Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
HIDDEN BENEFITS
orchidee said:
Was this a relative of Burl Ington-Berles?! lol.
March 22nd, 2020 03:31
orchidee said:
Was this a relative of Burl Ington-Berles?! lol.
March 22nd, 2020 03:31
HIDDEN BENEFITS
Goldfinch60 said:
I know I shouldn\'t laugh at rape and pillage but that final line made me laugh Michael.
Andy
March 22nd, 2020 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
I know I shouldn\'t laugh at rape and pillage but that final line made me laugh Michael.
Andy
March 22nd, 2020 02:21
THE ARTISTS DILEMMA
orchidee said:
What\'s Burl Ington-Bertie doing in the present days? Is he rich with his double-barrelled surname? Will he share out the berles among the needy poets?!
And why am I talking rubbish?! lol.
March 21st, 2020 06:52
orchidee said:
What\'s Burl Ington-Bertie doing in the present days? Is he rich with his double-barrelled surname? Will he share out the berles among the needy poets?!
And why am I talking rubbish?! lol.
March 21st, 2020 06:52
THE ARTISTS DILEMMA
Goldfinch60 said:
That stormy see can be captured in your mind and then it will be still.
Good one Michael.
Love the minimalist artwork. So few lines, so much shown.
Andy
March 21st, 2020 04:14
Goldfinch60 said:
That stormy see can be captured in your mind and then it will be still.
Good one Michael.
Love the minimalist artwork. So few lines, so much shown.
Andy
March 21st, 2020 04:14
THE ARTISTS DILEMMA
dusk arising said:
Ha! Maybe if you drank a certain liquid you, easel pallet and all, would sway just like the sea.
March 21st, 2020 01:36
dusk arising said:
Ha! Maybe if you drank a certain liquid you, easel pallet and all, would sway just like the sea.
March 21st, 2020 01:36
3 MORE COUPLETS
FredPeyer said:
You must have been thinking of me when you wrote that first one!
The second one is so true, and the third one I wouldn\'t know wearing slippers and t-shirts all the time.
March 20th, 2020 21:29
FredPeyer said:
You must have been thinking of me when you wrote that first one!
The second one is so true, and the third one I wouldn\'t know wearing slippers and t-shirts all the time.
March 20th, 2020 21:29
3 MORE COUPLETS
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - love your funny couplets - - more please dear fashionista.
March 20th, 2020 16:47
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - love your funny couplets - - more please dear fashionista.
March 20th, 2020 16:47
3 MORE COUPLETS
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening Uncle Mike ~ Last day @ Work today ~ Virus dont inspirus ! Love the Silly Wet ~ she leaves much to the imagination ! Because we have cancelled the oft castigated GCSES & A-Levels ~ I should warn we are now grading all coarse work ~ including couplets !
GRADINGS (A la GCSE English) I am an infernal examiner !
1. A fitting *Ode to a Unidexter* ~ Grade B
2. A good Mantra for Teens ~ Grade B
3. Excellent use of Rhyme ~ Grade A
I have used tte old gradings which made more sense !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🤍💙
March 20th, 2020 12:27
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening Uncle Mike ~ Last day @ Work today ~ Virus dont inspirus ! Love the Silly Wet ~ she leaves much to the imagination ! Because we have cancelled the oft castigated GCSES & A-Levels ~ I should warn we are now grading all coarse work ~ including couplets !
GRADINGS (A la GCSE English) I am an infernal examiner !
1. A fitting *Ode to a Unidexter* ~ Grade B
2. A good Mantra for Teens ~ Grade B
3. Excellent use of Rhyme ~ Grade A
I have used tte old gradings which made more sense !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🤍💙
March 20th, 2020 12:27
3 MORE COUPLETS
dusk arising said:
A ploughman who severed one arm
wore it round his neck iike a charm
Farmers wife said he was no use
he suffered so much abuse
he set up his home where once he would furrow
lived with three rabbits in a well comfy burrow
Enjoyed your three gems today.... thought i\'d break a few rules and maybe raise a smile above.
March 20th, 2020 10:36
dusk arising said:
A ploughman who severed one arm
wore it round his neck iike a charm
Farmers wife said he was no use
he suffered so much abuse
he set up his home where once he would furrow
lived with three rabbits in a well comfy burrow
Enjoyed your three gems today.... thought i\'d break a few rules and maybe raise a smile above.
March 20th, 2020 10:36
3 MORE COUPLETS
orchidee said:
Good writes and pic M.
How are Miss Berles and Co. coping at this time? Is there a ration on syllables? Are they on top of the situation?!
March 20th, 2020 02:54
orchidee said:
Good writes and pic M.
How are Miss Berles and Co. coping at this time? Is there a ration on syllables? Are they on top of the situation?!
March 20th, 2020 02:54
3 MORE COUPLETS
Goldfinch60 said:
Did the leg fit properly?
Sometimes the heart is right
I was a dedicated follower of fashion in the 1970s now in my real 70s I wear what is comfortable.
Three good ones Michael.
Andy
March 20th, 2020 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Did the leg fit properly?
Sometimes the heart is right
I was a dedicated follower of fashion in the 1970s now in my real 70s I wear what is comfortable.
Three good ones Michael.
Andy
March 20th, 2020 02:18
NEEDLES
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Morning Uncle Mike - Evening Clinic today so time to post a Poem (Education ! Education ! Education !) a comment on the latest victim of the Arch-Virus - COVID 19. I am a qualified ACTUPUNCTURIST - and (at the point of puncture) I supply it free on the NHS ! HEDGEPIGS are not the most Hygienic of critters but I liked the concept. Brian & I have been accused of writing *Boring & Factual Poems sans Emotion* so it is just as well we have some MSN Clowns & Jokers to balance the Odds ! Love the visual (poppy seed heads) so few lines - so much meaning !
Blessings & Joy to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian 🧡🤍💙
March 19th, 2020 06:06
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Morning Uncle Mike - Evening Clinic today so time to post a Poem (Education ! Education ! Education !) a comment on the latest victim of the Arch-Virus - COVID 19. I am a qualified ACTUPUNCTURIST - and (at the point of puncture) I supply it free on the NHS ! HEDGEPIGS are not the most Hygienic of critters but I liked the concept. Brian & I have been accused of writing *Boring & Factual Poems sans Emotion* so it is just as well we have some MSN Clowns & Jokers to balance the Odds ! Love the visual (poppy seed heads) so few lines - so much meaning !
Blessings & Joy to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian 🧡🤍💙
March 19th, 2020 06:06
NEEDLES
dusk arising said:
oh no panic buying of hedgehog food and toothpaste..... you never see them at the dentissts do u.
love your fun piece today sir
March 19th, 2020 03:48
dusk arising said:
oh no panic buying of hedgehog food and toothpaste..... you never see them at the dentissts do u.
love your fun piece today sir
March 19th, 2020 03:48
A COUPLE OF COUPLETS
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Gut Mitwoch Onkel Andy - Angela here - On the road later as a peripatetic Physio ! Love the FLAMINGOS my fave bird ! Love couplets - short & sometime sweet !
1. Bon mot ! I know many people that suffer from PCPD - I cure it with acupuncture - the bigger the ego - the bigger the needle. So PRENEZ GARDE ! Im on my rounds !
2. Elephants of my acqaintance do it by phone - a Trunk Call !
Blessing & Peace to You & Yours
Love ANGELA 🧡🤍💜
Fly the Flag in the face of COVID 19 !
Please check *POETICIAN*
March 18th, 2020 04:53
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Gut Mitwoch Onkel Andy - Angela here - On the road later as a peripatetic Physio ! Love the FLAMINGOS my fave bird ! Love couplets - short & sometime sweet !
1. Bon mot ! I know many people that suffer from PCPD - I cure it with acupuncture - the bigger the ego - the bigger the needle. So PRENEZ GARDE ! Im on my rounds !
2. Elephants of my acqaintance do it by phone - a Trunk Call !
Blessing & Peace to You & Yours
Love ANGELA 🧡🤍💜
Fly the Flag in the face of COVID 19 !
Please check *POETICIAN*
March 18th, 2020 04:53
EATING CURRY
dusk arising said:
And those hygene rules are a right flippin caper,
I wanna eat my chips out of last weeks newspaper.
Authentic restaurants serve on a leaf too.
March 17th, 2020 13:15
dusk arising said:
And those hygene rules are a right flippin caper,
I wanna eat my chips out of last weeks newspaper.
Authentic restaurants serve on a leaf too.
March 17th, 2020 13:15
EATING CURRY
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
That\'s not good for our culture,,,We the people of Assam(India) never accept this tradition ...I think hands are the most useful tool in such cases ,given to us by the Creator .
March 17th, 2020 11:50
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
That\'s not good for our culture,,,We the people of Assam(India) never accept this tradition ...I think hands are the most useful tool in such cases ,given to us by the Creator .
March 17th, 2020 11:50
EATING CURRY
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Absolutely,,In today\'s epoch,,fork becomes human hands !!
March 17th, 2020 11:13
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Absolutely,,In today\'s epoch,,fork becomes human hands !!
March 17th, 2020 11:13
EATING CURRY
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael and so true, I have always used a fork and a spoon.
Andy
March 17th, 2020 03:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael and so true, I have always used a fork and a spoon.
Andy
March 17th, 2020 03:29
EATING CURRY
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write and pic M. How does Miss Berles eat hers?
March 17th, 2020 02:54
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write and pic M. How does Miss Berles eat hers?
March 17th, 2020 02:54
EATING CURRY
Saxon Crow said:
If you\'re really authentic youd use your hands!
March 17th, 2020 02:47
Saxon Crow said:
If you\'re really authentic youd use your hands!
March 17th, 2020 02:47
LIMERICK No 66
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Thanks UNCLE MIKE for an excellent PEN & INK sketch of a Rural Scene. Your Limerick paints an equally beatiful but much more private scene !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian 🧡🤍💙🤍🧡
Please check *COVID 19* ~ Thanks !
March 16th, 2020 17:40
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Thanks UNCLE MIKE for an excellent PEN & INK sketch of a Rural Scene. Your Limerick paints an equally beatiful but much more private scene !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian 🧡🤍💙🤍🧡
Please check *COVID 19* ~ Thanks !
March 16th, 2020 17:40
LIMERICK No 66
Fay Slimm. said:
Love your limericks -- your wit is something I would love to even a tiny wee bit of...................... great stuff
March 16th, 2020 17:34
Fay Slimm. said:
Love your limericks -- your wit is something I would love to even a tiny wee bit of...................... great stuff
March 16th, 2020 17:34
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