Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



THREE 575s
sarahlynne said:

Lovely composition on both haiku and art,

January 6th, 2020 09:33

THREE 575s
FineB said:

Hello Michael,

Thank you for that powerful and haunting write and complimented by hauntingly beautiful picture.

Keeo writing FineB

January 6th, 2020 08:36

THREE 575s
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - Hi Uncle Mike - Love the Painting & the HAIKU ! Both a bit Melancholy is that your MOOD for January 2020 ? In our Poem today we are seeing 2020 as a year of Opportunity & Fulfilment. Perhaps it can be both ? Liverpool Supporters today are rejoicing by their Reserve Team winning through a Dream Goal by a TEENAGER - While BRIAN has the grumps at EVERTONS missed chances to topple the MIGHTY REDS ! One game two opposite outcomes for the Fans ! I pretend to be upset but I dare*nt tell BRIAN - Im a closet admirer of CLOUGH & L*V*R*O*L !

Every Blessing & Peace for YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA & BRIAN πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ§‘

January 6th, 2020 04:50

THREE 575s
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good 575s Michael.

Fabulously intriguing artwork.

January 6th, 2020 03:03

THREE 575s
dusk arising said:

Three beauties today ME.
I\'m intrigued, how do you get \'other\' colours or hues into a charcoal piece. Other than the black of the charcoal and the paper colour. Regardless of method, the effect is very pleasing and affords the piece more depth.

January 6th, 2020 02:56

THREE 575s
orchidee said:

Fine writes and pic M.

January 6th, 2020 02:50

575s - ANOTHER BATCH (1)
FineB said:

Hello Michael

Hauntingly vivid.

A great write.

The picture is stunning in a spooky way.

Keep writing FineB

January 5th, 2020 03:30

575s - ANOTHER BATCH (1)
dusk arising said:

Moonlight in churchyards brings back many memories. Including the one in Nottingham where famously satanic practices were afoot... i knew this place though my activities there were only devilish.
Thanks for the memory jog.
Yep, in the concise poetic picture u paint here, there is certainly ghostly wakefulness.
Super picture of subtle colours.

January 4th, 2020 10:20

575s - ANOTHER BATCH (1)
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M.

January 4th, 2020 02:51

POETRY
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Michael.

Great artwork.

January 4th, 2020 00:54

POETRY
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - GOOD EVENING MON ONCLE MICHAEL *Now the day is Over* is an apt title for your abstract Sunset ! We love the POEM ! Poetry is very elusive to define but Yours ........

A thought that transports the mind
Captured before its forgotten

....... Is very apt ! Thanks for sharing !

Blessings & Peace to You and Yours
Love ANGELA & BRIAN πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ§‘



January 3rd, 2020 15:55

POETRY
myself and me said:

\"A thought that transports the mind,
captured before it’s forgotten.\"
You captured my mind, I shall tell you before I forget. Simply love the color of the paint.

January 3rd, 2020 12:45

POETRY
FineB said:

Hello Michael,

A wonderful write and you have captured the essence of poetry with a beautiful sunset in the background.

Keep writing FineB

January 3rd, 2020 05:39

POETRY
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah - spot on Michael. A superb definition of how to write poetry in these four lines.

January 3rd, 2020 04:19

POETRY
Nicholas Browning said:

I remember this from the fusion. Glad to see it given more justice.

January 3rd, 2020 03:03

POETRY
orchidee said:

I sublimely define this as a good write and pic M. You seen any Berles lately?!

January 3rd, 2020 02:57

HELD BY ALL
Fay Slimm. said:

A secret beam from this intriguing read really lights up my evening - great stuff again Mike.......

January 2nd, 2020 14:37

HELD BY ALL
dusk arising said:

Who is this bright spark?

January 2nd, 2020 12:33

A RESOLUTION
myself and me said:

Happy New Year! A wonderful painting for the start of the year.

January 2nd, 2020 12:28

A RESOLUTION
FineB said:

Hello Michael!

That was a lovely write!

Keep the resolution and don\'t give up!

All the best for a New Wonderful Year of writing!

Keep writing FineB

January 2nd, 2020 11:24

HELD BY ALL
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE ~ GOOD AFTERNOON UNCLE MIKE ! Love the Seascape ~ very cool. We do have to *Let our Little Light Shine* but the emphasis should be on the LITTLE not the LIGHT ! Thnaks for caring

Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA & BRIAN πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ§‘


January 2nd, 2020 08:16

HELD BY ALL
orchidee said:

A sensitive write and pic M.
It\'s true. I can think of folk like this. I suppose if we continually seek to see our own light, we just go on an ego trip.
Not that we\'re doormats, rubbishing ourselves, nor letting others rubbish us - but qualities of meekness, lowliness, self-effacement. etc.
Bit deep this - got headache now, this time of morning, thinking that out! I know a person or two - Remarka Berle, and Hum Berle. You know them? And does Hum pong?! lol.

January 2nd, 2020 03:05

A RESOLUTION
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - Good Morning Uncle Mike ! Happy New Year 2020 ! Love the ABSTRACT and we have used it (OK ?) in our POEM to illustrate how 2020 looks at the moment - hopefully as the Year unfolds issues (like BREXIT) will resolve themselves. I have acknowledged ME as the source of the PAINTING ~ Thanks in advance for PERMISSION !
Love the sentiments in your POEM but our advice would be : Let us deal with the Serious Stuff - and You stick to the Comedy and make US smile each morning ! One of our RESOLUTIONS ! All our Thoughts & Prayers are with Andy & His Family TODAY !

Blessings & Peace for You & Yours in 2020
Love ANGELA & BRIAN πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ§‘



January 1st, 2020 05:25

A RESOLUTION
Fay Slimm. said:

Never fear Michael dear - Your wit will always rise to the crest of serious writing my clever friend. Love all that mixture of colour.

January 1st, 2020 05:17

A RESOLUTION
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic there M. Happy 2021 to you. Erm, I thought I would get a New Year greeting in early! heehee.
Do we know what day it is? Do we know what YEAR it is even?! lol.

January 1st, 2020 03:06

A RESOLUTION
Goldfinch60 said:

May that \'piste\' become smooth and this New Year be wonderful.

You have started well with your glorious artwork Michael.

Happy New Year.

Andy

January 1st, 2020 02:28

CHRISTMAS CRACKERS (5)
FineB said:

Hello Michael,

A witty and great write!

Even Santa with his festive cheer has his bad days on the job!

Keep writing FineB

December 27th, 2019 09:55

CHRISTMAS CRACKERS (4)
FineB said:

Hi Michael,

An excellent write!

Xmas can indeed be a lonely time if we don\'t have the companionship of others to share this special time with.

Keep writing FineB

December 27th, 2019 09:53

CHRISTMAS CRACKERS (3)
FineB said:

Hello Michael,

A brilliant write!

Keep writing FineB

December 27th, 2019 09:45

CHRISTMAS CRACKERS (5)
Suresh said:

Pulled out, covered in soot
Elves tried, but lost his boots
Had to trudge, thru the snow
Feet so cold, no HO! HO! HO,

MERRY CHRISTMAS

December 25th, 2019 20:08



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