Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
IF
Neville said:
these words will undoubtedly be enjoyed by all those who visit them and appreciate poetry ..
however, all those who have loved and are loved will appreciate them even more ...................... N x
November 26th, 2020 13:39
Neville said:
these words will undoubtedly be enjoyed by all those who visit them and appreciate poetry ..
however, all those who have loved and are loved will appreciate them even more ...................... N x
November 26th, 2020 13:39
IF
L. B. Mek said:
a truly moving dedication Fay, you have some heart-wrenchingly tender voiced works, in your endlessly wonderous cannon
November 26th, 2020 05:04
L. B. Mek said:
a truly moving dedication Fay, you have some heart-wrenchingly tender voiced works, in your endlessly wonderous cannon
November 26th, 2020 05:04
Challenge
L. B. Mek said:
\'Time has grinding anvils,
ego-made,
clothed with traps,
me-ism patterned to attack\'
absolutely Brilliant!
this is why people claim difficult winter\'s, produce the most potent wines...
November 26th, 2020 04:07
L. B. Mek said:
\'Time has grinding anvils,
ego-made,
clothed with traps,
me-ism patterned to attack\'
absolutely Brilliant!
this is why people claim difficult winter\'s, produce the most potent wines...
November 26th, 2020 04:07
IF
dusk arising said:
A true reminiscence, with absolutely no distractions, can indeed be a very special moving intimate experience.
But stepping outside from such things as we can experience, such as reminiscence, we enter into the realms of faith, belief and hope. Both faith and belief can give us reassurance.
Your words tell a longing story of deep love sorely missed and an ache to recapture.
November 26th, 2020 03:07
dusk arising said:
A true reminiscence, with absolutely no distractions, can indeed be a very special moving intimate experience.
But stepping outside from such things as we can experience, such as reminiscence, we enter into the realms of faith, belief and hope. Both faith and belief can give us reassurance.
Your words tell a longing story of deep love sorely missed and an ache to recapture.
November 26th, 2020 03:07
IF
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
My version is:
If I would stop singing
All would be well
99% of the world\'s troubles would be over!
Heehee.
November 26th, 2020 03:02
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
My version is:
If I would stop singing
All would be well
99% of the world\'s troubles would be over!
Heehee.
November 26th, 2020 03:02
Challenge
Poetic Dan said:
Please ponder on, don\'t think anyone really knows... All just blagging it until tomorrow, yet tomorrow never actually gets here!
Thank you for sharing this inspiring writing, I truly hope this is not too much for you!
As a spirit like yours will always see it through, how else could do perfectly what you do.... Just being you!!
November 25th, 2020 23:49
Poetic Dan said:
Please ponder on, don\'t think anyone really knows... All just blagging it until tomorrow, yet tomorrow never actually gets here!
Thank you for sharing this inspiring writing, I truly hope this is not too much for you!
As a spirit like yours will always see it through, how else could do perfectly what you do.... Just being you!!
November 25th, 2020 23:49
Challenge
dusk arising said:
Resilience, but we\'re not born with it. It is a life skill we learn or should I say acquire having suffered a number of set-backs and survived with the ability to smile on another day.
One knows when this is a part of ones make up when able to smile in the face of adversity.
Hand in hand, perhaps we should include thankfulness that we prevail for many have not.
Some achieve this in their blind faith in an organised religion of course.
November 25th, 2020 05:26
dusk arising said:
Resilience, but we\'re not born with it. It is a life skill we learn or should I say acquire having suffered a number of set-backs and survived with the ability to smile on another day.
One knows when this is a part of ones make up when able to smile in the face of adversity.
Hand in hand, perhaps we should include thankfulness that we prevail for many have not.
Some achieve this in their blind faith in an organised religion of course.
November 25th, 2020 05:26
Challenge
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have challenges in life but with each one we need to rise to our futures as life is there for us all.
Andy
November 25th, 2020 04:48
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have challenges in life but with each one we need to rise to our futures as life is there for us all.
Andy
November 25th, 2020 04:48
Asking.
L. B. Mek said:
heart wrenchingly raw in its relatability and subtly simplistic elegance,
what a moving read, so glad I found it
November 24th, 2020 05:40
L. B. Mek said:
heart wrenchingly raw in its relatability and subtly simplistic elegance,
what a moving read, so glad I found it
November 24th, 2020 05:40
Seize
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Fay, each moment in our lives is so important.
Andy
November 24th, 2020 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Fay, each moment in our lives is so important.
Andy
November 24th, 2020 01:47
Seize
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening FAY ! Each moment is precious - But we are so so busy that many precious moments pass us by ! It is only by seizing them - that ETERNITY acctually makes sense !
Blessings Love - Joy & Peace
Angela Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛
November 23rd, 2020 16:03
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening FAY ! Each moment is precious - But we are so so busy that many precious moments pass us by ! It is only by seizing them - that ETERNITY acctually makes sense !
Blessings Love - Joy & Peace
Angela Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛
November 23rd, 2020 16:03
Seize
dusk arising said:
The here and the now
I would steer from the prow
glancing not one look back
no not for me, none of that
for right here today
is the time where i play
with each second, each tick
i learn a new trick
and if i may be so bold
bugger off with the old.
Ha! I knew it cant last
It\'s now in the past.
Nice one Fay, I\'m in flippant mood today creating sillyness on the fly.
November 23rd, 2020 10:32
dusk arising said:
The here and the now
I would steer from the prow
glancing not one look back
no not for me, none of that
for right here today
is the time where i play
with each second, each tick
i learn a new trick
and if i may be so bold
bugger off with the old.
Ha! I knew it cant last
It\'s now in the past.
Nice one Fay, I\'m in flippant mood today creating sillyness on the fly.
November 23rd, 2020 10:32
Seize
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. That Mr Tolle has some oddities though. I read one of his books.
Meanwhile - the moment\'s gone for me. I forgot what \'Carpe diem\' meant. By the time I found out, there was no day left to seize (not that corny joke gain, Orchi. lol).
November 23rd, 2020 05:58
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. That Mr Tolle has some oddities though. I read one of his books.
Meanwhile - the moment\'s gone for me. I forgot what \'Carpe diem\' meant. By the time I found out, there was no day left to seize (not that corny joke gain, Orchi. lol).
November 23rd, 2020 05:58
Back There
Neville said:
something drew me back here Fay.... I can\'t explain it .. but it did ... answers or possible one\'s on a postcard please ...........................................
November 23rd, 2020 04:11
Neville said:
something drew me back here Fay.... I can\'t explain it .. but it did ... answers or possible one\'s on a postcard please ...........................................
November 23rd, 2020 04:11
Re-Forming
Goldfinch60 said:
\"The back-end of warmth\" - wonderful description of the coming of winter.
Once more your words enthrall me Fay - let us all recharge our paucity and look forward to a wonderfully happy new year.
Andy
November 22nd, 2020 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
\"The back-end of warmth\" - wonderful description of the coming of winter.
Once more your words enthrall me Fay - let us all recharge our paucity and look forward to a wonderfully happy new year.
Andy
November 22nd, 2020 01:18
Re-Forming
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem...makes me think of the upcoming holidays.
November 21st, 2020 16:19
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem...makes me think of the upcoming holidays.
November 21st, 2020 16:19
Re-Forming
RDS said:
Nice work Fay. Excellent interplay of sensory impressions and the sensations of feeling that lead toward :
\"the preview
of cold\'s intention.\"
I really like how you synthesise contemplative and seasonal tones.
Thank you
November 21st, 2020 16:01
RDS said:
Nice work Fay. Excellent interplay of sensory impressions and the sensations of feeling that lead toward :
\"the preview
of cold\'s intention.\"
I really like how you synthesise contemplative and seasonal tones.
Thank you
November 21st, 2020 16:01
Re-Forming
Neville said:
without doubt a very special early winter song with an incredibly deft daubing of associated imagery and literary tone ............
makes one want to reach for a wooly pully or curl up on the sofa before the log burner ............
November 21st, 2020 12:13
Neville said:
without doubt a very special early winter song with an incredibly deft daubing of associated imagery and literary tone ............
makes one want to reach for a wooly pully or curl up on the sofa before the log burner ............
November 21st, 2020 12:13
Re-Forming
Eugene S. said:
Such a delicate mastery of words. Beautiful, yet sharp images result. Thank you for that. An important write for those of us who are aging and reflecting on time.
November 21st, 2020 11:48
Eugene S. said:
Such a delicate mastery of words. Beautiful, yet sharp images result. Thank you for that. An important write for those of us who are aging and reflecting on time.
November 21st, 2020 11:48
Re-Forming
Dove said:
Beautiful lines! The back end of warmth! How perfect and true! Just love your finesse with words
November 21st, 2020 10:33
Dove said:
Beautiful lines! The back end of warmth! How perfect and true! Just love your finesse with words
November 21st, 2020 10:33
Re-Forming
dusk arising said:
Oh I know where you are coming from and in any other year I would be living the changes you describe but 2020...really LOL I have been in dwindle mode for months. I feel like a bear huddled away in its winter cave with a stash of food. Yes i sleep more too.
But all that apart, superb poetry again Fay. A reminder for me of what the onset of winter feels like and just as your beginning tells, i recall so many winters were truly started when something different in the air first enters the nostrils and truly you know, winter is here.
Roll on next spring when hopefully we can both write of the pleasures of being out among it\'s rejuvenation and perhaps with loved ones too.
November 21st, 2020 08:59
dusk arising said:
Oh I know where you are coming from and in any other year I would be living the changes you describe but 2020...really LOL I have been in dwindle mode for months. I feel like a bear huddled away in its winter cave with a stash of food. Yes i sleep more too.
But all that apart, superb poetry again Fay. A reminder for me of what the onset of winter feels like and just as your beginning tells, i recall so many winters were truly started when something different in the air first enters the nostrils and truly you know, winter is here.
Roll on next spring when hopefully we can both write of the pleasures of being out among it\'s rejuvenation and perhaps with loved ones too.
November 21st, 2020 08:59
Re-Forming
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
I\'m all in a twirl. Got me yin and yang mixed up. Dunno if I\'m coming or going?
You know those two chaps - or chappesses - Yin and Yang?! (Do shut up now, Orchi. lol).
November 21st, 2020 07:00
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
I\'m all in a twirl. Got me yin and yang mixed up. Dunno if I\'m coming or going?
You know those two chaps - or chappesses - Yin and Yang?! (Do shut up now, Orchi. lol).
November 21st, 2020 07:00
Reflections on Love.
L. B. Mek said:
wise words, from one who has a clear understanding of true love\'s inner workings,
good write
November 21st, 2020 05:19
L. B. Mek said:
wise words, from one who has a clear understanding of true love\'s inner workings,
good write
November 21st, 2020 05:19
Reflections on Love.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Fay but when true love is in your life it is so strong that nothing can break that bond, even the passing of ones lover.
Andy
November 21st, 2020 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Fay but when true love is in your life it is so strong that nothing can break that bond, even the passing of ones lover.
Andy
November 21st, 2020 01:45
Reflections on Love.
Christina8 said:
Beautiful write Fay!! Long time no see!
November 20th, 2020 19:12
Christina8 said:
Beautiful write Fay!! Long time no see!
November 20th, 2020 19:12
Reflections on Love.
RDS said:
A great reflection of love, a real sense of it diffused through experience and of a slow retreat that is lifted at the end with fresh buds of promise. Thanks for sharing this.
November 20th, 2020 14:46
RDS said:
A great reflection of love, a real sense of it diffused through experience and of a slow retreat that is lifted at the end with fresh buds of promise. Thanks for sharing this.
November 20th, 2020 14:46
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