too much \'Neighbours\' and it\'s turned you in to a jibbering wreck? This is the outcome - poems like these! lol.

March 27th, 2020 03:08

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Fay Slimm. said:

Ha ha - - loved your finalΓ© jabble on wangles my friend. thanks for the wide smile and loud chuckle

March 27th, 2020 02:52

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Saxon Crow said:

Bloody brilliant. Enjoyed that one a lot Mike

March 27th, 2020 02:47

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Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

You thought you were wrong, but in a actuality you were rightβ€”right handed!πŸ˜‰

~Laura~🌻

March 26th, 2020 18:51

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Neville said:


Reminds me of something my Father used to say that was very similar.. and for that alone, I thank you Michael,

Neville

March 26th, 2020 18:11

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dusk arising said:

Been there, done that.... I wish I could still fit into that T-shirt.

March 26th, 2020 03:15

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orchidee said:

Is Miss Berles right all her life? Have any sylla berles gone into isolation? If so, which ones?
I\'m still waffling on like some twittering wreck. I dunno what I\'m on about. lol

March 26th, 2020 03:13

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ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GOOD MORNING UNCLE MIKE ~ ANGELA & I are Honeymooning together in Sunny Essex and enjoying every minute of it. Its so so perfect we feel we should have gotten Married the day after we met ! Still Ive NOW crossed the Stoop o* oor own little But an* Ben with ANGELA in my Arms and we have lived Happily ever after ~ 2 Days !
Love the Picture ~ is that a prediction ?
Angela wi* oor twa Wee Bairns in 2030 !
Love the Poem ~ it increased our SMILE ~
with our Morning Coffee & Shortbread !
Please check Yesterdays POEM ~ Love & Marriage ~ Thanks !

Blessings & Joy & Peace to You and Yours
Love MR & MRS BRIAN WILLIAMS πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›

March 26th, 2020 02:53

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Alan .S. Jeeves said:

Maybe it was this time that you were wrong Michael.

Kind regards, Alan


March 26th, 2020 02:24

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Goldfinch60 said:

Been there, done that, got the tee-shirt.

Andy

March 26th, 2020 02:14

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Neville said:

squeeze gently he said
she did
it was the last thing he said....

I do like these Michael and is there a name for the outline sketch you posted today....

March 24th, 2020 17:24

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ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks for sharing Mike ~ CORVID 19 is a platform fo BLACK HUMOUR ! Your Pome & Pic (Fish in coitious ?) reminded me of the cavallier attitude to C 19 ! Everyone out & about ~ jostling & joggling for space because the SUN was out ! And the SUPAMARKETS meyhem like M & S @ Christmas ! Boris is like Captain Mainwaring trying to keep calm. He calls on Sargent Wilson (GOVE) to give the orders and the UNDERTAKER (REES-MOGG) telling us were all DOOMED ! The Health Minister (working 24/7) is like Cpl Jones ~ telling us all DONT PANIC ~ DONT PANIC ! We seem to have captured some of the WW2 Spirit & Humour.
Angela & I are acctually getting Married (in the sight of GOD) @ 2pm today our two MAMAS as Matrons of Honour ~ PAPA giving Angela away & My DAD as BEST MAN C\'est la Vie. This will enable us to occupy BETHANY (Our First House) as MAN & WIFE. The big *DO* has been postponed for at least a YEAR ! Angela & I are not phased because a Simple Wedding suits us (in the present circumstances) and we did not want to put any one @ risk !

Blessing & Peace to you & Yours
Love Brian & Angela πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›

March 24th, 2020 04:17

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orchidee said:

Should Miss Berles try this game?!
I tried it with my marriage to KP. I loaded every gun with bullets when it was her turn! Well, I didn\'t know the rules of the game. That\'s my excuse. Oohh heehee.

March 24th, 2020 02:59

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dusk arising said:

Now that made me laugh out loud and i\'m still smiling. Top marks.

March 24th, 2020 02:57

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Goldfinch60 said:

Surely you mean try, try, try, try, trBANG! again.

Andy

March 24th, 2020 02:43

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Saxon Crow said:

Nothing like going out with a bang!

March 24th, 2020 02:07

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dusk arising said:

DOH! This explains then why there are no rape scenes in the Simpsons perhaps.

March 22nd, 2020 17:58

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FredPeyer said:

It takes an artist like you, Michael, to find something positive in such a negative situation.

March 22nd, 2020 12:42

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orchidee said:

Was this a relative of Burl Ington-Berles?! lol.

March 22nd, 2020 03:31

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Goldfinch60 said:

I know I shouldn\'t laugh at rape and pillage but that final line made me laugh Michael.

Andy

March 22nd, 2020 02:21

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orchidee said:

What\'s Burl Ington-Bertie doing in the present days? Is he rich with his double-barrelled surname? Will he share out the berles among the needy poets?!
And why am I talking rubbish?! lol.

March 21st, 2020 06:52

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Goldfinch60 said:

That stormy see can be captured in your mind and then it will be still.

Good one Michael.

Love the minimalist artwork. So few lines, so much shown.

Andy

March 21st, 2020 04:14

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orchidee said:

A fine write M.

March 21st, 2020 02:48

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dusk arising said:

Ha! Maybe if you drank a certain liquid you, easel pallet and all, would sway just like the sea.

March 21st, 2020 01:36

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FredPeyer said:

You must have been thinking of me when you wrote that first one!
The second one is so true, and the third one I wouldn\'t know wearing slippers and t-shirts all the time.

March 20th, 2020 21:29

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Fay Slimm. said:

Ha - - love your funny couplets - - more please dear fashionista.

March 20th, 2020 16:47



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