Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
IN DAYS TO COME
Neville said:
a perfect and of the moment little gem, tis true
who bloomin knows what in days to come, we\'ll do..... N :)
May 22nd, 2020 07:23
Neville said:
a perfect and of the moment little gem, tis true
who bloomin knows what in days to come, we\'ll do..... N :)
May 22nd, 2020 07:23
IN DAYS TO COME
Fay Slimm. said:
Hard days in the future await as your poem says Michael. Wounded the earth is indeed.
May 22nd, 2020 06:53
Fay Slimm. said:
Hard days in the future await as your poem says Michael. Wounded the earth is indeed.
May 22nd, 2020 06:53
IN DAYS TO COME
orchidee said:
Miss Berles ever unemployed? She has to constantly check the sylla berles!
May 22nd, 2020 01:36
orchidee said:
Miss Berles ever unemployed? She has to constantly check the sylla berles!
May 22nd, 2020 01:36
IN DAYS TO COME
orchidee said:
We can\'t escape the \'system\', or else it would be one rule for some, and another rule for others.
But it\'s still horrible - job-searching; a label of \'unemployed\'.
May 22nd, 2020 01:35
orchidee said:
We can\'t escape the \'system\', or else it would be one rule for some, and another rule for others.
But it\'s still horrible - job-searching; a label of \'unemployed\'.
May 22nd, 2020 01:35
IN DAYS TO COME
Goldfinch60 said:
Very telling write Michael, so many people of working age may well be struggling in the very near future.
Andy
May 22nd, 2020 01:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Very telling write Michael, so many people of working age may well be struggling in the very near future.
Andy
May 22nd, 2020 01:01
LISTEN TO WORDS 1
Neville said:
I bet that put a smile on her face,
oh and I do like those pen guines Michael :)
May 21st, 2020 16:54
Neville said:
I bet that put a smile on her face,
oh and I do like those pen guines Michael :)
May 21st, 2020 16:54
LISTEN TO WORDS 2
Neville said:
It happens dunnit, even when I\'m talking to myself sometimes..
well often actually.... funny that
pardon..
May 21st, 2020 04:11
Neville said:
It happens dunnit, even when I\'m talking to myself sometimes..
well often actually.... funny that
pardon..
May 21st, 2020 04:11
LISTEN TO WORDS 2
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - - - the eternal accusation yet that is just what happens in many a \"chat \" - - - so says the typical female.
May 20th, 2020 02:34
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - - - the eternal accusation yet that is just what happens in many a \"chat \" - - - so says the typical female.
May 20th, 2020 02:34
LISTEN TO WORDS 2
orchidee said:
But St Paul \'blames\' Eve for first taking the forbidden fruit!
Has Miss Berles used many syllables? Do people listen to her?!
May 20th, 2020 01:39
orchidee said:
But St Paul \'blames\' Eve for first taking the forbidden fruit!
Has Miss Berles used many syllables? Do people listen to her?!
May 20th, 2020 01:39
LISTEN TO WORDS 2
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MONDAY UNCLE MIKE - Up Bright & Early today - Beat us to POLE ! Brians cooking Eggs Benedict while I cruise the the WEB. Nice to see Junior has caught his own FISH today.
Love the Poem - Thats the Divine order of things. God created Adam and then after a few weeks He created Eve to clear up the Mess. Eve was Human Too - BUT - A great improvement on the Prototype in - Form - Frivolity & Function !
Blessings & Joy to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian 🧡🤍💙
Please check WATERFALLS ... Thanks !
May 20th, 2020 01:01
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MONDAY UNCLE MIKE - Up Bright & Early today - Beat us to POLE ! Brians cooking Eggs Benedict while I cruise the the WEB. Nice to see Junior has caught his own FISH today.
Love the Poem - Thats the Divine order of things. God created Adam and then after a few weeks He created Eve to clear up the Mess. Eve was Human Too - BUT - A great improvement on the Prototype in - Form - Frivolity & Function !
Blessings & Joy to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian 🧡🤍💙
Please check WATERFALLS ... Thanks !
May 20th, 2020 01:01
LISTEN TO WORDS 1
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Very Droll UNCLE MIKE ~ Loved the Cartoon ! That PENGUITO is always strutting His Stuff (A PENGUITA) would be better bevaved !) So Ive entitled todays *sans mots* *Pride comes before a Slide !*
Love the *ODD ODE* I asked ANGELA what she wanted for Christmas and she said *Just You - Gift Warpped !* So I bought three rolls of Christmas Paper - saying *For your EYES only+ - saved myself 500 Quid - and got my COCOA !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🤍💙
May 14th, 2020 08:40
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Very Droll UNCLE MIKE ~ Loved the Cartoon ! That PENGUITO is always strutting His Stuff (A PENGUITA) would be better bevaved !) So Ive entitled todays *sans mots* *Pride comes before a Slide !*
Love the *ODD ODE* I asked ANGELA what she wanted for Christmas and she said *Just You - Gift Warpped !* So I bought three rolls of Christmas Paper - saying *For your EYES only+ - saved myself 500 Quid - and got my COCOA !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🤍💙
May 14th, 2020 08:40
LISTEN TO WORDS 1
orchidee said:
One about them fire Doors to follow - Keeping it closed at all times; how we gonna get out?
May 14th, 2020 02:11
orchidee said:
One about them fire Doors to follow - Keeping it closed at all times; how we gonna get out?
May 14th, 2020 02:11
LISTEN TO WORDS 1
orchidee said:
Dunno why she complained. You only gave her what she requested!
I know a relative, first name Zirconia-Sapphire, and maiden surname was triple-barrelled, spelling HRH - true!
You know Miss Z-S. Berles (names as above)?
May 14th, 2020 02:10
orchidee said:
Dunno why she complained. You only gave her what she requested!
I know a relative, first name Zirconia-Sapphire, and maiden surname was triple-barrelled, spelling HRH - true!
You know Miss Z-S. Berles (names as above)?
May 14th, 2020 02:10
LISTEN TO WORDS 1
dusk arising said:
My ex was most displeased.
I\'d bought her a real animal skin coat
I hadn\'t realised she was such a conservationist
Or maybe it was the word LAING
written across the shoulder
of her new donkey jacket
May 14th, 2020 01:24
dusk arising said:
My ex was most displeased.
I\'d bought her a real animal skin coat
I hadn\'t realised she was such a conservationist
Or maybe it was the word LAING
written across the shoulder
of her new donkey jacket
May 14th, 2020 01:24
THE STRANGER
myself and me said:
I guess the phone is out of battery or lost GPS signal.
May 12th, 2020 17:33
myself and me said:
I guess the phone is out of battery or lost GPS signal.
May 12th, 2020 17:33
THE STRANGER
Fay Slimm. said:
Being a stranger is no easy task when asking locals the directions to wherever - arms and hands flying with dialogue to match so no wonder we resign in total abashment to finding our way on our own.......... hope this was near to the subject intended in the title.......... great write.
May 12th, 2020 16:14
Fay Slimm. said:
Being a stranger is no easy task when asking locals the directions to wherever - arms and hands flying with dialogue to match so no wonder we resign in total abashment to finding our way on our own.......... hope this was near to the subject intended in the title.......... great write.
May 12th, 2020 16:14
THE STRANGER
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Tuesday UNCLE MIKE - Brian here ! I always thought skateboards were a Death Wish especially Skate Board Parks - they keep Angela in a Job.
Love your Odd Ode it describes the cumulative effect of COVID 19 - strains A B & C and LOCKDOWN ! Please check *End of Lockdown ?* Thanks !
Blessings to You & Yours
Love Brian & Angela 🧡🤍💙
May 12th, 2020 04:18
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Tuesday UNCLE MIKE - Brian here ! I always thought skateboards were a Death Wish especially Skate Board Parks - they keep Angela in a Job.
Love your Odd Ode it describes the cumulative effect of COVID 19 - strains A B & C and LOCKDOWN ! Please check *End of Lockdown ?* Thanks !
Blessings to You & Yours
Love Brian & Angela 🧡🤍💙
May 12th, 2020 04:18
THE STRANGER
Goldfinch60 said:
The mind can get so lost until you resign to your own normality.
Andy
May 12th, 2020 02:27
Goldfinch60 said:
The mind can get so lost until you resign to your own normality.
Andy
May 12th, 2020 02:27
THE STRANGER
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M.
Re Monopoly: It\'s got silly now. There are skyscrapers in some versions of it. If anyone else lands on them, they\'ve had it - the Rent is a fortune!
You know Mon O. Polly Berles? (Mon = Monica?).
May 12th, 2020 01:59
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M.
Re Monopoly: It\'s got silly now. There are skyscrapers in some versions of it. If anyone else lands on them, they\'ve had it - the Rent is a fortune!
You know Mon O. Polly Berles? (Mon = Monica?).
May 12th, 2020 01:59
THE STRANGER
dusk arising said:
This reads as one might describe my mentality whilst playing monopoly. What use a \'get out of jail free\' card when your waterworks are throwing a double six?
Love the dexterity of vocabulary.
May 12th, 2020 01:20
dusk arising said:
This reads as one might describe my mentality whilst playing monopoly. What use a \'get out of jail free\' card when your waterworks are throwing a double six?
Love the dexterity of vocabulary.
May 12th, 2020 01:20
Comical Couplets (6)
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Fantastic! I love real life writes and this tells the human tale in joust a couplet! Admirable! Long may you write! Kudos.
May 8th, 2020 05:43
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Fantastic! I love real life writes and this tells the human tale in joust a couplet! Admirable! Long may you write! Kudos.
May 8th, 2020 05:43
Comical Couplets (7)
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Hmm thought provoking ! Can be cruel come to think of it. Nice to see you writing !
Plz Pleez do read and review my newest poem too.
May 8th, 2020 05:39
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Hmm thought provoking ! Can be cruel come to think of it. Nice to see you writing !
Plz Pleez do read and review my newest poem too.
May 8th, 2020 05:39
Comical Couplets (7)
dusk arising said:
He he he... at least that person has a tangible \'someone\' to be. There are several on MPS only capable of presenting the facade they want to be seen as. Finding and accepting one\'s own fallibility is an obstacle course of unseen complexity.
May 7th, 2020 18:22
dusk arising said:
He he he... at least that person has a tangible \'someone\' to be. There are several on MPS only capable of presenting the facade they want to be seen as. Finding and accepting one\'s own fallibility is an obstacle course of unseen complexity.
May 7th, 2020 18:22
Comical Couplets (7)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ In essence Uncle Mike we have no option ! At this point in time (36 years on) I am satisfied (content) with whom I am. What is more important Angela chose Me (just as I was three years ago) and six weeks ago (having honed me to her perfeection !) happily agreed to spend the rest of her life with me as Man & Wife. I am now doubly content. Oddly enough (prior to reading your ODE) I have on DRAFT tomorrows Poem *I LOVE ANGELA BECAUSE !* AND IT IS ALL ABOUT - COMPLEMENTING - COMPATIBILITY - CONTENTMENT ! Please comment tomorrow ~Thanks.
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Brian & Angela 🧡🤍💙
May 6th, 2020 08:01
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ In essence Uncle Mike we have no option ! At this point in time (36 years on) I am satisfied (content) with whom I am. What is more important Angela chose Me (just as I was three years ago) and six weeks ago (having honed me to her perfeection !) happily agreed to spend the rest of her life with me as Man & Wife. I am now doubly content. Oddly enough (prior to reading your ODE) I have on DRAFT tomorrows Poem *I LOVE ANGELA BECAUSE !* AND IT IS ALL ABOUT - COMPLEMENTING - COMPATIBILITY - CONTENTMENT ! Please comment tomorrow ~Thanks.
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Brian & Angela 🧡🤍💙
May 6th, 2020 08:01
Comical Couplets (7)
orchidee said:
Are you yourself, me, I, myself - or Mr Berles?!
May 6th, 2020 01:57
orchidee said:
Are you yourself, me, I, myself - or Mr Berles?!
May 6th, 2020 01:57
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