Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
COFFEE
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful, mine is Colombian, from freshly ground beans when I come back from my walk.
Andy
April 15th, 2020 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful, mine is Colombian, from freshly ground beans when I come back from my walk.
Andy
April 15th, 2020 01:30
EMBERS TURN TO ASH
FredPeyer said:
These three short lines evoke an end of day peaceful and relaxing time in front of the fireplace. Exactly what we need during these tough times!
April 13th, 2020 18:46
FredPeyer said:
These three short lines evoke an end of day peaceful and relaxing time in front of the fireplace. Exactly what we need during these tough times!
April 13th, 2020 18:46
EMBERS TURN TO ASH
dusk arising said:
Oh so moody a piece. I don\'t know why but it says so much.
A must for my favourites.
Beauty in the eye of the beholder etc.... this one hits a spot in me.
April 13th, 2020 06:51
dusk arising said:
Oh so moody a piece. I don\'t know why but it says so much.
A must for my favourites.
Beauty in the eye of the beholder etc.... this one hits a spot in me.
April 13th, 2020 06:51
EMBERS TURN TO ASH
Fay Slimm. said:
This sad sen. shows how much is ash in empty cup is at the moment - - good points raised Mike.
April 13th, 2020 05:55
Fay Slimm. said:
This sad sen. shows how much is ash in empty cup is at the moment - - good points raised Mike.
April 13th, 2020 05:55
EMBERS TURN TO ASH
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M.
Turn to fag-ash? You know Fag-Ash Lil? Or Fag-Ash Berles?!
April 13th, 2020 04:34
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M.
Turn to fag-ash? You know Fag-Ash Lil? Or Fag-Ash Berles?!
April 13th, 2020 04:34
EMBERS TURN TO ASH
Goldfinch60 said:
The light will be with us in time, the light is always there.
Andy
April 13th, 2020 04:17
Goldfinch60 said:
The light will be with us in time, the light is always there.
Andy
April 13th, 2020 04:17
EMBERS TURN TO ASH
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
A mellow Senryu given the circumstances we find ourselves in Michael
Like the seasons have been suspended
Bravo!
April 13th, 2020 03:26
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
A mellow Senryu given the circumstances we find ourselves in Michael
Like the seasons have been suspended
Bravo!
April 13th, 2020 03:26
EMBERS TURN TO ASH
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
A good write.
You could say everything is turning to ash with this pandemic around us.
Keep healthy and writing.
FineB
April 13th, 2020 02:50
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
A good write.
You could say everything is turning to ash with this pandemic around us.
Keep healthy and writing.
FineB
April 13th, 2020 02:50
NEVER HAVE I
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Once a helmet saved my life
I wore it rather loosely
He came back once and saved the wife
I thanked him, quite profusely
Great write Michael
Helmets are like insurance
No-one wants it until you need it
April 12th, 2020 06:24
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Once a helmet saved my life
I wore it rather loosely
He came back once and saved the wife
I thanked him, quite profusely
Great write Michael
Helmets are like insurance
No-one wants it until you need it
April 12th, 2020 06:24
NEVER HAVE I
MendedFences27 said:
A good bit of fun, this. What with helmets, parrots, and eggs on one\'s head.I was envisioning scenes of Monty Python. Thanks for the laugh. - Phil A
April 11th, 2020 13:19
MendedFences27 said:
A good bit of fun, this. What with helmets, parrots, and eggs on one\'s head.I was envisioning scenes of Monty Python. Thanks for the laugh. - Phil A
April 11th, 2020 13:19
NEVER HAVE I
Neville said:
I just luv a bit o abstract absurdity.. the idea of a fried egg on me Barnett makes me cringe....
I never been cyclin wearin
a dress or a fez, or facial
fuzz
aint gonna say why
Let\'s just say becuz ….
Go good sir,
Neville
April 11th, 2020 11:24
Neville said:
I just luv a bit o abstract absurdity.. the idea of a fried egg on me Barnett makes me cringe....
I never been cyclin wearin
a dress or a fez, or facial
fuzz
aint gonna say why
Let\'s just say becuz ….
Go good sir,
Neville
April 11th, 2020 11:24
NEVER HAVE I
dusk arising said:
I can\'t picture you as a lycra cycler either ...... but hiding from this disease\'ll keep ya by your easel.
Excellent verses of fun.
have you considered cycling
with eggs that are poached
but my word you\'re a natural
you must have been coached
April 11th, 2020 06:28
dusk arising said:
I can\'t picture you as a lycra cycler either ...... but hiding from this disease\'ll keep ya by your easel.
Excellent verses of fun.
have you considered cycling
with eggs that are poached
but my word you\'re a natural
you must have been coached
April 11th, 2020 06:28
NEVER HAVE I
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write and pic M.
I know someone who founded a local Bicycle Hemet Initiative Trust (similar to Headway).
I visited someone in hospital, years ago now, weekly for about 4 months - cycling accident with no helmet, and sadly passed away. The Trust was founded due to this.
April 11th, 2020 02:23
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write and pic M.
I know someone who founded a local Bicycle Hemet Initiative Trust (similar to Headway).
I visited someone in hospital, years ago now, weekly for about 4 months - cycling accident with no helmet, and sadly passed away. The Trust was founded due to this.
April 11th, 2020 02:23
NEVER HAVE I
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Sabbath Uncle Mike - Love the sketch BRIDGES always fascinate me - especilly *Pack Horse* ! Love the Pome a series of quatrains tells it all. Brian & I were brought to wear cranial protection when cycling. We support headway and as a Physio I have seen the aftermath too many cycling accidents. But I agree *They do look silly* almost like a wig ! In the UK & abroad (where bike is King) i have seen all sorts *Porte a Bicyclette* Dogs - Cats - Monkeys - Children - Wi!ves & Bundles of everything including bags of uncooked eggs. Your Pome made me smile and now I cant stop laughing - at all the EGGS - TRAORDINARY Cylces in my Head ! Brians in the Shower and thinks Ive gone mad in the Computer Room. Thanks for sharing !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛💛💛
Lovin* Lockdown with Brian !
April 11th, 2020 01:57
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Sabbath Uncle Mike - Love the sketch BRIDGES always fascinate me - especilly *Pack Horse* ! Love the Pome a series of quatrains tells it all. Brian & I were brought to wear cranial protection when cycling. We support headway and as a Physio I have seen the aftermath too many cycling accidents. But I agree *They do look silly* almost like a wig ! In the UK & abroad (where bike is King) i have seen all sorts *Porte a Bicyclette* Dogs - Cats - Monkeys - Children - Wi!ves & Bundles of everything including bags of uncooked eggs. Your Pome made me smile and now I cant stop laughing - at all the EGGS - TRAORDINARY Cylces in my Head ! Brians in the Shower and thinks Ive gone mad in the Computer Room. Thanks for sharing !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛💛💛
Lovin* Lockdown with Brian !
April 11th, 2020 01:57
NIGHT
Neville said:
Superbly crafted and of the moment...
I can only imagine the number of tears being shed behind closed doors at this moment in time....
Stay safe,
Neville
April 9th, 2020 16:36
Neville said:
Superbly crafted and of the moment...
I can only imagine the number of tears being shed behind closed doors at this moment in time....
Stay safe,
Neville
April 9th, 2020 16:36
NIGHT
Fay Slimm. said:
A classic write in which you capture the feel of summer moonlight - a lovely read.
April 9th, 2020 16:22
Fay Slimm. said:
A classic write in which you capture the feel of summer moonlight - a lovely read.
April 9th, 2020 16:22
NIGHT
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HOLA TIO MICHAEL ~ Loving the BIG BIRD ~ shades of sesame street ! Thnaks for two balanced quatrains extolling the Unique Blessings of Summer. However we both have a passing knowledge of VIRUSES and the after effects of COVID 19 will persist well into Autumn. Our prediction is *When the Leaves begin to fall so will the Infections and the Deaths. January 2021 will herald a Brave New World ~ AMEN
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian 🧡🤍💙🤍🧡
April 9th, 2020 13:30
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HOLA TIO MICHAEL ~ Loving the BIG BIRD ~ shades of sesame street ! Thnaks for two balanced quatrains extolling the Unique Blessings of Summer. However we both have a passing knowledge of VIRUSES and the after effects of COVID 19 will persist well into Autumn. Our prediction is *When the Leaves begin to fall so will the Infections and the Deaths. January 2021 will herald a Brave New World ~ AMEN
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian 🧡🤍💙🤍🧡
April 9th, 2020 13:30
NIGHT
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
anticipation of a sweet summer hopefully to come Thank you Michael
April 9th, 2020 05:46
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
anticipation of a sweet summer hopefully to come Thank you Michael
April 9th, 2020 05:46
NIGHT
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Michael.
Andy
https://youtu.be/z0glOYQBlSA
April 9th, 2020 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Michael.
Andy
https://youtu.be/z0glOYQBlSA
April 9th, 2020 01:49
NIGHT
orchidee said:
A thoughtful write M.
Erm, that not me in the bushes.....!
April 9th, 2020 01:45
orchidee said:
A thoughtful write M.
Erm, that not me in the bushes.....!
April 9th, 2020 01:45
NIGHT
dusk arising said:
That\'s me peeing in the bushes...drat! i thought i\'d got away with it.
Your poem really has great flow and takes my mind to the edge of a place it can\'t quite go. Bloody interesting journey though as i look that bloodshot sun in the eye, on the edge of a precipice.
April 9th, 2020 00:53
dusk arising said:
That\'s me peeing in the bushes...drat! i thought i\'d got away with it.
Your poem really has great flow and takes my mind to the edge of a place it can\'t quite go. Bloody interesting journey though as i look that bloodshot sun in the eye, on the edge of a precipice.
April 9th, 2020 00:53
IN LOCKDOWN
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Hi Uncle Mike - PAPA is very pleased because Sales of Wine in the UK (including RIOJA of course) have doubled due to COVID 19 and Pubs & restaurants closing. The GOVT (in their wisdom) have allowed Off licences to stay OPEN ! If you are drinking RED make sure its RIOJA TINTA - AMEN !
LOVE ANGELA & BRIAN 💛💛💛
April 7th, 2020 15:50
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Hi Uncle Mike - PAPA is very pleased because Sales of Wine in the UK (including RIOJA of course) have doubled due to COVID 19 and Pubs & restaurants closing. The GOVT (in their wisdom) have allowed Off licences to stay OPEN ! If you are drinking RED make sure its RIOJA TINTA - AMEN !
LOVE ANGELA & BRIAN 💛💛💛
April 7th, 2020 15:50
IN LOCKDOWN
dusk arising said:
He he he, or a \"room crawl\"... best of it is, who cares if u actually do end up crawling on hands and knees?
April 7th, 2020 09:04
dusk arising said:
He he he, or a \"room crawl\"... best of it is, who cares if u actually do end up crawling on hands and knees?
April 7th, 2020 09:04
IN LOCKDOWN
Goldfinch60 said:
That sounds like a good plan, I shall join you - remotely of course.
Andy
April 7th, 2020 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
That sounds like a good plan, I shall join you - remotely of course.
Andy
April 7th, 2020 02:23
IN LOCKDOWN
orchidee said:
Oh lol. How will I get out to water people\'s whiskies and other tipples? They\'re safe from me!
April 7th, 2020 02:17
orchidee said:
Oh lol. How will I get out to water people\'s whiskies and other tipples? They\'re safe from me!
April 7th, 2020 02:17
STIFF ZIP
MendedFences27 said:
This magical anointment is readily available at your local alipterium or elaeothesium or maybe even your local repair garage, especially if your driving an old Willys.
Keep the humor coming. I love it.- Phil A.
P.S. They look more like geese to me.
April 6th, 2020 21:47
MendedFences27 said:
This magical anointment is readily available at your local alipterium or elaeothesium or maybe even your local repair garage, especially if your driving an old Willys.
Keep the humor coming. I love it.- Phil A.
P.S. They look more like geese to me.
April 6th, 2020 21:47
STIFF ZIP
Neville said:
Will it stay put when he weeturns it tho 😎🍷👍that is the question
Stay well sir... oh and I love those ducks
April 6th, 2020 14:54
Neville said:
Will it stay put when he weeturns it tho 😎🍷👍that is the question
Stay well sir... oh and I love those ducks
April 6th, 2020 14:54
STIFF ZIP
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good afternoon Uncle Mike ! For your information ZIPS were invented 170 yeras ago my a Man called HOWE - Dont ask me HOW ! Now that Im a Married Lady Brian has informed that Men have two problems with Zips. One the *Stuck Zip* which you have described and the other is the *Quick Zip* which traps the Memeber & is appearently very painful ! WE ladies have no trouble with our Zips except when there is too much of us for the material & the Zip to contain !
Love the DUCK FMILY - US soon I hope
Blessings to You & Yours.
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
April 6th, 2020 09:52
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good afternoon Uncle Mike ! For your information ZIPS were invented 170 yeras ago my a Man called HOWE - Dont ask me HOW ! Now that Im a Married Lady Brian has informed that Men have two problems with Zips. One the *Stuck Zip* which you have described and the other is the *Quick Zip* which traps the Memeber & is appearently very painful ! WE ladies have no trouble with our Zips except when there is too much of us for the material & the Zip to contain !
Love the DUCK FMILY - US soon I hope
Blessings to You & Yours.
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
April 6th, 2020 09:52
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