Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
THOUGHTS OF A LOOSE ARTIST (5)
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words and a superb artwork Michael.
Andy
January 15th, 2020 02:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words and a superb artwork Michael.
Andy
January 15th, 2020 02:30
THOUGHTS OF A LOOSE ARTIST (3&4)
Nicholas Browning said:
That painting gives me some cool vibes. These little lines about the truth of the world always reflect so well the personality of their author. So simple, yet so vastly deep. I enjoyed the thought-train, Michael.
January 13th, 2020 22:03
Nicholas Browning said:
That painting gives me some cool vibes. These little lines about the truth of the world always reflect so well the personality of their author. So simple, yet so vastly deep. I enjoyed the thought-train, Michael.
January 13th, 2020 22:03
THOUGHTS OF A LOOSE ARTIST (3&4)
ron parrish aka wordman said:
a true artist always reflects the soul,that is our inner being,where the real emotion begins
January 13th, 2020 20:24
ron parrish aka wordman said:
a true artist always reflects the soul,that is our inner being,where the real emotion begins
January 13th, 2020 20:24
THOUGHTS OF A LOOSE ARTIST (3&4)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BON APRES MIDI ~ Notre Oncle MIKE ! Thanks for painting another hung suit of a UNIDEXTER ! Right dexter missing this time ! As far as the Odd Odes are concerned ?
(3) True of everything ~ Our Mantra is REDUCTIO AD ABSURDUM !
(4) Photography is now classified as an ART & a suitable Subject
for a DEGREE (as is Catering !) However TRUE VISUAL ART extends
far beyond the PHYSICAL EYE and invokes the SOUL ! Your Paintings
today & yesterday to me invoke *Hanging Suits of UNIDEXTERS* and
could have infinite interpretations ! I (Angela) do meet UNIDEXTERS
in my AQUATHERAPY CLASSES so it is an element in my Visual
Perception & Brian did not have an alternative so I won !
We agree with your comment to DA ~ MPS needs much more diversity in Style & Subject ~ we do our best ! Blank Verse PANTOUM Today *THE ROSE OF TEXAS* An Acrostic Sonnet tomorrow ! We see COW & CRUMPET as a Challenge ~ perhaps in the same POEM !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love Angela & Brian 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 13th, 2020 10:27
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BON APRES MIDI ~ Notre Oncle MIKE ! Thanks for painting another hung suit of a UNIDEXTER ! Right dexter missing this time ! As far as the Odd Odes are concerned ?
(3) True of everything ~ Our Mantra is REDUCTIO AD ABSURDUM !
(4) Photography is now classified as an ART & a suitable Subject
for a DEGREE (as is Catering !) However TRUE VISUAL ART extends
far beyond the PHYSICAL EYE and invokes the SOUL ! Your Paintings
today & yesterday to me invoke *Hanging Suits of UNIDEXTERS* and
could have infinite interpretations ! I (Angela) do meet UNIDEXTERS
in my AQUATHERAPY CLASSES so it is an element in my Visual
Perception & Brian did not have an alternative so I won !
We agree with your comment to DA ~ MPS needs much more diversity in Style & Subject ~ we do our best ! Blank Verse PANTOUM Today *THE ROSE OF TEXAS* An Acrostic Sonnet tomorrow ! We see COW & CRUMPET as a Challenge ~ perhaps in the same POEM !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love Angela & Brian 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 13th, 2020 10:27
THOUGHTS OF A LOOSE ARTIST (3&4)
dusk arising said:
Oh so true are your words of learned wisdom today. I wish more of our mps contributors could adopt line two in their postings.
January 13th, 2020 04:11
dusk arising said:
Oh so true are your words of learned wisdom today. I wish more of our mps contributors could adopt line two in their postings.
January 13th, 2020 04:11
THOUGHTS OF A LOOSE ARTIST (3&4)
Fay Slimm. said:
Wise and so true these thoughts on art and its producers dear Michael.
January 13th, 2020 03:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Wise and so true these thoughts on art and its producers dear Michael.
January 13th, 2020 03:01
THOUGHTS OF A LOOSE ARTIST (3&4)
Goldfinch60 said:
4 is so true but even in that reality of photography you need to be able to see the picture in your minds eye first.
January 13th, 2020 02:30
Goldfinch60 said:
4 is so true but even in that reality of photography you need to be able to see the picture in your minds eye first.
January 13th, 2020 02:30
THOUGHTS OF A LOOSE ARTIST (1)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks UNCLE MIKE it HINTED to Me of a place were we used to go swimming in Rural Spain (usually skinny dipping !) There was a mesh fence surrounding the POND where we used to hang our clothes ! One young Mother was a UNIDEXTER hence her SUIT was also UNUMLEGGUM just like in Your Painting. Also she had a Young Child in a PERAMBULATOR and she used to feed it through an OVAL(see picture) She was also missing a left FOREARM (see picture of tunic on fence !) Even though she was deformed we all loved her & her BABY (who was normal !) She was a good swimmer and could beat us all in the length of the POND ! Ive had to blow my NOSE because your PICTURE has evoked such strong memories of MARIA y su BAMBINO _ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
January 11th, 2020 07:03
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks UNCLE MIKE it HINTED to Me of a place were we used to go swimming in Rural Spain (usually skinny dipping !) There was a mesh fence surrounding the POND where we used to hang our clothes ! One young Mother was a UNIDEXTER hence her SUIT was also UNUMLEGGUM just like in Your Painting. Also she had a Young Child in a PERAMBULATOR and she used to feed it through an OVAL(see picture) She was also missing a left FOREARM (see picture of tunic on fence !) Even though she was deformed we all loved her & her BABY (who was normal !) She was a good swimmer and could beat us all in the length of the POND ! Ive had to blow my NOSE because your PICTURE has evoked such strong memories of MARIA y su BAMBINO _ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
January 11th, 2020 07:03
THOUGHTS OF A LOOSE ARTIST (1)
dusk arising said:
Those hints are intriguing. Letting the viewer/reader complete the \'picture\' from their own palette.
January 11th, 2020 04:02
dusk arising said:
Those hints are intriguing. Letting the viewer/reader complete the \'picture\' from their own palette.
January 11th, 2020 04:02
THOUGHTS OF A LOOSE ARTIST (1)
orchidee said:
I\'m looking at it too! A fine write and pic M.
January 11th, 2020 03:05
orchidee said:
I\'m looking at it too! A fine write and pic M.
January 11th, 2020 03:05
THOUGHTS OF A LOOSE ARTIST (1)
Goldfinch60 said:
Those hints can be mind blowing.
Another intriguing artwork Michael, I need time to look at it.
January 11th, 2020 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Those hints can be mind blowing.
Another intriguing artwork Michael, I need time to look at it.
January 11th, 2020 02:21
TOLD ONCE
Goldfinch60 said:
This is good Michael, I write FIBS and they can be difficult to get together.
January 10th, 2020 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
This is good Michael, I write FIBS and they can be difficult to get together.
January 10th, 2020 00:54
TOLD ONCE
Nicholas Browning said:
Glad to see you\'re still at it man. I really like this piece.
January 9th, 2020 21:25
Nicholas Browning said:
Glad to see you\'re still at it man. I really like this piece.
January 9th, 2020 21:25
TOLD ONCE
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~ Love the FUNGI ! Love the poem ! You know how much we love FORM~REVERSE POETRY and have published many ~ usually as a DIAMOND or a DIABLO. Quie correctly you have NOT repeated the middle line ! We would have preferred a ONE letter ~ TWO letter ~ THREE letter ~ START & FINISH ~ Which would have resulted in a cooler shape ~ BUT ~ the final three lines (in my suggestion) are a little ORCHIDEEAN !
I DO SAY ONCE ~~~~~ MIDDLE LINE ~~~~~ ONCE SAY DO I
I hope that suggestion makes sense ~ no obligation to use it !
Blessing & Peace & Good MUSE !
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
We do appreciate that the FIBONCCI sequence is SYLLABLE LED 1/1/2/3/5/8 AND NOT WORD (letter)LED ! SO IF YOU ARE STICKING WITH A CLASSICAL FIB # Our suggestion is NOT viable. A Reverse FIB does NOT give an elegant shape DIAMOND or DIABLO or HOUR GLASS etc - Like Word (letter led) Reverse Poems do - OK - Love A & B !
January 9th, 2020 11:03
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~ Love the FUNGI ! Love the poem ! You know how much we love FORM~REVERSE POETRY and have published many ~ usually as a DIAMOND or a DIABLO. Quie correctly you have NOT repeated the middle line ! We would have preferred a ONE letter ~ TWO letter ~ THREE letter ~ START & FINISH ~ Which would have resulted in a cooler shape ~ BUT ~ the final three lines (in my suggestion) are a little ORCHIDEEAN !
I DO SAY ONCE ~~~~~ MIDDLE LINE ~~~~~ ONCE SAY DO I
I hope that suggestion makes sense ~ no obligation to use it !
Blessing & Peace & Good MUSE !
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
We do appreciate that the FIBONCCI sequence is SYLLABLE LED 1/1/2/3/5/8 AND NOT WORD (letter)LED ! SO IF YOU ARE STICKING WITH A CLASSICAL FIB # Our suggestion is NOT viable. A Reverse FIB does NOT give an elegant shape DIAMOND or DIABLO or HOUR GLASS etc - Like Word (letter led) Reverse Poems do - OK - Love A & B !
January 9th, 2020 11:03
TOLD ONCE
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
Thanks for this good write.
Keep writing FineB
January 9th, 2020 09:08
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
Thanks for this good write.
Keep writing FineB
January 9th, 2020 09:08
TOLD ONCE
Fay Slimm. said:
Well it reads spot on to me - thanks Michael - intriguing and atmospheric each line and looks so attractive too
January 9th, 2020 03:55
Fay Slimm. said:
Well it reads spot on to me - thanks Michael - intriguing and atmospheric each line and looks so attractive too
January 9th, 2020 03:55
TOLD ONCE
orchidee said:
Well, I can\'t improve on it! I would dread doing a hymn-poem like this. Metre all over the place!
Miss Berles will count the syllables!
January 9th, 2020 02:41
orchidee said:
Well, I can\'t improve on it! I would dread doing a hymn-poem like this. Metre all over the place!
Miss Berles will count the syllables!
January 9th, 2020 02:41
THREE 575s
Fay Slimm. said:
You have such a way with the 575 -style my friend - three wise haikus to ponder and as for the charcoal work - - - - beautifully mysterious.
January 7th, 2020 03:42
Fay Slimm. said:
You have such a way with the 575 -style my friend - three wise haikus to ponder and as for the charcoal work - - - - beautifully mysterious.
January 7th, 2020 03:42
THREE 575s
myself and me said:
The paint is a little bit heavy for me. The poem win today.
January 6th, 2020 15:13
myself and me said:
The paint is a little bit heavy for me. The poem win today.
January 6th, 2020 15:13
THREE 575s
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
Thank you for that powerful and haunting write and complimented by hauntingly beautiful picture.
Keeo writing FineB
January 6th, 2020 08:36
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
Thank you for that powerful and haunting write and complimented by hauntingly beautiful picture.
Keeo writing FineB
January 6th, 2020 08:36
THREE 575s
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Hi Uncle Mike - Love the Painting & the HAIKU ! Both a bit Melancholy is that your MOOD for January 2020 ? In our Poem today we are seeing 2020 as a year of Opportunity & Fulfilment. Perhaps it can be both ? Liverpool Supporters today are rejoicing by their Reserve Team winning through a Dream Goal by a TEENAGER - While BRIAN has the grumps at EVERTONS missed chances to topple the MIGHTY REDS ! One game two opposite outcomes for the Fans ! I pretend to be upset but I dare*nt tell BRIAN - Im a closet admirer of CLOUGH & L*V*R*O*L !
Every Blessing & Peace for YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 6th, 2020 04:50
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Hi Uncle Mike - Love the Painting & the HAIKU ! Both a bit Melancholy is that your MOOD for January 2020 ? In our Poem today we are seeing 2020 as a year of Opportunity & Fulfilment. Perhaps it can be both ? Liverpool Supporters today are rejoicing by their Reserve Team winning through a Dream Goal by a TEENAGER - While BRIAN has the grumps at EVERTONS missed chances to topple the MIGHTY REDS ! One game two opposite outcomes for the Fans ! I pretend to be upset but I dare*nt tell BRIAN - Im a closet admirer of CLOUGH & L*V*R*O*L !
Every Blessing & Peace for YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 6th, 2020 04:50
THREE 575s
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good 575s Michael.
Fabulously intriguing artwork.
January 6th, 2020 03:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good 575s Michael.
Fabulously intriguing artwork.
January 6th, 2020 03:03
THREE 575s
dusk arising said:
Three beauties today ME.
I\'m intrigued, how do you get \'other\' colours or hues into a charcoal piece. Other than the black of the charcoal and the paper colour. Regardless of method, the effect is very pleasing and affords the piece more depth.
January 6th, 2020 02:56
dusk arising said:
Three beauties today ME.
I\'m intrigued, how do you get \'other\' colours or hues into a charcoal piece. Other than the black of the charcoal and the paper colour. Regardless of method, the effect is very pleasing and affords the piece more depth.
January 6th, 2020 02:56
575s - ANOTHER BATCH (1)
FineB said:
Hello Michael
Hauntingly vivid.
A great write.
The picture is stunning in a spooky way.
Keep writing FineB
January 5th, 2020 03:30
FineB said:
Hello Michael
Hauntingly vivid.
A great write.
The picture is stunning in a spooky way.
Keep writing FineB
January 5th, 2020 03:30
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