Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
LIMERICK 67
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. lol. Does Miss Berles do this, to save washing up?!
August 8th, 2020 01:53
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. lol. Does Miss Berles do this, to save washing up?!
August 8th, 2020 01:53
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ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Good Morning Uncle Mike ~ Thanks for two smiles to start the day ! Please check *La Mia Poema - Gracias !* Have you been to Las Ramblas & visited the GAUDI ?
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela - Brian - Smokey XXX
August 8th, 2020 01:33
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Good Morning Uncle Mike ~ Thanks for two smiles to start the day ! Please check *La Mia Poema - Gracias !* Have you been to Las Ramblas & visited the GAUDI ?
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela - Brian - Smokey XXX
August 8th, 2020 01:33
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Goldfinch60 said:
Humour in both the words and the cartoon to start my day in a wonderful way Michael.
Andy
August 8th, 2020 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Humour in both the words and the cartoon to start my day in a wonderful way Michael.
Andy
August 8th, 2020 00:57
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orchidee said:
Cooeee! Is Miss Berles heard by everyone?! lol.
And - all that wot LB Mek and others said too! I\'m not that educated to make so fine and expressive comments!
August 6th, 2020 14:30
orchidee said:
Cooeee! Is Miss Berles heard by everyone?! lol.
And - all that wot LB Mek and others said too! I\'m not that educated to make so fine and expressive comments!
August 6th, 2020 14:30
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MendedFences27 said:
Just as I clicked to read this I was perusing Emerson\'s \"Threnody.\"
I shall not presume to compare the two. (His contained no artwork.) I must say though, that the wordplay in yours is brilliant. Your artwork is most stimulating. And if a lament contains the flow of wordsmanship
displayed here, then start wailing. - Phil A.
August 5th, 2020 16:54
MendedFences27 said:
Just as I clicked to read this I was perusing Emerson\'s \"Threnody.\"
I shall not presume to compare the two. (His contained no artwork.) I must say though, that the wordplay in yours is brilliant. Your artwork is most stimulating. And if a lament contains the flow of wordsmanship
displayed here, then start wailing. - Phil A.
August 5th, 2020 16:54
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Fay Slimm. said:
Glad you finished playing with words and posted this gem of a free-style, semi-abstract piece of intriguing perspective on frustration. Great read Michael.
August 5th, 2020 06:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Glad you finished playing with words and posted this gem of a free-style, semi-abstract piece of intriguing perspective on frustration. Great read Michael.
August 5th, 2020 06:01
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L. B. Mek said:
I think you captured that subtle state of introspection, spontaneous and entirely without objective at its outset - but somehow, yielding concrete breakthroughs to niggling obstacles,
only, the mere feat of discovering this untameable skill renders us momentarily stunned - in that crucial moment where we should be at our most alert: so as to record and cherish those inspirational thoughts or ideas,
later - once removed from that rainbow mirage of temporary enlightenment: we question, if we truly experienced what we think we did and are left frustrated for not taking full opportunity of such a rare gift,
and thus we resume that chorus of lament - we pace our daily strides to...
(or you were just writing in a broody mood, lol)
brilliant write! evocative with insightful depth
(sorry for lengthy comment, I get excited when reading such thought provoking work)
August 5th, 2020 03:57
L. B. Mek said:
I think you captured that subtle state of introspection, spontaneous and entirely without objective at its outset - but somehow, yielding concrete breakthroughs to niggling obstacles,
only, the mere feat of discovering this untameable skill renders us momentarily stunned - in that crucial moment where we should be at our most alert: so as to record and cherish those inspirational thoughts or ideas,
later - once removed from that rainbow mirage of temporary enlightenment: we question, if we truly experienced what we think we did and are left frustrated for not taking full opportunity of such a rare gift,
and thus we resume that chorus of lament - we pace our daily strides to...
(or you were just writing in a broody mood, lol)
brilliant write! evocative with insightful depth
(sorry for lengthy comment, I get excited when reading such thought provoking work)
August 5th, 2020 03:57
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orchidee said:
Erm, eys, good Mitwok M. I dunno what it means! lol. Is ignorance always bliss?!
August 5th, 2020 01:48
orchidee said:
Erm, eys, good Mitwok M. I dunno what it means! lol. Is ignorance always bliss?!
August 5th, 2020 01:48
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ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good MITWOK Uncle Mike - Thanks for an enigmatic Pic *n Poem - but as they say on Classic FM there is paradoxically a LINK ! We*ve been to ALASKA (Cruise) to see the Whales and the *not so Abstract* is a Whale just breaking the Surface in the Alaskan Waters ~ OK !
Well wheres the LINK ? Well a THRENODY is NOT a *Trio of Gnomes* ~ GOD FORBID ! - but a WAIL or LAMENT - Which it certainly is !
So there we have it - enigma solved - Your presentation is ~
A WAIL accmpanied by a Picture of a WHALE
Two for the price of ONE ~ Boris* offer for WEDNESDAY !
Seeing we solved your enigma can you please add a Poem
on WALES to our *Staycation Fusion* and also check ~
*Love of the Horse* todays POEM ~ Thanks A & B !
Blessings & Peace & Love to You & Yours
Angela & Brian & Smokey Cat 💛💛💛
August 5th, 2020 01:36
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good MITWOK Uncle Mike - Thanks for an enigmatic Pic *n Poem - but as they say on Classic FM there is paradoxically a LINK ! We*ve been to ALASKA (Cruise) to see the Whales and the *not so Abstract* is a Whale just breaking the Surface in the Alaskan Waters ~ OK !
Well wheres the LINK ? Well a THRENODY is NOT a *Trio of Gnomes* ~ GOD FORBID ! - but a WAIL or LAMENT - Which it certainly is !
So there we have it - enigma solved - Your presentation is ~
A WAIL accmpanied by a Picture of a WHALE
Two for the price of ONE ~ Boris* offer for WEDNESDAY !
Seeing we solved your enigma can you please add a Poem
on WALES to our *Staycation Fusion* and also check ~
*Love of the Horse* todays POEM ~ Thanks A & B !
Blessings & Peace & Love to You & Yours
Angela & Brian & Smokey Cat 💛💛💛
August 5th, 2020 01:36
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Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write Michael, is there any compassion left in our world?
Andy
August 5th, 2020 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write Michael, is there any compassion left in our world?
Andy
August 5th, 2020 01:27
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ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Afternoon Uncle Mike very droll Cartoon (it happens) and Ode !. Pastry is not the safest Haven ~ but for me ~ anything but CUSTARD (even BIRDS !) ~Thanks for sharing ! We have a COVID Poem today *2020 ~ that was the Year ..... ? Please check !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Brian - Angela & Smokey 💛💛💛
August 3rd, 2020 09:12
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Afternoon Uncle Mike very droll Cartoon (it happens) and Ode !. Pastry is not the safest Haven ~ but for me ~ anything but CUSTARD (even BIRDS !) ~Thanks for sharing ! We have a COVID Poem today *2020 ~ that was the Year ..... ? Please check !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Brian - Angela & Smokey 💛💛💛
August 3rd, 2020 09:12
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L. B. Mek said:
- and swim in the hollowness
of a life: without biting substance...
another quirky offering, your work offers such effortless whimsy - of well-lived, shimmering silver wisdom: displayed with deftly subtle tones
August 3rd, 2020 05:57
L. B. Mek said:
- and swim in the hollowness
of a life: without biting substance...
another quirky offering, your work offers such effortless whimsy - of well-lived, shimmering silver wisdom: displayed with deftly subtle tones
August 3rd, 2020 05:57
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orchidee said:
Fido would faint at \'Pudding Club\'. lol.
Good write and pic M. Miss Berles having pie and custard?
August 3rd, 2020 01:42
orchidee said:
Fido would faint at \'Pudding Club\'. lol.
Good write and pic M. Miss Berles having pie and custard?
August 3rd, 2020 01:42
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Andrew Charles Forrest said:
What! No cream?
Love it Michael
August 3rd, 2020 01:37
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
What! No cream?
Love it Michael
August 3rd, 2020 01:37
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Goldfinch60 said:
And very nice it is too, it must be Birds Custard though.
There is a restaurant near to me called \"The Pudding Club\", this has a world wide reputation, I have been there a couple of times and in talking to one of the staff I asked about the custard they used - the answer was that they used Birds Custard as it was the one that their customers demanded.
Andy
August 3rd, 2020 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
And very nice it is too, it must be Birds Custard though.
There is a restaurant near to me called \"The Pudding Club\", this has a world wide reputation, I have been there a couple of times and in talking to one of the staff I asked about the custard they used - the answer was that they used Birds Custard as it was the one that their customers demanded.
Andy
August 3rd, 2020 01:36
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FineB said:
Hi Michael,
A great write ✍. Michael.
I must remember to tidy up files at work
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
July 31st, 2020 07:18
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
A great write ✍. Michael.
I must remember to tidy up files at work
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
July 31st, 2020 07:18
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L. B. Mek said:
truly insightful:
what reflects is what awaits, once that last tip of suffering\'s - easing sip, is consumed and all reverts back, to that rubbed-raw clarity of sobering reality
July 31st, 2020 05:45
L. B. Mek said:
truly insightful:
what reflects is what awaits, once that last tip of suffering\'s - easing sip, is consumed and all reverts back, to that rubbed-raw clarity of sobering reality
July 31st, 2020 05:45
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ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ GOOD FRIDAY Uncle Mike ! Love the cartoon ~ I know some who are bottled up ! Thanks for the POME ~ it reminds me of one of Roger McGeoghs shorties !
When all is *Said & Done*
theres nothing more
to be *Said or Done*
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Brian - Angela - Smokey Cat !
July 31st, 2020 03:56
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ GOOD FRIDAY Uncle Mike ! Love the cartoon ~ I know some who are bottled up ! Thanks for the POME ~ it reminds me of one of Roger McGeoghs shorties !
When all is *Said & Done*
theres nothing more
to be *Said or Done*
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Brian - Angela - Smokey Cat !
July 31st, 2020 03:56
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orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. Is that Miss Berles sister, or one of them?
July 31st, 2020 01:30
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. Is that Miss Berles sister, or one of them?
July 31st, 2020 01:30
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Goldfinch60 said:
So true, it takes a great deal of looking for sometimes.
Andy
July 31st, 2020 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, it takes a great deal of looking for sometimes.
Andy
July 31st, 2020 01:22
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MendedFences27 said:
Bottoms up! Make mine a Guiness. Beautiful drawing. Love the comedy of your poem. Whether half-full or half-empty I\'ll drink it. Next round, please! - Phil A.
July 29th, 2020 19:17
MendedFences27 said:
Bottoms up! Make mine a Guiness. Beautiful drawing. Love the comedy of your poem. Whether half-full or half-empty I\'ll drink it. Next round, please! - Phil A.
July 29th, 2020 19:17
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dusk arising said:
Thats arse about face.
Madam, may i top your bottom up?
Gladys, he topped my bottom.
July 29th, 2020 02:38
dusk arising said:
Thats arse about face.
Madam, may i top your bottom up?
Gladys, he topped my bottom.
July 29th, 2020 02:38
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orchidee said:
Oh lol good write and pic M. There\'s similar in a Laurel & Hardy clip. They have one drink between them. They agree to drink half each. Laurel drinks it all, then says \'My half was on the bottom!\'
July 29th, 2020 01:45
orchidee said:
Oh lol good write and pic M. There\'s similar in a Laurel & Hardy clip. They have one drink between them. They agree to drink half each. Laurel drinks it all, then says \'My half was on the bottom!\'
July 29th, 2020 01:45
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Goldfinch60 said:
I would still rather have a full glass Michael - mines a Rioja if you\'re offering.
Andy
July 29th, 2020 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
I would still rather have a full glass Michael - mines a Rioja if you\'re offering.
Andy
July 29th, 2020 01:13
LOVE IS MANIFEST
dusk arising said:
Sunlight breaks over the cottage upon driftwood shore......
That morning kiss
neath duvet flight
where bodies relax
to nature\'s delight
July 28th, 2020 13:48
dusk arising said:
Sunlight breaks over the cottage upon driftwood shore......
That morning kiss
neath duvet flight
where bodies relax
to nature\'s delight
July 28th, 2020 13:48
LOVE IS MANIFEST
MendedFences27 said:
A clearly defined image of peace and harmony, of love that lasts through time. Well chosen words that distinctly paint the image, and the reader is there to witness. - Phil A.
July 28th, 2020 09:03
MendedFences27 said:
A clearly defined image of peace and harmony, of love that lasts through time. Well chosen words that distinctly paint the image, and the reader is there to witness. - Phil A.
July 28th, 2020 09:03
LOVE IS MANIFEST
L. B. Mek said:
tender words that read like musical harmonies,
tipping the mind to reveries of forgotten treasures
July 28th, 2020 03:05
L. B. Mek said:
tender words that read like musical harmonies,
tipping the mind to reveries of forgotten treasures
July 28th, 2020 03:05
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