Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



ELEPHANTS ON THE RUN
orchidee said:

Oh lol, that\'s where they hide then!

March 6th, 2020 02:35

ELEPHANTS ON THE RUN
Goldfinch60 said:

I am laughing out so loud, wonderful start to my day Michael.

Andy

March 6th, 2020 02:30

I SAW A WORM
Clara said:

Oh this is such a lovely little piece. It actually brings joy to heart that you saved that little fella! And wrote about it too! Precious precious!

March 5th, 2020 14:41

I SAW A WORM
FredPeyer said:

Doing your good deed early in the morning sets you free for the whole day! Nice write!

March 5th, 2020 12:50

I SAW A WORM
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BRIAN HERE ~ Thanks Uncle Mike for a rescue that would have made OOOOOOO7 very proud ! Love the rhyming pattern (a b b c c a) and the Photo very flowery !

Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love BRIAN & ANGELA ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿค๐Ÿ’œ
Please check ~ POUNDLAND ~ Thanks !


March 5th, 2020 11:05

I SAW A WORM
Fay Slimm. said:

Dear Michael. - you are person after my own heart - a saver of worms is high on my friend-list - lovely read.

March 5th, 2020 08:51

I SAW A WORM
orchidee said:

Well done! You\'re galloping on into the 900\'s now - number of poems posted on here! Miss Berles will keep an eye on syllables for us still.
You got any iambic pentameters? Are they well-behaved? What do you feed them? (Are they dogs?!) lol.

March 5th, 2020 08:47

I SAW A WORM
dusk arising said:

I saw a worm yesterday, at least i thought i did. What on earth it was doing in the Gents toilet i\'ll never know.

Well saved that man. Worms are rare around here for the whole area is heavy clay soil. Spiders we have by the truck load... little black ones all over the garden. They don\'t come indoors.
A kid in my junior school used to eat worms... yuk.

March 5th, 2020 05:17

I SAW A WORM
Saxon Crow said:

You\'ve got to love a worm really. There should be a national love a worm day. Well done for saving a life M

March 5th, 2020 04:37

I SAW A WORM
Goldfinch60 said:

Worms are so important I see many no them on the croquet lawn and I too pick them up and put them in the long grass.

Andy

\'Boy to boy, \"How is it that collect so many worms for fishing?\" \"Well I get my younger brother to collect them and let him eat every tenth worm he collects\" \'

March 5th, 2020 03:18

I SAW A WORM
orchidee said:

Good write and pic M. I do the same with snails, usually seen on damp days, trying to cross their \'road\' - the pavement!
Oh lo, I\'m on about book-worms today.

March 5th, 2020 02:59

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Neville said:

Most chucklesome indeed Michael... and those hellebores you have are a sight to behold too

Neville

March 4th, 2020 13:13

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FredPeyer said:

Great write, Michael. At least the holes can be filled. Here a termite and a praying antis got together. Now their offspring says grace before they eat my house!

March 4th, 2020 12:28

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Saxon Crow said:

Lovely! At least you would have plenty of manure for your roses!!

March 4th, 2020 10:23

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ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE (next clinic @ 3 ! Late lunch break Soup & a Sani !) Love the PHOTO & the vintage WC ! All the Spring flowers are wicked and a reminder that as the flowers rise do must the TEMPERATURE ! I love Elephants & worms they boh have heir place in the order of things. Trouble is if your Eli leaves a hoof print it was either Eli or a Flying Umbrella Stand. You cant blame it on the CAT !

Blessings & Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Love in the Spring - Angela & Brian
๐Ÿงก๐Ÿค๐Ÿ’™ ~ ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿค๐Ÿ’™

March 4th, 2020 09:22

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dusk arising said:

Well you live and learn. I\'ve heard of new laid eggs but new laid grass? What on earth have those two been getting up to?

March 4th, 2020 08:18

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orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write and pic M. Miss Berles do any gardening?

March 4th, 2020 02:45

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Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you so much Michael, my first laugh of the day.

Andy

March 4th, 2020 02:19

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myself and me said:

The color of the paint is so warm, absolutely love it. And the couplet, Ha, ha ha.

March 3rd, 2020 14:26

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Saxon Crow said:

I bet both pants and socks were ironed!

March 3rd, 2020 08:49

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ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - Very droll Uncle Mike and an early SMILE fo a Working Girl ! Just finished my Morning Clinic so enjoing Latte & a peek @ MPS ! They would have to long briefs for his HOCK to be poking out (Im an anatomist !) Most of my Male Clients are down to their Box & Sox but not many match - sometimes not even the Sox ! When I see them shivering & docile on the Massage Table - I know how Preti Patel feels - She is an ESSEX GIRL (MP). Of course I always have matching Undies - but thats Victorias & Brians Secret ! Your mention of TUMMIES reminded me tht I am the archenemy of big Stomaches. For me Big Bellies are a turn off ! Brian knows this and keeps Trim in the College Gym ~ AMEN ! Love the TREES very psychedelic - You haven*t been on the LSD again have you ?

Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love ANGELA ๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›

March 3rd, 2020 06:50

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dusk arising said:

These sexually active subjects of your couplets are obviously out to impress their partners with their sartorial elegance in underwear. The trees are superb and reminiscent of a pic you showed us recently.

March 3rd, 2020 06:10

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Fay Slimm. said:

You have been missed dear friend - hope by now you have new pen and ink to keep leaving your readers like me a wide morning smile. Big grin on viewing number one couplet.

March 3rd, 2020 05:52

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orchidee said:

Why, yes of course - waist! A fine write and pic M. heehee.

March 3rd, 2020 03:17

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Goldfinch60 said:

Matching socks and briefs eh Michael?
A venerable man of fashion.

Andy

March 3rd, 2020 03:10

WINTER NIGHTS (1)
myself and me said:

I love the view in your poem better than that in the paint.

February 27th, 2020 16:13

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dusk arising said:

I feel the chill of your words and shudder at the resemblance above it.

February 27th, 2020 10:39

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ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Moraning Uncle Mike ! Love the Upper Trump ~ Pugnacious & beligerent ~ just like IL DUCE ! (remember Him ?)
Love the POEM ~ You captured this morning in Essex ! No SNOW her yet ~ Gracias a Dios !
Please check *Value of an EGG ?* posted last night ! Just off to WORK (remember that ?) first lecture @ 11am.

Blessing & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian ๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›

February 27th, 2020 04:10

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Goldfinch60 said:

Natures art and symphony in harmony.

Andy

February 27th, 2020 03:45

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orchidee said:

Good write and pic M.

February 27th, 2020 03:34



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