Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
AGEING COUPLETS (4 & 5)
Barry Hodges said:
Ageing requires an E in Standard English - only the Yanks spell it without!
You are right about older women though.
And wine.
July 12th, 2020 16:56
Barry Hodges said:
Ageing requires an E in Standard English - only the Yanks spell it without!
You are right about older women though.
And wine.
July 12th, 2020 16:56
AGEING COUPLETS (4 & 5)
MendedFences27 said:
I see blue skies with some sun peeking through over a mountain range and a small river - And it turns out to be a towel!? Egad, what am I forgetting, or is it just too much wine I\'ve been drinking. If you keep the towel long enough does it turn into the \"Mona Lisa?\" Aging beautifully. - Phil A.
July 12th, 2020 11:15
MendedFences27 said:
I see blue skies with some sun peeking through over a mountain range and a small river - And it turns out to be a towel!? Egad, what am I forgetting, or is it just too much wine I\'ve been drinking. If you keep the towel long enough does it turn into the \"Mona Lisa?\" Aging beautifully. - Phil A.
July 12th, 2020 11:15
AGEING COUPLETS (4 & 5)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Sunday Uncle Mike ~ Love both *Aging Couplets* but Brian & I still operate in the land of the *here & now* so our Memories & Minds have to be finely honed. We do all the PUZZLES in the *I* (good newspaper) and read Foreign Magazines etc. As to the second one Papa tells me that Rioja does age well but should be consumed on the day it is opened ! They sell more that way ! As far as Wives are concerned - Brian tells me he loves me more & more each Month as our Marriage progresses and he is improving too - say no more !
AS far as the *Painting* is concerned - yes it could be a *Painting Rag* (spoil sport !) but initially it did remind me of some of Georgia O*Keefes Paintings of *New Mexico Geology !*. Especially the lower half !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela - Brian - Smokey XOXOX
July 12th, 2020 06:18
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Sunday Uncle Mike ~ Love both *Aging Couplets* but Brian & I still operate in the land of the *here & now* so our Memories & Minds have to be finely honed. We do all the PUZZLES in the *I* (good newspaper) and read Foreign Magazines etc. As to the second one Papa tells me that Rioja does age well but should be consumed on the day it is opened ! They sell more that way ! As far as Wives are concerned - Brian tells me he loves me more & more each Month as our Marriage progresses and he is improving too - say no more !
AS far as the *Painting* is concerned - yes it could be a *Painting Rag* (spoil sport !) but initially it did remind me of some of Georgia O*Keefes Paintings of *New Mexico Geology !*. Especially the lower half !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela - Brian - Smokey XOXOX
July 12th, 2020 06:18
AGEING COUPLETS (4 & 5)
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I like it Michael
Close to the knuckle but I like it
July 12th, 2020 05:48
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I like it Michael
Close to the knuckle but I like it
July 12th, 2020 05:48
AGEING COUPLETS (4 & 5)
Goldfinch60 said:
Amazing art work Michael . Is it aged or did you create that?
Andy
July 12th, 2020 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Amazing art work Michael . Is it aged or did you create that?
Andy
July 12th, 2020 02:21
AGEING COUPLETS (4 & 5)
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true in the first one.
I agree that wine improves with age but my beloved improved with age until she was taken from me.
Andy
July 12th, 2020 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true in the first one.
I agree that wine improves with age but my beloved improved with age until she was taken from me.
Andy
July 12th, 2020 02:20
AGEING COUPLETS (4 & 5)
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good writes and pic M. Miss Berles forgot?
July 12th, 2020 01:55
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good writes and pic M. Miss Berles forgot?
July 12th, 2020 01:55
AGEING COUPLETS (3)
MendedFences27 said:
The painting and poem do not belong together. It\'s funny (the poem) and the picture is great. Please keep them apart. You made me laugh, and then remember my turns at such upsets. Good bit of humor, though. - Phil A.
July 10th, 2020 14:46
MendedFences27 said:
The painting and poem do not belong together. It\'s funny (the poem) and the picture is great. Please keep them apart. You made me laugh, and then remember my turns at such upsets. Good bit of humor, though. - Phil A.
July 10th, 2020 14:46
AGEING COUPLETS (3)
dusk arising said:
Have you seen those stains on goldfinch\'s t-shirt?
These two liners of yours have become sickeningly true.
July 10th, 2020 05:35
dusk arising said:
Have you seen those stains on goldfinch\'s t-shirt?
These two liners of yours have become sickeningly true.
July 10th, 2020 05:35
AGEING COUPLETS (3)
Goldfinch60 said:
Oh yes, been there, done that, got the T shirt.
Andy
July 10th, 2020 02:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Oh yes, been there, done that, got the T shirt.
Andy
July 10th, 2020 02:41
AGEING COUPLETS (3)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD FRIDAY ~ UNCLE MIKE ~ Bright Sunny Morning after a week of Mizzle ! More like Liverpool than London ! I wont let ANGELA see this it might put her off having a BABY next year,
My SIS had BABY called VICK
Who ~ after each MEAL he was SICK
He said with SUAVITY
Its the Law of ANTI~GRAVITY
When at Mummy*s breast I sup
That which goes down ............
Must alas ~ always come up !
Dont mention *Filled Nappies*
When we*re eating CHIPATTIES !
Im 36 much too old to be a DAD !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Brian & Angela & Smokey Cat !
July 10th, 2020 02:16
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD FRIDAY ~ UNCLE MIKE ~ Bright Sunny Morning after a week of Mizzle ! More like Liverpool than London ! I wont let ANGELA see this it might put her off having a BABY next year,
My SIS had BABY called VICK
Who ~ after each MEAL he was SICK
He said with SUAVITY
Its the Law of ANTI~GRAVITY
When at Mummy*s breast I sup
That which goes down ............
Must alas ~ always come up !
Dont mention *Filled Nappies*
When we*re eating CHIPATTIES !
Im 36 much too old to be a DAD !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Brian & Angela & Smokey Cat !
July 10th, 2020 02:16
AGEING COUPLETS (3)
orchidee said:
Erm, a change from \'out of their mouths... comes praise!\'
Miss Berles got any family? Millions of Berles about?
July 10th, 2020 02:02
orchidee said:
Erm, a change from \'out of their mouths... comes praise!\'
Miss Berles got any family? Millions of Berles about?
July 10th, 2020 02:02
AGEING COUPLETS (2)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN ICI ~ Good Afternoon Uncle Mike ~ Loved the AB & the ODE. Angela & I - still being under 40 (remember that ?) - are *Keeping up Appearances* not with cosmetics but with healthy eating & exercise & sleep & not smoking ! In the AB I saw at least three (hidden) ageing faces ~ Centre ~ Upper right - Lower left and a very distinct White & Yellow Cat (not Smokey) bottom right. Thanks for scaring !
Blessing & Peace to You & Yours
Love Brian & Angela & Smokey !
July 8th, 2020 10:11
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN ICI ~ Good Afternoon Uncle Mike ~ Loved the AB & the ODE. Angela & I - still being under 40 (remember that ?) - are *Keeping up Appearances* not with cosmetics but with healthy eating & exercise & sleep & not smoking ! In the AB I saw at least three (hidden) ageing faces ~ Centre ~ Upper right - Lower left and a very distinct White & Yellow Cat (not Smokey) bottom right. Thanks for scaring !
Blessing & Peace to You & Yours
Love Brian & Angela & Smokey !
July 8th, 2020 10:11
AGEING COUPLETS (2)
dusk arising said:
Two lines which encapsulate my appearance.
You pic today has an uncanny likeness to a close up of the threadbare sofa we threw out 20 odd years ago.(just kidding).
July 8th, 2020 09:12
dusk arising said:
Two lines which encapsulate my appearance.
You pic today has an uncanny likeness to a close up of the threadbare sofa we threw out 20 odd years ago.(just kidding).
July 8th, 2020 09:12
AGEING COUPLETS (2)
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M.
You on the way out?! Not for along time, I hope. How old is Miss Berles now?
July 8th, 2020 01:55
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M.
You on the way out?! Not for along time, I hope. How old is Miss Berles now?
July 8th, 2020 01:55
AGEING COUPLETS (2)
Goldfinch60 said:
Maybe but not yet Michael, not yet.
Andy
You\'ve done it again with your artwork, I can see so much in it once more.
July 8th, 2020 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Maybe but not yet Michael, not yet.
Andy
You\'ve done it again with your artwork, I can see so much in it once more.
July 8th, 2020 01:20
AGEING COUPLETS (1)
Suresh said:
so I can go back to having garlic again????????
July 7th, 2020 23:37
Suresh said:
so I can go back to having garlic again????????
July 7th, 2020 23:37
AGEING COUPLETS (1)
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - how true Michael. More aging couplets please.
July 7th, 2020 15:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - how true Michael. More aging couplets please.
July 7th, 2020 15:04
AGEING COUPLETS (1)
MendedFences27 said:
Both very clever. Clever art, clever humor. If only they had grown onions in Eden. Could have saved a lot of trouble.- Phil A.
July 7th, 2020 15:02
MendedFences27 said:
Both very clever. Clever art, clever humor. If only they had grown onions in Eden. Could have saved a lot of trouble.- Phil A.
July 7th, 2020 15:02
AGEING COUPLETS (1)
Neville said:
it seems you know your onions sir....
laugh, I nearly cried....
July 7th, 2020 12:38
Neville said:
it seems you know your onions sir....
laugh, I nearly cried....
July 7th, 2020 12:38
AGEING COUPLETS (1)
dusk arising said:
Don\'t waste any time starving yourself of apples... that doctor is not going to call for fear you will cough at them. I wonder whether any GPs have been furlowed.... i really can\'t imagine what they get up yo during their \'working day\' at the moment, they\'re not seeing any patients in my neck of the orchard.
Onions, I love them.
Your srtwork today reminded me of the album cover of Chicago 3 back in the early 70\'s.
July 7th, 2020 12:14
dusk arising said:
Don\'t waste any time starving yourself of apples... that doctor is not going to call for fear you will cough at them. I wonder whether any GPs have been furlowed.... i really can\'t imagine what they get up yo during their \'working day\' at the moment, they\'re not seeing any patients in my neck of the orchard.
Onions, I love them.
Your srtwork today reminded me of the album cover of Chicago 3 back in the early 70\'s.
July 7th, 2020 12:14
AGEING COUPLETS (1)
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah wow yay clever!! We use onions everyday in cooking and a lot of people speak of its benefits. Must be good for these crazy flu times I suppose too. Cheers!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too. Thanks
July 7th, 2020 06:03
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah wow yay clever!! We use onions everyday in cooking and a lot of people speak of its benefits. Must be good for these crazy flu times I suppose too. Cheers!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too. Thanks
July 7th, 2020 06:03
AGEING COUPLETS (1)
FineB said:
Hi Michael
Excellent write👍
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
July 7th, 2020 05:03
FineB said:
Hi Michael
Excellent write👍
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
July 7th, 2020 05:03
AGEING COUPLETS (1)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Morning Uncle MIKE ~ Thanks for the SMILE ~ oral hygiene is very important by mutual consent neither Angela or I chew GARLIC ! Lots of VAMPS but no VAMP~IRES in Essex ! Love the abstract I have titled it *DECONTRUCTED TARTAN No 51* Please check *PLANET EARTH ~ MANS RESPONSIBILITY* Thanks !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
LOVE ~ Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
July 7th, 2020 03:10
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Morning Uncle MIKE ~ Thanks for the SMILE ~ oral hygiene is very important by mutual consent neither Angela or I chew GARLIC ! Lots of VAMPS but no VAMP~IRES in Essex ! Love the abstract I have titled it *DECONTRUCTED TARTAN No 51* Please check *PLANET EARTH ~ MANS RESPONSIBILITY* Thanks !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
LOVE ~ Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
July 7th, 2020 03:10
AGEING COUPLETS (1)
orchidee said:
Oh lol good write and pic M.
Does Miss Berles have a sprout - or 10 - or baked beans, to keep the doctor away?!
July 7th, 2020 01:39
orchidee said:
Oh lol good write and pic M.
Does Miss Berles have a sprout - or 10 - or baked beans, to keep the doctor away?!
July 7th, 2020 01:39
AGEING COUPLETS (1)
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you Michael, my first smile of the day.
Intriguing artwork as well.
Andy
July 7th, 2020 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you Michael, my first smile of the day.
Intriguing artwork as well.
Andy
July 7th, 2020 00:36
WHERE NO MEN TREAD
Neville said:
I swear I posted a comment here earlier....
It seems I was either wrong, or the site could of course be haunted... whatever the case, This is an impressive post Michael... Stay safe
Neville
July 3rd, 2020 09:07
Neville said:
I swear I posted a comment here earlier....
It seems I was either wrong, or the site could of course be haunted... whatever the case, This is an impressive post Michael... Stay safe
Neville
July 3rd, 2020 09:07
WHERE NO MEN TREAD
dusk arising said:
What? .. no slugs and creepy crawlies, no snot hanging from trees?
I wouldn\'t go to lands like that......
But this wonderful place you describe has me enthralled.... i wish to explore, indeed i already have. Re reading is so rewarding here.
The reality of places seldom romanced into poetry.
A must also for my fav\'s. You certainly can turn out some real beauties.
July 3rd, 2020 08:14
dusk arising said:
What? .. no slugs and creepy crawlies, no snot hanging from trees?
I wouldn\'t go to lands like that......
But this wonderful place you describe has me enthralled.... i wish to explore, indeed i already have. Re reading is so rewarding here.
The reality of places seldom romanced into poetry.
A must also for my fav\'s. You certainly can turn out some real beauties.
July 3rd, 2020 08:14
EQUALITY
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
A brilliant write.
Thanks for sharing.
Keep writing and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
July 3rd, 2020 07:00
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
A brilliant write.
Thanks for sharing.
Keep writing and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
July 3rd, 2020 07:00
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