Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
HAIKU SPRING (1)
MendedFences27 said:
Nothing like tulips in the Springtime to make your mouth water.
A great Haiku Michael and lovely artwork. - Phil A.
February 18th, 2020 10:10
MendedFences27 said:
Nothing like tulips in the Springtime to make your mouth water.
A great Haiku Michael and lovely artwork. - Phil A.
February 18th, 2020 10:10
HAIKU SPRING (1)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Top of the Morning to You Uncle Mike ! Winter morphing into Spring is one of the finest seasonal Changes of the Year ! Such a contrast - everywhere I look Spring is bursting into vibrant (good word !) life. Love the TULIP and the HAIKU excellent ! Angela bought me 12 red Tulips in Bud for Valentines Day. They are amazing and in full bloom. Now (5th Day) the Heads have bent the Stems into amazing shapes. It looks like a DODECAPUS or a GORGONS HEAD with the tulips bending and writhing on the 12 points of the compass ! It would make an amazing painting - too Awesome to be True. But then Nature Always is !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 💛💛💛
February 18th, 2020 05:11
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Top of the Morning to You Uncle Mike ! Winter morphing into Spring is one of the finest seasonal Changes of the Year ! Such a contrast - everywhere I look Spring is bursting into vibrant (good word !) life. Love the TULIP and the HAIKU excellent ! Angela bought me 12 red Tulips in Bud for Valentines Day. They are amazing and in full bloom. Now (5th Day) the Heads have bent the Stems into amazing shapes. It looks like a DODECAPUS or a GORGONS HEAD with the tulips bending and writhing on the 12 points of the compass ! It would make an amazing painting - too Awesome to be True. But then Nature Always is !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 💛💛💛
February 18th, 2020 05:11
HAIKU SPRING (1)
dusk arising said:
Haiku shmykoo pah! E=mC?..
Bring on that departure. Nice flow to this.
February 18th, 2020 04:04
dusk arising said:
Haiku shmykoo pah! E=mC?..
Bring on that departure. Nice flow to this.
February 18th, 2020 04:04
HAIKU SPRING (1)
Fay Slimm. said:
A change we are all awaiting springs from your fine haiku today Micheal - flowers of spring are ever a welcome sight.
February 18th, 2020 03:20
Fay Slimm. said:
A change we are all awaiting springs from your fine haiku today Micheal - flowers of spring are ever a welcome sight.
February 18th, 2020 03:20
HAIKU SPRING (1)
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M - hope so! A fine read for my 21st birthday today. Eh?!
February 18th, 2020 02:51
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M - hope so! A fine read for my 21st birthday today. Eh?!
February 18th, 2020 02:51
POETRY
myself and me said:
Is this the new painting style? Just love it, the poem too.
February 17th, 2020 20:19
myself and me said:
Is this the new painting style? Just love it, the poem too.
February 17th, 2020 20:19
POETRY
MendedFences27 said:
Such is \"Poetry\" , a thought simply defined. 19 words of elegance, with universal application and meaning. Such is \"Poetry.\" - Phil A.
February 17th, 2020 17:25
MendedFences27 said:
Such is \"Poetry\" , a thought simply defined. 19 words of elegance, with universal application and meaning. Such is \"Poetry.\" - Phil A.
February 17th, 2020 17:25
POETRY
Poetic Dan said:
Yes! So many are just for me, as I could never write as many that sing to me!
Great stuff as ever!
February 17th, 2020 04:05
Poetic Dan said:
Yes! So many are just for me, as I could never write as many that sing to me!
Great stuff as ever!
February 17th, 2020 04:05
POETRY
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Yes, annoying if words come to us, and no pen and paper at hand. By the time we come to write the words, we may have forgotten them. Doh!
February 17th, 2020 02:44
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Yes, annoying if words come to us, and no pen and paper at hand. By the time we come to write the words, we may have forgotten them. Doh!
February 17th, 2020 02:44
POETRY
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words are so very true, many of our thoughts need to be captured in words.
Andy
February 17th, 2020 02:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words are so very true, many of our thoughts need to be captured in words.
Andy
February 17th, 2020 02:31
POETRY
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Love the “POETRY” and the painting!
Beautifully done!
~Laura~🌻
February 17th, 2020 02:17
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Love the “POETRY” and the painting!
Beautifully done!
~Laura~🌻
February 17th, 2020 02:17
POETRY
dusk arising said:
Yes, i\'ll go along with your words today 100%.
All the better if it also transports each readers mind too. Preferably somewhere close to where the author\'s mind found itself.
February 17th, 2020 02:01
dusk arising said:
Yes, i\'ll go along with your words today 100%.
All the better if it also transports each readers mind too. Preferably somewhere close to where the author\'s mind found itself.
February 17th, 2020 02:01
THE OXFORD COMMA
Michael Edwards said:
The easiest one I can think of is the following:
I was accompanied by my siblings, Fred and Maud.(Fred and Maud are my siblings names)
I was accompanied by my siblings, Fred, and Maud. ( Fred and Maud were in addition to my siblings)
February 7th, 2020 16:14
Michael Edwards said:
The easiest one I can think of is the following:
I was accompanied by my siblings, Fred and Maud.(Fred and Maud are my siblings names)
I was accompanied by my siblings, Fred, and Maud. ( Fred and Maud were in addition to my siblings)
February 7th, 2020 16:14
THE OXFORD COMMA
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Bon Soir Mon Oncle Mike ~ love the Goash ~ Jug o* Flowers. Thanks for the Grammar Lesson Mike - but it still need to be explained !
Three European Countries in the EU are:
France, Italy, and Spain (with Oxford Comma ~ second comma)
France, Italy and Spain (without Oxford comma)
Both sentences are acceptable because neither is ambiguous !
It is our Church Mens Breakfast tomorrow so another example:
MENU ~ Bacon and Eggs and Toast ~ This would suggest the
toast is served integral with the B & E and not for Marmalade !
MENU ~ Bacon and Eggs, and Toast ~ with the Oxford comma
indicates the toast is served separate and could be marmaladed ~ OK !
In this case the OXFORD COMMA avoids the ambiguity ~ OK
Thanks for raising ~ American English tends to use the Oxford Comma
which President Trump (USA UBER ALLES) calls the Harvard Comma !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
February 7th, 2020 15:44
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Bon Soir Mon Oncle Mike ~ love the Goash ~ Jug o* Flowers. Thanks for the Grammar Lesson Mike - but it still need to be explained !
Three European Countries in the EU are:
France, Italy, and Spain (with Oxford Comma ~ second comma)
France, Italy and Spain (without Oxford comma)
Both sentences are acceptable because neither is ambiguous !
It is our Church Mens Breakfast tomorrow so another example:
MENU ~ Bacon and Eggs and Toast ~ This would suggest the
toast is served integral with the B & E and not for Marmalade !
MENU ~ Bacon and Eggs, and Toast ~ with the Oxford comma
indicates the toast is served separate and could be marmaladed ~ OK !
In this case the OXFORD COMMA avoids the ambiguity ~ OK
Thanks for raising ~ American English tends to use the Oxford Comma
which President Trump (USA UBER ALLES) calls the Harvard Comma !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
February 7th, 2020 15:44
THE OXFORD COMMA
dusk arising said:
I hereby pledge to honour the Oxford comma.
February 7th, 2020 09:47
dusk arising said:
I hereby pledge to honour the Oxford comma.
February 7th, 2020 09:47
THE OXFORD COMMA
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Is that the Cambridge comma at \'though (although), or am I just making that up?!
Does such a comma exist? Does Miss Berles know? Is she upset that letters or syllables are omitted, e.g . e\'en for even?!
February 7th, 2020 02:40
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Is that the Cambridge comma at \'though (although), or am I just making that up?!
Does such a comma exist? Does Miss Berles know? Is she upset that letters or syllables are omitted, e.g . e\'en for even?!
February 7th, 2020 02:40
THE OXFORD COMMA
Goldfinch60 said:
A list, is a list, or a list, and a list.
Or,
A list, is a list, or a list and a list.
February 7th, 2020 02:32
Goldfinch60 said:
A list, is a list, or a list, and a list.
Or,
A list, is a list, or a list and a list.
February 7th, 2020 02:32
THE OXFORD COMMA
Michael Edwards said:
When you\'re driving a car if no other cars are around why bother to indicate? Well I would say, apart from complying with the law, it\'s a good habit to get into. The same logic, I would argue, applies to the use of the Oxford comma.
February 7th, 2020 02:20
Michael Edwards said:
When you\'re driving a car if no other cars are around why bother to indicate? Well I would say, apart from complying with the law, it\'s a good habit to get into. The same logic, I would argue, applies to the use of the Oxford comma.
February 7th, 2020 02:20
NO LAUGHTER LINGERS IN THE WIND
xeina said:
What an amazing poem. Great use of imagery. I loved it.
February 3rd, 2020 07:07
xeina said:
What an amazing poem. Great use of imagery. I loved it.
February 3rd, 2020 07:07
NO LAUGHTER LINGERS IN THE WIND
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing UNCLE MIKE off this Morning (Evening Class tonight !). Love the pic. meandering stream ~ and the thoughts expressed in the ditty ~ on Winters Grip ! Please check and (if you wish) add a poem to our new Fusion ! *Sunrise or Sunset ? Thanks B & A
Blessings & peace to YOU & YOURS
Love BRIAN & Angela 🧡🤍💜🧡🤍💜
February 3rd, 2020 05:15
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing UNCLE MIKE off this Morning (Evening Class tonight !). Love the pic. meandering stream ~ and the thoughts expressed in the ditty ~ on Winters Grip ! Please check and (if you wish) add a poem to our new Fusion ! *Sunrise or Sunset ? Thanks B & A
Blessings & peace to YOU & YOURS
Love BRIAN & Angela 🧡🤍💜🧡🤍💜
February 3rd, 2020 05:15
NO LAUGHTER LINGERS IN THE WIND
dusk arising said:
\'everyone\'s gone to the moon
\'
\\remember that song by johnathin king back in the 60\'s. Your piece today brought it to mind.
A delightfully sombre mental picture arose.
February 3rd, 2020 03:06
dusk arising said:
\'everyone\'s gone to the moon
\'
\\remember that song by johnathin king back in the 60\'s. Your piece today brought it to mind.
A delightfully sombre mental picture arose.
February 3rd, 2020 03:06
NO LAUGHTER LINGERS IN THE WIND
Adam Shirley said:
What descriptive choice of words Michael, I truly imagined the beautiful scenery of your poem. Wonderful use of imagery, I truly enjoyed it.
February 3rd, 2020 02:49
Adam Shirley said:
What descriptive choice of words Michael, I truly imagined the beautiful scenery of your poem. Wonderful use of imagery, I truly enjoyed it.
February 3rd, 2020 02:49
NO LAUGHTER LINGERS IN THE WIND
orchidee said:
Yes, lovely write and pic M. I was on a country walk - trees were bare. Then it occurred to me - of course they are, it\'s Winter. Doh! Though relatively mild day.
How\'s that itching? Does Miss Berles suffer from it too, or has she got fleas?
February 3rd, 2020 02:44
orchidee said:
Yes, lovely write and pic M. I was on a country walk - trees were bare. Then it occurred to me - of course they are, it\'s Winter. Doh! Though relatively mild day.
How\'s that itching? Does Miss Berles suffer from it too, or has she got fleas?
February 3rd, 2020 02:44
NO LAUGHTER LINGERS IN THE WIND
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Michael.
As for the art work it is stunning, I just sighed when I saw it, it is so meaningful - I love it.
Thank you for sharing it.
Andy
February 3rd, 2020 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Michael.
As for the art work it is stunning, I just sighed when I saw it, it is so meaningful - I love it.
Thank you for sharing it.
Andy
February 3rd, 2020 02:14
NO LAUGHTER LINGERS IN THE WIND
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
This is a fine first read of the day Michael. Must save to read again and again.
Kind regards, Alan
February 3rd, 2020 02:12
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
This is a fine first read of the day Michael. Must save to read again and again.
Kind regards, Alan
February 3rd, 2020 02:12
TRAIN JOURNEY: 1st February 2020
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
A good write.
Even though I work for the Department for Transport I wont be travelling this month on the train.
Keep writing FineB
February 1st, 2020 11:49
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
A good write.
Even though I work for the Department for Transport I wont be travelling this month on the train.
Keep writing FineB
February 1st, 2020 11:49
TRAIN JOURNEY: 1st February 2020
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela Here - Just having Coffee & Shortbread with Brian before SHOPPING ~ AMEN ! Love the painting - Scotish Lowlands in Winter ? Brian & I always take the TRAIN up to the SMOKE. We never worry about the time because it is normally Pleasure not Business. I was raised in London but would hate to have to commute every day ! It sure doesnt take a Month to travel to March (Norfolk) from Essex ! Not even by ANGLIA !
Blessings & Peace - to YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA 🧡🤍💙
Please check *BEYOND THE SUNSET* Thanks A !
February 1st, 2020 05:31
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela Here - Just having Coffee & Shortbread with Brian before SHOPPING ~ AMEN ! Love the painting - Scotish Lowlands in Winter ? Brian & I always take the TRAIN up to the SMOKE. We never worry about the time because it is normally Pleasure not Business. I was raised in London but would hate to have to commute every day ! It sure doesnt take a Month to travel to March (Norfolk) from Essex ! Not even by ANGLIA !
Blessings & Peace - to YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA 🧡🤍💙
Please check *BEYOND THE SUNSET* Thanks A !
February 1st, 2020 05:31
TRAIN JOURNEY: 1st February 2020
orchidee said:
Oh lol, fine write and pic M. Was Miss Berles on same train as you?!
February 1st, 2020 02:54
orchidee said:
Oh lol, fine write and pic M. Was Miss Berles on same train as you?!
February 1st, 2020 02:54
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