Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



DOUBT THREW
SureshG said:

A vicious seed of doubt
Once rooted will sprout
Leaves it’s victim in pain
Trust, difficult to regain

Engrossing subject
Beautifully poemed
Exceptional image

April 27th, 2020 18:15

DOUBT THREW
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Brian here - Uncle Mike Buenas Noches ! Love the PENGUINS - If you have a KID in tow & theres a Hole - He*ll always fall right in it !

PARADIGM - A World View underlying the theory & methodology of a Particular SUBJECT - in the NATURAL or BEHAVIOURAL SCIENCES !

Try applying that theorem to LOVE ! After a lifetime of study you would be no nearer the TRUTH than when you first started. Freud (after a lifetime) reached this conclusion about LOVE *Its better FELT than TELT* AMEN !

Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love BRIAN & ANGELA πŸ§‘πŸ€πŸ’™

April 27th, 2020 17:15

DOUBT THREW
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah this made me near crying to think of the doubts that gave way to that bleeding heart - you have scribed such a familiar result too in that final couplet.... good write Mike - but I fear it must be the long lockdown making me take to tears. sniff sniff.............

April 27th, 2020 09:46

DOUBT THREW
orchidee said:

You\'re rattling on towards 1,000 poems, I see! That\'s a lot of berles for you - and us other poets. Has Miss Berles got enough syllables in stock for us all?

April 27th, 2020 02:17

DOUBT THREW
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M.
I used to think para-dime was pronounced para- did-jum. Enough waffling!
Miss Berles having a spot of trouble there in this poem?!

April 27th, 2020 01:56

DOUBT THREW
dusk arising said:

Gosh, love\'s paradigm. There\'s a challenge for a partner indeed.

What a wonderful tangled mess of screwed up emotions love can be as we travel along life\'s high-wee.

April 27th, 2020 01:36

DOUBT THREW
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words Michael.

Andy

April 27th, 2020 01:17

R McG
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Brian here ~ GOOD MORNING UNCLE MICHEAL ! Roger McGough one of the best of the Liverpool Poets ! Last time I heard him ~ he told us all to get comfortable for one of his longer Poems ~

When all is Said & Done
Theres nothing more
To be SAiD or DONE !

Awesome best recited in a Posh Scouce Accent ~ Like to one we use for Wedding Toasts etc etc. Roger is good example of a performance Poet !

Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love BRIAN & ANGELA πŸ§‘πŸ€πŸ’™

April 26th, 2020 04:11

R McG
dusk arising said:

To smile at each mornings pun
and give Van Gough a fair run
theres a poet i read
not quite the old Bede
yep Michael Edward\'s the one.

Hope i got the apostrophe right on that one.

April 26th, 2020 03:02

R McG
orchidee said:

Good write and pic M. You know McGough Berles? I\'m being daft now!

April 26th, 2020 02:24

R McG
Goldfinch60 said:

So do I Michael, fabulous poet whose poem \'The Railings\' was the first I came across and it drew me to him, read many of them since.

Andy

April 26th, 2020 01:20

THE WORM
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

B HERE ~ Good Friday Uncle Mike ~ Love the VISUAL ! Angela gives all her clients a skipping rope to improve ARM & LEG mobility ~ excellent !
WORMS ! I teach Environmental Studies to my Classes of Lady Dianas (Nursery Nurses) and I let them observe Perspex Wormeries. We put in layers of soil clay chalk etc and within a few days it is all mixed ~ thats one of the many things Earth Worms do.! Most of them have never handled a WORM but that is also part of the course & spiders etc. I teach them to teach Preschool Kids repect for all Flora & Fauna & Minibeasts and to never kick Fungi etc. I love to talk to Native American Kids and wonder @ their knwledge of & respect for Nature ! We also foster this in the Scout Movement. Thanks for sharing ~ please check *Wonderful Words*.

Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love Brian & Angela πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›

April 24th, 2020 04:37

THE WORM
orchidee said:

Yes, the humble worm, bumble bee, and other creatures! You see Hum Berles? Does he pong (hum) or hum a tune, or both?

April 24th, 2020 01:51

THE WORM
dusk arising said:

I haven\'t seen a worm for ages now, not even in the mirror.

April 24th, 2020 01:06

THE WORM
Goldfinch60 said:

They must always be preserved Michael otherwise where would we be?

Andy

April 24th, 2020 00:56

TOO TIGHT
rrodriguez said:

I enjoy reading your short poems. they are full of so much fun. Thank you for sharing.

April 22nd, 2020 15:17

TOO TIGHT
dusk arising said:

As soon as I saw your picture on my screen i let out a peel of laughter.... such fun. Love the play on words, this one is a trick i often find amusing.... mental messy pictures of when someone decides to put some soup on etc.

April 22nd, 2020 09:58

TOO TIGHT
FredPeyer said:

Love to read your poems, Michael, but sometimes I do wonder where you get these ideas from. Didn\'t even know they still made kettles.

April 22nd, 2020 03:36

TOO TIGHT
Goldfinch60 said:

They just don\'t make those kettles big enough nowadays.

Andy

April 22nd, 2020 03:25

TOO TIGHT
orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write and pic M. What\'s Miss Berles up to there? is she trying to make a cup of tea?!
If going into some staff canteens, it looks as if they have thrown the food and drink around the room sometimes.

April 22nd, 2020 02:05

CONSIGN TO OBLIVION
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Michael.

Andy

April 21st, 2020 00:39

CONSIGN TO OBLIVION
Fay Slimm. said:

Oh how true these few words Michael

April 20th, 2020 16:18

CONSIGN TO OBLIVION
ron parrish aka wordman said:

then we would simply blow away,but maybe we do

April 20th, 2020 14:34

CONSIGN TO OBLIVION
dusk arising said:

Superb! So much punch in this piece.

Straight into my favourites.

Great picture of your creations too, wasn\'t sure whether the foreground one is a breaching whale or a boat though.... picture is tiny today.

April 20th, 2020 08:31

CONSIGN TO OBLIVION
orchidee said:

And yet I suppose if there were no buds at all, there would be no trees. That reminds me to go see them woods again, near-ish to home!
You know Buddy Berles?!

April 20th, 2020 02:55

THE BABY SHOW
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - Thanks for sharing UNCLE MIKE. One Day soon we hope to have a Baby of our own - To enter in the Show ! Dont get too excited we havent ordered it yet ! Please check *Just a Closer walk with Thee* Thanks ! Love the FISH !

Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Anela & Brian πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›

April 19th, 2020 00:57

THE BABY SHOW
FredPeyer said:

Well Michael, we all start with diapers and end with diapers, but usually not in a competition!

April 18th, 2020 11:04

THE BABY SHOW
Fay Slimm. said:

Oh you must have a charmed wit to raise a smile like mine big and broad despite the current gloom - thanks Mike for the thought of you with a frilly dress on -- ha ha..............

April 18th, 2020 06:36

THE BABY SHOW
Neville said:


That\'s what I like to see.. a man as good as his word...

\'so long and thanks for the fish\'....

Neville

April 18th, 2020 03:37

THE BABY SHOW
orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write Gold.

April 18th, 2020 01:57



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