Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
WHERE NO MEN TREAD
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
I see a |HOOFPRINT in your DAUB
A painting into *Paths not trod* of course
When I venture into *Lifes Hidden Orb*
I always saddle up my Horse !
It give me height & Horspower Might
Saves me a-pricking from the Gorse !
ANGELA HERE - Good Morning Uncle Mike !
Lovely symbiotic & ethereal Pic & Poem.
Like FAY I too have added both to my FAVES !
Love it when you wax lyrical
Love - Peace & Joy - ANGELA !
July 3rd, 2020 04:10
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
I see a |HOOFPRINT in your DAUB
A painting into *Paths not trod* of course
When I venture into *Lifes Hidden Orb*
I always saddle up my Horse !
It give me height & Horspower Might
Saves me a-pricking from the Gorse !
ANGELA HERE - Good Morning Uncle Mike !
Lovely symbiotic & ethereal Pic & Poem.
Like FAY I too have added both to my FAVES !
Love it when you wax lyrical
Love - Peace & Joy - ANGELA !
July 3rd, 2020 04:10
WHERE NO MEN TREAD
Fay Slimm. said:
The force of your words along with the strength of texture and colour in your artwork makes this posting one to remember - into my faves with this little gem .................
July 3rd, 2020 03:34
Fay Slimm. said:
The force of your words along with the strength of texture and colour in your artwork makes this posting one to remember - into my faves with this little gem .................
July 3rd, 2020 03:34
WHERE NO MEN TREAD
orchidee said:
It\'s all right for some, ain\'t it, being umbrageous! *Gets out dictionary*.
I know that quaggy moss, and horse manure, along a track, so deep I had to turn back and take the long route!
How are Miss Berles ram-berles these days? Where does she go?
July 3rd, 2020 01:44
orchidee said:
It\'s all right for some, ain\'t it, being umbrageous! *Gets out dictionary*.
I know that quaggy moss, and horse manure, along a track, so deep I had to turn back and take the long route!
How are Miss Berles ram-berles these days? Where does she go?
July 3rd, 2020 01:44
WHERE NO MEN TREAD
Goldfinch60 said:
As I see those lands ahead
Those lands where no men tread,
I see that wondrous piece of art
Which pulls me strongly to its heart.
So along those lands I\'ll go
And to that painting I will bow.
Andy
July 3rd, 2020 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
As I see those lands ahead
Those lands where no men tread,
I see that wondrous piece of art
Which pulls me strongly to its heart.
So along those lands I\'ll go
And to that painting I will bow.
Andy
July 3rd, 2020 01:30
ANTI SOCIAL HAIR BEHAVIOUR
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
Great write and lovely picture accompanying your poem
Social distancing I certainly had an interesting experience when I went into the EE mobile store in Wembley to get my phone updated. The assistants now wear space age caps when they serve you
Keep writing and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
June 30th, 2020 16:50
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
Great write and lovely picture accompanying your poem
Social distancing I certainly had an interesting experience when I went into the EE mobile store in Wembley to get my phone updated. The assistants now wear space age caps when they serve you
Keep writing and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
June 30th, 2020 16:50
ANTI SOCIAL HAIR BEHAVIOUR
Suresh said:
After reading how you have so accurately describes me, I guess I\'ll have to go into \'lock-down\', all because of facial distancing. HA!
June 30th, 2020 10:09
Suresh said:
After reading how you have so accurately describes me, I guess I\'ll have to go into \'lock-down\', all because of facial distancing. HA!
June 30th, 2020 10:09
ANTI SOCIAL HAIR BEHAVIOUR
Neville said:
what else could it be...
I am feeling a bit sheepish myself and thinking of changing my name to Sean :)
June 30th, 2020 06:07
Neville said:
what else could it be...
I am feeling a bit sheepish myself and thinking of changing my name to Sean :)
June 30th, 2020 06:07
ANTI SOCIAL HAIR BEHAVIOUR
dusk arising said:
I now have a full head of skin. But the choices of off the shelf polishes have brought a new enthusiasm into my life.
And hats, now a necessity in colder times.... i have hats for every mood.
June 30th, 2020 06:00
dusk arising said:
I now have a full head of skin. But the choices of off the shelf polishes have brought a new enthusiasm into my life.
And hats, now a necessity in colder times.... i have hats for every mood.
June 30th, 2020 06:00
ANTI SOCIAL HAIR BEHAVIOUR
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - BUENAS DIAS TIO MIKE ! Love the foto of your Hair from up above - please keep out of El Sol ! Men are suffereing follically (and its not funny !) Growing beards and hair like Street Buskers ! Where their WIFE has had a go it really shows ! Zilch back & sides & Fuzzy Wuzzy on TOP ! This is another of the 50 ways in which Girls Score ! As our Hair gets longer Men have more to Play with and we save Money on Extensions. Brian is learning more about us Females now He is married (His Lady Friends say He is Bewitched - Bohered & Bewildered - aren*t ALL MEN ?). I noticed in the box marked REINCARNATION (on our will) hes crossed out TIGER and replaced it with HUMAN (FEMALE). Love the POME excellent choice of Words for a Tuesday !
Blessings & Joy to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey !
June 30th, 2020 01:57
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - BUENAS DIAS TIO MIKE ! Love the foto of your Hair from up above - please keep out of El Sol ! Men are suffereing follically (and its not funny !) Growing beards and hair like Street Buskers ! Where their WIFE has had a go it really shows ! Zilch back & sides & Fuzzy Wuzzy on TOP ! This is another of the 50 ways in which Girls Score ! As our Hair gets longer Men have more to Play with and we save Money on Extensions. Brian is learning more about us Females now He is married (His Lady Friends say He is Bewitched - Bohered & Bewildered - aren*t ALL MEN ?). I noticed in the box marked REINCARNATION (on our will) hes crossed out TIGER and replaced it with HUMAN (FEMALE). Love the POME excellent choice of Words for a Tuesday !
Blessings & Joy to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey !
June 30th, 2020 01:57
ANTI SOCIAL HAIR BEHAVIOUR
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M.
Does Miss Berles wear her hair in a bun?!
June 30th, 2020 01:45
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M.
Does Miss Berles wear her hair in a bun?!
June 30th, 2020 01:45
ANTI SOCIAL HAIR BEHAVIOUR
Goldfinch60 said:
I wish the hair on my head was receding, I am definitely coming very close to my 1970s hair style!
Andy
June 30th, 2020 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
I wish the hair on my head was receding, I am definitely coming very close to my 1970s hair style!
Andy
June 30th, 2020 01:03
YET SLEEP ALONE
Suresh said:
Multi-talented, a grossly under-rated term when referring to yourself
June 29th, 2020 09:01
Suresh said:
Multi-talented, a grossly under-rated term when referring to yourself
June 29th, 2020 09:01
YET SLEEP ALONE
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Looks like a room that echoes
A Room That Echoes
I\'m gonna write that That Michael... on day... Hope you\'re keeping well... And sane... I miss the out doors nit just outdoors... the real outdoors the world...I think that\'s what I take fro m your abstract today
Excellent anyway you know I love an abstract so many possibilities
June 27th, 2020 04:58
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Looks like a room that echoes
A Room That Echoes
I\'m gonna write that That Michael... on day... Hope you\'re keeping well... And sane... I miss the out doors nit just outdoors... the real outdoors the world...I think that\'s what I take fro m your abstract today
Excellent anyway you know I love an abstract so many possibilities
June 27th, 2020 04:58
YET SLEEP ALONE
dusk arising said:
He he he your ruminating belly rumbles beneath the duvet. Have those rumblings become a comforting lullaby for your good lady?
June 27th, 2020 03:03
dusk arising said:
He he he your ruminating belly rumbles beneath the duvet. Have those rumblings become a comforting lullaby for your good lady?
June 27th, 2020 03:03
YET SLEEP ALONE
orchidee said:
And furthermore - you having hot summer nights, enjoying \'em?! I\'m not! All I do when it gets to 28C = 82F is faint, whether it\'s palindromic or not! * Gets out dictionary*!.
June 27th, 2020 01:51
orchidee said:
And furthermore - you having hot summer nights, enjoying \'em?! I\'m not! All I do when it gets to 28C = 82F is faint, whether it\'s palindromic or not! * Gets out dictionary*!.
June 27th, 2020 01:51
YET SLEEP ALONE
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M.
Miss Berles has furbelows. In one sense, it\'s related to petticoats. I googled that, of course.
Woof! Fido won\'t let me pursue it further. He says \'Take the definition of \"adorn with trimmings\"\'. lol.
June 27th, 2020 01:48
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M.
Miss Berles has furbelows. In one sense, it\'s related to petticoats. I googled that, of course.
Woof! Fido won\'t let me pursue it further. He says \'Take the definition of \"adorn with trimmings\"\'. lol.
June 27th, 2020 01:48
YET SLEEP ALONE
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M.
Miss Berles has furbelows. In one sense, it\'s related to petticoats. I googled that, of course.
Woof! Fido won\'t let me pursue it further. He says \'Take the definition of \"adorn with trimmings\"\'. lol.
June 27th, 2020 01:48
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M.
Miss Berles has furbelows. In one sense, it\'s related to petticoats. I googled that, of course.
Woof! Fido won\'t let me pursue it further. He says \'Take the definition of \"adorn with trimmings\"\'. lol.
June 27th, 2020 01:48
YET SLEEP ALONE
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
REDUCTIO AD ABSTRACTUM = Modern ART
REDUCTIO AD ABSURBUM = Modern POETRY
ANGELA Here - Always up Bright & Early on the Sabbath to Carpe Diem ! Good Sabbath - Uncle Mike. I am pleased to see you waxing lyrical again ! Just as the ultimate *ABSTRACT* is *White on White* so the ultimate *ABSURD* is the *Nonecu* the *Sans Mots / Sin Parablas*. Such Paintings & Poems leave MUCH for the Imagination but ZILCH for the Soul ! Nice to see your *Abstracts* in situ it gives them VITA LITY - AMEN !
Love the Lyric *YET SLEEP ALONE* as a collolary to *ON SUMMER NIGHTS LIKE THESE*. Being Spanish - I love the *Piquante y Caliente* in Food & Climate (& Hombres !) and when we pass the palindromic 28C = 82F I come alive ! We love the *Hot Summer Nights* and all the abstactions of the supernatural agencies ! Love & life (in our esperiences) are always ameliorated by *temperatura* ! We notice you have still employed - yesterdays last line - *in ruminating silences*. Is that for continuity or choice or circumstance. Thanks for sharing your Pics & Poem & Abode - Excelente !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey !
June 27th, 2020 01:38
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
REDUCTIO AD ABSTRACTUM = Modern ART
REDUCTIO AD ABSURBUM = Modern POETRY
ANGELA Here - Always up Bright & Early on the Sabbath to Carpe Diem ! Good Sabbath - Uncle Mike. I am pleased to see you waxing lyrical again ! Just as the ultimate *ABSTRACT* is *White on White* so the ultimate *ABSURD* is the *Nonecu* the *Sans Mots / Sin Parablas*. Such Paintings & Poems leave MUCH for the Imagination but ZILCH for the Soul ! Nice to see your *Abstracts* in situ it gives them VITA LITY - AMEN !
Love the Lyric *YET SLEEP ALONE* as a collolary to *ON SUMMER NIGHTS LIKE THESE*. Being Spanish - I love the *Piquante y Caliente* in Food & Climate (& Hombres !) and when we pass the palindromic 28C = 82F I come alive ! We love the *Hot Summer Nights* and all the abstactions of the supernatural agencies ! Love & life (in our esperiences) are always ameliorated by *temperatura* ! We notice you have still employed - yesterdays last line - *in ruminating silences*. Is that for continuity or choice or circumstance. Thanks for sharing your Pics & Poem & Abode - Excelente !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey !
June 27th, 2020 01:38
YET SLEEP ALONE
Fay Slimm. said:
You caught the reasons for sleep\'s chance to expand and ruminate in silence so lucidly Michael - - fine write and loved the clean lines of your walls plus the artwork.
June 27th, 2020 01:00
Fay Slimm. said:
You caught the reasons for sleep\'s chance to expand and ruminate in silence so lucidly Michael - - fine write and loved the clean lines of your walls plus the artwork.
June 27th, 2020 01:00
YET SLEEP ALONE
Neville said:
cant beat a bit of abstract to kick the day off...
love ya colour scheme and ya poem is just a little bit special too sir...
Neville
June 27th, 2020 00:42
Neville said:
cant beat a bit of abstract to kick the day off...
love ya colour scheme and ya poem is just a little bit special too sir...
Neville
June 27th, 2020 00:42
YET SLEEP ALONE
Goldfinch60 said:
Those abstracts of the day can bring us such wonderful feelings within us.
Andy
June 27th, 2020 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Those abstracts of the day can bring us such wonderful feelings within us.
Andy
June 27th, 2020 00:33
ON SUMMER NIGHTS LIKE THESE
Suresh said:
I can just visualize multitudes of birds visiting, if only to sing a chorus as you recite these words of yours.
June 26th, 2020 23:48
Suresh said:
I can just visualize multitudes of birds visiting, if only to sing a chorus as you recite these words of yours.
June 26th, 2020 23:48
ON SUMMER NIGHTS LIKE THESE
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela here - Good Friday Evening Uncle Mike ! Just catching up on MPS after a hard day in my clinic ! Love the *Table d*Oiseaux* the height is important to stop rodents stealing the Food etc. We have similar on a 5ft Pole which is ideal.. Squirrels & Cats & Rats could possibly scale your support ?
Love the POEM. Nice structure three balanaced *Free verse Quintets*. V 1. The view fom any window is evocative ! V 2. The view not only evokes Nature but also Rustic Human activity. V 3. Living beyond (and before) the here & now ~ AMEN !
A suggested last line as requested in your reply to DA
*FLUID PIXEL RUMINATIONS* That\'s just Girl Talk !
Brians suggestion is *THE EBB & FLOW OF FANTASIES*
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey !
June 26th, 2020 18:17
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela here - Good Friday Evening Uncle Mike ! Just catching up on MPS after a hard day in my clinic ! Love the *Table d*Oiseaux* the height is important to stop rodents stealing the Food etc. We have similar on a 5ft Pole which is ideal.. Squirrels & Cats & Rats could possibly scale your support ?
Love the POEM. Nice structure three balanaced *Free verse Quintets*. V 1. The view fom any window is evocative ! V 2. The view not only evokes Nature but also Rustic Human activity. V 3. Living beyond (and before) the here & now ~ AMEN !
A suggested last line as requested in your reply to DA
*FLUID PIXEL RUMINATIONS* That\'s just Girl Talk !
Brians suggestion is *THE EBB & FLOW OF FANTASIES*
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey !
June 26th, 2020 18:17
ON SUMMER NIGHTS LIKE THESE
dusk arising said:
Today i wandered with your words and journeyed along the tracks lit through a hazy dust and enjoyed a relaxation into a fantasy of childlike fairy tale land from afar.
Then somebody knocked my door. Reality can be such a rude awakening. I really enjoyed this piece.
June 26th, 2020 09:21
dusk arising said:
Today i wandered with your words and journeyed along the tracks lit through a hazy dust and enjoyed a relaxation into a fantasy of childlike fairy tale land from afar.
Then somebody knocked my door. Reality can be such a rude awakening. I really enjoyed this piece.
June 26th, 2020 09:21
ON SUMMER NIGHTS LIKE THESE
Neville said:
I\'m with the rest of the gang Michael...
an excellent poem and a very unique bit o sculptin sir...
Neville
June 26th, 2020 07:16
Neville said:
I\'m with the rest of the gang Michael...
an excellent poem and a very unique bit o sculptin sir...
Neville
June 26th, 2020 07:16
ON SUMMER NIGHTS LIKE THESE
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
I love them both.
Bravo Maestro!
👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
Laura🌻
June 26th, 2020 04:27
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
I love them both.
Bravo Maestro!
👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
Laura🌻
June 26th, 2020 04:27
ON SUMMER NIGHTS LIKE THESE
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh Michael. The image you conjour with these intriguing lines is so powerful - a tale in the telling and here\'s to another installment perhaps. Great stuff as always. - - and p.s. - I love your unique bird-table arrangement.
June 26th, 2020 03:53
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh Michael. The image you conjour with these intriguing lines is so powerful - a tale in the telling and here\'s to another installment perhaps. Great stuff as always. - - and p.s. - I love your unique bird-table arrangement.
June 26th, 2020 03:53
ON SUMMER NIGHTS LIKE THESE
orchidee said:
And both fine to me too!
How do we know we have had 40 winks? Do we count them while we are dozing? Will Miss Berles allow 41 winks, or is that too many?
What am I talking about? If we dunno what we\'re on about, how will others know?! lol. The heat\'s driving me mad - that\'s my excuse.
Miss B. will now explain to me: \'contiguity\'!
June 26th, 2020 01:55
orchidee said:
And both fine to me too!
How do we know we have had 40 winks? Do we count them while we are dozing? Will Miss Berles allow 41 winks, or is that too many?
What am I talking about? If we dunno what we\'re on about, how will others know?! lol. The heat\'s driving me mad - that\'s my excuse.
Miss B. will now explain to me: \'contiguity\'!
June 26th, 2020 01:55
ON SUMMER NIGHTS LIKE THESE
Goldfinch60 said:
Both creations are fine to me Michael.
Andy
June 26th, 2020 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Both creations are fine to me Michael.
Andy
June 26th, 2020 01:11
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