Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



THE LAST THING (575)
dusk arising said:

Finally - give me a big cardboard box, drop me into it, bury it deep and let al my luscious nutrients return to mother earth (don\'t pollute the atmosphere by burning my cadaver).

DElightfully positive on an Octobers rather drab Sunday morning.

October 13th, 2019 07:19

THE LAST THING (575)
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

I agree with you...
I love wooden boxes...
but certainly not that one!

Awesome painting!

~Laura~

October 13th, 2019 03:53

THE LAST THING (575)
Poetic Dan said:

Hahaha, just brilliant!

October 13th, 2019 01:49

THE LAST THING (575)
Goldfinch60 said:

It\'s nearly C*******S. Socks galore then.

October 13th, 2019 01:45

THE LAST THING (575)
orchidee said:

Not an old tea-chest, from the Co-op?!

October 13th, 2019 01:41

WHICH SHOWER GEL?
Jamie said:

Great fun!

October 12th, 2019 09:02

THE AMERICAN \'R\'
FredPeyer said:

Enjoyed this one! If you ever come to Hawaii you would have even more fun with our local pidgin!
Example: \"You like beef?\" (Wanna fight with me?)

October 10th, 2019 21:10

THE AMERICAN \'R\'
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

Yes ~ the odd one out is carp because it is the only to carry a gun and shoot people.

Kind regards, aylan

October 10th, 2019 11:37

THE AMERICAN \'R\'
dusk arising said:

i just ccept it for what it is tbh, but everytime i hear the different pronunciations of our words it makes me smile especially PREvert not pervert, and onto aluminium, missile.

But heck, comprehension/understanding is the main thing and it works between usa & uk.

October 10th, 2019 11:18

THE AMERICAN \'R\'
Clara said:

Great fun! My family and I are from the UK, but my niece often watches YouTube. Videos of other children opening toys and things - often American children. So, she has taken it upon herself to be part American when it suits her. Rather entertaining. Drives my sister, her mum, insane!

October 10th, 2019 04:27

THE AMERICAN \'R\'
Fay Slimm. said:

Couldn\'t agree more Michael this sloppy lingo DARminates T.V. a LARt - it has GARtten me HARf craaazed an\' I WAAnt it to STARp............. Faaay

October 10th, 2019 04:12

THE AMERICAN \'R\'
Goldfinch60 said:

I wrote a poem many years ago about this but I daren\'t put it on here, I might get \'hit by a automobile hood and thrown on the sidewalk\'

October 10th, 2019 02:07

THE AMERICAN \'R\'
orchidee said:

Maybe those \'r\'s make up for the ones missing in, e.g. color, humor, etc?! Miss Berles cousin in America is Miss Barrrles. You met her?

October 10th, 2019 01:40

WHICH SHOWER GEL?
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you Michael for my first laugh of the day, very much appreciated.

October 10th, 2019 00:15

WHICH SHOWER GEL?
FredPeyer said:

Naughty old man, loved it!

October 9th, 2019 11:45

WHICH SHOWER GEL?
Fay Slimm. said:

Ha ha - didn\'t expect that last line - love your sense of humour Mike and oh what a painting again - I could cover all my walls with your talented work.

October 9th, 2019 10:53

WHICH SHOWER GEL?
dusk arising said:

Only here to replenish
what pleases you most
a fragrant whisper,
from your shower room ghost.

October 9th, 2019 08:14

WHICH SHOWER GEL?
Thoughts In Time said:

Surprises surprises...the nose never lies..interesting write🌹

October 9th, 2019 01:54

WHICH SHOWER GEL?
orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write and pic M!

October 9th, 2019 01:50

BEYOND THE RIVER
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE (Midnight MON / TUE !) Coudnt resist having a pop @ this one. HI UNCLE MIKE ! Love the spooky painting - the more I looked at it the more I saw ! Love the descriptive poem ~ a bit BETJEMANESQUE ? Excellent !

Please check MONDAY (x 3) and our NEW (con)FUSION *Favourite Month* Thanks A & B !

Blesiings to YOU & YOURS
LOVE ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡

October 7th, 2019 07:25

BEYOND THE RIVER
dusk arising said:

Those all seeing UK cloud lined skies. So much detail in your piece today ME. The capture of the artists eye.

October 7th, 2019 05:48

BEYOND THE RIVER
Fay Slimm. said:

Composed to poetic perfection the life beyond a river in these lyrical and informative lines Michael - - super read and wonderful watercolour.

October 7th, 2019 03:35

BEYOND THE RIVER
orchidee said:

Good write and pic M. Is Miss Berles going up the river with a paddle - or up the creek?

October 7th, 2019 01:39

BEYOND THE RIVER
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful Michael, I was there as your words took me to that place.

Super artwork as well.

October 7th, 2019 01:25

HE EARNS HIS FEE
FredPeyer said:

Your experiment worked, this is a truly non-inspiring work...except for that last line! :-)

October 5th, 2019 14:07

HE EARNS HIS FEE
dusk arising said:

Its beyond me tbh. I just can\'t get that low in spirit.

October 5th, 2019 05:53

HE EARNS HIS FEE
Clara said:

Oh the image this creates is quite disturbing. A fine contrast to the beautiful artwork which accompanies it. Impactful poem!

October 5th, 2019 04:01

HE EARNS HIS FEE
Goldfinch60 said:

The reaper only earns his fee if you let him.

Great artwork Michael.

October 5th, 2019 02:31

HE EARNS HIS FEE
orchidee said:

Who you plaguing?! It\'ll be The Black Death for some who plagi-wotsit! Oohh lol.

October 5th, 2019 02:10

A KNOBBLY BONE
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

The answer to your problem
Is very plain to see
I Have a bag with TWO STRAPS
It never slips off me

BRIAN here ~ Good afternoon UNCLE MIKE ! Shoulder bags with one strap are real BORIS JOHNSON ~ USELESS !
Love the seascape very very soothing ~Ive copied it for my Bedroom Wall !

Blessings to YOU & YOURS
Love B & A 💙🧡💙🧡💙

October 4th, 2019 11:23



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